Children Of Infinity (OOC)

[The Starlight]

Telekinesis, I think? But yep, I'll change that and thanks.

Ellyn sure is amazing to be able to do that!!

If I can, I'll be back on later to post again. Til then, cheers as always -

[Sil Arion]

And posted again!! Hopefully that's a suitable end.

[The Starlight]

And posted again!! Hopefully that's a suitable end.

EllynxAris for the win!
Long live the perfect ship!

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Well... That was a very nice post as well, (I especially enjoyed how someone figured out that trick without me having to explain it to anybody ), and I hate to be a party popper, I really do... But, quadrupling one's own abilities, no matter the timespan, seems a bit too far fetched, especially for a type of magic that's only got a few points invested in it (which denotes a not-so-great mastery/power) and is activated with a nearly instantaneous cast. If we went by hard math (which I won't do, because fuck math, but bear with me here I'm trying to make a point), merely doubling his abilities would already put his focus at what I had planned to be (emphasis on had, I'll probably go back to my notes and raise that anyway) the maximum level of focus attainable by a Redemit. Of course, as stated, I'm not going to go by that, but the point stands that quadruple physical abilities are excessive.

I hope you can see where I'm coming from. I'm willing to let stuff slip for the sake of a good drama and stuff like that, as I'd rather not ruin the fun, but that one seemed a tad excessive to me.

[Sil Arion]

Well... That was a very nice post as well, (I especially enjoyed how someone figured out that trick without me having to explain it to anybody ), and I hate to be a party popper, I really do... But, quadrupling one's own abilities, no matter the timespan, seems a bit too far fetched, especially for a type of magic that's only got a few points invested in it (which denotes a not-so-great mastery/power) and is activated with a nearly instantaneous cast. If we went by hard math (which I won't do, because fuck math, but bear with me here I'm trying to make a point), merely doubling his abilities would already put his focus at what I had planned to be (emphasis on had, I'll probably go back to my notes and raise that anyway) the maximum level of focus attainable by a Redemit. Of course, as stated, I'm not going to go by that, but the point stands that quadruple physical abilities are excessive.

I hope you can see where I'm coming from. I'm willing to let stuff slip for the sake of a good drama and stuff like that, as I'd rather not ruin the fun, but that one seemed a tad excessive to me.

No, you're not party-pooping, Zark! I certainly hear you. I tried to balance the magic's strength by the his limited ability to use it: two seconds during the duel. And the energy cost. The strain on his body too. Perhaps not enough then, or the ability was too far fetched.

Would you like me to change anything, Zark? I really don't wish to upset the story-world, or you.

That said, thanks for the compliment! That trick just seemed sort of... meant to happen. I like finding clever ways of using things, so that's how it was! Also, was it alright I included Arcander in that post? I wasn't sure about it, but thought it might fit well for his character. And I may have needed a suitable reason to end the adorable shipping scene.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Well... That was a very nice post as well, (I especially enjoyed how someone figured out that trick without me having to explain it to anybody ), and I hate to be a party popper, I really do... But, quadrupling one's own abilities, no matter the timespan, seems a bit too far fetched, especially for a type of magic that's only got a few points invested in it (which denotes a not-so-great mastery/power) and is activated with a nearly instantaneous cast. If we went by hard math (which I won't do, because fuck math, but bear with me here I'm trying to make a point), merely doubling his abilities would already put his focus at what I had planned to be (emphasis on had, I'll probably go back to my notes and raise that anyway) the maximum level of focus attainable by a Redemit. Of course, as stated, I'm not going to go by that, but the point stands that quadruple physical abilities are excessive.

I hope you can see where I'm coming from. I'm willing to let stuff slip for the sake of a good drama and stuff like that, as I'd rather not ruin the fun, but that one seemed a tad excessive to me.

No, you're not party-pooping, Zark! I certainly hear you. I tried to balance the magic's strength by the his limited ability to use it: two seconds during the duel. And the energy cost. The strain on his body too. Perhaps not enough then, or the ability was too far fetched.

