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If I started the IJ:4 thread after CW2...

I'd join up ASAP
12
48%
I'd stay here until I'm done
9
36%
I'd do both
1
4%
Other
3
12%
 
Total votes : 25

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Zarkenis Ultima
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Sat Jan 23, 2016 11:12 am

Tomia wrote:
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
Blame Fin.

Lol, wasn't trying to blame anyone was just curious.


I was just filling you in. -nods-
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Postby The Starlight » Sat Jan 23, 2016 11:56 am

Finland SSR wrote:Finny presents...

The Ultimate Majin

Part One: Prologue

Frank Mayhem


You ramble a little at times, but overall, it's a pretty good post. I think you have the most interesting take on 1st person POV that I've seen, it reads like thoughts, and like we're looking inside Frank's head. Also, despite his fitting in with humanity to an extent, I still can get the android feel. A little confusion with the use of them and they, at the end, and it was a bit abrupt, but otherwise, pretty good.
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"If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world"
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Postby Galnius » Sat Jan 23, 2016 11:57 am

I missed so much....
I've read your Sig! I've read your soul

Before you complain, remember, Kangaroos can't hop backwards. Really makes your problems seem small don't it.

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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Sat Jan 23, 2016 11:58 am

The Starlight wrote:
Finland SSR wrote:Finny presents...

The Ultimate Majin

Part One: Prologue

Frank Mayhem


You ramble a little at times, but overall, it's a pretty good post. I think you have the most interesting take on 1st person POV that I've seen, it reads like thoughts, and like we're looking inside Frank's head. Also, despite his fitting in with humanity to an extent, I still can get the android feel. A little confusion with the use of them and they, at the end, and it was a bit abrupt, but otherwise, pretty good.


In my opinion, it could've used a little more detail at certain parts, such as the arrival to Cairo, but I guess that's passable if Frank's the kind of person not to care about his surroundings and such, given the first person perspective.

That said, I echo Star's thoughts for the most part. I also enjoy the dynamic between Frank and Itaku, and the bit of envy at the start of the post.

Galnius wrote:I missed so much....


Hey there.

Don't worry, that's the thing about IJ, you can just jump back in. :P
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Postby The Starlight » Sat Jan 23, 2016 11:59 am

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
I used Travenion because you used Travenion.

He's pretty much doing it because he's bored, yeah. That, and because it's a tradition of sorts for him (a tradition created in order to keep him from thinking about his own plight, so, in essence, it all goes back to being bored I suppose). I'll probably delve deeper into his thoughts at some other point, I have a bit of a speech in time already. But as far as the Christmas thing goes, boredom, yeah.

The soul was more or less a reference to Otis' mother, who went and got killed after being brought back for Christmas. I can always just pretend it's someone else if there's a problem though. -shrug- doesn't really matter, it was just to show a bit more of him.

Can you blame her for being a little bit arrogant? At least she's not comic-book-character level arrogant, :P

Oh.

That makes sense, I just forgot about that.

No, I don't blame her, I just found it to be pretty funny.
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"Strength does not make one capable of rule. It makes one capable of service"
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing"
"If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world"
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Postby Galnius » Sat Jan 23, 2016 11:59 am

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
The Starlight wrote:You ramble a little at times, but overall, it's a pretty good post. I think you have the most interesting take on 1st person POV that I've seen, it reads like thoughts, and like we're looking inside Frank's head. Also, despite his fitting in with humanity to an extent, I still can get the android feel. A little confusion with the use of them and they, at the end, and it was a bit abrupt, but otherwise, pretty good.


In my opinion, it could've used a little more detail at certain parts, such as the arrival to Cairo, but I guess that's passable if Frank's the kind of person not to care about his surroundings and such, given the first person perspective.

That said, I echo Star's thoughts for the most part. I also enjoy the dynamic between Frank and Itaku, and the bit of envy at the start of the post.

Galnius wrote:I missed so much....


Hey there.

Don't worry, that's the thing about IJ, you can just jump back in. :P

Yeah, I know, but its insane to think all this happened in one week of work hell :p
I've read your Sig! I've read your soul

Before you complain, remember, Kangaroos can't hop backwards. Really makes your problems seem small don't it.

