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Galter Gulcher
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Postby Galter Gulcher » Sat Oct 11, 2014 10:52 am

So, would anyone be interested in a nation RP that mixes futuristic tech with the culture and some tech of the 1950s. For example, black and white TV's remain the norm but at the same time with robots also present in many peoples homes. Kinda like Fallout but without the post apactolyptic stuff.
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Postby Ouldale » Sun Oct 12, 2014 12:20 pm

Would anyone be interested in a RP group that RPs mythology and legends of a fictional world which will be set in antiquity? Almost all worldbuilding will be done via IC RP. Members will be able to host and create their own myth as part of the religion's canon and all will be able to determine the mythos and stories of their culture. The mythology and culture will be similar to that of ancient Greece, but with a few major differences. The world will mostly be pre-created, with all worldbuilding pertaining to religion and mythology.
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Postby The Starlight » Sun Oct 12, 2014 12:24 pm

Ouldale wrote:Would anyone be interested in a RP group that RPs mythology and legends of a fictional world which will be set in antiquity? Almost all worldbuilding will be done via IC RP. Members will be able to host and create their own myth as part of the religion's canon and all will be able to determine the mythos and stories of their culture. The mythology and culture will be similar to that of ancient Greece, but with a few major differences. The world will mostly be pre-created, with all worldbuilding pertaining to religion and mythology.

Sounds kinda interesting. But what do you mean RP group? Because I like my region.
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Postby Ouldale » Sun Oct 12, 2014 12:36 pm

The Starlight wrote:
Ouldale wrote:Would anyone be interested in a RP group that RPs mythology and legends of a fictional world which will be set in antiquity? Almost all worldbuilding will be done via IC RP. Members will be able to host and create their own myth as part of the religion's canon and all will be able to determine the mythos and stories of their culture. The mythology and culture will be similar to that of ancient Greece, but with a few major differences. The world will mostly be pre-created, with all worldbuilding pertaining to religion and mythology.

Sounds kinda interesting. But what do you mean RP group? Because I like my region.

You wouldn't have to leave your region. By group I just mean we would collaborate on multiple RPs, not just one.
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Postby Kassaran » Sun Oct 12, 2014 12:38 pm

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Kassaran wrote:I actually have already taken that name in another RP I was trying to OP. It was called Fallen Colony if anyone remembers.

Did they run into Space Native Americans?

No... actually it was like a Dead Space meets Halo meets Aliens sort of RP, but not in those exact terms either... I'll link it up here again for you if you want to check it out. It was meant to be the first in a series of eleven RP's carrying on about Humanity's long lost extraterrestrial colonies in the Valhalla Star Cluster:

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Postby The Starlight » Mon Oct 13, 2014 5:40 am

Ouldale wrote:
The Starlight wrote:Sounds kinda interesting. But what do you mean RP group? Because I like my region.

You wouldn't have to leave your region. By group I just mean we would collaborate on multiple RPs, not just one.

Oh, ok. Sounds good then, I'm in,
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Postby Organized States » Mon Oct 13, 2014 5:59 am

Galter Gulcher wrote:So, would anyone be interested in a nation RP that mixes futuristic tech with the culture and some tech of the 1950s. For example, black and white TV's remain the norm but at the same time with robots also present in many peoples homes. Kinda like Fallout but without the post apactolyptic stuff.

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Postby Ayreonia » Mon Oct 13, 2014 10:15 am

Galter Gulcher wrote:So, would anyone be interested in a nation RP that mixes futuristic tech with the culture and some tech of the 1950s. For example, black and white TV's remain the norm but at the same time with robots also present in many peoples homes. Kinda like Fallout but without the post apactolyptic stuff.

Having a particular aesthetic is not really enough for a nation RP.
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Postby Nature-Spirits » Mon Oct 13, 2014 11:48 am

Ayreonia wrote:
Galter Gulcher wrote:So, would anyone be interested in a nation RP that mixes futuristic tech with the culture and some tech of the 1950s. For example, black and white TV's remain the norm but at the same time with robots also present in many peoples homes. Kinda like Fallout but without the post apactolyptic stuff.

Having a particular aesthetic is not really enough for a nation RP.

I have to agree.
@Galter: What would be the plot? Would there be a war or some other kind of international conflict? I don't know much about nation RPs, but it seems to me that there has to be some kind of interaction between the nations. You also have to think about why '50s technology exists alongside PMT. What's the backstory? You don't have to post the answers if you don't want to, but thinking about that sort of thing is important to the survival of any RP.
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Postby The Empire of Pretantia » Mon Oct 13, 2014 1:51 pm

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Galter Gulcher wrote:So, would anyone be interested in a nation RP that mixes futuristic tech with the culture and some tech of the 1950s. For example, black and white TV's remain the norm but at the same time with robots also present in many peoples homes. Kinda like Fallout but without the post apactolyptic stuff.

Having a particular aesthetic is not really enough for a nation RP.

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Postby Tomia » Mon Oct 13, 2014 2:41 pm

Hey guys, I've been thinking about a Yu-Gi-Oh! RP for a a little while and decided to create an interest thread for the RP. I don't have all the details worked dour yet but I am open for suggestions. Here's the link if you are interested: viewtopic.php?f=31&t=315852

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Postby Finland SSR » Tue Oct 14, 2014 2:05 am

Finland SSR wrote:RP INTEREST AND FEEDBACK REQUEST
Please provide as much detail as possible.
RP's Overarching Concept: A character-faction RP set in the falling Commonwealth.
Genre/s: Historical, Diplomacy, Politics, Poland (:p)
Character or Faction Based: Mixed.
Detailed Description: So, to those that did not learn about the Polish-Lithuanian Commonwealth, let me give you a crash course of PLC History.

*CrashCourse intro*

Since the 14th century, the two biggest nations in Eastern Europe, the Kingdom of Poland and the Grand Duchy of Lithuania, were slowly moving closer to each other politically and diplomatically. In 1385, in the Kreva treaty the Grand Duke of Lithuania Jogaila has agreed to marry a Polish princess and become the new king of Poland, effectively uniting the two nations in a personal union, which was soon broken by Jogaila's cousin Vytautas, who took the throne of Lithuania for himself with the help of the Teutons. After Vytautas the Great's death (and after being so close to becoming King), the two nations were reunited.

In 1569, a further step was pushed towards the unification. Even though the two countries were in a personal union, their everything was similar. At that time, Lithuania was fighting in the Livonian War against Russia, and it did not go well. They needed Polish help. Also, the nobles of Poland feared that after the childless king Zigmund August's death, Lithuanians might elect their own Grand Duke, and distance away from the Polish crown. This led to a new document - the Union of Lublin. Both countries were now equal members in a united country.

In 1572, Zigmund August died. There was no heir. Instead of finding a legitimate successor, the nobles decided - why don't we elect a king by ourselves? And that way, the nobles started to rule. The king was nothing more than a puppet, most of the time. According to many historians, the last good ruler of the Commonwealth was Stephen Bathory, who ruled from 1576 to 1586. And the nation lasted 200 more years. You know how fucked up it got.

Now, let's skip those 200 years. They will not be important, and let's go to the second quarter to the 18th century. The nation is in anarchy. Many wars have passed, and the treasury is empty. Foreign armies walk through the territory like it was theirs, and there's nobody that can stop them, as the military size is dependent on the nobles' will to serve in it. And why would they defend their country when they can just throw parties and festivals all day? All attempts to reform the nation failed because of liberum veto. It was a right in the Sejm, that if one members disagrees, the law is not passed. In the rule of August III, only one out of 13 Sejms managed to pass a single law. Speaking of August III (1733-1763), he did not even care about his country. He was just sitting there in his manor in Saxony, when his nation was Brezhneving. In the 30 years that he ruled the Commonwealth, he spent only 3 in his country.

A group of more intelligent nobles, mostly from Poland, decided that this is not how it should be. There must be reforms. Two main reform parties have gathered - one led by the House of Potocki, who were supported by France, and the other one, named "Familia", led by Czartoryski, who were supported by Russia. Their rivalry went to an open conflict, while at the same time August III, hoping to pass the throne to his son, wanted to make it hereditary, instead of elected. This weakened his position, and the foreign countries were against any reforms.

The position changed in 1763, when August III died. With military and political support by Russia, Stanislaw Poniatowski, one of the leaders of the Familia, became King. many historians say that he was a weak ruler. He was familiar with the Enlightenment, and knew much about art and music, but not so much about politics. Anyway, this caused a lot of turmoil. The Familia started enacting reforms, against the will of their biggest backer - Catherine II of Russia. With her backing, the nobles that did not like the changes formed the Radom Confederation in 1767, that wanted to abolish the reforms and return everything back to the old tracks. The followers of the Familia formed the Bar Confederation, which was against the Radom Confederates and the Russian influence in the Commonwealth. They planned to receive help from the west, but it did not come. The Bar Confederation was destroyed.

The three biggest neighbours of the Commonwealth, Russia, Prussia and Austria, in order to halt each other's influence in the nation and weaken the Familia, decided to partition the poor Poland-Lithuania. In 1772, the agreement was signed, and the three monarchies each took a big deal of the territory. Forced by foreign soldiers, Sejm ratified the partition.

The nobles were shocked. The empires that they believed were friendly suddenly took almost a third of the territory. This pushed the Sejm to continue the reforms. The first ever ministry of education, the Commission of National Education, was created. Education was taken away from religion. The military was modernized and increased in size. Many economical and political reforms followed. Nobles and bishops were now taxed. Liberum veto was suspended and later destroyed. Thanks to the French Revolution and the Russian-Turkish War, the first constitution in Europe was created - the May 3rd Constitution. It was backed by the Familia and the Patriot Party. The King was no longer elected and the crown was hereditary.

And yet again, anger and backlash followed. Many nobles were angry for losing their rights. The situation was dire. A new confederation, the Targovica Confederation, was formed, which was against the Constitution. The nation went into civil war, with Familia being the loyalists and the Confederates being the revolters. Catherine II is ready to send her armies into the Commonwealth at any second, and here we are.

The date is April 27, 1792. You play as a noble family which supports either the Familia or the Targovica Confederation, or maybe as a foreign nation, and your goals are simple - either save the Constitution or get back the old rights. Or get as much land as possible.

Need Help With: Interest. Ideas would also be appreciated.

Please leave this hashtag in place: #Mentorhelp

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AGONY OF THE COMMONWEALTH
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Postby Lavan Tiri » Tue Oct 14, 2014 1:50 pm

Lavan Tiri wrote:RP INTEREST AND FEEDBACK REQUEST
Please provide as much detail as possible.
RP's Overarching Concept: A bunch of paranormal investigators and exorcists explore a deserted town.
Genre/s: Horror, Survival-Horror, Suspense.
Character or Faction Based: Character.
Detailed Description:
(Image)

Dryston Falls, Missouri. Formerly a bustling town of 15,000, the town's economy was built upon the Dry Falls Mine, which held a massive deposit of pure gold. The town and her people were prosperous, the mine would last for a hundred years, and they were all blissfully ignorant of the toxic fumes accumulating beneath the ground, slowly killing them.

But all good things must end, of course. A government inspector found the gas, and ordered the town evacuated. For fifty years, Dryston Falls sat, decaying into a ghost tow to rival Detroit.

In 2014, though, the town was declared safe, and a flood of investigators and former residents swarmed in, regaining their old lives. Dryston Falls was filled up, and seemed to be reviving, having gained a population of nearly 200.

Two Hundred people who were dead within two weeks.

The government panicked, and closed the town, only letting investigators in. Some f these were corporate, others official, and some still paranormal.

It was the paranormal investigators who actually found something. Matthew MacSadler, working for the Northern Missouri Paranormal Investigation Agency, or NMPIA, discovered, via use of an electromagnetic field detector, found a large group of Spirits within the Falls. Now, swarms of paranormal investigators, Wiccans, and Catholic Priests have come to Dryston, seeking to discover why the ghosts are here.

You are one of them.


Need Help With:
Interest, just general stuff.
Please leave this hashtag in place: #Mentorhelp

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Postby Cerillium » Tue Oct 14, 2014 2:40 pm

Lavan Tiri wrote:
Lavan Tiri wrote:RP INTEREST AND FEEDBACK REQUEST
Please provide as much detail as possible.
RP's Overarching Concept: A bunch of paranormal investigators and exorcists explore a deserted town.
Genre/s: Horror, Survival-Horror, Suspense.
Character or Faction Based: Character.
Detailed Description:
(Image)

Dryston Falls, Missouri. Formerly a bustling town of 15,000, the town's economy was built upon the Dry Falls Mine, which held a massive deposit of pure gold. The town and her people were prosperous, the mine would last for a hundred years, and they were all blissfully ignorant of the toxic fumes accumulating beneath the ground, slowly killing them.

But all good things must end, of course. A government inspector found the gas, and ordered the town evacuated. For fifty years, Dryston Falls sat, decaying into a ghost tow to rival Detroit.

In 2014, though, the town was declared safe, and a flood of investigators and former residents swarmed in, regaining their old lives. Dryston Falls was filled up, and seemed to be reviving, having gained a population of nearly 200.

Two Hundred people who were dead within two weeks.

The government panicked, and closed the town, only letting investigators in. Some f these were corporate, others official, and some still paranormal.

It was the paranormal investigators who actually found something. Matthew MacSadler, working for the Northern Missouri Paranormal Investigation Agency, or NMPIA, discovered, via use of an electromagnetic field detector, found a large group of Spirits within the Falls. Now, swarms of paranormal investigators, Wiccans, and Catholic Priests have come to Dryston, seeking to discover why the ghosts are here.

You are one of them.


