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Postby Australian rePublic » Tue Sep 27, 2022 11:58 pm

So, since this issue went nowhere, I thought I would try it from a different perspective

viewtopic.php?f=13&t=519948

I know it's similar to 538- @@LEADER@@, Let Your People Go but I'm hoping it's distinct enough. If you help me make it more distinct, it would be much appreciated

[title] Urination Invasion Provocation in the Nation

[desc] Whilst it's not uncommon for women in @@NAME@@ to mitigate the queue for the loo by entering the men's toilets,last week after several concerts for Motormouth where male audience members who typically outnumbered their female counterparts 50 to 1, started using the female toilets to avoid lingering in lines, caused mass protests about Motormouth fans being perverts. These protests, along with LGBTQIA+ activists, have brought the issue of gendered toilets to your desk
[validity] must allow transgender people, adults only, must allow protests

[option] "This is yet another reason why we need genderless bathrooms, sweety!" informs transgender LGBTIQA+ activist, Alex @@RANDOMLASTNAME@@, applying lipstick to their beard. "You see, sweety, not only will us transgender folks be able to finally fully identify with our gender without anyone hassling us when peeing, but events which attract more women won’t have hundreds of unused men’s toilets and vice versa. It’s win-win for everyone!”
[effect] the toilet seat debate gives people the blues when using public loos

[option] "Are you insane?" asks @@RANDOMFEMALE@@, a noted right winged women’s rights and equality activist, handing you a statue of Venus. "Is it right for grown men to use the toilet next to little girls? Of course not! Men and women need their own private spaces. Prosecute those who use the wrong toilet! In fact, set up a special toilet police to prevent it from happening in the first place!”
[effect] 50% of public toilets in any given building have extremely long lines whilst the other 50% remain fairly unused

[option] "Or we could just place more urinals and troughs around the place!" suggests @@RANDOMMALENAME@@, who repairs them and is wearing his pee soaked work uniform. "That way all the blokes will have somewhere to go if the ladies use our loos. Unless a bloke wants to drop a log in the bog when in public, but how often does that happen? My urinals and troughs are cheap and easy to clean. We build more troughs so that more blokes can pee at the same time, but in smaller spots, we'll use urinals so they can go anywhere so that we can go anywhere. Even here!" He installs a urinal in your office without any consideration for any females in it.
[effect] public urination is extremely common amongst women



[title] Urination Invasion Provocation in the Nation

[desc] Whilst it's not uncommon for women in @@NAME@@ to mitigate the queue for the loo by entering the men's toilets, last week after several concerts for Motormouth where male audience members, who typically outnumbered their female counterparts 50 to 1, started using the female toilets to avoid lingering in lines, leading to mass protests about Motormouth fans being perverts. These protests, along with LGBTQIA+ activists, have brought the issue of gendered toilets to your desk
[validity] must allow transgender people, adults only, must allow protests

[option] "This is yet another reason why we need genderless bathrooms, sweety!" informs transgender LGBTIQA+ activist, Alex @@RANDOMLASTNAME@@, applying lipstick to their beard. "You see, sweety, not only will us transgender folks be able to finally fully identify with our gender without anyone hassling us when peeing, but events which attract more women won’t have hundreds of unused men’s toilets and vice versa. It’s win-win for everyone!”
[effect] the toilet seat debate gives people the blues when using public loos

[option] "Are you insane?" asks @@RANDOMFEMALE@@, a noted right winged women’s rights and equality activist, handing you a statue of Venus. "Is it right for grown men to use the toilet next to little girls? Of course not! Men and women need their own private spaces. Prosecute those who use the wrong toilet! In fact, set up a special toilet police to prevent it from happening in the first place!”
[effect] 50% of public toilets in any given building have extremely long lines whilst the other 50% remain fairly unused

[option] "Or we could just place more urinals and throughs around the place!" suggests @@RANDOMMALENAME@@, who repairs them and is wearing his unwashed work uniform. "That way all the blokes will have somewhere to go if the ladies use our loos. Unless a bloke wants to drop a log in the bog when in public, but how often does that happen? My urinals are cheap and easy to clean, so they can go anywhere so that we can go anywhere. Even here!" He installs one in your office without any consideration for female staff or ministers
[effect] public urination is extremely common amongst women