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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Sat Jan 23, 2016 12:00 pm

The Starlight wrote:
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
I used Travenion because you used Travenion.

He's pretty much doing it because he's bored, yeah. That, and because it's a tradition of sorts for him (a tradition created in order to keep him from thinking about his own plight, so, in essence, it all goes back to being bored I suppose). I'll probably delve deeper into his thoughts at some other point, I have a bit of a speech in time already. But as far as the Christmas thing goes, boredom, yeah.

The soul was more or less a reference to Otis' mother, who went and got killed after being brought back for Christmas. I can always just pretend it's someone else if there's a problem though. -shrug- doesn't really matter, it was just to show a bit more of him.

Can you blame her for being a little bit arrogant? At least she's not comic-book-character level arrogant, :P

Oh.

That makes sense, I just forgot about that.

No, I don't blame her, I just found it to be pretty funny.


Yeah, during your own Christmas thingy. :P

Then it worked. -nods-

Galnius wrote:
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
In my opinion, it could've used a little more detail at certain parts, such as the arrival to Cairo, but I guess that's passable if Frank's the kind of person not to care about his surroundings and such, given the first person perspective.

That said, I echo Star's thoughts for the most part. I also enjoy the dynamic between Frank and Itaku, and the bit of envy at the start of the post.



Hey there.

Don't worry, that's the thing about IJ, you can just jump back in. :P

Yeah, I know, but its insane to think all this happened in one week of work hell :p


I think the insane thing is to think all of this wouldn't happen. -nods-
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Postby The Starlight » Sat Jan 23, 2016 12:02 pm

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:Yeah, during your own Christmas thingy. :P

Then it worked. -nods-

We've got about 27 inches of snow here. Went out to shovel about two hours ago, cleared a path from the steps to the car. Two hours later, two more inches have risen up.

Hail Hydra.
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"Life before Death. Strength before Weakness. Journey before Destination"
"Strength does not make one capable of rule. It makes one capable of service"
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing"
"If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world"
Tri: NS's Tolkien incarnate
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Sat Jan 23, 2016 12:04 pm

The Starlight wrote:
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:Yeah, during your own Christmas thingy. :P

Then it worked. -nods-

We've got about 27 inches of snow here. Went out to shovel about two hours ago, cleared a path from the steps to the car. Two hours later, two more inches have risen up.

Hail Hydra.


Right.

Meanwhile I'm here chillin' by the sea.
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Postby The Starlight » Sat Jan 23, 2016 12:05 pm

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
The Starlight wrote:We've got about 27 inches of snow here. Went out to shovel about two hours ago, cleared a path from the steps to the car. Two hours later, two more inches have risen up.

Hail Hydra.


Right.

Meanwhile I'm here chillin' by the sea.

Eh, I don't mind. I like snow. Though this would be more fun if I could get into a snowball fight.
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"Life before Death. Strength before Weakness. Journey before Destination"
"Strength does not make one capable of rule. It makes one capable of service"
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing"
"If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world"
Tri: NS's Tolkien incarnate
Lith: Twinky-toes, Lord of Elves, and the only man to enter Tolkien's Holy of Holies
Neros: A Star Among Men and a Tolkien force of nature in relation to Elves and Asgardians.
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Zarkenis Ultima
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Sat Jan 23, 2016 12:21 pm

The Starlight wrote:
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
Right.

Meanwhile I'm here chillin' by the sea.

Eh, I don't mind. I like snow. Though this would be more fun if I could get into a snowball fight.


Right-o.

Well, I'll go try to make a few posts.
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Postby The Starlight » Sat Jan 23, 2016 1:29 pm

Star's Directory

Craig Thomsen

The Thomsen I/D

Last Days of a Good Man - completed
The incursions emerge, and so does Craig Thomsen, in a Silverwing suit.


A Good Man Goes to War - ongoing
The capture and torture of Craig Thomsen, leading to the beginning of Civil War. This arc will be completed when Civil War 2 comes around.