Need Help With:
Interest, just general stuff.
Please leave this hashtag in place: #Mentorhelp

Why Catholic priests?
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Postby Cerillium » Tue Oct 14, 2014 2:44 pm

Finland SSR wrote:
Finland SSR wrote:RP INTEREST AND FEEDBACK REQUEST
Please provide as much detail as possible.
RP's Overarching Concept: A character-faction RP set in the falling Commonwealth.
Genre/s: Historical, Diplomacy, Politics, Poland (:p)
Character or Faction Based: Mixed.
Detailed Description: So, to those that did not learn about the Polish-Lithuanian Commonwealth, let me give you a crash course of PLC History.

*CrashCourse intro*

Since the 14th century, the two biggest nations in Eastern Europe, the Kingdom of Poland and the Grand Duchy of Lithuania, were slowly moving closer to each other politically and diplomatically. In 1385, in the Kreva treaty the Grand Duke of Lithuania Jogaila has agreed to marry a Polish princess and become the new king of Poland, effectively uniting the two nations in a personal union, which was soon broken by Jogaila's cousin Vytautas, who took the throne of Lithuania for himself with the help of the Teutons. After Vytautas the Great's death (and after being so close to becoming King), the two nations were reunited.

In 1569, a further step was pushed towards the unification. Even though the two countries were in a personal union, their everything was similar. At that time, Lithuania was fighting in the Livonian War against Russia, and it did not go well. They needed Polish help. Also, the nobles of Poland feared that after the childless king Zigmund August's death, Lithuanians might elect their own Grand Duke, and distance away from the Polish crown. This led to a new document - the Union of Lublin. Both countries were now equal members in a united country.

In 1572, Zigmund August died. There was no heir. Instead of finding a legitimate successor, the nobles decided - why don't we elect a king by ourselves? And that way, the nobles started to rule. The king was nothing more than a puppet, most of the time. According to many historians, the last good ruler of the Commonwealth was Stephen Bathory, who ruled from 1576 to 1586. And the nation lasted 200 more years. You know how fucked up it got.

Now, let's skip those 200 years. They will not be important, and let's go to the second quarter to the 18th century. The nation is in anarchy. Many wars have passed, and the treasury is empty. Foreign armies walk through the territory like it was theirs, and there's nobody that can stop them, as the military size is dependent on the nobles' will to serve in it. And why would they defend their country when they can just throw parties and festivals all day? All attempts to reform the nation failed because of liberum veto. It was a right in the Sejm, that if one members disagrees, the law is not passed. In the rule of August III, only one out of 13 Sejms managed to pass a single law. Speaking of August III (1733-1763), he did not even care about his country. He was just sitting there in his manor in Saxony, when his nation was Brezhneving. In the 30 years that he ruled the Commonwealth, he spent only 3 in his country.

A group of more intelligent nobles, mostly from Poland, decided that this is not how it should be. There must be reforms. Two main reform parties have gathered - one led by the House of Potocki, who were supported by France, and the other one, named "Familia", led by Czartoryski, who were supported by Russia. Their rivalry went to an open conflict, while at the same time August III, hoping to pass the throne to his son, wanted to make it hereditary, instead of elected. This weakened his position, and the foreign countries were against any reforms.

The position changed in 1763, when August III died. With military and political support by Russia, Stanislaw Poniatowski, one of the leaders of the Familia, became King. many historians say that he was a weak ruler. He was familiar with the Enlightenment, and knew much about art and music, but not so much about politics. Anyway, this caused a lot of turmoil. The Familia started enacting reforms, against the will of their biggest backer - Catherine II of Russia. With her backing, the nobles that did not like the changes formed the Radom Confederation in 1767, that wanted to abolish the reforms and return everything back to the old tracks. The followers of the Familia formed the Bar Confederation, which was against the Radom Confederates and the Russian influence in the Commonwealth. They planned to receive help from the west, but it did not come. The Bar Confederation was destroyed.

The three biggest neighbours of the Commonwealth, Russia, Prussia and Austria, in order to halt each other's influence in the nation and weaken the Familia, decided to partition the poor Poland-Lithuania. In 1772, the agreement was signed, and the three monarchies each took a big deal of the territory. Forced by foreign soldiers, Sejm ratified the partition.

The nobles were shocked. The empires that they believed were friendly suddenly took almost a third of the territory. This pushed the Sejm to continue the reforms. The first ever ministry of education, the Commission of National Education, was created. Education was taken away from religion. The military was modernized and increased in size. Many economical and political reforms followed. Nobles and bishops were now taxed. Liberum veto was suspended and later destroyed. Thanks to the French Revolution and the Russian-Turkish War, the first constitution in Europe was created - the May 3rd Constitution. It was backed by the Familia and the Patriot Party. The King was no longer elected and the crown was hereditary.

And yet again, anger and backlash followed. Many nobles were angry for losing their rights. The situation was dire. A new confederation, the Targovica Confederation, was formed, which was against the Constitution. The nation went into civil war, with Familia being the loyalists and the Confederates being the revolters. Catherine II is ready to send her armies into the Commonwealth at any second, and here we are.

The date is April 27, 1792. You play as a noble family which supports either the Familia or the Targovica Confederation, or maybe as a foreign nation, and your goals are simple - either save the Constitution or get back the old rights. Or get as much land as possible.

Need Help With: Interest. Ideas would also be appreciated.

Please leave this hashtag in place: #Mentorhelp

And I have a name:

AGONY OF THE COMMONWEALTH

It sounds interesting. Personally, I don't play RP like these so my commentary wouldn't serve to help much.
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Postby Lavan Tiri » Tue Oct 14, 2014 4:12 pm

Cerillium wrote:
Lavan Tiri wrote:

Why Catholic priests?


Because exorcism.

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Postby Tomia » Tue Oct 14, 2014 6:22 pm

Hey guys, I started a new fantasy RP that has everything you could want in an RP. War, kingdoms, spirit animals, elemental magic and more! Come check it out!
viewtopic.php?f=31&t=315995#p22075582

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Postby Altito Asmoro » Tue Oct 14, 2014 8:12 pm

Lavan Tiri wrote:
Lavan Tiri wrote:RP INTEREST AND FEEDBACK REQUEST
Please provide as much detail as possible.
RP's Overarching Concept: A bunch of paranormal investigators and exorcists explore a deserted town.
Genre/s: Horror, Survival-Horror, Suspense.
Character or Faction Based: Character.
Detailed Description:
(Image)

Dryston Falls, Missouri. Formerly a bustling town of 15,000, the town's economy was built upon the Dry Falls Mine, which held a massive deposit of pure gold. The town and her people were prosperous, the mine would last for a hundred years, and they were all blissfully ignorant of the toxic fumes accumulating beneath the ground, slowly killing them.

But all good things must end, of course. A government inspector found the gas, and ordered the town evacuated. For fifty years, Dryston Falls sat, decaying into a ghost tow to rival Detroit.

In 2014, though, the town was declared safe, and a flood of investigators and former residents swarmed in, regaining their old lives. Dryston Falls was filled up, and seemed to be reviving, having gained a population of nearly 200.

Two Hundred people who were dead within two weeks.

The government panicked, and closed the town, only letting investigators in. Some f these were corporate, others official, and some still paranormal.

It was the paranormal investigators who actually found something. Matthew MacSadler, working for the Northern Missouri Paranormal Investigation Agency, or NMPIA, discovered, via use of an electromagnetic field detector, found a large group of Spirits within the Falls. Now, swarms of paranormal investigators, Wiccans, and Catholic Priests have come to Dryston, seeking to discover why the ghosts are here.

You are one of them.


Need Help With:
Interest, just general stuff.
Please leave this hashtag in place: #Mentorhelp


So there are still people who survived after fifty years and then returning to Dryston as old residents? I saw a flawed logic there, correct me if I am wrong.

But why Catholic Priests?
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Postby Alleniana » Wed Oct 15, 2014 2:03 am

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Alleniana wrote:Wolf Among Us?


Never, though I know tidbits of the story.

I just realised that I should actually find out more about this, because to be honest, even though I don't know very much, I love it. :P
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Postby New Decius » Thu Oct 16, 2014 5:54 am

I am making an alternate history RP wherein the Nazi's or the Axis in general won the war and then a Resistance Movement in the 1960's rises up to dislodge the Nazi's from their rule. I want to know a general opinion on the backstory I've setup, whether it makes sense or not.