[title] Bathroom Brawls

[desc] Whilst it’s not uncommon for women in @@NAME@@ to mitigate the queue for the loo by entering the men's toilets, last week after several concerts for Motormouth where male audience members, who typically outnumbered their female counterparts 50-1, started using the female toilets to avoid lingering in lines, leading to mass protests about Motormouth fans being perverts. These protests, along with transgender activists, have brought the issue of gendered toilets to your desk
[validity] must allow transgender people, adults only

[option] "This is why we need genderless bathrooms, sweety!" informs transgender activist Alex @@RANDOMLASTNAME@@, applying lipstick to their beard. "You see, sweety, if everyone can use every toilet, and there will be fewer lines because events which attract women who would use the toilets otherwise reserved for men, and vice versa. Plus us trans folks can pee freely, too! Gendered toilets have to go, so we can all go, sweety!"
[effect] the toilet seat debate gives people the blues when using public loos

[option] "Are you insane?" asks @@RANDOMFEMALE@@, a noted right winged women’s rights and equality activist, handing you a statue of Venus. "Is it right for grown men to use the toilet next to little girls? Of coarse not! Men and women need their own private spaces. Prosecute those who use the wrong toilet!"
[effect] 50% of public toilets in any given building have extremely long lines whilst the other 50% remain fairly unused

[option] "Or we could just place more urinals around the place!" suggests @@RANDOMMALENAME@@, who repairs them and is wearing his unwashed work uniform. "That way all the blokes will have somewhere to go if the ladies use our loos. Unless a bloke wants to poo when in public, but how often does that happen? My urinals are cheap and easy to clean, so they can go anywhere!"
[effect] public urination is extremely common amongst women
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Postby RedBrickLand » Wed Sep 28, 2022 6:35 am

I'm not sure if it's just me but I swear I've seen an issue extremely similar to this draft. I'll try to look for it and if I do so I'll edit this post.
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Postby Australian rePublic » Wed Sep 28, 2022 6:37 am

RedBrickLand wrote:I'm not sure if it's just me but I swear I've seen an issue extremely similar to this draft. I'll try to look for it and if I do so I'll edit this post.

You mean this one? Yea, it never went anywhere:
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Postby RedBrickLand » Wed Sep 28, 2022 7:34 am

Here are some suggestions(They are probably horrible but here you go)

Description: Change "50- 1" to "50 to 1" or "50:1"

Validity: Needs to include "must allow protests" since you mentioned protests in the description.

Option 1: I feel like the speaker could also talk about how they can't go to the bathroom for the gender they identify as because they are condemned by others. Something about "not being able to express my true gender".

Option 2: Spelling error. Change "of coarse" to "of course".
Option 2 Result: Somewhat long. Also, I have a suggestion. It could mention about how more and more people are wetting their pants or because they can't skip the line and go in the other bathroom. It could also be something about police raiding bathrooms to catch those breaking the law.
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Postby Cuba 2022 RP » Wed Sep 28, 2022 7:38 am

Australian rePublic wrote:
RedBrickLand wrote:I'm not sure if it's just me but I swear I've seen an issue extremely similar to this draft. I'll try to look for it and if I do so I'll edit this post.

You mean this one? Yea, it never went anywhere:
viewtopic.php?f=13&t=519948

No there is an existing in the game issue similar to this for sure.

Also changed “of coarse not” to “of course not”
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Postby Cataleenia » Wed Sep 28, 2022 8:37 am

As an Non-Binary person myself, I think changing transgender advocate to LGBTQIA+ Advocate would work better.
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Postby Cachard Calia » Wed Sep 28, 2022 7:54 pm

Cataleenia wrote:As an Non-Binary person myself, I think changing transgender advocate to LGBTQIA+ Advocate would work better.

I'm transgender, and I would agree that this is mildly uninclusive.
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Postby Australian rePublic » Wed Sep 28, 2022 8:41 pm

Next draft is up


I think I know which one you're talking about:
538-Let Your People Go

Whilst it is indeed similar, I was hoping to bring this from a new perspective and make it distinct enough for it to be workable. If you could help me make it more distinct, it would be much appreciated

RedBrickLand wrote:Here are some suggestions(They are probably horrible but here you go)

Description: Change "50- 1" to "50 to 1" or "50:1"

Validity: Needs to include "must allow protests" since you mentioned protests in the description.