The Convention - completed(probably)
Craig calls together the world's finest to solve the world's problems, but the Convention meets an unexpected end.



Travenios - ongoing
The experimental island in the North Atlantic, created by Craig Thomsen.



Tomorrow Today - ongoing.
Craig's journeys in a never-before-seen technological realm. But there is something, someone, lurking in the shadows. The Cyber Wars will begin soon! Also, his struggles and experiences after his torture


The Wrath of a Gentle Man (AU) - ongoing.
There are three things all wise men fear: the sea in storm, a night with no moon, and the anger of a gentle man. This is a story of that one Craig Thomsen who went astray. This is a story of what happened when a good man went to war. This is a story of the wrath of a gentle man.



Valka Silverhand

Valka Silverhand vs Dallen Thomsen

The Last Asgardian - completed.
The Fall of Asgard and the rise of the All-Mother.


God Wars/War in the Heavens - completed.
Valka vs Xander! Valka vs WW! Valka vs Zeus! It all comes together in God Wars, a war between once-allies.


Ragnarok War - completed.
Valka answers the call of Mad Max as they race to save the universe from Darkstar.



Renascence Eternal - completed.
Renascence is defined as the revival of something dormant; rebirth, in the everlasting, unceasing cycle of life and death. Asgard is a world trapped in its cyclical nature. Ragnarok, the event all of Asgard fears, is their end. It means death, it always has. And death for those who are all-but immortal is unthinkable, ineffable. And yet, with that death, comes rebirth. Renascence. But in this story, Ragnarok is...altered. And Valka Silverhand, All-Mother of Asgard, Valka the Eternal undertakes a journey, from the furthest stars to the deepest, darkest pits. Renascence Eternal is a story of battle, as almost Asgardian stories are. But in this story, I have aspired for something more. This is a story of sacrifice, of song and sadness. This is a story of one who would not be denied.
The Cycle Begins
Death
Undeath
Ride of the Valkas
Revelations
Descent into Hell
Rise
Battleborne
Once Again
Journey's End
The Last Goodbye/The Realm Eternal

Total Stats(MS Word):
37 Pages
25, 562 Words
116,880 Characters(no spaces)
142,725 Characters(with spaces)



Slime War - to be continued.


Valancy Stirling
To Save This Earth - ongoing



Elena Galadera

Defended - ongoing



Valveig
The Princess and the Hulk - to be continued



The Builder War - completed


Coming Soon!
Beyond No More/This Little World - A Secret Wars AM (Alternate Multiverse)
Tomorrow Today
To Save this Earth
Defended
The Princess and the Hulk
The Wrath of a Gentle Man
Godkind
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"Life before Death. Strength before Weakness. Journey before Destination"
"Strength does not make one capable of rule. It makes one capable of service"
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing"
"If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world"
Tri: NS's Tolkien incarnate
Lith: Twinky-toes, Lord of Elves, and the only man to enter Tolkien's Holy of Holies
Neros: A Star Among Men and a Tolkien force of nature in relation to Elves and Asgardians.
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Postby Tomia » Sat Jan 23, 2016 1:30 pm

The Starlight wrote:Star's Directory

Craig Thomsen

The Thomsen I/D

Last Days of a Good Man - completed
The incursions emerge, and so does Craig Thomsen, in a Silverwing suit.


A Good Man Goes to War - to be completed
The capture and torture of Craig Thomsen, leading to the beginning of Civil War. This arc will be completed when Civil War 2 comes around.



The Convention - completed(probably)
Craig calls together the world's finest to solve the world's problems, but the Convention meets an unexpected end.



Travenios - ongoing
The experimental island in the North Atlantic, created by Craig Thomsen.



Cyberspace - ongoing.
Craig's journeys in a never-before-seen technological realm. But there is something, someone, lurking in the shadows. The Cyber Wars will begin soon!


The Wrath of a Gentle Man (AU) - ongoing.
There are three things all wise men fear: the sea in storm, a night with no moon, and the anger of a gentle man. This is a story of that one Craig Thomsen who went astray. This is a story of what happened when a good man went to war. This is a story of the wrath of a gentle man.