When the Allies were completely defeated at Normandy, the Russians were unable to make a decisive push against the Germans because no new troops were required to be transferred to the Western Front meaning the Eastern Front stood at a standstill on both sides. On June 12th, 1944 Allied High Command discovered that German Agents within British Intelligence had passed the information along to Hitler that the supposed Invasion of Calais or another point was a fake and the real strike was coming at Normandy allowing the German General's Staff to organize a suitable counter-attack and hit the Allies once they believed they had taken the beaches. With this revelation of British Intelligence being compromised in such a large way, it brought Allied Efforts across Europe and North Africa to a halt, not knowing whether or not to trust the information they were given. Taking advantage of this, German Forces swept down into Italy beating back the Allied Forces there, fielding a brand new weapon from their Wunderwaffe Program, the Panzer VIII Maus Super Tank, crushing Allied Troops across the Italian Front. By September, 1944 German Forces had recaptured Italy and restored Mussolini to power, bringing Italy back into the war. The new Italian Government which had declared war on Germany was wiped out and its supporters forced to flee the country. In October, the Allied Powers on the Western and African Fronts made a push to try and force the Germans to relocate troops from the Eastern Front to counter it in order to free up Russian Forces to push forward. Halfway through the month, an all out Bombing Attack was launched against German-Occupied France, with over 1,000 Bombers participating in the action across Occupied France targeting Supply and Troop positions. However, yet another weapon flowed out from the Wunderwaffe Program, two actually, the first being the Flakpanzer Kugelblitz a Self-Propelled AA Gun which wreaked havoc in the sky and the second being the Focke-Wulf Ta 152 High Altitude Fighter. Together these two new weapons destroyed more than half of the Bomber Force launched by the Allies with the Allied Air Power only able to inflict minimal damage against the German Forces in France. The German Wonder Weapon Program churned out more and more new weapons to use against the Allies, utilizing every last scientific mind in the Third Reich and putting more than 40% of the industry under the supervision of the program. The Germans bombed London, Moscow, and numerous other targets using their new He 343 Jet Bomber's; The Luftwaffe shattered the Allied Bomber Power with their Me 262 and Ho 229 Jet Fighters; The German Naval Power rose again with the new H-Class Battleships and Rocket U-Boat Ballistic Missile Submarines; The Wehrmacht utilized their new Super Tanks to spearhead their way forward on the Eastern Front. In order to meet the industrial capacity required to keep up the production of their new War Machines, the Nazi's invaded Spain and Portugal from France taking the two countries in just three weeks, whilst another force seized Romania and Bulgaria. This allowed the German War Machine to be sustained. In order to sustain the economy of the Reich, Hitler ordered the revival of the more humane industries such as Automobiles and Agriculture, mostly in the occupied territories.
Throughout the remainder of 1944 and into early 1945, the revived Axis Powers in Europe beat back the Allies on all Fronts, whilst in the Pacific the Japanese Empire was in a holdout against the United States. German Scientists found their way via U-Boat to Japan to help them develop their way to get back to winning the war. On March 3rd, 1945 as a combined Filipino/American Assault was being made to capture Manila, the Japanese fielded the product of the combined German-Japanese Scientific Initiative: The Kawanishi Baika Jet Fighter, which swept across the sky's destroying the Allied Air Cover and turning the tide for the Japanese so that they were now the winning side. The next day multiple V-2 Rockets loaned to Japan by Germany are launched and the Allied Fleet still anchored off Manila is wiped out, and soon after the road to Rangoon is once again secured by Japanese Troops. Following that another new weapon; the Japanese Nakajima G10N Ultra-Long Range Heavy Bomber, the project having been restarted earlier, was fielded and used to bomb multiple American Bases in the Pacific on March 12th through 16th. These repercussions threw a monkey wrench into previous American Plans for victory in the Pacific, which was a very hoped for victory considering the worsening Allied Situation in Europe. The Allied High Command believed that if it took Japan out of the war it could cut off resources flowing from them to Germany and vice versa, and free up more than a million American Troops for the European Theater. However by April 1st, 1945 when Japanese Warships began shelling American Forces on Iwo Jima, it became clear that victory in the Pacific was at that moment as far off as victory in Europe. With the Japanese having the benefit of some of the best scientists of the Wunderwaffe Program, the Allies now were facing super weapons on all fronts. Not only that but with the help of the Germans, the Japanese developed a new code without the knowledge of the Allies. Allied Intelligence kept intercepting Japanese Messages but without the ability to decode them. This meant that the Allies know longer could be one step ahead of the Japanese.
A true low for the Allies came on May 26th, 1945 when more than two hundred German V-2 Rockets were launched at various targets in Russia, wiping out over one and half million Soviet Troops in just one day. Following that on May 27th, German Forces made a blitzkrieg into Russia capturing positions from Leningrad down to Rostov effectively establishing a line separating Soviet Russia from German-Occupied Russia. The Russians did not have much breathing time as on June 1st, the Germans fielded another weapon; the Schwerer Gustav Rail-Mounted Howitzer and with their new line established about 200 Kilometers west of Moscow, that meant that German Forces could shell any Russian Forces and Defensive Emplacements on the outskirts of the Russian Capital's Defense Line. On June 5th, another V-2 Bombardment took place against Soviet Cities to the east of Rostov, wiping out over a million Soviet Troops and allowing German Troops to launch another push on June 7th, capturing the way to Turkey and extending their line so that it spanned from the Sea of Azov to the Caspian Sea. In mid-June, Stalin began trying to negotiate a peace agreement with Hitler but the only condition the Nazi Leader would accept is absolute submission of the Soviet Nation to German Rule and the disbandment of the Soviet Armed Forces along with the release of all German Prisoners of War. Stalin refused and the German Offensive started back up. However Hitler knew it was vital to make sure that the Russians were unable to destroy any valuable recourses that German Forces could capture so he ordered that the Luftwaffe begin dropping Paratroopers into Industrial Areas and such before attacks so they could prevent the Russians from destroying what could be vital factories. The tactic saw much success considering the already mass disorder amongst the Red Army.
Whilst the Germans advanced on the Eastern Front, at the same time the Allied Powers in the west attempted yet another invasion of German-Occupied Europe, this time selecting Dunkirk and Calais, with the British and French taking Calais and America and other Resistance Forces taking Dunkirk. More than half a million Troops were to be utilized in Dunkirk and over a million were to be used at Calais and full support was to be provided by the RAF and Allied Naval Forces in England. It was the Western Allies desperate all-out last attempt to turn the tide of the war. The two Invasion Forces were launched from Portsmouth on May 28th, 1945 however not more than an hour later they were spotted from the air. They were not even spotted by a Recon Plane but the lead plane of a German Bomber Group on its way to bomb a target in Britain. The information was quickly sent to German Air and Naval Bases in France and a counter effort was quickly mobilized. Over 5,000 German Fighters and Bombers lifted off from Air Bases in France and a Naval Fleet of some half a hundred Surface Vessels and half a thousand Submersible Vessels set sail from Naval Bases. In the evening of May 28th, the two fleets clashed and though the Allies had the advantage of many more surface Warships than the Germans, the German Naval Fleet had some 500 Submarine Vessels putting the Allies at a distinct disadvantage. The Allies were also deprived of some of their Air Cover as the same German Bomber Group which spotted their Invasion Force before it split, bombed several of the Air Bases to be used for launching the two forces air cover. It turned into an all out Naval Battle. The battle would be waged for over a week with both sides taking losses however the Allies had utilized all their combat-able Vessels and Aircraft for this invasion, with practically all the remaining vessels of the Allied Naval Power being in ports for repairs or construction, whereas the German Naval Forces received reinforcements from Bases in France. Finally on June 3rd, the Allies had taken critical casualties forcing them to retreat from battle, though the German Forces did not pursue and merely returned to their bases. The Allies had lost their last hope of a successful counter-offensive in Europe, the bulk of their main troops having been wiped out in what came to be known as the Great Battle for the Channel. Their last hope lay in the Manhattan Project, the High Command desperately hoping that an Atomic Weapon would be churned out that could turn the tide of the war. However the thought of trying to negotiate a peace agreement was dismissed as they believed Hitler would only accept an unconditional surrender. On June 5th, the same day as the second major German Push into Russia, the Allies began the process of converting their remaining forces in England into a defensive force. All attempts to recall troops from Africa were useless as said forces had been destroyed months before.
Though the Allies had been unable to recall their troops from Africa, there was still an effort made by the scattered British, French, and American Forces alongside multiple Resistance Groups in North Africa. On June 16th, more than 50,000 Assorted Allied and Resistance Troops made an assault against the Heavily fortified German Position at Tobruk. Though making good headway at first, within several hours of the attack large elements of Field Marshal Rommel's Tank Corps arrived to reinforce Tobruk, quickly turning the tide against the Allied Troops. By day's end the entire Allied Force had been wiped out.
June 21st, 1945 the German Wunderwaffe Program produced one of its most devastating weapons yet, which would eventually push the United States onto the definite defensive on both sides of the world; the Ju 390 Ultra-Long Range Heavy Bomber, an aircraft capable of reaching the Eastern Seaboard of the United States, a range once only thought to be fantasy for a Bomber. On the evening of June 22nd, 1945 the citizens of New York City were all suddenly awoken by a roar of explosions in the streets as hundreds upon hundreds of bombs fell upon the city. The air raid was conducted by the entire stock of 390's the Germans had available at the moment, some 100 aircraft with each being able to carry up to 25,000 Pounds of Bombs. By the morning, more than half a million citizens had been killed by the raid and the USAAF had only been able to down one of the German Bombers. With such a destructive new weapon available to the German War Machine, this prompted a stress for the Manhattan Project to increase its Research and Production Speed and produce a Nuclear Weapon. There were also calls from millions of U.S. Citizens to the government for a peace settlement with the Axis Powers, for surrender even. All out of fear of what would come next. On June 26th, the Germans unveiled yet another of their new long range Bombers; the He 277 which when combined with the 390's, allowed the Germans to hit cities along the entire Eastern Seaboard every day. By the end of the month, more than one million civilian casualties and over half a million military casualties had been suffered by the United States and more than twenty cities had been devastated.
After this victory, Hitler and the Allies both realized an upcoming problem for Germany which could possibly turn the war back around in the Allies favor. Throughout the war, Germany had been steadily trying to develop a Synthetic Fuel, however these efforts were not producing very positive results meaning the German War Machine continued to rely on Oil Reserves in the captured Regions of the Soviet Union along with those in Romania and Bulgaria and Africa. Such a large supply kept the German War Machine going for a long time but Hitler's all out offensive on the Allies and the world along with the vast increase in Vehicles used in the German Army, had used up a large percentage of that supply. If the supply got too low it would grind the German Offensive to a halt in everything but the Infantry and Artillery, which would allow the Allies to regroup and possibly launch a counter-offensive. However the nations in the Middle East were abundant in Oil Reserves combining to a total Supply more than twice the original full Oil Supply of Germany. After being tipped off by Great Britain, the nations of Turkey, Iran, and Iraq began shoring up the border with Europe into the Middle East. However on June 29th, the combined Eastern Armies were still caught off guard by the sudden blitz by elements of the newly created 21st Army Group E down from Russia into Turkey accompanied by mass Paradrops by the Luftwaffe and amphibious Landings by the Kriegsmarine on the coast. As with the majority of Europe in the beginning of the war, it did not take the Nazi's long to secure the Middle East. By July 1st, the vast Oil Supply of the Middle East was under German Control.
Whilst the Manhattan Project had been steadily losing it's scientists and resources to the Axis Victories around the world, the German Nuclear Weapon Program had been steadily growing and soon, the Wunderwaffe Program in collaboration with the Nuclear Weapon Program turned out the very first prototype Nuclear Weapon. And on July 4th, they used it, against the United States. Despite the war going on, the United States still celebrated the founding of their nation, a great parade was held in the Capital of Washington D.C. to boost morale with millions flooding into the city to see. Unfortunately for them, neither the United States Air Force nor any Anti-Air Battery along the coast detected the sole He 343 Jet Bomber, another new weapon developed specifically for carrying Nuclear Weapons, flying towards the Capital. At exactly 11:00 PM on July 4th, 1945, an Atomic Bomb fell on Washington D.C. wiping out more than half the city along with some six and a half million people both military and civilian. The saving grace of the rest of the city was that the Bomb was only a prototype not a full version otherwise the full city would have been wiped out. The next day, Hitler announced to the world that the night before the Luftwaffe dropped an Atomic Bomb on Washington. Many of the smaller nations in the Allied Powers quickly left the Alliance in favor of survival.
Over the course of the next year the Axis Powers continued their push across the world, their combined control spanning across Africa, Asia, and Europe, so that by January, 1946 the Axis Powers were literally at the doorstep of the Allied Home Nations; German Forces were within six miles of the outskirts of Moscow; Italian and Romanian Forces had advanced on Turkey and had Istanbul surrounded; German, Italian, and Finnish Naval Forces were sitting just off the coast along England and Scotland; Japanese Forces were within a little over ten miles from Hawaii. The Allies could easily be crushed in one fell swoop however Hitler decided to try and improve his image with the world in a play to spare the effort of numerous invasions, and announced he would accept the surrender of any of the Allied Nations or an Armistice with any. However without informing Hitler, Goering had ordered the Luftwaffe to destroy Radio Stations in England and Russia so that America was the only nation which received the message. On January 18th, 1946 President Dwight D. Eisenhower, elected mostly because the people thought a military leader would be best suited to lead their nation in the dark hours, along with numerous representatives from Congress met with Adolf Hitler, Benito Mussolini, and Emperor Hirohito on the New Flagship of the German Fleet, the H-Class Battleship, Reichsbane, and signed a surrender with the Axis Powers. The terms of this included that the Eastern Seaboard of the United States would come under Provincial German Rule and the United States Military must be reduced in size greatly. Against Hitler's Wunderwaffe and now German Nuclear Weapons, Eisenhower had no choice but to accept the terms. In this way, Germany controlled the Eastern Seaboard of the United States from afar by keeping the threat of Nuclear Attack hanging over America's head without having to send occupying troops overseas to America itself. Nazi Governors were appointed to control each state, and several fledgling white supremacy groups operating in the Eastern United States were swelled to become a Provincial Nazi Police.
Hitler believed that the Russians and British were simply paying him an insult by just ignoring his offer of peace and ordered the General's Staff to order German Forces around Moscow to close in on the city full force. On January 20th, German Forces made a full advance against the city of Moscow with more than three million Troops against a defending Army of some five million hurriedly conscripted and inexperienced Soviet Conscripts. A week long bombardment by the German Rail-Mounted Howitzers and Luftwaffe Heavy Bombers quickly subdued the rebellious populous. As for the British, Hitler ordered an Atomic Bombing of London to wipe out the British Capital along with Winston Churchill. However British Intelligence managed to catch word of the plan and immediately got Prime Minister Churchill and the rest of the British Government out of the country. On February 6th, 1946, an Atomic Bomb was dropped on London wiping out it and the 100,000 Civilians that had yet to be evacuated. The British Government fled to Canada after the Nazi's dropped another Atomic Bomb on Dublin on March 1st. The United Kingdom officially surrendered however the British Government remained in hiding.
There remained only one true enemy to the Axis Powers and that was the combined Resistance Forces in Europe. Some 150,000 French, British, Russian, Spanish, German, Belgian, Dutch, Danish, Norwegian, and Romanian Resistance Forces made a final assault against the heavily defended city of Paris on April 1st, 1946. They fought hard against the 25,000 German Garrison in Paris and by nightfall had forced the Germans into a form of house-to-house urban warfare, repelling several counterattacks made by German reinforcements. However on April 2nd, Hitler announced that if the Resistance Forces did not surrender, an Atomic Bomb would be dropped on Paris. Under the threat of the destruction of Paris, the Resistance Forces surrendered.
By May, 1946 the Axis Powers had divided up the world and now they ruled it.
Proud advocate that Europe stands stronger together than divided. The EU may be flawed in some areas but the idea of a united Europa can only bring good fortune to Europe and the world. For more than two thousand years, Europe was home to conflicts inspired by coveting one another's territory and resources, even making the continent the home to some of the world's most destructive and costly conflicts. But the idea was all wrong in their minds. Their idea was to bring this territory or that under their flag and spread influence on the continent. The idea they should all have been thinking was that the goal should be to bring the continent under one unified flag.

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Postby Altito Asmoro » Thu Oct 16, 2014 7:16 am

New Decius wrote:I am making an alternate history RP wherein the Nazi's or the Axis in general won the war and then a Resistance Movement in the 1960's rises up to dislodge the Nazi's from their rule. I want to know a general opinion on the backstory I've setup, whether it makes sense or not.

