Also, I'm not quite sure why its bad that effect one is restating the option, I thought that that's what it was supposed to be like.
I can try to change the last two options to be based more towards the base issue, but I'm not even sure how to add it in, considering the description states that there was only two other people in the office besides leader. Maybe in the redraft, I could make it be a scene at a family reunion instead.
Verdant Haven wrote:FYI - the usual drafting period is closer to 2 weeks, not 2 days - plenty of folks with valuable feedback to offer aren't necessarily going to have had time to see it, reflect, and compose a reply. As a recent entrant to the world of issue writing myself, I understand your eagerness here, but definitely give it some time! This is a good issue and deserves a successful draft process - not disappearance and disappointment.
Again, I'll try to wait longer but the way the rules read on idea theft are too vague and somewhat against OPs
I did in fact submit Draft 2 though, so now that I know that that draft will be struck down from existence, I will begin on draft three and maybe not submit it as soon as the thread dies.