Valka Silverhand

Valka Silverhand vs Dallen Thomsen

The Last Asgardian - completed.
The Fall of Asgard and the rise of the All-Mother.


God Wars/War in the Heavens - completed.
Valka vs Xander! Valka vs WW! Valka vs Zeus! It all comes together in God Wars, a war between once-allies.


Ragnarok War - completed.
Valka answers the call of Mad Max as they race to save the universe from Darkstar.



Renascence Eternal - completed.
Just read it. I dunno how to describe it...



Slime War - to be continued.



Valancy Stirling
To Save This Earth - ongoing


Elena Galadera

Defended - ongoing


Valveig
The Princess and the Hulk - to be continued


The Builder War - completed


Coming Soon!
Beyond No More/This Little World - A Secret Wars AM (Alternate Multiverse)
Cyberspace
To Save this Earth
Defended
The Princess and the Hulk
The Wrath of a Gentle Man

Damn Star

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Postby The Starlight » Sat Jan 23, 2016 1:32 pm

Tomia wrote:Damn Star

I was bored. :p
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"Life before Death. Strength before Weakness. Journey before Destination"
"Strength does not make one capable of rule. It makes one capable of service"
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing"
"If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world"
Tri: NS's Tolkien incarnate
Lith: Twinky-toes, Lord of Elves, and the only man to enter Tolkien's Holy of Holies
Neros: A Star Among Men and a Tolkien force of nature in relation to Elves and Asgardians.
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Postby The Republic of Atria » Sat Jan 23, 2016 2:10 pm

Any comments on any of my latest posts?

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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Sat Jan 23, 2016 2:16 pm

The Republic of Atria wrote:Any comments on any of my latest posts?


I like what you're doing with Naja and Xander, the differences between them that you're showing and the tension you're building.
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Postby Krytonus » Sat Jan 23, 2016 2:47 pm

Charm, I'm not sure you saw my post. I did post, you know.

Also Rebel, fucking incredible post as usual. This is a very different Daniel Carter to the one the other Gravity knew. It's kind of sad, actually. One refused to kill, the other sees it as necessary.
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Postby Confederation of imperial states » Sat Jan 23, 2016 2:58 pm

The next nemesis Objective post should be fun.

It'll be finished and posted later.

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Postby New Neros » Sat Jan 23, 2016 4:00 pm

Just showed this to Atria and Rob, but I should show this to the rest of you as well. I commissioned an artist to draw Mad Max for me, and he recently got back to me with the lineart (and is currently working on the color), but I am too damn excited and hyped to keep this a secret. Check it out: http://i.imgur.com/NvgXmd9.jpg

He took some liberty and interpreted the Morningstar Equation as an energy pentagram of some sort, but I think it looks pretty sick regardless.
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Postby Dandoniapolis » Sat Jan 23, 2016 4:04 pm

I'll be getting a post up later. I still have an idea for a multicharacter story as well, so if anyone wants to join, feel free to let me know.

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Postby Krytonus » Sat Jan 23, 2016 4:27 pm

New Neros wrote:Just showed this to Atria and Rob, but I should show this to the rest of you as well. I commissioned an artist to draw Mad Max for me, and he recently got back to me with the lineart (and is currently working on the color), but I am too damn excited and hyped to keep this a secret. Check it out: http://i.imgur.com/NvgXmd9.jpg

He took some liberty and interpreted the Morningstar Equation as an energy pentagram of some sort, but I think it looks pretty sick regardless.


BRUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUH.

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I, of course am stuck in school.

With no dolla.
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Postby The Rebel Alliances » Sat Jan 23, 2016 4:34 pm

Krytonus wrote:Charm, I'm not sure you saw my post. I did post, you know.

Also Rebel, fucking incredible post as usual. This is a very different Daniel Carter to the one the other Gravity knew. It's kind of sad, actually. One refused to kill, the other sees it as necessary.


Thanks man, worked almost three hours on a Wii U gamepad to get that up. And I have much to review tonight. An my to do list to get done before tomorrow is to read and review all three of Star's posts, Fin's post, Rob's Foundry War and the Parahuman Arc for Neros.