When the Allies were completely defeated at Normandy, the Russians were unable to make a decisive push against the Germans because no new troops were required to be transferred to the Western Front meaning the Eastern Front stood at a standstill on both sides. On June 12th, 1944 Allied High Command discovered that German Agents within British Intelligence had passed the information along to Hitler that the supposed Invasion of Calais or another point was a fake and the real strike was coming at Normandy allowing the German General's Staff to organize a suitable counter-attack and hit the Allies once they believed they had taken the beaches. With this revelation of British Intelligence being compromised in such a large way, it brought Allied Efforts across Europe and North Africa to a halt, not knowing whether or not to trust the information they were given. Taking advantage of this, German Forces swept down into Italy beating back the Allied Forces there, fielding a brand new weapon from their Wunderwaffe Program, the Panzer VIII Maus Super Tank, crushing Allied Troops across the Italian Front. By September, 1944 German Forces had recaptured Italy and restored Mussolini to power, bringing Italy back into the war. The new Italian Government which had declared war on Germany was wiped out and its supporters forced to flee the country. In October, the Allied Powers on the Western and African Fronts made a push to try and force the Germans to relocate troops from the Eastern Front to counter it in order to free up Russian Forces to push forward. Halfway through the month, an all out Bombing Attack was launched against German-Occupied France, with over 1,000 Bombers participating in the action across Occupied France targeting Supply and Troop positions. However, yet another weapon flowed out from the Wunderwaffe Program, two actually, the first being the Flakpanzer Kugelblitz a Self-Propelled AA Gun which wreaked havoc in the sky and the second being the Focke-Wulf Ta 152 High Altitude Fighter. Together these two new weapons destroyed more than half of the Bomber Force launched by the Allies with the Allied Air Power only able to inflict minimal damage against the German Forces in France. The German Wonder Weapon Program churned out more and more new weapons to use against the Allies, utilizing every last scientific mind in the Third Reich and putting more than 40% of the industry under the supervision of the program. The Germans bombed London, Moscow, and numerous other targets using their new He 343 Jet Bomber's; The Luftwaffe shattered the Allied Bomber Power with their Me 262 and Ho 229 Jet Fighters; The German Naval Power rose again with the new H-Class Battleships and Rocket U-Boat Ballistic Missile Submarines; The Wehrmacht utilized their new Super Tanks to spearhead their way forward on the Eastern Front. In order to meet the industrial capacity required to keep up the production of their new War Machines, the Nazi's invaded Spain and Portugal from France taking the two countries in just three weeks, whilst another force seized Romania and Bulgaria. This allowed the German War Machine to be sustained. In order to sustain the economy of the Reich, Hitler ordered the revival of the more humane industries such as Automobiles and Agriculture, mostly in the occupied territories.
Throughout the remainder of 1944 and into early 1945, the revived Axis Powers in Europe beat back the Allies on all Fronts, whilst in the Pacific the Japanese Empire was in a holdout against the United States. German Scientists found their way via U-Boat to Japan to help them develop their way to get back to winning the war. On March 3rd, 1945 as a combined Filipino/American Assault was being made to capture Manila, the Japanese fielded the product of the combined German-Japanese Scientific Initiative: The Kawanishi Baika Jet Fighter, which swept across the sky's destroying the Allied Air Cover and turning the tide for the Japanese so that they were now the winning side. The next day multiple V-2 Rockets loaned to Japan by Germany are launched and the Allied Fleet still anchored off Manila is wiped out, and soon after the road to Rangoon is once again secured by Japanese Troops. Following that another new weapon; the Japanese Nakajima G10N Ultra-Long Range Heavy Bomber, the project having been restarted earlier, was fielded and used to bomb multiple American Bases in the Pacific on March 12th through 16th. These repercussions threw a monkey wrench into previous American Plans for victory in the Pacific, which was a very hoped for victory considering the worsening Allied Situation in Europe. The Allied High Command believed that if it took Japan out of the war it could cut off resources flowing from them to Germany and vice versa, and free up more than a million American Troops for the European Theater. However by April 1st, 1945 when Japanese Warships began shelling American Forces on Iwo Jima, it became clear that victory in the Pacific was at that moment as far off as victory in Europe. With the Japanese having the benefit of some of the best scientists of the Wunderwaffe Program, the Allies now were facing super weapons on all fronts. Not only that but with the help of the Germans, the Japanese developed a new code without the knowledge of the Allies. Allied Intelligence kept intercepting Japanese Messages but without the ability to decode them. This meant that the Allies know longer could be one step ahead of the Japanese.
A true low for the Allies came on May 26th, 1945 when more than two hundred German V-2 Rockets were launched at various targets in Russia, wiping out over one and half million Soviet Troops in just one day. Following that on May 27th, German Forces made a blitzkrieg into Russia capturing positions from Leningrad down to Rostov effectively establishing a line separating Soviet Russia from German-Occupied Russia. The Russians did not have much breathing time as on June 1st, the Germans fielded another weapon; the Schwerer Gustav Rail-Mounted Howitzer and with their new line established about 200 Kilometers west of Moscow, that meant that German Forces could shell any Russian Forces and Defensive Emplacements on the outskirts of the Russian Capital's Defense Line. On June 5th, another V-2 Bombardment took place against Soviet Cities to the east of Rostov, wiping out over a million Soviet Troops and allowing German Troops to launch another push on June 7th, capturing the way to Turkey and extending their line so that it spanned from the Sea of Azov to the Caspian Sea. In mid-June, Stalin began trying to negotiate a peace agreement with Hitler but the only condition the Nazi Leader would accept is absolute submission of the Soviet Nation to German Rule and the disbandment of the Soviet Armed Forces along with the release of all German Prisoners of War. Stalin refused and the German Offensive started back up. However Hitler knew it was vital to make sure that the Russians were unable to destroy any valuable recourses that German Forces could capture so he ordered that the Luftwaffe begin dropping Paratroopers into Industrial Areas and such before attacks so they could prevent the Russians from destroying what could be vital factories. The tactic saw much success considering the already mass disorder amongst the Red Army.
Whilst the Germans advanced on the Eastern Front, at the same time the Allied Powers in the west attempted yet another invasion of German-Occupied Europe, this time selecting Dunkirk and Calais, with the British and French taking Calais and America and other Resistance Forces taking Dunkirk. More than half a million Troops were to be utilized in Dunkirk and over a million were to be used at Calais and full support was to be provided by the RAF and Allied Naval Forces in England. It was the Western Allies desperate all-out last attempt to turn the tide of the war. The two Invasion Forces were launched from Portsmouth on May 28th, 1945 however not more than an hour later they were spotted from the air. They were not even spotted by a Recon Plane but the lead plane of a German Bomber Group on its way to bomb a target in Britain. The information was quickly sent to German Air and Naval Bases in France and a counter effort was quickly mobilized. Over 5,000 German Fighters and Bombers lifted off from Air Bases in France and a Naval Fleet of some half a hundred Surface Vessels and half a thousand Submersible Vessels set sail from Naval Bases. In the evening of May 28th, the two fleets clashed and though the Allies had the advantage of many more surface Warships than the Germans, the German Naval Fleet had some 500 Submarine Vessels putting the Allies at a distinct disadvantage. The Allies were also deprived of some of their Air Cover as the same German Bomber Group which spotted their Invasion Force before it split, bombed several of the Air Bases to be used for launching the two forces air cover. It turned into an all out Naval Battle. The battle would be waged for over a week with both sides taking losses however the Allies had utilized all their combat-able Vessels and Aircraft for this invasion, with practically all the remaining vessels of the Allied Naval Power being in ports for repairs or construction, whereas the German Naval Forces received reinforcements from Bases in France. Finally on June 3rd, the Allies had taken critical casualties forcing them to retreat from battle, though the German Forces did not pursue and merely returned to their bases. The Allies had lost their last hope of a successful counter-offensive in Europe, the bulk of their main troops having been wiped out in what came to be known as the Great Battle for the Channel. Their last hope lay in the Manhattan Project, the High Command desperately hoping that an Atomic Weapon would be churned out that could turn the tide of the war. However the thought of trying to negotiate a peace agreement was dismissed as they believed Hitler would only accept an unconditional surrender. On June 5th, the same day as the second major German Push into Russia, the Allies began the process of converting their remaining forces in England into a defensive force. All attempts to recall troops from Africa were useless as said forces had been destroyed months before.
Though the Allies had been unable to recall their troops from Africa, there was still an effort made by the scattered British, French, and American Forces alongside multiple Resistance Groups in North Africa. On June 16th, more than 50,000 Assorted Allied and Resistance Troops made an assault against the Heavily fortified German Position at Tobruk. Though making good headway at first, within several hours of the attack large elements of Field Marshal Rommel's Tank Corps arrived to reinforce Tobruk, quickly turning the tide against the Allied Troops. By day's end the entire Allied Force had been wiped out.
June 21st, 1945 the German Wunderwaffe Program produced one of its most devastating weapons yet, which would eventually push the United States onto the definite defensive on both sides of the world; the Ju 390 Ultra-Long Range Heavy Bomber, an aircraft capable of reaching the Eastern Seaboard of the United States, a range once only thought to be fantasy for a Bomber. On the evening of June 22nd, 1945 the citizens of New York City were all suddenly awoken by a roar of explosions in the streets as hundreds upon hundreds of bombs fell upon the city. The air raid was conducted by the entire stock of 390's the Germans had available at the moment, some 100 aircraft with each being able to carry up to 25,000 Pounds of Bombs. By the morning, more than half a million citizens had been killed by the raid and the USAAF had only been able to down one of the German Bombers. With such a destructive new weapon available to the German War Machine, this prompted a stress for the Manhattan Project to increase its Research and Production Speed and produce a Nuclear Weapon. There were also calls from millions of U.S. Citizens to the government for a peace settlement with the Axis Powers, for surrender even. All out of fear of what would come next. On June 26th, the Germans unveiled yet another of their new long range Bombers; the He 277 which when combined with the 390's, allowed the Germans to hit cities along the entire Eastern Seaboard every day. By the end of the month, more than one million civilian casualties and over half a million military casualties had been suffered by the United States and more than twenty cities had been devastated.
After this victory, Hitler and the Allies both realized an upcoming problem for Germany which could possibly turn the war back around in the Allies favor. Throughout the war, Germany had been steadily trying to develop a Synthetic Fuel, however these efforts were not producing very positive results meaning the German War Machine continued to rely on Oil Reserves in the captured Regions of the Soviet Union along with those in Romania and Bulgaria and Africa. Such a large supply kept the German War Machine going for a long time but Hitler's all out offensive on the Allies and the world along with the vast increase in Vehicles used in the German Army, had used up a large percentage of that supply. If the supply got too low it would grind the German Offensive to a halt in everything but the Infantry and Artillery, which would allow the Allies to regroup and possibly launch a counter-offensive. However the nations in the Middle East were abundant in Oil Reserves combining to a total Supply more than twice the original full Oil Supply of Germany. After being tipped off by Great Britain, the nations of Turkey, Iran, and Iraq began shoring up the border with Europe into the Middle East. However on June 29th, the combined Eastern Armies were still caught off guard by the sudden blitz by elements of the newly created 21st Army Group E down from Russia into Turkey accompanied by mass Paradrops by the Luftwaffe and amphibious Landings by the Kriegsmarine on the coast. As with the majority of Europe in the beginning of the war, it did not take the Nazi's long to secure the Middle East. By July 1st, the vast Oil Supply of the Middle East was under German Control.
Whilst the Manhattan Project had been steadily losing it's scientists and resources to the Axis Victories around the world, the German Nuclear Weapon Program had been steadily growing and soon, the Wunderwaffe Program in collaboration with the Nuclear Weapon Program turned out the very first prototype Nuclear Weapon. And on July 4th, they used it, against the United States. Despite the war going on, the United States still celebrated the founding of their nation, a great parade was held in the Capital of Washington D.C. to boost morale with millions flooding into the city to see. Unfortunately for them, neither the United States Air Force nor any Anti-Air Battery along the coast detected the sole He 343 Jet Bomber, another new weapon developed specifically for carrying Nuclear Weapons, flying towards the Capital. At exactly 11:00 PM on July 4th, 1945, an Atomic Bomb fell on Washington D.C. wiping out more than half the city along with some six and a half million people both military and civilian. The saving grace of the rest of the city was that the Bomb was only a prototype not a full version otherwise the full city would have been wiped out. The next day, Hitler announced to the world that the night before the Luftwaffe dropped an Atomic Bomb on Washington. Many of the smaller nations in the Allied Powers quickly left the Alliance in favor of survival.
Over the course of the next year the Axis Powers continued their push across the world, their combined control spanning across Africa, Asia, and Europe, so that by January, 1946 the Axis Powers were literally at the doorstep of the Allied Home Nations; German Forces were within six miles of the outskirts of Moscow; Italian and Romanian Forces had advanced on Turkey and had Istanbul surrounded; German, Italian, and Finnish Naval Forces were sitting just off the coast along England and Scotland; Japanese Forces were within a little over ten miles from Hawaii. The Allies could easily be crushed in one fell swoop however Hitler decided to try and improve his image with the world in a play to spare the effort of numerous invasions, and announced he would accept the surrender of any of the Allied Nations or an Armistice with any. However without informing Hitler, Goering had ordered the Luftwaffe to destroy Radio Stations in England and Russia so that America was the only nation which received the message. On January 18th, 1946 President Dwight D. Eisenhower, elected mostly because the people thought a military leader would be best suited to lead their nation in the dark hours, along with numerous representatives from Congress met with Adolf Hitler, Benito Mussolini, and Emperor Hirohito on the New Flagship of the German Fleet, the H-Class Battleship, Reichsbane, and signed a surrender with the Axis Powers. The terms of this included that the Eastern Seaboard of the United States would come under Provincial German Rule and the United States Military must be reduced in size greatly. Against Hitler's Wunderwaffe and now German Nuclear Weapons, Eisenhower had no choice but to accept the terms. In this way, Germany controlled the Eastern Seaboard of the United States from afar by keeping the threat of Nuclear Attack hanging over America's head without having to send occupying troops overseas to America itself. Nazi Governors were appointed to control each state, and several fledgling white supremacy groups operating in the Eastern United States were swelled to become a Provincial Nazi Police.
Hitler believed that the Russians and British were simply paying him an insult by just ignoring his offer of peace and ordered the General's Staff to order German Forces around Moscow to close in on the city full force. On January 20th, German Forces made a full advance against the city of Moscow with more than three million Troops against a defending Army of some five million hurriedly conscripted and inexperienced Soviet Conscripts. A week long bombardment by the German Rail-Mounted Howitzers and Luftwaffe Heavy Bombers quickly subdued the rebellious populous. As for the British, Hitler ordered an Atomic Bombing of London to wipe out the British Capital along with Winston Churchill. However British Intelligence managed to catch word of the plan and immediately got Prime Minister Churchill and the rest of the British Government out of the country. On February 6th, 1946, an Atomic Bomb was dropped on London wiping out it and the 100,000 Civilians that had yet to be evacuated. The British Government fled to Canada after the Nazi's dropped another Atomic Bomb on Dublin on March 1st. The United Kingdom officially surrendered however the British Government remained in hiding.
There remained only one true enemy to the Axis Powers and that was the combined Resistance Forces in Europe. Some 150,000 French, British, Russian, Spanish, German, Belgian, Dutch, Danish, Norwegian, and Romanian Resistance Forces made a final assault against the heavily defended city of Paris on April 1st, 1946. They fought hard against the 25,000 German Garrison in Paris and by nightfall had forced the Germans into a form of house-to-house urban warfare, repelling several counterattacks made by German reinforcements. However on April 2nd, Hitler announced that if the Resistance Forces did not surrender, an Atomic Bomb would be dropped on Paris. Under the threat of the destruction of Paris, the Resistance Forces surrendered.
By May, 1946 the Axis Powers had divided up the world and now they ruled it.


