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by Finland SSR » Sat Jan 23, 2016 9:39 am
by The Starlight » Sat Jan 23, 2016 10:07 am
Call me StarBest High Fantasy RPer of '14 and '15
"Life before Death. Strength before Weakness. Journey before Destination""Strength does not make one capable of rule. It makes one capable of service"
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing"
"If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world"Tri: NS's Tolkien incarnate
Lith: Twinky-toes, Lord of Elves, and the only man to enter Tolkien's Holy of Holies
Neros: A Star Among Men and a Tolkien force of nature in relation to Elves and Asgardians.P2TM: Infinite Justice | ✎ Member - ℘ædagog | ℳadhouse
by Zarkenis Ultima » Sat Jan 23, 2016 10:09 am
by Finland SSR » Sat Jan 23, 2016 10:10 am
by The Starlight » Sat Jan 23, 2016 10:11 am
Call me StarBest High Fantasy RPer of '14 and '15
"Life before Death. Strength before Weakness. Journey before Destination""Strength does not make one capable of rule. It makes one capable of service"
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing"
"If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world"Tri: NS's Tolkien incarnate
Lith: Twinky-toes, Lord of Elves, and the only man to enter Tolkien's Holy of Holies
Neros: A Star Among Men and a Tolkien force of nature in relation to Elves and Asgardians.P2TM: Infinite Justice | ✎ Member - ℘ædagog | ℳadhouse
by Illica Falki » Sat Jan 23, 2016 10:12 am
by Zarkenis Ultima » Sat Jan 23, 2016 10:14 am
The Starlight wrote:I'll make it up by reading and reviewing any two posts of yours that you'd like feedback....
Illica Falki wrote:Bonjour Mon Ami, I don't really have an idea on what to work on today...
by The Starlight » Sat Jan 23, 2016 10:21 am
lol. Speaking of that, I'm a bit surprised you haven't commented on a few things from the Craig and Valancy posts. One, a book char converted into a Artificer Absolute, and two, a little something about Craig and Etla at the end of Valancy's rant.Zarkenis Ultima wrote:Oh yeah, I didn't post this joke yesterday because you weren't around, Star.
Valancy: *rants about immortality*
Necromancer: Welcome to the club! You want cookies?
Since you're offering I'd like some criticism on Necro's Christmas post. -nods-
Illica Falki wrote:Bonjour Mon Ami, I don't really have an idea on what to work on today...
Call me StarBest High Fantasy RPer of '14 and '15
"Life before Death. Strength before Weakness. Journey before Destination""Strength does not make one capable of rule. It makes one capable of service"
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing"
"If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world"Tri: NS's Tolkien incarnate
Lith: Twinky-toes, Lord of Elves, and the only man to enter Tolkien's Holy of Holies
Neros: A Star Among Men and a Tolkien force of nature in relation to Elves and Asgardians.P2TM: Infinite Justice | ✎ Member - ℘ædagog | ℳadhouse
by Illica Falki » Sat Jan 23, 2016 10:23 am
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:Oh yeah, I didn't post this joke yesterday because you weren't around, Star.
Valancy: *rants about immortality*
Necromancer: Welcome to the club! You want cookies?The Starlight wrote:I'll make it up by reading and reviewing any two posts of yours that you'd like feedback....
Since you're offering I'd like some criticism on Necro's Christmas post. -nods-Illica Falki wrote:Bonjour Mon Ami, I don't really have an idea on what to work on today...
You could help us cover for Nico.
by Zarkenis Ultima » Sat Jan 23, 2016 10:25 am
The Starlight wrote:lol. Speaking of that, I'm a bit surprised you haven't commented on a few things from the Craig and Valancy posts. One, a book char converted into a Artificer Absolute, and two, a little something about Craig and Etla at the end of Valancy's rant.
Illica Falki wrote:So attack Cat and Nico's parents, got it.
by The Starlight » Sat Jan 23, 2016 10:28 am
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:The Starlight wrote:lol. Speaking of that, I'm a bit surprised you haven't commented on a few things from the Craig and Valancy posts. One, a book char converted into a Artificer Absolute, and two, a little something about Craig and Etla at the end of Valancy's rant.
Oh, that, yeah, I noticed all of that.
When I read Kvothe, I facepalmed a little to be honest. I mean, it's not a bad thing, but still. Looked a bit silly how you took him and put him there.
The other thing was cute. Don't think I have a lot to say about that though. Not besides "go for it" I guess.
Call me StarBest High Fantasy RPer of '14 and '15
"Life before Death. Strength before Weakness. Journey before Destination""Strength does not make one capable of rule. It makes one capable of service"
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing"
"If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world"Tri: NS's Tolkien incarnate
Lith: Twinky-toes, Lord of Elves, and the only man to enter Tolkien's Holy of Holies
Neros: A Star Among Men and a Tolkien force of nature in relation to Elves and Asgardians.P2TM: Infinite Justice | ✎ Member - ℘ædagog | ℳadhouse
by Zarkenis Ultima » Sat Jan 23, 2016 10:34 am
The Starlight wrote:Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
Oh, that, yeah, I noticed all of that.
When I read Kvothe, I facepalmed a little to be honest. I mean, it's not a bad thing, but still. Looked a bit silly how you took him and put him there.
