Greetings! I'm writing an issue and would like some feedback on what I should improve on, or change the issue.
(Thank you to Cymrea for correcting the draft. ) (I've also changed the 'milk part' to "made from the milk of the @@DENOMYN@@ Cow and the validity to 'Nations that have not banned cheese')
Title: Cheesy Troubles
Description: After a recent scandal over the origin of the cheese and its name, DeliCo and local farmers of Ashburn County in rural @@NAME@@ are campaigning to protect their prime export. At the heart of the debate: one of @@NAME@@’s most famous cheeses, the @@DENOMYN@@ Red @@ANIMAL@@ Cheese, made from the milk of the @@DENOMYN@@ Cow.
Validity: Nations that have not banned cheese
[option]”Protect our beloved @@DENOMYN@@ Red @@ANIMAL@@ Cheese!” exclaims @@RANDOMNAME@@, a farmer from Ashburn County and winner of the 290th @@DEMONYN@@ Cheese Production Contest. “These foreigners take one of our famous cheeses and slap some ‘ @@DEMONYN@@ ingredients on it! I suggest that we fine them if they insult our tradition of making fine cheeses. While you’re at it, give us a regional trademark for it so that no-one can abuse our cheeses.”
[effect]Foreign Companies are afraid to mention @@DEMONYN@@ in their products in fear of being fined by @@NAME@@.
[option]”Nonsense!” shouts @@RANDOMNAME@@, while eating Bigtopian Blue Cheese with crackers. “We should have the right to use the word @@DEMONYN@@ for anything, really. Imagine a world where we can’t use foreign names for the fear of being fined! Think of the cheese businesses!”
[effect]The average consumer has trouble telling the difference from foreign and domestic food.