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New Decius wrote:I am making an alternate history RP wherein the Nazi's or the Axis in general won the war and then a Resistance Movement in the 1960's rises up to dislodge the Nazi's from their rule. I want to know a general opinion on the backstory I've setup, whether it makes sense or not.

When the Allies were completely defeated at Normandy, the Russians were unable to make a decisive push against the Germans because no new troops were required to be transferred to the Western Front meaning the Eastern Front stood at a standstill on both sides. On June 12th, 1944 Allied High Command discovered that German Agents within British Intelligence had passed the information along to Hitler that the supposed Invasion of Calais or another point was a fake and the real strike was coming at Normandy allowing the German General's Staff to organize a suitable counter-attack and hit the Allies once they believed they had taken the beaches. With this revelation of British Intelligence being compromised in such a large way, it brought Allied Efforts across Europe and North Africa to a halt, not knowing whether or not to trust the information they were given. Taking advantage of this, German Forces swept down into Italy beating back the Allied Forces there, fielding a brand new weapon from their Wunderwaffe Program, the Panzer VIII Maus Super Tank, crushing Allied Troops across the Italian Front. By September, 1944 German Forces had recaptured Italy and restored Mussolini to power, bringing Italy back into the war. The new Italian Government which had declared war on Germany was wiped out and its supporters forced to flee the country. In October, the Allied Powers on the Western and African Fronts made a push to try and force the Germans to relocate troops from the Eastern Front to counter it in order to free up Russian Forces to push forward. Halfway through the month, an all out Bombing Attack was launched against German-Occupied France, with over 1,000 Bombers participating in the action across Occupied France targeting Supply and Troop positions. However, yet another weapon flowed out from the Wunderwaffe Program, two actually, the first being the Flakpanzer Kugelblitz a Self-Propelled AA Gun which wreaked havoc in the sky and the second being the Focke-Wulf Ta 152 High Altitude Fighter. Together these two new weapons destroyed more than half of the Bomber Force launched by the Allies with the Allied Air Power only able to inflict minimal damage against the German Forces in France. The German Wonder Weapon Program churned out more and more new weapons to use against the Allies, utilizing every last scientific mind in the Third Reich and putting more than 40% of the industry under the supervision of the program. The Germans bombed London, Moscow, and numerous other targets using their new He 343 Jet Bomber's; The Luftwaffe shattered the Allied Bomber Power with their Me 262 and Ho 229 Jet Fighters; The German Naval Power rose again with the new H-Class Battleships and Rocket U-Boat Ballistic Missile Submarines; The Wehrmacht utilized their new Super Tanks to spearhead their way forward on the Eastern Front. In order to meet the industrial capacity required to keep up the production of their new War Machines, the Nazi's invaded Spain and Portugal from France taking the two countries in just three weeks, whilst another force seized Romania and Bulgaria. This allowed the German War Machine to be sustained. In order to sustain the economy of the Reich, Hitler ordered the revival of the more humane industries such as Automobiles and Agriculture, mostly in the occupied territories.
Throughout the remainder of 1944 and into early 1945, the revived Axis Powers in Europe beat back the Allies on all Fronts, whilst in the Pacific the Japanese Empire was in a holdout against the United States. German Scientists found their way via U-Boat to Japan to help them develop their way to get back to winning the war. On March 3rd, 1945 as a combined Filipino/American Assault was being made to capture Manila, the Japanese fielded the product of the combined German-Japanese Scientific Initiative: The Kawanishi Baika Jet Fighter, which swept across the sky's destroying the Allied Air Cover and turning the tide for the Japanese so that they were now the winning side. The next day multiple V-2 Rockets loaned to Japan by Germany are launched and the Allied Fleet still anchored off Manila is wiped out, and soon after the road to Rangoon is once again secured by Japanese Troops. Following that another new weapon; the Japanese Nakajima G10N Ultra-Long Range Heavy Bomber, the project having been restarted earlier, was fielded and used to bomb multiple American Bases in the Pacific on March 12th through 16th. These repercussions threw a monkey wrench into previous American Plans for victory in the Pacific, which was a very hoped for victory considering the worsening Allied Situation in Europe. The Allied High Command believed that if it took Japan out of the war it could cut off resources flowing from them to Germany and vice versa, and free up more than a million American Troops for the European Theater. However by April 1st, 1945 when Japanese Warships began shelling American Forces on Iwo Jima, it became clear that victory in the Pacific was at that moment as far off as victory in Europe. With the Japanese having the benefit of some of the best scientists of the Wunderwaffe Program, the Allies now were facing super weapons on all fronts. Not only that but with the help of the Germans, the Japanese developed a new code without the knowledge of the Allies. Allied Intelligence kept intercepting Japanese Messages but without the ability to decode them. This meant that the Allies know longer could be one step ahead of the Japanese.
A true low for the Allies came on May 26th, 1945 when more than two hundred German V-2 Rockets were launched at various targets in Russia, wiping out over one and half million Soviet Troops in just one day. Following that on May 27th, German Forces made a blitzkrieg into Russia capturing positions from Leningrad down to Rostov effectively establishing a line separating Soviet Russia from German-Occupied Russia. The Russians did not have much breathing time as on June 1st, the Germans fielded another weapon; the Schwerer Gustav Rail-Mounted Howitzer and with their new line established about 200 Kilometers west of Moscow, that meant that German Forces could shell any Russian Forces and Defensive Emplacements on the outskirts of the Russian Capital's Defense Line. On June 5th, another V-2 Bombardment took place against Soviet Cities to the east of Rostov, wiping out over a million Soviet Troops and allowing German Troops to launch another push on June 7th, capturing the way to Turkey and extending their line so that it spanned from the Sea of Azov to the Caspian Sea. In mid-June, Stalin began trying to negotiate a peace agreement with Hitler but the only condition the Nazi Leader would accept is absolute submission of the Soviet Nation to German Rule and the disbandment of the Soviet Armed Forces along with the release of all German Prisoners of War. Stalin refused and the German Offensive started back up. However Hitler knew it was vital to make sure that the Russians were unable to destroy any valuable recourses that German Forces could capture so he ordered that the Luftwaffe begin dropping Paratroopers into Industrial Areas and such before attacks so they could prevent the Russians from destroying what could be vital factories. The tactic saw much success considering the already mass disorder amongst the Red Army.
Whilst the Germans advanced on the Eastern Front, at the same time the Allied Powers in the west attempted yet another invasion of German-Occupied Europe, this time selecting Dunkirk and Calais, with the British and French taking Calais and America and other Resistance Forces taking Dunkirk. More than half a million Troops were to be utilized in Dunkirk and over a million were to be used at Calais and full support was to be provided by the RAF and Allied Naval Forces in England. It was the Western Allies desperate all-out last attempt to turn the tide of the war. The two Invasion Forces were launched from Portsmouth on May 28th, 1945 however not more than an hour later they were spotted from the air. They were not even spotted by a Recon Plane but the lead plane of a German Bomber Group on its way to bomb a target in Britain. The information was quickly sent to German Air and Naval Bases in France and a counter effort was quickly mobilized. Over 5,000 German Fighters and Bombers lifted off from Air Bases in France and a Naval Fleet of some half a hundred Surface Vessels and half a thousand Submersible Vessels set sail from Naval Bases. In the evening of May 28th, the two fleets clashed and though the Allies had the advantage of many more surface Warships than the Germans, the German Naval Fleet had some 500 Submarine Vessels putting the Allies at a distinct disadvantage. The Allies were also deprived of some of their Air Cover as the same German Bomber Group which spotted their Invasion Force before it split, bombed several of the Air Bases to be used for launching the two forces air cover. It turned into an all out Naval Battle. The battle would be waged for over a week with both sides taking losses however the Allies had utilized all their combat-able Vessels and Aircraft for this invasion, with practically all the remaining vessels of the Allied Naval Power being in ports for repairs or construction, whereas the German Naval Forces received reinforcements from Bases in France. Finally on June 3rd, the Allies had taken critical casualties forcing them to retreat from battle, though the German Forces did not pursue and merely returned to their bases. The Allies had lost their last hope of a successful counter-offensive in Europe, the bulk of their main troops having been wiped out in what came to be known as the Great Battle for the Channel. Their last hope lay in the Manhattan Project, the High Command desperately hoping that an Atomic Weapon would be churned out that could turn the tide of the war. However the thought of trying to negotiate a peace agreement was dismissed as they believed Hitler would only accept an unconditional surrender. On June 5th, the same day as the second major German Push into Russia, the Allies began the process of converting their remaining forces in England into a defensive force. All attempts to recall troops from Africa were useless as said forces had been destroyed months before.
Though the Allies had been unable to recall their troops from Africa, there was still an effort made by the scattered British, French, and American Forces alongside multiple Resistance Groups in North Africa. On June 16th, more than 50,000 Assorted Allied and Resistance Troops made an assault against the Heavily fortified German Position at Tobruk. Though making good headway at first, within several hours of the attack large elements of Field Marshal Rommel's Tank Corps arrived to reinforce Tobruk, quickly turning the tide against the Allied Troops. By day's end the entire Allied Force had been wiped out.
June 21st, 1945 the German Wunderwaffe Program produced one of its most devastating weapons yet, which would eventually push the United States onto the definite defensive on both sides of the world; the Ju 390 Ultra-Long Range Heavy Bomber, an aircraft capable of reaching the Eastern Seaboard of the United States, a range once only thought to be fantasy for a Bomber. On the evening of June 22nd, 1945 the citizens of New York City were all suddenly awoken by a roar of explosions in the streets as hundreds upon hundreds of bombs fell upon the city. The air raid was conducted by the entire stock of 390's the Germans had available at the moment, some 100 aircraft with each being able to carry up to 25,000 Pounds of Bombs. By the morning, more than half a million citizens had been killed by the raid and the USAAF had only been able to down one of the German Bombers. With such a destructive new weapon available to the German War Machine, this prompted a stress for the Manhattan Project to increase its Research and Production Speed and produce a Nuclear Weapon. There were also calls from millions of U.S. Citizens to the government for a peace settlement with the Axis Powers, for surrender even. All out of fear of what would come next. On June 26th, the Germans unveiled yet another of their new long range Bombers; the He 277 which when combined with the 390's, allowed the Germans to hit cities along the entire Eastern Seaboard every day. By the end of the month, more than one million civilian casualties and over half a million military casualties had been suffered by the United States and more than twenty cities had been devastated.
After this victory, Hitler and the Allies both realized an upcoming problem for Germany which could possibly turn the war back around in the Allies favor. Throughout the war, Germany had been steadily trying to develop a Synthetic Fuel, however these efforts were not producing very positive results meaning the German War Machine continued to rely on Oil Reserves in the captured Regions of the Soviet Union along with those in Romania and Bulgaria and Africa. Such a large supply kept the German War Machine going for a long time but Hitler's all out offensive on the Allies and the world along with the vast increase in Vehicles used in the German Army, had used up a large percentage of that supply. If the supply got too low it would grind the German Offensive to a halt in everything but the Infantry and Artillery, which would allow the Allies to regroup and possibly launch a counter-offensive. However the nations in the Middle East were abundant in Oil Reserves combining to a total Supply more than twice the original full Oil Supply of Germany. After being tipped off by Great Britain, the nations of Turkey, Iran, and Iraq began shoring up the border with Europe into the Middle East. However on June 29th, the combined Eastern Armies were still caught off guard by the sudden blitz by elements of the newly created 21st Army Group E down from Russia into Turkey accompanied by mass Paradrops by the Luftwaffe and amphibious Landings by the Kriegsmarine on the coast. As with the majority of Europe in the beginning of the war, it did not take the Nazi's long to secure the Middle East. By July 1st, the vast Oil Supply of the Middle East was under German Control.
Whilst the Manhattan Project had been steadily losing it's scientists and resources to the Axis Victories around the world, the German Nuclear Weapon Program had been steadily growing and soon, the Wunderwaffe Program in collaboration with the Nuclear Weapon Program turned out the very first prototype Nuclear Weapon. And on July 4th, they used it, against the United States. Despite the war going on, the United States still celebrated the founding of their nation, a great parade was held in the Capital of Washington D.C. to boost morale with millions flooding into the city to see. Unfortunately for them, neither the United States Air Force nor any Anti-Air Battery along the coast detected the sole He 343 Jet Bomber, another new weapon developed specifically for carrying Nuclear Weapons, flying towards the Capital. At exactly 11:00 PM on July 4th, 1945, an Atomic Bomb fell on Washington D.C. wiping out more than half the city along with some six and a half million people both military and civilian. The saving grace of the rest of the city was that the Bomb was only a prototype not a full version otherwise the full city would have been wiped out. The next day, Hitler announced to the world that the night before the Luftwaffe dropped an Atomic Bomb on Washington. Many of the smaller nations in the Allied Powers quickly left the Alliance in favor of survival.
Over the course of the next year the Axis Powers continued their push across the world, their combined control spanning across Africa, Asia, and Europe, so that by January, 1946 the Axis Powers were literally at the doorstep of the Allied Home Nations; German Forces were within six miles of the outskirts of Moscow; Italian and Romanian Forces had advanced on Turkey and had Istanbul surrounded; German, Italian, and Finnish Naval Forces were sitting just off the coast along England and Scotland; Japanese Forces were within a little over ten miles from Hawaii. The Allies could easily be crushed in one fell swoop however Hitler decided to try and improve his image with the world in a play to spare the effort of numerous invasions, and announced he would accept the surrender of any of the Allied Nations or an Armistice with any. However without informing Hitler, Goering had ordered the Luftwaffe to destroy Radio Stations in England and Russia so that America was the only nation which received the message. On January 18th, 1946 President Dwight D. Eisenhower, elected mostly because the people thought a military leader would be best suited to lead their nation in the dark hours, along with numerous representatives from Congress met with Adolf Hitler, Benito Mussolini, and Emperor Hirohito on the New Flagship of the German Fleet, the H-Class Battleship, Reichsbane, and signed a surrender with the Axis Powers. The terms of this included that the Eastern Seaboard of the United States would come under Provincial German Rule and the United States Military must be reduced in size greatly. Against Hitler's Wunderwaffe and now German Nuclear Weapons, Eisenhower had no choice but to accept the terms. In this way, Germany controlled the Eastern Seaboard of the United States from afar by keeping the threat of Nuclear Attack hanging over America's head without having to send occupying troops overseas to America itself. Nazi Governors were appointed to control each state, and several fledgling white supremacy groups operating in the Eastern United States were swelled to become a Provincial Nazi Police.
Hitler believed that the Russians and British were simply paying him an insult by just ignoring his offer of peace and ordered the General's Staff to order German Forces around Moscow to close in on the city full force. On January 20th, German Forces made a full advance against the city of Moscow with more than three million Troops against a defending Army of some five million hurriedly conscripted and inexperienced Soviet Conscripts. A week long bombardment by the German Rail-Mounted Howitzers and Luftwaffe Heavy Bombers quickly subdued the rebellious populous. As for the British, Hitler ordered an Atomic Bombing of London to wipe out the British Capital along with Winston Churchill. However British Intelligence managed to catch word of the plan and immediately got Prime Minister Churchill and the rest of the British Government out of the country. On February 6th, 1946, an Atomic Bomb was dropped on London wiping out it and the 100,000 Civilians that had yet to be evacuated. The British Government fled to Canada after the Nazi's dropped another Atomic Bomb on Dublin on March 1st. The United Kingdom officially surrendered however the British Government remained in hiding.
There remained only one true enemy to the Axis Powers and that was the combined Resistance Forces in Europe. Some 150,000 French, British, Russian, Spanish, German, Belgian, Dutch, Danish, Norwegian, and Romanian Resistance Forces made a final assault against the heavily defended city of Paris on April 1st, 1946. They fought hard against the 25,000 German Garrison in Paris and by nightfall had forced the Germans into a form of house-to-house urban warfare, repelling several counterattacks made by German reinforcements. However on April 2nd, Hitler announced that if the Resistance Forces did not surrender, an Atomic Bomb would be dropped on Paris. Under the threat of the destruction of Paris, the Resistance Forces surrendered.
By May, 1946 the Axis Powers had divided up the world and now they ruled it.