Would you like me to change anything, Zark? I really don't wish to upset the story-world, or you.

That said, thanks for the compliment! That trick just seemed sort of... meant to happen. I like finding clever ways of using things, so that's how it was! Also, was it alright I included Arcander in that post? I wasn't sure about it, but thought it might fit well for his character. And I may have needed a suitable reason to end the adorable shipping scene.

I'm not upset, don't worry, though I would like you to tone it down. I don't even mind you using your level four magic thingy (a bit more casting time would be nice, but it's not like you need to make it explicit), it's just the way the post explicitly says that Aris' abilities are multiplied by four that rubs me the wrong way. The rest is fine. I'm even willing to handwave the helmets for you because I dare not ruin that, but I'll point out that the disks don't work unless there's one person on each.

Now, with all of that said, yes, I would like you to change something (else). Don't have Arcander cough.

Have him cheering and clap so enthusiastically that other people start doing the same. -Nods-

[Sil Arion]

I'm not upset, don't worry, though I would like you to tone it down. I don't even mind you using your level four magic thingy (a bit more casting time would be nice, but it's not like you need to make it explicit), it's just the way the post explicitly says that Aris' abilities are multiplied by four that rubs me the wrong way. The rest is fine. I'm even willing to handwave the helmets for you because I dare not ruin that, but I'll point out that the disks don't work unless there's one person on each.

Now, with all of that said, yes, I would like you to change something (else). Don't have Arcander cough.

Have him cheering and clap so enthusiastically that other people start doing the same. -Nods-

I think that can be arranged, good sir...

Though, Zark, would you like him to wolf-whistle first with a slow clap, or just go straight into loud cheers??

[Escalan Corps-Star Island]

We could start a shipyard in GE&T with what goes on in this RP.

That said, that was one hell of a fight. Now I have to make Kiri not seem woefully underpowered.
Zark, how should I do this without using the attacks and moves I had saved for much later? (I can TG you those for reference if you'd like.)

[Charmera]

Name: Jon or Jonran Ayendor.
Appearance
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Likes/Dislikes:
Likes: Cunning, Intellect, Jynna's cooking, Secretly likes fun, pranks, creativity and humour.
Dislikes: Tyrants, Bullies, Vyna's taste in music...
Bio: Once the self proclaimed "fun one" of the Ayendor siblings, Jon has changed very much over the years. Jon used to live up to his title, making sure that there was rarely a dull moments when he was around. He was energetic, enthusiastic and always in a great mood. Irresponsible and fun loving, he used to play all sorts of pranks and tricks… well, at least until those things cost him.

Six or seven years ago, before the Ayendor's parent's died, Jon snuck out of their manor, as he usually did, and into the town. However, this time, with him he brought his sister out with him on a dare. The Vyna was already very uncomfortable with crowds, so even if she didn't admit it, she relied on her siblings or parents whenever they were out in crowds as she hardly ever went out. And on their overpopulated home world, crowds were very hard to avoid.

The easily distracted Jon ended up leaving his sister behind both as an ill conceived prank and in an attempt to make her shake her fear of crowds, reasoning she could take care of herself and she knew her way back to the mansion. Unfortunately, Vyna was kidnapped while lost in the crowd, and her parents found a ransom note a day later. It took a month for her to be returned. Interestingly, the kidnappers didn't ask for money… Jon's not sure what they asked for.

