Charmera wrote:Bunkeranlage wrote:APP:
Name: Felix Jakobsson "红毛 (hōng máo)"
Age: 28
Gender: M
Appearance: An average sized Swedish-Chinese man, 170 cm, brownish yellow neck length hair, some stubble
Personality: Quiet, shy, sarcastic, sometimes charitable
Bio: Born in Västergötland to a Swedish father and a Fujian Chinese mother (who died during delivery), Felix Jakobsson spent much of his childhood learning to play musical instruments and writing music, as he had perfect pitch. When he was 10, his father died of a heart attack in his sleep. The young Felix decided to make a living for himself rather than sponge off the work of other people. After attempting various odd jobs, he then decided to join the War Academy, where he graduated with flying colours. When he was 27, he was involved in an accident with machinery, resulting in the loss of both his legs below the knees. This did not bother him, for shortly after his recovery, he attempted conscription, wishing to contribute to humanity's war efforts.
-- (What core your character comes from, you can make it up)
Core Name and Number: Core 073 - Red October
Brief Core Description: Red October, Core 073, was founded by a Marxist, who believed that all people, as stated in communist doctrines, should be equal. This core sought to create equal opportunities for everyone, an idea which attracted the double amputee Felix.
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Power Armour (Not sure how this is done, correct me if I made any mistakes)
Name: The Silent Eagle
Appearance: A silvery, gunmetal colour with a slight tint of gold. The hands and helmet are slightly darker in colour. Since Felix is a double amputee, the legs of his suit have been modified to fit and enhance carbon-fibre blades.
Physical Modules: Speed, Agility, Accuracy
Offense Modules: Railgun, Heat Ray
Transport Modules: Hover Wings, Spring Jump
Unique Module: Tuning Fork: Allows the user to manipulate certain sounds, useful when it comes to covertly altering enemy orders and coding friendly ones. Uses huge amounts of energy, though.
Model Number: EI-3262
RP Sample:
viewtopic.php?f=31&t=321468&start=125#p22599955
In addition, if you'd like another writing sample, there's a link to a fanfic I wrote in my sig.
Also, I usually write in past tense. I understand that the majority of RPers tend to use the present tense when writing, so I'd like to ask if it's okay if I use past tense.
I... though that most people used the past tense... Either way I don't mind and I don't think anyone else will.
Anyway, hes a little too old, not to sound nitpicky, but I did say 18-23 for the age. If you could also add a bit more to the personality (Like... just a line more) You should be good to go.
The idea of a marxist core is going to be a rather fun one, seeing as the Aheani are a pseudo caste based society with a religion.
EDIT: Application edited.