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Postby Kassaran » Thu Oct 16, 2014 8:17 am

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It is though?


Decius, he means separate it with double spaces between paragraphs...
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Postby The Empire of Pretantia » Thu Oct 16, 2014 3:27 pm

New Decius wrote:I am making an alternate history RP wherein the Nazi's or the Axis in general won the war and then a Resistance Movement in the 1960's rises up to dislodge the Nazi's from their rule. I want to know a general opinion on the backstory I've setup, whether it makes sense or not.

When the Allies were completely defeated at Normandy, the Russians were unable to make a decisive push against the Germans because no new troops were required to be transferred to the Western Front meaning the Eastern Front stood at a standstill on both sides. On June 12th, 1944 Allied High Command discovered that German Agents within British Intelligence had passed the information along to Hitler that the supposed Invasion of Calais or another point was a fake and the real strike was coming at Normandy allowing the German General's Staff to organize a suitable counter-attack and hit the Allies once they believed they had taken the beaches. With this revelation of British Intelligence being compromised in such a large way, it brought Allied Efforts across Europe and North Africa to a halt, not knowing whether or not to trust the information they were given. Taking advantage of this, German Forces swept down into Italy beating back the Allied Forces there, fielding a brand new weapon from their Wunderwaffe Program, the Panzer VIII Maus Super Tank, crushing Allied Troops across the Italian Front. By September, 1944 German Forces had recaptured Italy and restored Mussolini to power, bringing Italy back into the war. The new Italian Government which had declared war on Germany was wiped out and its supporters forced to flee the country. In October, the Allied Powers on the Western and African Fronts made a push to try and force the Germans to relocate troops from the Eastern Front to counter it in order to free up Russian Forces to push forward. Halfway through the month, an all out Bombing Attack was launched against German-Occupied France, with over 1,000 Bombers participating in the action across Occupied France targeting Supply and Troop positions. However, yet another weapon flowed out from the Wunderwaffe Program, two actually, the first being the Flakpanzer Kugelblitz a Self-Propelled AA Gun which wreaked havoc in the sky and the second being the Focke-Wulf Ta 152 High Altitude Fighter. Together these two new weapons destroyed more than half of the Bomber Force launched by the Allies with the Allied Air Power only able to inflict minimal damage against the German Forces in France. The German Wonder Weapon Program churned out more and more new weapons to use against the Allies, utilizing every last scientific mind in the Third Reich and putting more than 40% of the industry under the supervision of the program. The Germans bombed London, Moscow, and numerous other targets using their new He 343 Jet Bomber's; The Luftwaffe shattered the Allied Bomber Power with their Me 262 and Ho 229 Jet Fighters; The German Naval Power rose again with the new H-Class Battleships and Rocket U-Boat Ballistic Missile Submarines; The Wehrmacht utilized their new Super Tanks to spearhead their way forward on the Eastern Front. In order to meet the industrial capacity required to keep up the production of their new War Machines, the Nazi's invaded Spain and Portugal from France taking the two countries in just three weeks, whilst another force seized Romania and Bulgaria. This allowed the German War Machine to be sustained. In order to sustain the economy of the Reich, Hitler ordered the revival of the more humane industries such as Automobiles and Agriculture, mostly in the occupied territories.
Throughout the remainder of 1944 and into early 1945, the revived Axis Powers in Europe beat back the Allies on all Fronts, whilst in the Pacific the Japanese Empire was in a holdout against the United States. German Scientists found their way via U-Boat to Japan to help them develop their way to get back to winning the war. On March 3rd, 1945 as a combined Filipino/American Assault was being made to capture Manila, the Japanese fielded the product of the combined German-Japanese Scientific Initiative: The Kawanishi Baika Jet Fighter, which swept across the sky's destroying the Allied Air Cover and turning the tide for the Japanese so that they were now the winning side. The next day multiple V-2 Rockets loaned to Japan by Germany are launched and the Allied Fleet still anchored off Manila is wiped out, and soon after the road to Rangoon is once again secured by Japanese Troops. Following that another new weapon; the Japanese Nakajima G10N Ultra-Long Range Heavy Bomber, the project having been restarted earlier, was fielded and used to bomb multiple American Bases in the Pacific on March 12th through 16th. These repercussions threw a monkey wrench into previous American Plans for victory in the Pacific, which was a very hoped for victory considering the worsening Allied Situation in Europe. The Allied High Command believed that if it took Japan out of the war it could cut off resources flowing from them to Germany and vice versa, and free up more than a million American Troops for the European Theater. However by April 1st, 1945 when Japanese Warships began shelling American Forces on Iwo Jima, it became clear that victory in the Pacific was at that moment as far off as victory in Europe. With the Japanese having the benefit of some of the best scientists of the Wunderwaffe Program, the Allies now were facing super weapons on all fronts. Not only that but with the help of the Germans, the Japanese developed a new code without the knowledge of the Allies. Allied Intelligence kept intercepting Japanese Messages but without the ability to decode them. This meant that the Allies know longer could be one step ahead of the Japanese.
A true low for the Allies came on May 26th, 1945 when more than two hundred German V-2 Rockets were launched at various targets in Russia, wiping out over one and half million Soviet Troops in just one day. Following that on May 27th, German Forces made a blitzkrieg into Russia capturing positions from Leningrad down to Rostov effectively establishing a line separating Soviet Russia from German-Occupied Russia. The Russians did not have much breathing time as on June 1st, the Germans fielded another weapon; the Schwerer Gustav Rail-Mounted Howitzer and with their new line established about 200 Kilometers west of Moscow, that meant that German Forces could shell any Russian Forces and Defensive Emplacements on the outskirts of the Russian Capital's Defense Line. On June 5th, another V-2 Bombardment took place against Soviet Cities to the east of Rostov, wiping out over a million Soviet Troops and allowing German Troops to launch another push on June 7th, capturing the way to Turkey and extending their line so that it spanned from the Sea of Azov to the Caspian Sea. In mid-June, Stalin began trying to negotiate a peace agreement with Hitler but the only condition the Nazi Leader would accept is absolute submission of the Soviet Nation to German Rule and the disbandment of the Soviet Armed Forces along with the release of all German Prisoners of War. Stalin refused and the German Offensive started back up. However Hitler knew it was vital to make sure that the Russians were unable to destroy any valuable recourses that German Forces could capture so he ordered that the Luftwaffe begin dropping Paratroopers into Industrial Areas and such before attacks so they could prevent the Russians from destroying what could be vital factories. The tactic saw much success considering the already mass disorder amongst the Red Army.
Whilst the Germans advanced on the Eastern Front, at the same time the Allied Powers in the west attempted yet another invasion of German-Occupied Europe, this time selecting Dunkirk and Calais, with the British and French taking Calais and America and other Resistance Forces taking Dunkirk. More than half a million Troops were to be utilized in Dunkirk and over a million were to be used at Calais and full support was to be provided by the RAF and Allied Naval Forces in England. It was the Western Allies desperate all-out last attempt to turn the tide of the war. The two Invasion Forces were launched from Portsmouth on May 28th, 1945 however not more than an hour later they were spotted from the air. They were not even spotted by a Recon Plane but the lead plane of a German Bomber Group on its way to bomb a target in Britain. The information was quickly sent to German Air and Naval Bases in France and a counter effort was quickly mobilized. Over 5,000 German Fighters and Bombers lifted off from Air Bases in France and a Naval Fleet of some half a hundred Surface Vessels and half a thousand Submersible Vessels set sail from Naval Bases. In the evening of May 28th, the two fleets clashed and though the Allies had the advantage of many more surface Warships than the Germans, the German Naval Fleet had some 500 Submarine Vessels putting the Allies at a distinct disadvantage. The Allies were also deprived of some of their Air Cover as the same German Bomber Group which spotted their Invasion Force before it split, bombed several of the Air Bases to be used for launching the two forces air cover. It turned into an all out Naval Battle. The battle would be waged for over a week with both sides taking losses however the Allies had utilized all their combat-able Vessels and Aircraft for this invasion, with practically all the remaining vessels of the Allied Naval Power being in ports for repairs or construction, whereas the German Naval Forces received reinforcements from Bases in France. Finally on June 3rd, the Allies had taken critical casualties forcing them to retreat from battle, though the German Forces did not pursue and merely returned to their bases. The Allies had lost their last hope of a successful counter-offensive in Europe, the bulk of their main troops having been wiped out in what came to be known as the Great Battle for the Channel. Their last hope lay in the Manhattan Project, the High Command desperately hoping that an Atomic Weapon would be churned out that could turn the tide of the war. However the thought of trying to negotiate a peace agreement was dismissed as they believed Hitler would only accept an unconditional surrender. On June 5th, the same day as the second major German Push into Russia, the Allies began the process of converting their remaining forces in England into a defensive force. All attempts to recall troops from Africa were useless as said forces had been destroyed months before.
Though the Allies had been unable to recall their troops from Africa, there was still an effort made by the scattered British, French, and American Forces alongside multiple Resistance Groups in North Africa. On June 16th, more than 50,000 Assorted Allied and Resistance Troops made an assault against the Heavily fortified German Position at Tobruk. Though making good headway at first, within several hours of the attack large elements of Field Marshal Rommel's Tank Corps arrived to reinforce Tobruk, quickly turning the tide against the Allied Troops. By day's end the entire Allied Force had been wiped out.
June 21st, 1945 the German Wunderwaffe Program produced one of its most devastating weapons yet, which would eventually push the United States onto the definite defensive on both sides of the world; the Ju 390 Ultra-Long Range Heavy Bomber, an aircraft capable of reaching the Eastern Seaboard of the United States, a range once only thought to be fantasy for a Bomber. On the evening of June 22nd, 1945 the citizens of New York City were all suddenly awoken by a roar of explosions in the streets as hundreds upon hundreds of bombs fell upon the city. The air raid was conducted by the entire stock of 390's the Germans had available at the moment, some 100 aircraft with each being able to carry up to 25,000 Pounds of Bombs. By the morning, more than half a million citizens had been killed by the raid and the USAAF had only been able to down one of the German Bombers. With such a destructive new weapon available to the German War Machine, this prompted a stress for the Manhattan Project to increase its Research and Production Speed and produce a Nuclear Weapon. There were also calls from millions of U.S. Citizens to the government for a peace settlement with the Axis Powers, for surrender even. All out of fear of what would come next. On June 26th, the Germans unveiled yet another of their new long range Bombers; the He 277 which when combined with the 390's, allowed the Germans to hit cities along the entire Eastern Seaboard every day. By the end of the month, more than one million civilian casualties and over half a million military casualties had been suffered by the United States and more than twenty cities had been devastated.
After this victory, Hitler and the Allies both realized an upcoming problem for Germany which could possibly turn the war back around in the Allies favor. Throughout the war, Germany had been steadily trying to develop a Synthetic Fuel, however these efforts were not producing very positive results meaning the German War Machine continued to rely on Oil Reserves in the captured Regions of the Soviet Union along with those in Romania and Bulgaria and Africa. Such a large supply kept the German War Machine going for a long time but Hitler's all out offensive on the Allies and the world along with the vast increase in Vehicles used in the German Army, had used up a large percentage of that supply. If the supply got too low it would grind the German Offensive to a halt in everything but the Infantry and Artillery, which would allow the Allies to regroup and possibly launch a counter-offensive. However the nations in the Middle East were abundant in Oil Reserves combining to a total Supply more than twice the original full Oil Supply of Germany. After being tipped off by Great Britain, the nations of Turkey, Iran, and Iraq began shoring up the border with Europe into the Middle East. However on June 29th, the combined Eastern Armies were still caught off guard by the sudden blitz by elements of the newly created 21st Army Group E down from Russia into Turkey accompanied by mass Paradrops by the Luftwaffe and amphibious Landings by the Kriegsmarine on the coast. As with the majority of Europe in the beginning of the war, it did not take the Nazi's long to secure the Middle East. By July 1st, the vast Oil Supply of the Middle East was under German Control.
Whilst the Manhattan Project had been steadily losing it's scientists and resources to the Axis Victories around the world, the German Nuclear Weapon Program had been steadily growing and soon, the Wunderwaffe Program in collaboration with the Nuclear Weapon Program turned out the very first prototype Nuclear Weapon. And on July 4th, they used it, against the United States. Despite the war going on, the United States still celebrated the founding of their nation, a great parade was held in the Capital of Washington D.C. to boost morale with millions flooding into the city to see. Unfortunately for them, neither the United States Air Force nor any Anti-Air Battery along the coast detected the sole He 343 Jet Bomber, another new weapon developed specifically for carrying Nuclear Weapons, flying towards the Capital. At exactly 11:00 PM on July 4th, 1945, an Atomic Bomb fell on Washington D.C. wiping out more than half the city along with some six and a half million people both military and civilian. The saving grace of the rest of the city was that the Bomb was only a prototype not a full version otherwise the full city would have been wiped out. The next day, Hitler announced to the world that the night before the Luftwaffe dropped an Atomic Bomb on Washington. Many of the smaller nations in the Allied Powers quickly left the Alliance in favor of survival.
Over the course of the next year the Axis Powers continued their push across the world, their combined control spanning across Africa, Asia, and Europe, so that by January, 1946 the Axis Powers were literally at the doorstep of the Allied Home Nations; German Forces were within six miles of the outskirts of Moscow; Italian and Romanian Forces had advanced on Turkey and had Istanbul surrounded; German, Italian, and Finnish Naval Forces were sitting just off the coast along England and Scotland; Japanese Forces were within a little over ten miles from Hawaii. The Allies could easily be crushed in one fell swoop however Hitler decided to try and improve his image with the world in a play to spare the effort of numerous invasions, and announced he would accept the surrender of any of the Allied Nations or an Armistice with any. However without informing Hitler, Goering had ordered the Luftwaffe to destroy Radio Stations in England and Russia so that America was the only nation which received the message. On January 18th, 1946 President Dwight D. Eisenhower, elected mostly because the people thought a military leader would be best suited to lead their nation in the dark hours, along with numerous representatives from Congress met with Adolf Hitler, Benito Mussolini, and Emperor Hirohito on the New Flagship of the German Fleet, the H-Class Battleship, Reichsbane, and signed a surrender with the Axis Powers. The terms of this included that the Eastern Seaboard of the United States would come under Provincial German Rule and the United States Military must be reduced in size greatly. Against Hitler's Wunderwaffe and now German Nuclear Weapons, Eisenhower had no choice but to accept the terms. In this way, Germany controlled the Eastern Seaboard of the United States from afar by keeping the threat of Nuclear Attack hanging over America's head without having to send occupying troops overseas to America itself. Nazi Governors were appointed to control each state, and several fledgling white supremacy groups operating in the Eastern United States were swelled to become a Provincial Nazi Police.
Hitler believed that the Russians and British were simply paying him an insult by just ignoring his offer of peace and ordered the General's Staff to order German Forces around Moscow to close in on the city full force. On January 20th, German Forces made a full advance against the city of Moscow with more than three million Troops against a defending Army of some five million hurriedly conscripted and inexperienced Soviet Conscripts. A week long bombardment by the German Rail-Mounted Howitzers and Luftwaffe Heavy Bombers quickly subdued the rebellious populous. As for the British, Hitler ordered an Atomic Bombing of London to wipe out the British Capital along with Winston Churchill. However British Intelligence managed to catch word of the plan and immediately got Prime Minister Churchill and the rest of the British Government out of the country. On February 6th, 1946, an Atomic Bomb was dropped on London wiping out it and the 100,000 Civilians that had yet to be evacuated. The British Government fled to Canada after the Nazi's dropped another Atomic Bomb on Dublin on March 1st. The United Kingdom officially surrendered however the British Government remained in hiding.
There remained only one true enemy to the Axis Powers and that was the combined Resistance Forces in Europe. Some 150,000 French, British, Russian, Spanish, German, Belgian, Dutch, Danish, Norwegian, and Romanian Resistance Forces made a final assault against the heavily defended city of Paris on April 1st, 1946. They fought hard against the 25,000 German Garrison in Paris and by nightfall had forced the Germans into a form of house-to-house urban warfare, repelling several counterattacks made by German reinforcements. However on April 2nd, Hitler announced that if the Resistance Forces did not surrender, an Atomic Bomb would be dropped on Paris. Under the threat of the destruction of Paris, the Resistance Forces surrendered.
By May, 1946 the Axis Powers had divided up the world and now they ruled it.