And great to have a first person perspective rival with Fin.
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Sat Jan 23, 2016 5:00 pm

Name/Alias: Black Sun

Gender: Female

Age: Biologically 16, chronologically several million.

Appearance: Here

Species: Artisan Cyborg

Backstory: Black Sun was the very first of the six organic beings rounded up and sent to Iligath the Maker by his people, the Artisans, in order to be transformed into powerful living weapons capable of driving back the enemy coalition and end the crisis of the Artisan Empire. Black Sun was the prototype of the other five Artisan Cyborgs, destined to be an emotionless killing machine. However, due to some unknown mistake made by the Maker, the girl somehow retained her childish demeanor, even after her upgrade, and for unknown reasons began calling Iligath her 'father' and treating him as such. It was a troubling setback at first, but soon, Iligath realized that, despite his weapon's behavior, she retained all of her upgrades and the intelligence that was given to her. The matter of her loyalty was easily settled, as the devotion she had for her father made it unlikely that she would refuse to follow his orders. Thus, the first daughter of the Maker was born.

Black Sun, alongside Black Nova and Black Hole, fought and defeated the coalition that was storming the gates of the Artisan Empire, accomplishing her mission with remarkable ease, as despite being the first of the cyborgs and thus the weakest, she was the one who could use her powers most effectively; this, coupled with her use of the Great Viridian Sword of the Splitting Constellation, a superweapon gifted to her by her father Iligath, made her a formidable foe. Despite their success, though, they were soon deactivated when the Maker was shunned by the elders who feared his ambitions. She remained deactivated until Iligath broke into their containment and brought them with him to the Technosanctum, using them as guards while he created three more cyborgs to claim revenge. In the end, revenge was had, though it horrified him, and so, the Maker took all of his cyborgs and sealed himself. Millions of years passed before the six would awaken once again, and when they did, the three cyborgs of the second generation sought to murder Iligath. Only Black Sun stood before them, but her power was nothing compared to theirs, and so, she was left maimed within the ruins of the Technosanctum, and was saved only by the intervention of Black Nova. Now, she seeks to grow stronger and avenge the death of her father, all while exploring the universe.

Powers and Abilities:
Solar Manipulation: Black Sun has the power to generate and control theoretically infinite quantities of solar energy, much like what Black Nova can do with electricity and pure energy. This power is also similar to her sister's in that most of it is locked away behind her higher modes.
Sequence Shift Protocol: Much like Black Nova, Black Sun can enter a more powerful state at will, though unlike her sister, she isn't limited to one, having three modes in addition to her default one, each more powerful than the last.
Enhanced Senses
Flight
Self-Repair

Weaknesses: A good part of what makes her threatening would be the Great Viridian Sword, which can be taken from her with relative ease, leaving her at a level far from exceptional compared to other characters. In addition, should she desire to change to a more powerful mode, there is a charging time during which she is more vulnerable. If her earpieces are damaged, her senses might overload, much like Black Nova's.

Destructive Capacity:
Normal Mode: Moon Level

Speed:
Normal Mode: Hypersonic

Durability:
Normal Mode: City Block Level

Lifting Strength:
Normal Mode: Peak Human

Striking Strength:
Normal Mode: Class H

Energy Projection: Refer to Destructive Capacity.

Standard Equipment: Her mechanical parts and the Great Viridian Sword of the Splitting Constellation.

Intelligence: She's considered to be even smarter than Black Nova, and is in fact the smartest of all the Artisan Cyborgs.

Optional stuff.

Theme song: To be added.

Random Facts about your character: Further power levels will be added as her transformations are revealed in the IC (and submitted for peer approval if need be).

Here's an app for Black Nova's sister, who has been interacting with Hiroshi for a while now. Probably won't use her except in personal arcs unless someone wants to interact, but there she is.

