NICOLE and the KICK CORPS
a story from the elite eleven saga
When the original Kick Corps was collectively fired and replaced by the mysterious new Elite Eleven, it left a sour taste in the mouth of many, including former Corps player Nicole Warren. Given clues about the Elite's origin, Nicole and her former teammates Cam Cross and Sarah Arrowsword band together to find the truth. What Nicole finds isn't just the truth, but a bond she wasn't expecting. Now entangled in a relationship with an immortal, Nicole has to decide between leaving her love behind, or attempting to brave the immortality gauntlet on a faraway world. What ensues is a tale that changes the lives of many in Drawkland's sporting circles, forever.
This story includes the following sections:
A Prologue
Elite
Expired
Expedition
Endless
Eternity
This thread contains every part of this storyline, which was started during IAC-8, and finally concluded in writing around World Cup 93. Each "chapter" has been taken from its original spot, polished up (small spelling and grammar mistakes corrected, minor retcons placed), and reposted here. For all intents and purposes, this is the exact same story that was posted piecewise across a dozen different threads, now all collected in the same spot! For those that were somewhat interested in the story but missed the start and felt left behind, this is the perfect spot to start from the very beginning.
The next post contains the table of contents, with individual links to each post in the thread for ease of access, including new chapter names to correspond with the numbers. There may be minor spoilers contained in the chapter names, so tread carefully. Also included are never-before-seen AI-generated images which present approximate visualizations of locations in the story, marked by the chapter that image corresponds with. If, for some reason, you'd like to go to the original posts, the links to those are included at the bottom of the table of contents. Again, they will essentially be the exact same as the posts in this thread, just with more copy errors and slight contradictions between earlier and later work. This story was written on-and-off over the course of a couple years, so a few things were changed throughout.
Below the table of contents is another informational post, one containing blurbs about each of the major characters in this story. For those unfamiliar with Drawkian lore and/or sporting history, this is a great way to catch yourself up to speed. This post contains no spoilers, so feel free to read through it before beginning the story itself. Each character has an AI-generated portrait included, though obviously these can't be considered exact representations of the character. It's enough for a reader to have a vague idea of their visage.
This story is a culmination of literal years of work for me, clocking in at a little under 155,000 words. I wouldn't call it excellent, as this is really my first attempt at a work of this size (even though I did not intend for it to become this when I first started writing it)! To those that helped me in brainstorming and supported me every step of the way, I can't thank you enough. If you end up reading through the whole story, please let me know your thoughts about it via telegram or Discord.
If you choose to embark on the Undying Quest alongside Nicole, enjoy.
And it should go without saying, but this is a closed thread. Please do not post in this thread unless you're me.