Good God, the paragraphs... How about you just give a quick run-down instead of... That. Also, I read Maus, Me 262, and only a couple hundred V2 rockets killing 1.5 million people; among countless other impossible events and impractical things. In all, I believe you fail to meet the criteria of making sense.
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Postby The Tiger Kingdom » Thu Oct 16, 2014 5:29 pm

New Decius wrote:I am making an alternate history RP wherein the Nazi's or the Axis in general won the war and then a Resistance Movement in the 1960's rises up to dislodge the Nazi's from their rule. I want to know a general opinion on the backstory I've setup, whether it makes sense or not.

Oh Decius, Decius, Decius.
It has been too long.

oh jesus god the formatting
god spare me from that awful formatting
New Decius wrote:When the Allies were completely defeated at Normandy,

Now how'd that happen?
New Decius wrote: the Russians were unable to make a decisive push against the Germans because no new troops were required to be transferred to the Western Front meaning the Eastern Front stood at a standstill on both sides.

Now that's completely wrong, given that the Bagration Offensive (which shattered Army Group Center and trapped Army Group North in the Baltic States) was planned completely independent of D-Day, and went ahead before the Germans could make any troops withdrawals westwards (6/20/44).
Even if D-Day had failed, Bagration would've annihilated the German lines two weeks later anyways. It wouldn't have made any difference.
New Decius wrote: On June 12th, 1944 Allied High Command discovered that German Agents within British Intelligence had passed the information along to Hitler that the supposed Invasion of Calais or another point was a fake

Wildly implausible. MI5 and the SOE had annihilated any semblance of a Nazi intelligence network within Britain by practically the end of the first month of the war. The only agents remaining were the ones that the security services had managed to capture and turn. The Germans were terrible at securing their assets.
Granted, both services were riddled with SOVIET moles, but that only became a major problem after the war was over. Germany was pratically incapable of keeping ONE spy safe in britain, much less a network.
New Decius wrote: and the real strike was coming at Normandy allowing the German General's Staff to organize a suitable counter-attack

See, that's problematic too, given Hitler's prejudices. The Germans actually had some info - gained mainly from French resistance fighters who had been captured - that the attack was coming in the Cherbourg-Caen area. They even had a snippet of the Maquis trigger phrase that would signal an imminent attack. The problem was, Hitler had convinced himself years in advance (thanks mainly to what had happened at Dieppe) that if an Allied landing was coming, it would HAVE to be at Calais, and that anything else was an Allied lie (except for maybe the threat to Norway, given Churchill's hang-up with the Narvik iron field). It made sense - Calais was closer, the British had had a historical connection to the place, and it was held as truth that the Allies would have to land right at or in a port (like at Dieppe). The idea of the Allied force landing at some desolate beach expanse like in Normandy was thought of as logistical suicide.
Hitler had committed himself to Calais being the target years before, and going back on his word was inconceivable. He'd staked his entire reputation as a military genius on the location being Calais, and he was fully prepared to disregard any information to the contrary as a deception.
Basically, he had Bodyguard backwards.
New Decius wrote: and hit the Allies once they believed they had taken the beaches.

That's a weird way to write that. "Believed they had taken the beaches"?
Either they had or they hadn't. It's not a matter of belief.
And so you're basically committing to the Geyr plan of "all-out inland panzer attack" over Rommel's "panzers on the beach" strategy?
The problem with that is that the Germans actually ended up executing Geyr's plan (more or less, and six weeks later) during Operation Luttich, where Hitler stripped the defensive perimeter bare of tanks and hurled then at the "weakest point" of the American lines at Mortain.
It didn't work. Allied air supremacy was total, the troops held on, the US tanks rode to the rescue and German offensive power was shattered right on time for the August breakout with Cobra. It didn't work then, why would it have worked here?
Hell, if anything, such an attack might have shortened the war by two or so months, destroying German armored power like that.
In addition, French transportation infrastructure was completely fucked. The old scare stories about what might have happened if the Calais garrison or all the Panzers in France had converged at Normandy is undercut by the fact that Allied air supremacy was so total, any attempt at sending reinforcements en masse would have just given the Tac Air Force and the RAF a shooting gallery. It took MONTHS for a panzer division to cross France - and not many Panzer divisions were in convenient locations to begin with.
New Decius wrote: With this revelation of British Intelligence being compromised in such a large way, it brought Allied Efforts across Europe and North Africa to a halt, not knowing whether or not to trust the information they were given.

There were no "Allied Efforts" in North Africa in 1944. The Italo-German Panzer Army surrendered in April of '43.
And why would British intelligence being deemed untrustworthy compromise American efforts? We had the OSS. We didn't need the British.
The entire Allied war effort was not hanging on the trustworthiness of the SOE.
New Decius wrote:Taking advantage of this, German Forces swept down into Italy beating back the Allied Forces there, fielding a brand new weapon from their Wunderwaffe Program, the Panzer VIII Maus Super Tank, crushing Allied Troops across the Italian Front.

Oh, for fuck's sake.
The Maus couldn't go up a fucking hill. How the hell could it have survived in Italy? The whole fucking country's a mountain range - and that's right smack where the Allied lines were in mid-44, high up in the Apennines.
Besides, as we have been through time and again, the Maus may have been literally the worst tank ever invented. For all that armor, a fighter-bomber strike would have killed it just as dead as a Panzer II. Infantry with satchel charges could've maneuvered around it and destroyed it with ease. Shermans could run rings around it. It was so slow, it could barely move on level ground. Judging from other German tanks of that weight class, it would also almost certainly have broken down constantly. It also probably would have broken every single bridge it tried to cross, given that it WEIGHED 190 TONS (for comparison, the most modern Abrams weighs about 120 tons).
To say nothing of fuel consumption.
New Decius wrote: By September, 1944 German Forces had recaptured Italy and restored Mussolini to power, bringing Italy back into the war.

Germany would never have allowed an independent Italy to exist again. Why would they? The country didn't support Mussolini anymore, they'd already proven themselves fatally unreliable by surrendering, and Hitler didn't like sharing power.
Makes no sense.
New Decius wrote: The new Italian Government which had declared war on Germany was wiped out and its supporters forced to flee the country.

There goes like 35% of the population, because nobody in the Allied Italian zones could stand Germany after liberation!
New Decius wrote: In October, the Allied Powers on the Western and African Fronts made a push to try and force the Germans to relocate troops from the Eastern Front to counter it in order to free up Russian Forces to push forward.

There was no "African Front" anymore.
New Decius wrote: Halfway through the month, an all out Bombing Attack was launched against German-Occupied France, with over 1,000 Bombers participating in the action across Occupied France targeting Supply and Troop positions. However, yet another weapon flowed out from the Wunderwaffe Program, two actually,

Are you trying to be cute?
Or did you literally forget what you were going to write and then remembered halfway through, but left it in anyways?
New Decius wrote: the first being the Flakpanzer Kugelblitz a Self-Propelled AA Gun which wreaked havoc in the sky

You do realize what the Kugelblitz was, right?
It was two 30mm AA guns sitting in a turret. It was not exactly revolutionary.
And it would have been useless against high-level bombing (or at least, no better than any normal set of AA guns), because it was designed to do one thing - to move with panzer formations and defend them against fighter-bomber strikes. Using them as static rear-echelon AA against high-level bombing is a ridiculous waste.
New Decius wrote: and the second being the Focke-Wulf Ta 152 High Altitude Fighter.

No way the Germans could have produced enough to make a difference.
New Decius wrote:Together these two new weapons destroyed more than half of the Bomber Force launched by the Allies with the Allied Air Power only able to inflict minimal damage against the German Forces in France.

The Ta152, even by the most generous estimates, would have not been nearly good enough to achieve those kind of results, and we've already established how the Kugelblitz wouldn't have mattered at all.
Oh, and here's a sterling testament of the early TA-152's quality:
It was found that critical systems were lacking sufficient quality control. Problems arose with superchargers, pressurized cockpits leaked, the engine cooling system was unreliable at best due in part to unreliable oil temperature monitoring, and in several instances the landing gear failed to properly retract.

What an amazing plane! Surely, a handful of those would be capable of downing >500 bombers at a go!
New Decius wrote: The German Wonder Weapon Program churned out more and more new weapons to use against the Allies, utilizing every last scientific mind in the Third Reich and putting more than 40% of the industry under the supervision of the program.