Ever since, Jon has slowly become more serious and more than a little quiet. He's guilt ridden due to the fact he never had the courage to apologise to his sister, which weighs heavily on him now. Though he's stopped avoiding her completely, theres still an awkward tension between them. Their parents death and the unfortunate business with Jynna's near assassination and the inheritance has made him even more moody and even a bit pessimistic. He's still sarcastic, but his snakiness has taken a bitter edge.
Additional Information: Nope
RP Sample: Already given

Jon Ayendor's Powergrid

GENERAL ATTRIBUTES

Focus: 5
Energy: 3
Endurance: 1
Readiness: 3
Awareness: 3

ABILITY ATTRIBUTES

Weapon Proficiency: 3
Energy Whip Sword (A sword which can extend into a bladed whip): 4
Energy Knives: 2

Magic Proficiency: 3
Energy Tendrils (He can manifest and manipulate three extendable tendrils of energy which can grab enemies or form bladed edges): 3
Bioelectric Projection(He has a store of bioelectricity which can can project into attacks and use to enhance his physical attacks.): 3

[Zarkenis Ultima]

I'm not upset, don't worry, though I would like you to tone it down. I don't even mind you using your level four magic thingy (a bit more casting time would be nice, but it's not like you need to make it explicit), it's just the way the post explicitly says that Aris' abilities are multiplied by four that rubs me the wrong way. The rest is fine. I'm even willing to handwave the helmets for you because I dare not ruin that, but I'll point out that the disks don't work unless there's one person on each.

Now, with all of that said, yes, I would like you to change something (else). Don't have Arcander cough.

Have him cheering and clap so enthusiastically that other people start doing the same. -Nods-

I think that can be arranged, good sir...

Though, Zark, would you like him to wolf-whistle first with a slow clap, or just go straight into loud cheers??

No, no, have him start cheering right away.

We could start a shipyard in GE&T with what goes on in this RP.

That said, that was one hell of a fight. Now I have to make Kiri not seem woefully underpowered.
Zark, how should I do this without using the attacks and moves I had saved for much later? (I can TG you those for reference if you'd like.)

Well, go ahead and TG.

To be fair, though, I wouldn't say it was so much about the moves, but rather the way they were described. In that regard, I don't think I as a foreigner would be of much help to someone who was born in the breast of the English language.

Still willing to lend a hand though.

[Escalan Corps-Star Island]

I think that can be arranged, good sir...

Though, Zark, would you like him to wolf-whistle first with a slow clap, or just go straight into loud cheers??

No, no, have him start cheering right away.

We could start a shipyard in GE&T with what goes on in this RP.

That said, that was one hell of a fight. Now I have to make Kiri not seem woefully underpowered.
Zark, how should I do this without using the attacks and moves I had saved for much later? (I can TG you those for reference if you'd like.)

Well, go ahead and TG.

To be fair, though, I wouldn't say it was so much about the moves, but rather the way they were described. In that regard, I don't think I as a foreigner would be of much help to someone who was born in the breast of the English language.

Still willing to lend a hand though.

Meh. If I spend a bit more time, the writing in English will be fine. I just need to know ways to have Kiri fight that are neither repetitive nor something she wouldn't realistically know. . .
TG incoming.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

@Charm: Two things. One, were you intending to introduce him to the roleplay as soon as possible or would you mind waiting a bit? Two, what is biolectricity and what can it do?

Meh. If I spend a bit more time, the writing in English will be fine. I just need to know ways to have Kiri fight that are neither repetitive nor something she wouldn't realistically know. . .
TG incoming.

Well, you could always find other little tricks with the weapons you're given. I didn't get to show it, as I scrapped the duel between Aressa and Arcander on account that I was feeling rushed and didn't want to have to spend time writing a detailed battle scene on top of the rest, but they both actually incorporate such things in their combat styles.

[Escalan Corps-Star Island]

@Charm: Two things. One, were you intending to introduce him to the roleplay as soon as possible or would you mind waiting a bit? Two, what is biolectricity and what can it do?

Meh. If I spend a bit more time, the writing in English will be fine. I just need to know ways to have Kiri fight that are neither repetitive nor something she wouldn't realistically know. . .
TG incoming.

