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by Giovenith » Fri Jul 03, 2015 5:42 pm
by Cerillium » Fri Jul 03, 2015 7:14 pm
Kassaran wrote:I would have figured his abilities pretty underdeveloped given how many restrictions. I'm trying to make him moreover a personification of the English Language, thus the less sense he makes, the less powerful he is. The less he speaks, the less powerful he is. In order to gain power or momentum at all, he has to consistently keep speaking or chanting, and even then it has to pertain to the task at hand meaning he has to know what he's saying. In short, at this point he's so inexperienced (because he indeed is young), his ability is next to useless save for the word wall thing. Then again, that takes so much time and focus it practically is useless and the words themselves begin to evaporate when he stops speaking or changes subject.
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by Charlia » Fri Jul 03, 2015 7:19 pm
Cerillium wrote:Kassaran wrote:I would have figured his abilities pretty underdeveloped given how many restrictions. I'm trying to make him moreover a personification of the English Language, thus the less sense he makes, the less powerful he is. The less he speaks, the less powerful he is. In order to gain power or momentum at all, he has to consistently keep speaking or chanting, and even then it has to pertain to the task at hand meaning he has to know what he's saying. In short, at this point he's so inexperienced (because he indeed is young), his ability is next to useless save for the word wall thing. Then again, that takes so much time and focus it practically is useless and the words themselves begin to evaporate when he stops speaking or changes subject.
Excellent character concept. A few things stand out that should be addressed. I'm writing this on the run so please bear with me if it seems abrupt.
-A literal word wall is fine. To clarify, that's what you're thinking rather than "he speaks and it becomes so", correct?
- "Puns however are the worst thing he can use as they are near lethal to any mere mortal in range. No one knows why, but the less clever the pun, the more impact it appears to have..."
Puns are usually brief one-liners. Bad puns are easy to fire off.
- "He also is prone to emotional attacks, and reading or hearing particularly emotional phrases or words can lock him up as he attempts to find the right words. In short, if he cannot find words to express something, he falls into a panic attack of sorts and refuses to emerge from it until his mind has found a suitable enough feeling or word. It is at this point he is liable to accidentally injure himself or others around him as he'll lose all control and power over his ability and it will in turn go wild. It is at this point where it can do lots of damage to those particularly sensitive to such outbreaks of raw and charged emotion."
I prefer weaknesses to harm only the character rather than the people around them. There are also beings in PL that are sensitive to outbreaks of raw and charged emotion however such an outbreak would fuel them rather than harm them. We have some psionicists that would respond violently should his power go wild. They would move to defend themselves and they do have the ability to destroy personifications.
- "Scripture as he recites can bend reality around him to his will, the effects of which while generally a side-effect of his own ability manifesting often benefits him as he continues along."
This ability would require a 9 or higher power level. I can't allow any character the ability to bend reality unless the player themselves is extensively and intimately familiar with the PL setting and the reality binding things together.
- IIRC you signed on Feb of 2014 with Valdis but I couldn't find any IC posts. I remember your stuff in Promethean Insurgency though. Nice work there.
by Swith Witherward » Fri Jul 03, 2015 7:35 pm
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by Torsiedelle » Fri Jul 03, 2015 9:01 pm
by Primordial Luxa » Fri Jul 03, 2015 9:16 pm
Swith Witherward wrote:But I trust the people here. Well, except Prim. He has shifty eyes but his cute smile make up for it.
Monfrox wrote:But it's not like we've known Prim to really stick with normality...
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by VolksImperium (Ancient) » Fri Jul 03, 2015 9:59 pm
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by Kassaran » Sat Jul 04, 2015 12:46 am
Cerillium wrote: Excellent character concept. A few things stand out that should be addressed. I'm writing this on the run so please bear with me if it seems abrupt.
-A literal word wall is fine. To clarify, that's what you're thinking rather than "he speaks and it becomes so", correct?
- "Puns however are the worst thing he can use as they are near lethal to any mere mortal in range. No one knows why, but the less clever the pun, the more impact it appears to have..."
Puns are usually brief one-liners. Bad puns are easy to fire off.
- "He also is prone to emotional attacks, and reading or hearing particularly emotional phrases or words can lock him up as he attempts to find the right words. In short, if he cannot find words to express something, he falls into a panic attack of sorts and refuses to emerge from it until his mind has found a suitable enough feeling or word. It is at this point he is liable to accidentally injure himself or others around him as he'll lose all control and power over his ability and it will in turn go wild. It is at this point where it can do lots of damage to those particularly sensitive to such outbreaks of raw and charged emotion."
I prefer weaknesses to harm only the character rather than the people around them. There are also beings in PL that are sensitive to outbreaks of raw and charged emotion however such an outbreak would fuel them rather than harm them. We have some psionicists that would respond violently should his power go wild. They would move to defend themselves and they do have the ability to destroy personifications.