The other thing was cute. Don't think I have a lot to say about that though. Not besides "go for it" I guess.
Star: Shameless Plagiarizer and Thief of Intellectual Property. It was something I put in on a whim, really. Any other comments about the Cyberspace?
Well, we'll see where that goes.
by Illica Falki » Sat Jan 23, 2016 10:35 am
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:The Starlight wrote:lol. Speaking of that, I'm a bit surprised you haven't commented on a few things from the Craig and Valancy posts. One, a book char converted into a Artificer Absolute, and two, a little something about Craig and Etla at the end of Valancy's rant.
Oh, that, yeah, I noticed all of that.
When I read Kvothe, I facepalmed a little to be honest. I mean, it's not a bad thing, but still. Looked a bit silly how you took him and put him there.
The other thing was cute. Don't think I have a lot to say about that though. Not besides "go for it" I guess.Illica Falki wrote:So attack Cat and Nico's parents, got it.
Well I was thinking their parents' goons, but go ahead.
by Zarkenis Ultima » Sat Jan 23, 2016 10:37 am
Illica Falki wrote:Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
Oh, that, yeah, I noticed all of that.
When I read Kvothe, I facepalmed a little to be honest. I mean, it's not a bad thing, but still. Looked a bit silly how you took him and put him there.
The other thing was cute. Don't think I have a lot to say about that though. Not besides "go for it" I guess.
Well I was thinking their parents' goons, but go ahead.
To be fair, she'd go after the biggest risk, which is likely the mother with that grenade launcher of hers...
by The Starlight » Sat Jan 23, 2016 10:41 am
Call me StarBest High Fantasy RPer of '14 and '15
"Life before Death. Strength before Weakness. Journey before Destination""Strength does not make one capable of rule. It makes one capable of service"
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing"
"If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world"Tri: NS's Tolkien incarnate
Lith: Twinky-toes, Lord of Elves, and the only man to enter Tolkien's Holy of Holies
Neros: A Star Among Men and a Tolkien force of nature in relation to Elves and Asgardians.P2TM: Infinite Justice | ✎ Member - ℘ædagog | ℳadhouse
by Finland SSR » Sat Jan 23, 2016 10:45 am
by The Starlight » Sat Jan 23, 2016 10:47 am
Finland SSR wrote:
So, I'll review one of Star's posts. Only one, because I'm a greedy little piggy.
What we see right here is Craig Thomsen, theblatant Tony Stark ripoffbillionaire philanthropist, entering a world of what I believe to be a mix between dreams and the Internet, called Cyberspace. And to be fair, the writer, that is Star, does his job well at making it feel like a dream - everything feels like it's written with a thick shade of fog, imagination and magic. All cloudy, mysterious and vague, or at least that's how the prose felt to me. Nice way to introduce people to a supposedly pretty important concept.
There were a few punctuation mistakes I noticed, but don't take that to heart, it's barely noticeable. Nice and long post, albeit a bit dragging itself for a few times. Good work.
...now get to reviewing.
Call me StarBest High Fantasy RPer of '14 and '15
"Life before Death. Strength before Weakness. Journey before Destination""Strength does not make one capable of rule. It makes one capable of service"
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing"
"If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world"Tri: NS's Tolkien incarnate
Lith: Twinky-toes, Lord of Elves, and the only man to enter Tolkien's Holy of Holies
Neros: A Star Among Men and a Tolkien force of nature in relation to Elves and Asgardians.P2TM: Infinite Justice | ✎ Member - ℘ædagog | ℳadhouse
by Zarkenis Ultima » Sat Jan 23, 2016 10:52 am
The Starlight wrote:Necromancer Xmas Post
Shouldn't it be "an alien to death"? I'm not too sure about that though... And don't doors receive knocks, not people? But I'm nitpicking a bit here...
Wait, is he doing this because he's bored? Because if so, -200 respects points. But that makes sense, though. Anyway, on to compliments now. I think you captured the spirit and feel of Christmas superbly, and I think you got the feel down for Travenios as well.
I'm not quite sure about the denonyms though, whether it's Travenion/Travenions or Travenian. But Travenion makes sense because of how the city is spelled.
Also loved the Marvin part and his "This...isn't scientifically possible!"
You never did say, however, who was the soul that got killed. Was it Garnet's mother?
And man, Hadrimmelis is arrogant! "You see all those stars up there son?"
Addraku: "Yep"
Hadrimmelis: "I made them."
by Zarkenis Ultima » Sat Jan 23, 2016 11:03 am
by Finland SSR » Sat Jan 23, 2016 11:04 am
by Imperial Avantia » Sat Jan 23, 2016 11:05 am
by The Templar High Council » Sat Jan 23, 2016 11:06 am
They call me Temp. If I take too long to respond, just TG me. Or TG me whenever, I'm online 90% of the time.
Anime God of P2TM, Last of Lithianity, Bro to All, & P2TM's Villain in Glasses. Kacheen!
2014 P2TM Lifetime Achievement Award Winner. During my first year on NS. Go figure.
And 2015 Most Involved in P2TM? On a roll now!
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by Zarkenis Ultima » Sat Jan 23, 2016 11:06 am
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