There are hardly words for how ridiculous this is.
First off, there was no "German wonder weapons program". There never was, because the various German services would rather have slit their own throats than cooperate with each other. What you had instead was a group of little fiefdoms in the Army/Luftwaffe/Navy/SS/whoever the fuck else, all trying to get Hitler's ear for their projects at the direct expense of everybody else. Suddenly, every German becomes selfless?
Second, German scientific minds were hardly reliable weapons-makers. Heisenberg, the foremost nuclear physicist left in Germany, was of the staunch opinion that making a nuclear bomb was impossible and wouldn't be shifted on the issue. He was maybe the single greatest roadblock to the German nuke program of all of them, and to many, he was also the indispensable component.
Third, the Germans had barely grasped the idea of military mass-production and industrial conscription by 1944 - and now, suddenly this mythical "program" has MORE THAN FORTY FUCKING PERCENT OF GERMAN INDUSTRY? Fucking hell, Speer couldn't make the Wolfsburg auto plant turn over to military production for years on end!
Given the pace of development, this would run the German war machine into the ground within a week. Just keeping up its basic obligations - bullets, butter, boots, etc - was straining the German economy to the limit. Do you have any idea how expensive and long-term such a program would be? It would take decades to make all the advances you're handing the Germans, at an absolutely unimaginable expense, and would require more labor and resources than existed in Continental Europe.
Fourth, the German economic policy was such a clusterfuck that there was basically no method for anybody - not even Hitler, to "turn over" industry to a project, much less on the scale you're talking about. Nothing. The Allies could sign juicy contracts with GM or the Kaiser yards to make tanks or carriers or whatever, and the Soviets had a very clear chain of command when it came to the design bureaus and what they should make and how much, but the Germans had no system at all - it was a total anarchy of competing branches and bureaus, all of them filled with corrupt and ignorant bureaucrats, and Hitler didn't care to manage it. Speer never got the hang of the system until practically 1945, and by then it was far too late.
New Decius wrote:The Germans bombed London, Moscow, and numerous other targets using their new He 343 Jet Bomber's;

Never even got off the drawing board, and now, suddenly, the Germans have massive fleets of them by October of 1944? How fast do you think it takes to develop a normal plane, much less one that would objectively be the most advanced in the world? At the rate the Germans were going, it would take decades!
But no - you think the Nazis are so awesome that they can design, test, produce, and fly the most advanced plane in the world in...what? Eight weeks?
Axiswank.
New Decius wrote: The Luftwaffe shattered the Allied Bomber Power with their Me 262 and Ho 229 Jet Fighters;

The Germans made 262s during the war.
They did not make any difference.
Oh, and of course, they have a magic fleet of Hortens, too.
Sure was good the Nazis had so many wizards to magic all these planes up for them out of nowhere - and all the fuel to fly them with too (because by your point of divergence in June, the German oil supply was already shattered beyond repair)!
New Decius wrote: The German Naval Power rose again with the new H-Class Battleships and Rocket U-Boat Ballistic Missile Submarines;

Oh, come on.
OK, let me go over this in detail:
First, the Germans only had a tiny number of actual military shipyards capable of heavy construction. If I'm generous, I'll say they had four: Bremen, Wilhelmshaven, Kiel, and Hamburg, Four ports. All of those ports had had the absolute shit bombed out of them by 1944, to the point where the remnants of the German battle fleet had to be hidden up in Norway. The facilities there were shattered - it would take actual decades just to fixc thyem up, much less make new battleships froms cratch.
Second, do you know how long it took to make the Bismarck and Tirpitz under pretty easygoing wartime conditions - no bombing, war going well?

It took over four whole years.

But that's OK. To you, the Nazis were apparently so awesome they can magic up a whole fleet out of thin air in...what? A week? I'm amazed you didn't just say they teleported them in from another dimension.
Besides, if the German battleship antics of the early war proved anything, it was that battleships were fucking useless anyways. The Tirpitz spent its entire lifepsan hiding at Trondheim because everybody knew it'd get annihilated if it poked its head out, and the Bismarck was hunted down like a mangy dog the second it got into the Atlantic.

Battleships were a waste of time, on top of being totally, categorically, objectively impossible to make so fast.
New Decius wrote: The Wehrmacht utilized their new Super Tanks to spearhead their way forward on the Eastern Front.

At the incredibly speed of SIX MILES AN HOUR, while getting blown up by Sturmoviks, trapped in the mud, drowned because of river bridges breaking, and suffering constant breakdowns all the while!
New Decius wrote: In order to meet the industrial capacity required to keep up the production of their new War Machines, the Nazi's invaded Spain and Portugal from France taking the two countries in just three weeks,

Holy Jesus Christ.
"To meet industrial capacity, the Germans decided to hugely expand the war by invading two countries comprising an absolutely massive amount of land to occupy and with a legendary tradition of partisan resistance, neither of which had any actual industry to begin with".
Plus, German tanks couldn't get over the Pyrenees in three weeks, much less across the country.
New Decius wrote: whilst another force seized Romania and Bulgaria.

Good of the wizards to magic up "another force" for the Germans!
New Decius wrote: This allowed the German War Machine to be sustained.

Also, all the magic unobtainium that served as a literally limitless source of fuel, food, steel, industrial capacity, and literally everything else helped out too!
Jesus Christ. This is so bad.
New Decius wrote: In order to sustain the economy of the Reich, Hitler ordered the revival of the more humane industries such as Automobiles and Agriculture, mostly in the occupied territories.

HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW?
From all the stuff you've described, you're overestimating German labor and industrial capacity by...I'd estimate approximately 800-900% at a conservative estimate (and that includes occupied areas, and yet somehow they have the spare industry and labor to let people go back to civilian work?
Good lord, how much more of this is there?
New Decius wrote: Throughout the remainder of 1944 and into early 1945, the revived Axis Powers in Europe beat back the Allies on all Fronts,

Listen: I know you have a huge, throbbing erection for the Nazis, but could you maybe not flaunt it so publicly? It's embarrassing.
New Decius wrote: whilst in the Pacific the Japanese Empire was in a holdout against the United States. German Scientists found their way via U-Boat to Japan to help them develop their way to get back to winning the war.

Did they bring their unicorn that they named Fluffy?
New Decius wrote: On March 3rd, 1945 as a combined Filipino/American Assault was being made to capture Manila, the Japanese fielded the product of the combined German-Japanese Scientific Initiative: The Kawanishi Baika Jet Fighter,

Of which thousands were made in about two hours!
New Decius wrote: which swept across the sky's destroying the Allied Air Cover and turning the tide for the Japanese so that they were now the winning side.

A single fighter does not a total air-sea-land victory make.
New Decius wrote: The next day multiple V-2 Rockets loaned to Japan by Germany are launched and the Allied Fleet still anchored off Manila is wiped out,

Holy fucking shit.
V-2s could only reliably hit a city-size target.
How the fuck can it hit ships? Much less enough to "destroy a fleet"?
New Decius wrote: and soon after the road to Rangoon is once again secured by Japanese Troops.

Through maaaagic!
New Decius wrote: Following that another new weapon; the Japanese Nakajima G10N Ultra-Long Range Heavy Bomber,

Fueled by nothing other than ordinary rice husks and grass, because that was all the fuel Japan had!
New Decius wrote: the project having been restarted earlier,

Oh that's convenient.
New Decius wrote: was fielded and used to bomb multiple American Bases in the Pacific on March 12th through 16th.

Apparently, the US Air Force has decided to go home and have a good cry.
Seriously, do the Allies do literally anything in this little screed besides fail and shake their fists at the heavens?
New Decius wrote: These repercussions threw a monkey wrench into previous American Plans for victory in the Pacific, which was a very hoped for victory considering the worsening Allied Situation in Europe.

Oh, never mind.
New Decius wrote: However by April 1st, 1945 when Japanese Warships began shelling American Forces on Iwo Jima,

Oh, so the Japanese fleet magically came back from the dead too?
Were they fueled by unicorn farts and cherry blossoms?
New Decius wrote: it became clear that victory in the Pacific was at that moment as far off as victory in Europe.

Well, that's what happens when the person writing the story is obviously pulling very hard for one side to win, for reasons that are seem more than a little bit icky.
New Decius wrote: With the Japanese having the benefit of some of the best scientists of the Wunderwaffe Program,

The Germans having an infinity of scientists capable of designing, testing producing, and refining perfect wonder weapons in a matter of hours...
New Decius wrote: the Allies now were facing super weapons on all fronts.

Serves them right for not being Nazis!
Am I right, Decius?
New Decius wrote: Not only that but with the help of the Germans, the Japanese developed a new code without the knowledge of the Allies.

Not only that, but Hirohito was secretly fucking Eleanor Roosevelt and Winnie Churchill on the side, as Hitler went and gave Stalin an atomic swirlie while Mussolini dumped his books!
New Decius wrote: Allied Intelligence kept intercepting Japanese Messages but without the ability to decode them.

I would seriously point out all the historical errors and impossibiolities in all this (namely, that the Japanese were convinced that no white people could ever crack ANY of their codes), but I'm starting to realize how utterly pointless that is.
Jesus Christ, how much time did you spend on this?
All that time, you could've actually been researching the actual, you know, realities of the war...or...doing anything else...
New Decius wrote: This meant that the Allies know longer could be one step ahead of the Japanese.

Then, everybody in America literally choked on their own saliva, because in this universe, anyone who isn't a Nazi or Imperial Japanese is literally retarded!
New Decius wrote: A true low for the Allies came on May 26th, 1945 when more than two hundred German V-2 Rockets were launched at various targets in Russia, wiping out over one and half million Soviet Troops in just one day.

*sigh*
That is a kill ratio of >7500 dead per rocket.
The highest death total ever reported from a single rocket strike was about 500, when a V-2 hit a movie theater in Holland in a freak occurrence (it was off-target anyways).
Come ON, Decius.
New Decius wrote: Following that on May 27th, German Forces made a blitzkrieg into Russia capturing positions from Leningrad down to Rostov effectively establishing a line separating Soviet Russia from German-Occupied Russia.

It sure was a good thing the Russians were sitting around with their thumbs up their asses!
Also, there is literally no worse tank in the world then the Maus for "blitzkrieg". The thing's a barely-mobile, deeply shitty bunker.
New Decius wrote: The Russians did not have much breathing time as on June 1st, the Germans fielded another weapon; the Schwerer Gustav Rail-Mounted Howitzer

Hey, a weapon that actually could have existed at the time! Sweet Jesus!
With only the tiny weakness that it took months to move literally anywhere, and was only rail-mobile!
New Decius wrote: and with their new line established about 200 Kilometers west of Moscow,

Why 200? Why not 100, Why not 50? Apparently, the Germans are magic, so why not just say they teleported an army right into the Kremlin?
Believe me, if you can make a battleship flotilla in a month, you can teleport.
New Decius wrote: that meant that German Forces could shell any Russian Forces and Defensive Emplacements on the outskirts of the Russian Capital's Defense Line.

The funny thing is, 200 km is literally four times the range of the Gustav alone.
I mean...this is not hard to look up. It took five seconds.
New Decius wrote: On June 5th, another V-2 Bombardment took place against Soviet Cities to the east of Rostov, wiping out over a million Soviet Troops

Those are some magic V-2s, man.
New Decius wrote: and allowing German Troops to launch another push on June 7th, capturing the way to Turkey

Sure. Why the hell not.
New Decius wrote: and extending their line so that it spanned from the Sea of Azov to the Caspian Sea. In mid-June, Stalin began trying to negotiate a peace agreement with Hitler but the only condition the Nazi Leader would accept is absolute submission of the Soviet Nation to German Rule and the disbandment of the Soviet Armed Forces along with the release of all German Prisoners of War.

I genuinely feel like I'm reading what amounts to the worldbuilding for Nazi slashfic, with Hitler as the Mary Sue protagonist.
New Decius wrote: However Hitler knew it was vital to make sure that the Russians were unable to destroy any valuable recourses that German Forces could capture

If you're done tongue-bathing Hitler for a moment...
New Decius wrote: so he ordered that the Luftwaffe begin dropping Paratroopers into Industrial Areas and such before attacks so they could prevent the Russians from destroying what could be vital factories. The tactic saw much success considering the already mass disorder amongst the Red Army.

Why the hell would Hitler have even cared? He already had wizards conjuring wonderweapons and whole battlefleets for him out of thin air?
I can't believe I'm still seriously engaging with this.
New Decius wrote: Whilst the Germans advanced on the Eastern Front, at the same time the Allied Powers in the west attempted yet another invasion of German-Occupied Europe, this time selecting Dunkirk and Calais, with the British and French taking Calais and America and other Resistance Forces taking Dunkirk. More than half a million Troops were to be utilized in Dunkirk and over a million were to be used at Calais and full support was to be provided by the RAF and Allied Naval Forces in England. It was the Western Allies desperate all-out last attempt to turn the tide of the war. The two Invasion Forces were launched from Portsmouth on May 28th, 1945 however not more than an hour later they were spotted from the air.

Why are you writing this?
Seriously, though, do you get off to this?
What narrative purpose does ANY of this serve?
I don't know if you're a Nazi or not, but I seriously don't know what anybody would get out of this if they weren't a Nazi.
New Decius wrote:They were not even spotted by a Recon Plane but the lead plane of a German Bomber Group on its way to bomb a target in Britain.

Why is this important?

I can't go any further - partially because that this is now basically beyond meaningful criticism beyond "none of this makes any sense", and partially because it would take me a full day and night to get through this unformatted, wall-o-text nightmare.
This is ridiculous. I have no idea why anyone would devote THAT level of effort to getting things so totally wrong, unless they got off on the idea of the Nazis being perfect and flawless.
This would probably fit better on Stormfront, honestly.
If you're mad at me, well, you asked for feedback.
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When the war is over
Got to start again
Try to hold a trace of what it was back then
You and I we sent each other stories
Just a page I'm lost in all its glory
How can I go home and not get blown away

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