- "Scripture as he recites can bend reality around him to his will, the effects of which while generally a side-effect of his own ability manifesting often benefits him as he continues along."
This ability would require a 9 or higher power level. I can't allow any character the ability to bend reality unless the player themselves is extensively and intimately familiar with the PL setting and the reality binding things together.
- IIRC you signed on Feb of 2014 with Valdis but I couldn't find any IC posts. I remember your stuff in Promethean Insurgency though. Nice work there.
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by Swith Witherward » Sat Jul 04, 2015 5:26 am
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by Highfort » Sat Jul 04, 2015 7:02 am
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by Swith Witherward » Sat Jul 04, 2015 1:04 pm
Highfort wrote:Happy 4th of July and Republic Day/Filipino-American Friendship Day!
"Give me ten thousand Filipino soldiers and I shall conquer the world." - General Douglas MacArthur, United States Military
Fun Fact: The Filipino military, despite constant budget cuts, bureaucratic mismanagement, corruption, obsolete equipment, and general governmental asshattery, managed to successfully force the MILF (Moro Islamic Liberation Front) to sign a peace accord. It is currently employed in combat against Islamic Separatist groups in the south, notably the Moro National Liberation Front (MNLF), Abu Sayyaf, and the Bangsamoro Islamic Freedom Fighters (BIFF).
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by Giovenith » Sat Jul 04, 2015 1:18 pm
Highfort wrote:Happy 4th of July and Republic Day/Filipino-American Friendship Day!
"Give me ten thousand Filipino soldiers and I shall conquer the world." - General Douglas MacArthur, United States Military
Fun Fact: The Filipino military, despite constant budget cuts, bureaucratic mismanagement, corruption, obsolete equipment, and general governmental asshattery, managed to successfully force the MILF (Moro Islamic Liberation Front) to sign a peace accord. It is currently employed in combat against Islamic Separatist groups in the south, notably the Moro National Liberation Front (MNLF), Abu Sayyaf, and the Bangsamoro Islamic Freedom Fighters (BIFF).
Highfort wrote:Fun Fact: The Filipino military, despite constant budget cuts, bureaucratic mismanagement, corruption, obsolete equipment, and general governmental asshattery, managed to successfully force the MILF (Moro Islamic Liberation Front) to sign a peace accord.
Highfort wrote:force the MILF (Moro Islamic Liberation
by Northwest Slobovia » Sat Jul 04, 2015 1:18 pm
Swith Witherward wrote:Highfort wrote:Happy 4th of July and Republic Day/Filipino-American Friendship Day!
"Give me ten thousand Filipino soldiers and I shall conquer the world." - General Douglas MacArthur, United States Military
Fun Fact: The Filipino military, despite constant budget cuts, bureaucratic mismanagement, corruption, obsolete equipment, and general governmental asshattery, managed to successfully force the MILF (Moro Islamic Liberation Front) to sign a peace accord. It is currently employed in combat against Islamic Separatist groups in the south, notably the Moro National Liberation Front (MNLF), Abu Sayyaf, and the Bangsamoro Islamic Freedom Fighters (BIFF).
On this day, in 362 BC, Sparta had its ass handed to it by Epaminondas and the Thebans.
by Swith Witherward » Sat Jul 04, 2015 1:57 pm
Northwest Slobovia wrote:I think the Theban Sacred Band may have had other ideas for the Spartans' asses.(Image)
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by Monfrox » Sat Jul 04, 2015 2:18 pm
Xing wrote:Yeah but you also are the best at roleplay. (yay Space Core references) I'm pretty sure a four man tank crew is no problem for someone that had 27 different RP characters going at one time.
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by Tiltjuice » Sat Jul 04, 2015 2:24 pm
by Torsiedelle » Sat Jul 04, 2015 2:38 pm
Giovenith wrote:Highfort wrote:Happy 4th of July and Republic Day/Filipino-American Friendship Day!
"Give me ten thousand Filipino soldiers and I shall conquer the world." - General Douglas MacArthur, United States Military
Fun Fact: The Filipino military, despite constant budget cuts, bureaucratic mismanagement, corruption, obsolete equipment, and general governmental asshattery, managed to successfully force the MILF (Moro Islamic Liberation Front) to sign a peace accord. It is currently employed in combat against Islamic Separatist groups in the south, notably the Moro National Liberation Front (MNLF), Abu Sayyaf, and the Bangsamoro Islamic Freedom Fighters (BIFF).Highfort wrote:Fun Fact: The Filipino military, despite constant budget cuts, bureaucratic mismanagement, corruption, obsolete equipment, and general governmental asshattery, managed to successfully force the MILF (Moro Islamic Liberation Front) to sign a peace accord.Highfort wrote:force the MILF (Moro Islamic Liberation
... *smile* *shot five billion times* I'm going to Hell.
Anywho, Happy 'Murica Day everyone! Obligatory theme song.
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