Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2020 5:22 pm
OOC: 1a only acts on people. It could be made applicable to the state and organisations by deleting “permit the populace to”.
1b. I’d mention affordable access here as well.
1c should be broadened to cover existing employees as well as applicants. Also some sensitive wording could be inserted to make it applicable only to those able to do a job. EG a qualified carpenter who loses a limb in an accident may not be able to work as a carpenter anymore.
1d seems a bit too woolly to actually achieve anything. What is a medically certified individual? What are meticulous details? Can any lay person actually know all these details which might be very technical biological information?
1e Well integrated with what?
3 also has this nebulous medically certified individual but even so, I think this is bad practice. I know of RL doctors who sign anything put in front of them once you cross their palm with silver. You could probably look to RL equality legislation to come up with a reasonably succinct definition.
IC: “Support.”
1b. I’d mention affordable access here as well.
1c should be broadened to cover existing employees as well as applicants. Also some sensitive wording could be inserted to make it applicable only to those able to do a job. EG a qualified carpenter who loses a limb in an accident may not be able to work as a carpenter anymore.
1d seems a bit too woolly to actually achieve anything. What is a medically certified individual? What are meticulous details? Can any lay person actually know all these details which might be very technical biological information?
1e Well integrated with what?
3 also has this nebulous medically certified individual but even so, I think this is bad practice. I know of RL doctors who sign anything put in front of them once you cross their palm with silver. You could probably look to RL equality legislation to come up with a reasonably succinct definition.
IC: “Support.”