Well, you could always find other little tricks with the weapons you're given. I didn't get to show it, as I scrapped the duel between Aressa and Arcander on account that I was feeling rushed and didn't want to have to spend time writing a detailed battle scene on top of the rest, but they both actually incorporate such things in their combat styles.

I already have some things planned for the day when I get to modify the armour.

[Charmera]

@Charm: Two things. One, were you intending to introduce him to the roleplay as soon as possible or would you mind waiting a bit? Two, what is biolectricity and what can it do?

I don't mind waiting a bit. What did you have in mind?

It's an extension of sorts to the natural electricity that goes through our nerves, since our bodies are already technically batteries (I'm assuming the Redemit nervous system operates the same way). Using magic to enhance it, so one can generate more electricity in their bodies and use it for electricity attacks. Like shocking someone touching you or firing a bolt of electricity or something.

[Wolfenium]

Is my post too much? I can't really tell.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

@Charm: Two things. One, were you intending to introduce him to the roleplay as soon as possible or would you mind waiting a bit? Two, what is biolectricity and what can it do?

I don't mind waiting a bit. What did you have in mind?

It's an extension of sorts to the natural electricity that goes through our nerves, since our bodies are already technically batteries (I'm assuming the Redemit nervous system operates the same way). Using magic to enhance it, so one can generate more electricity in their bodies and use it for electricity attacks. Like shocking someone touching you or firing a bolt of electricity or something.

Nothing really, it'd just seem awfully coincidental if he were to arrive just now when Niloofar and Ritz already did that. Then again, as Asimov well said, people are entirely too disbelieving of coincidence. I will include myself in that.

That works, though, accepted.

@Wolf: If you're asking about the magical aspect, it looks fine for its level despite the lack of casting (I'm assuming you guys are leaving it implicit), but it doesn't make a lot of sense for 'barriers'. In my head, at least.

[Charmera]

Is my post too much? I can't really tell.

Too much?
I'm assuming two strikes isn't enough to end the match...

I don't mind waiting a bit. What did you have in mind?

It's an extension of sorts to the natural electricity that goes through our nerves, since our bodies are already technically batteries (I'm assuming the Redemit nervous system operates the same way). Using magic to enhance it, so one can generate more electricity in their bodies and use it for electricity attacks. Like shocking someone touching you or firing a bolt of electricity or something.

Nothing really, it'd just seem awfully coincidental if he were to arrive just now when Niloofar and Ritz already did that. Then again, as Asimov well said, people are entirely too disbelieving of coincidence. I will include myself in that.

That works, though, accepted.

@Wolf: If you're asking about the magical aspect, it looks fine for its level despite the lack of casting (I'm assuming you guys are leaving it implicit), but it doesn't make a lot of sense for 'barriers'. In my head, at least.

Would it be easier if he showed up now?

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Would it be easier if he showed up now?

I'm not concerned about the simplicity of the matter, I'm concerned about the believability.

If you'd rather have him show up now, though, well, he's nobility. You could make up something about him being on a different world than his sisters and having to order his servants to prepare a more resistant transport because of a cosmic storm or some shit, thus explaining the strangely short delay.

[Escalan Corps-Star Island]

Would it be easier if he showed up now?

I'm not concerned about the simplicity of the matter, I'm concerned about the believability.

If you'd rather have him show up now, though, well, he's nobility. You could make up something about him being on a different world than his sisters and having to order his servants to prepare a more resistant transport because of a cosmic storm or some shit, thus explaining the strangely short delay.

Just include Batman and you'll be able to hand wave anything.

[Charmera]

Would it be easier if he showed up now?

I'm not concerned about the simplicity of the matter, I'm concerned about the believability.

If you'd rather have him show up now, though, well, he's nobility. You could make up something about him being on a different world than his sisters and having to order his servants to prepare a more resistant transport because of a cosmic storm or some shit, thus explaining the strangely short delay.

As I said, I don't mind too much. Just let me know when I should post as him.