Option 1: I feel like the speaker could also talk about how they can't go to the bathroom for the gender they identify as because they are condemned by others. Something about "not being able to express my true gender".

Option 2: Spelling error. Change "of coarse" to "of course".

Fixed thanks!

Option 2 Result: Somewhat long. Also, I have a suggestion. It could mention about how more and more people are wetting their pants or because they can't skip the line and go in the other bathroom

That would only make it longer. Besides, that effect line already exists for issue 538

. It could also be something about police raiding bathrooms to catch those breaking the law.

Good idea. Added

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Australian rePublic wrote:You mean this one? Yea, it never went anywhere:
viewtopic.php?f=13&t=519948

No there is an existing in the game issue similar to this for sure.

Also changed “of coarse not” to “of course not”

Fixed. Thanks


Cataleenia wrote:As an Non-Binary person myself, I think changing transgender advocate to LGBTQIA+ Advocate would work better.



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Cataleenia wrote:As an Non-Binary person myself, I think changing transgender advocate to LGBTQIA+ Advocate would work better.

I'm transgender, and I would agree that this is mildly uninclusive.

Fixed. Thanks!!!
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Postby Baggieland » Wed Sep 28, 2022 10:03 pm

Option 3:

The trough.

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Postby Australian rePublic » Wed Sep 28, 2022 10:12 pm

Baggieland wrote:Option 3:

The trough.

Do you think I should add that in there?
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Postby Cataleenia » Wed Sep 28, 2022 10:28 pm

Australian rePublic wrote:
Cataleenia wrote:As an Non-Binary person myself, I think changing transgender advocate to LGBTQIA+ Advocate would work better.



Cachard Calia wrote:I'm transgender, and I would agree that this is mildly uninclusive.

Fixed. Thanks!!!


It still needs fixing in the description.
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Postby Australian rePublic » Wed Sep 28, 2022 11:14 pm

Cataleenia wrote:
Australian rePublic wrote:



Fixed. Thanks!!!


It still needs fixing in the description.

Done
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Postby Australian rePublic » Fri Sep 30, 2022 2:12 am

I've since edited the third option. Please let me know what you think
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Postby Australian rePublic » Sat Oct 01, 2022 7:31 pm

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Postby Baggieland » Sun Oct 02, 2022 5:01 am

It's troughs, not throughs.

And you want troughs instead of urinals (not as well as), as more men can pee at the same time!

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Postby Australian rePublic » Sun Oct 02, 2022 5:22 am

Next draft is up
Baggieland wrote:It's troughs, not throughs.

And you want troughs instead of urinals (not as well as), as more men can pee at the same time!

Cheers. Thanks. I made a way for urinals and troughs to work
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Postby Australian rePublic » Wed Oct 05, 2022 12:15 am

Last call
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Postby Cuba 2022 RP » Wed Oct 05, 2022 12:19 am

last week after several concerts for Motormouth where male audience members, who typically outnumbered their female counterparts 50 to 1, started using the female toilets to avoid lingering in lines, leading to

This sequence doesn't feel grammatically correct to me

last week after several concerts for Motormouth where male audience members who typically outnumbered their female counterparts 50 to 1, started using the female toilets to avoid lingering in lines, caused


My suggestion is this. It feels more correct to me, but I may be wrong.
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Postby Australian rePublic » Wed Oct 05, 2022 4:49 am

Cuba 2022 RP wrote:
last week after several concerts for Motormouth where male audience members, who typically outnumbered their female counterparts 50 to 1, started using the female toilets to avoid lingering in lines, leading to

This sequence doesn't feel grammatically correct to me

last week after several concerts for Motormouth where male audience members who typically outnumbered their female counterparts 50 to 1, started using the female toilets to avoid lingering in lines, caused


My suggestion is this. It feels more correct to me, but I may be wrong.

Fixed, thanks
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Postby Cataleenia » Wed Oct 05, 2022 10:06 pm

Good luck!
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Postby Australian rePublic » Thu Oct 06, 2022 12:45 am

Cataleenia wrote:Good luck!

Thanks!!!
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