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Australian rePublic
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Postby Australian rePublic » Mon May 27, 2019 4:52 am

Why are we taking a game so seriously
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Postby Baggieland » Mon May 27, 2019 5:51 am

Candensia wrote:
Baggieland wrote:Also, I don't see where the 1234 bit comes into this issue. I know there are four options, but it has to be more than that.


I’ll elucidate you. The connection stems from a rhyme usually said before engaging in thumb wrestling, also known as thumb wars.

What’s the rhyme, y’say?

”One, two, three, four, I declare thumb war.”

Thanks Candensia!
I've had a lifetime free of thumb wars!

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Postby Verdant Haven » Mon May 27, 2019 7:47 am

Australian rePublic wrote:Why are we taking a game so seriously


Well, to be honest it's A) in the rules, B) disrespectful, and for my own part, it annoys the heck out of me.

That said, my efforts are best spent ensuring my own issue is up to snuff, so I shan't be haunting this thread. I appreciate that the staff made a point of bringing it up the overlap, and I'll respect any decisions by them.

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Postby The Marsupial Illuminati » Mon May 27, 2019 8:43 am

It is not ideal that the title should be 1234 I Declare Thumb War. First of all, if this issue wins the contest, this would mean that it would be called Issue #1234: 1234 I Declare Thumb War. The repetition of the number sequence 1234 is redundant and not pretty, so I suggest that you remove it. Also, "I Declare Thumb War" does not sound good to my ears, so I suggest that you add an "a" between the words "Declare" and "Thumb." This results in the great title "I Declare a Thumb War". But it seems that someone else has already used this idea before you, so I suggest that you use an entirely new one.
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Postby The Free Joy State » Mon May 27, 2019 8:59 am

Again, I reiterate my suggestion to the OP that you do not use this title, and do use the resources provided to find a new idea, especially as Verdant Haven is bothered by the use of the title.

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Postby Eisegesis » Mon May 27, 2019 9:34 am

The Marsupial Illuminati wrote:It is not ideal that the title should be 1234 I Declare Thumb War. First of all, if this issue wins the contest, this would mean that it would be called Issue #1234: 1234 I Declare Thumb War. The repetition of the number sequence 1234 is redundant and not pretty, so I suggest that you remove it. Also, "I Declare Thumb War" does not sound good to my ears, so I suggest that you add an "a" between the words "Declare" and "Thumb." This results in the great title "I Declare a Thumb War". But it seems that someone else has already used this idea before you, so I suggest that you use an entirely new one.

Where is this prior set of numbers before the title being displayed? It is on the issue where players can see it as a repeatition or is just for you guys when you look at it? If it is simply for some formatting list I do not see that as much of a real reason. Also, no one I know says "a" thumb war. Maybe that is the queenish English talking but in the common tongue pretty sure people do not say "a" thumb war. Its outside the rhythm and everyone is going go look at that like it is wrong. Not a great title.
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Postby Eisegesis » Mon May 27, 2019 9:38 am

The Free Joy State wrote:Again, I reiterate my suggestion to the OP that you do not use this title, and do use the resources provided to find a new idea, especially as Verdant Haven is bothered by the use of the title.

EDIT: Useful issue writing links are spoilered for easy access in my sig.


I just got back to this and will get back to this later. It will update when the draft does otherwise I have nothing to change and no direction right now.

EDIT: It has been updated. New issue, new title. Can you swear in issues if its censored, and big fat tf2 reference, is that all ok?
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Postby Eisegesis » Wed May 29, 2019 12:19 pm

Would option four be considered proactive if that "nothing" created an impact on the nation?
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Postby Australian rePublic » Fri May 31, 2019 3:44 pm

If anything, I would punishes the person who failed to tell them that such a chant was a bad idea in such a place
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All in-character posts are fictional and have no actual connection to any real governments
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