New Neros wrote:Just showed this to Atria and Rob, but I should show this to the rest of you as well. I commissioned an artist to draw Mad Max for me, and he recently got back to me with the lineart (and is currently working on the color), but I am too damn excited and hyped to keep this a secret. Check it out: http://i.imgur.com/NvgXmd9.jpg

He took some liberty and interpreted the Morningstar Equation as an energy pentagram of some sort, but I think it looks pretty sick regardless.


Neat.
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Postby Siliarba » Sat Jan 23, 2016 5:04 pm

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
Name/Alias: Black Sun

Gender: Female

Age: Biologically 16, chronologically several million.

Appearance: Here

Species: Artisan Cyborg

Backstory: Black Sun was the very first of the six organic beings rounded up and sent to Iligath the Maker by his people, the Artisans, in order to be transformed into powerful living weapons capable of driving back the enemy coalition and end the crisis of the Artisan Empire. Black Sun was the prototype of the other five Artisan Cyborgs, destined to be an emotionless killing machine. However, due to some unknown mistake made by the Maker, the girl somehow retained her childish demeanor, even after her upgrade, and for unknown reasons began calling Iligath her 'father' and treating him as such. It was a troubling setback at first, but soon, Iligath realized that, despite his weapon's behavior, she retained all of her upgrades and the intelligence that was given to her. The matter of her loyalty was easily settled, as the devotion she had for her father made it unlikely that she would refuse to follow his orders. Thus, the first daughter of the Maker was born.

Black Sun, alongside Black Nova and Black Hole, fought and defeated the coalition that was storming the gates of the Artisan Empire, accomplishing her mission with remarkable ease, as despite being the first of the cyborgs and thus the weakest, she was the one who could use her powers most effectively; this, coupled with her use of the Great Viridian Sword of the Splitting Constellation, a superweapon gifted to her by her father Iligath, made her a formidable foe. Despite their success, though, they were soon deactivated when the Maker was shunned by the elders who feared his ambitions. She remained deactivated until Iligath broke into their containment and brought them with him to the Technosanctum, using them as guards while he created three more cyborgs to claim revenge. In the end, revenge was had, though it horrified him, and so, the Maker took all of his cyborgs and sealed himself. Millions of years passed before the six would awaken once again, and when they did, the three cyborgs of the second generation sought to murder Iligath. Only Black Sun stood before them, but her power was nothing compared to theirs, and so, she was left maimed within the ruins of the Technosanctum, and was saved only by the intervention of Black Nova. Now, she seeks to grow stronger and avenge the death of her father, all while exploring the universe.

Powers and Abilities:
Solar Manipulation: Black Sun has the power to generate and control theoretically infinite quantities of solar energy, much like what Black Nova can do with electricity and pure energy. This power is also similar to her sister's in that most of it is locked away behind her higher modes.
Sequence Shift Protocol: Much like Black Nova, Black Sun can enter a more powerful state at will, though unlike her sister, she isn't limited to one, having three modes in addition to her default one, each more powerful than the last.
Enhanced Senses
Flight
Self-Repair

Weaknesses: A good part of what makes her threatening would be the Great Viridian Sword, which can be taken from her with relative ease, leaving her at a level far from exceptional compared to other characters. In addition, should she desire to change to a more powerful mode, there is a charging time during which she is more vulnerable. If her earpieces are damaged, her senses might overload, much like Black Nova's.

Destructive Capacity:
Normal Mode: Moon Level

Speed:
Normal Mode: Hypersonic

Durability:
Normal Mode: City Block Level

Lifting Strength:
Normal Mode: Peak Human

Striking Strength:
Normal Mode: Class H

Energy Projection: Refer to Destructive Capacity.

Standard Equipment: Her mechanical parts and the Great Viridian Sword of the Splitting Constellation.

Intelligence: She's considered to be even smarter than Black Nova, and is in fact the smartest of all the Artisan Cyborgs.

Optional stuff.

Theme song: To be added.

Random Facts about your character: Further power levels will be added as her transformations are revealed in the IC (and submitted for peer approval if need be).

Here's an app for Black Nova's sister, who has been interacting with Hiroshi for a while now. Probably won't use her except in personal arcs unless someone wants to interact, but there she is.

Several millions yet biologically 16, not sure whether to call dibs or avoid in a wide circle.

