As for TCM's overview, I am very much intrigued by the concept at play as well as the thought put behind it. There's plenty of potential locked that could be exploited to make the Cosmic Mainframe stand out more so than it already is. Regardless, the current overview is fantastically concise and it already paints a clear picture of what TCM is like but in my opinion, the money is in the detail and I still feel like there is plenty to be expanded upon such as important events like the Epoch and the war between the Cosmic and Papal Mainframe. There are brief explanations here and there but I feel like there could be more to expand upon. What made them reach this conclusion? What did their organic creator think when creating the Cosmic Mainframe? So on and so forth.
With this brief explanation, I'm going to personally be voting for the Albali Republic's overview.