[Esternial]

No, you're not party-pooping, Zark! I certainly hear you. I tried to balance the magic's strength by the his limited ability to use it: two seconds during the duel. And the energy cost. The strain on his body too. Perhaps not enough then, or the ability was too far fetched.

Would you like me to change anything, Zark? I really don't wish to upset the story-world, or you.

That said, thanks for the compliment! That trick just seemed sort of... meant to happen. I like finding clever ways of using things, so that's how it was! Also, was it alright I included Arcander in that post? I wasn't sure about it, but thought it might fit well for his character. And I may have needed a suitable reason to end the adorable shipping scene.

I'm not upset, don't worry, though I would like you to tone it down. I don't even mind you using your level four magic thingy (a bit more casting time would be nice, but it's not like you need to make it explicit), it's just the way the post explicitly says that Aris' abilities are multiplied by four that rubs me the wrong way. The rest is fine. I'm even willing to handwave the helmets for you because I dare not ruin that, but I'll point out that the disks don't work unless there's one person on each.

Now, with all of that said, yes, I would like you to change something (else). Don't have Arcander cough.

Have him cheering and clap so enthusiastically that other people start doing the same. -Nods-

It felt sort of like a climax on top of an already pretty good climax. You gotta keep your trump cards concealed! Kiritsugu Emiya didn't go all out until the last episode either.

Also just in case, I've included a little something in my post - Ritz' giving Aris' a small jolt of energy - since I assumed that after his ultimate move he'd be suffering from some pretty nasty physical side effects. Personally, I'd have my character's ultimately move result in death, but some people know I take personal pleasure in killing off my characters :3

[Zarkenis Ultima]

I'm not concerned about the simplicity of the matter, I'm concerned about the believability.

If you'd rather have him show up now, though, well, he's nobility. You could make up something about him being on a different world than his sisters and having to order his servants to prepare a more resistant transport because of a cosmic storm or some shit, thus explaining the strangely short delay.

Just include Batman and you'll be able to hand wave anything.

Well, we have a Red Knight. A Dark Knight doesn't seem too far fetched. .

I'm not serious.

I'm not concerned about the simplicity of the matter, I'm concerned about the believability.

If you'd rather have him show up now, though, well, he's nobility. You could make up something about him being on a different world than his sisters and having to order his servants to prepare a more resistant transport because of a cosmic storm or some shit, thus explaining the strangely short delay.

As I said, I don't mind too much. Just let me know when I should post as him.

Well, alright.

I'm not upset, don't worry, though I would like you to tone it down. I don't even mind you using your level four magic thingy (a bit more casting time would be nice, but it's not like you need to make it explicit), it's just the way the post explicitly says that Aris' abilities are multiplied by four that rubs me the wrong way. The rest is fine. I'm even willing to handwave the helmets for you because I dare not ruin that, but I'll point out that the disks don't work unless there's one person on each.

Now, with all of that said, yes, I would like you to change something (else). Don't have Arcander cough.

Have him cheering and clap so enthusiastically that other people start doing the same. -Nods-

It felt sort of like a climax on top of an already pretty good climax. You gotta keep your trump cards concealed! Kiritsugu Emiya didn't go all out until the last episode either.

Also just in case, I've included a little something in my post - Ritz' giving Aris' a small jolt of energy - since I assumed that after his ultimate move he'd be suffering from some pretty nasty physical side effects.

'Climax'. Nice choice of words, Alpaca boy.

[Esternial]

'Climax'. Nice choice of words, Alpaca boy.

Next time you call me alpaca boy I'll be taking your skin and graft it on a sock puppet

[Zarkenis Ultima]

'Climax'. Nice choice of words, Alpaca boy.

Next time you call me alpaca boy I'll be taking your skin and graft it on a sock puppet

Whatever you say, Alpie.

[The Unites State-Of-Minds]

Next time you call me alpaca boy I'll be taking your skin and graft it on a sock puppet

Whatever you say, Alpie.

Lambchop?