Also did you guys know getting a map painted costs 500 dollars?

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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Sat Jan 23, 2016 5:07 pm

Siliarba wrote:
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
Name/Alias: Black Sun

Gender: Female

Age: Biologically 16, chronologically several million.

Appearance: Here

Species: Artisan Cyborg

Backstory: Black Sun was the very first of the six organic beings rounded up and sent to Iligath the Maker by his people, the Artisans, in order to be transformed into powerful living weapons capable of driving back the enemy coalition and end the crisis of the Artisan Empire. Black Sun was the prototype of the other five Artisan Cyborgs, destined to be an emotionless killing machine. However, due to some unknown mistake made by the Maker, the girl somehow retained her childish demeanor, even after her upgrade, and for unknown reasons began calling Iligath her 'father' and treating him as such. It was a troubling setback at first, but soon, Iligath realized that, despite his weapon's behavior, she retained all of her upgrades and the intelligence that was given to her. The matter of her loyalty was easily settled, as the devotion she had for her father made it unlikely that she would refuse to follow his orders. Thus, the first daughter of the Maker was born.

Black Sun, alongside Black Nova and Black Hole, fought and defeated the coalition that was storming the gates of the Artisan Empire, accomplishing her mission with remarkable ease, as despite being the first of the cyborgs and thus the weakest, she was the one who could use her powers most effectively; this, coupled with her use of the Great Viridian Sword of the Splitting Constellation, a superweapon gifted to her by her father Iligath, made her a formidable foe. Despite their success, though, they were soon deactivated when the Maker was shunned by the elders who feared his ambitions. She remained deactivated until Iligath broke into their containment and brought them with him to the Technosanctum, using them as guards while he created three more cyborgs to claim revenge. In the end, revenge was had, though it horrified him, and so, the Maker took all of his cyborgs and sealed himself. Millions of years passed before the six would awaken once again, and when they did, the three cyborgs of the second generation sought to murder Iligath. Only Black Sun stood before them, but her power was nothing compared to theirs, and so, she was left maimed within the ruins of the Technosanctum, and was saved only by the intervention of Black Nova. Now, she seeks to grow stronger and avenge the death of her father, all while exploring the universe.

Powers and Abilities:
Solar Manipulation: Black Sun has the power to generate and control theoretically infinite quantities of solar energy, much like what Black Nova can do with electricity and pure energy. This power is also similar to her sister's in that most of it is locked away behind her higher modes.
Sequence Shift Protocol: Much like Black Nova, Black Sun can enter a more powerful state at will, though unlike her sister, she isn't limited to one, having three modes in addition to her default one, each more powerful than the last.
Enhanced Senses
Flight
Self-Repair

Weaknesses: A good part of what makes her threatening would be the Great Viridian Sword, which can be taken from her with relative ease, leaving her at a level far from exceptional compared to other characters. In addition, should she desire to change to a more powerful mode, there is a charging time during which she is more vulnerable. If her earpieces are damaged, her senses might overload, much like Black Nova's.

Destructive Capacity:
Normal Mode: Moon Level

Speed:
Normal Mode: Hypersonic

Durability:
Normal Mode: City Block Level

Lifting Strength:
Normal Mode: Peak Human

Striking Strength:
Normal Mode: Class H

Energy Projection: Refer to Destructive Capacity.

Standard Equipment: Her mechanical parts and the Great Viridian Sword of the Splitting Constellation.

Intelligence: She's considered to be even smarter than Black Nova, and is in fact the smartest of all the Artisan Cyborgs.

Optional stuff.

Theme song: To be added.

Random Facts about your character: Further power levels will be added as her transformations are revealed in the IC (and submitted for peer approval if need be).

Here's an app for Black Nova's sister, who has been interacting with Hiroshi for a while now. Probably won't use her except in personal arcs unless someone wants to interact, but there she is.

Several millions yet biologically 16, not sure whether to call dibs or avoid in a wide circle.

Also did you guys know getting a map painted costs 500 dollars?


Probably avoid. :P

I had no idea. Who needs a map?
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