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by Roski » Sun Sep 07, 2014 7:51 am
by Arvenia » Sun Sep 07, 2014 7:53 am
Roski wrote:Pegraynaky wrote:Despite many missiles being shot down and some missing entirely, a few managed to make it through, and they hit the city, lighting it up in flashes of orange and red. In the confusion, various fighters swooped down from the sky to finish the job as the ships began to bombard the shore in preparation of an assault on the beach.
(All missiles not determined to be threats were shot down. Try again)
by Arvenia » Sun Sep 07, 2014 7:54 am
by Arvenia » Sun Sep 07, 2014 7:56 am
Roski wrote:Russo
The Roskian Air Force attacked the Haybusan Fighters hard, but the RVSL Air Force came to save the day, dropping 13,000 troops into Russo.
The Air Forces battled feriously over Russo, the RVSL had noticed the attack and had come to assist.
Peninsula of Boty (That's the penninsula's name in Roski, Common Territories)
The RVSL Navy had begun to arrive, 6 fleets of it.
(One fleet is 2 carriers
15 Missile Cruisers
5 Nuclear Submarines
15 Destroyers
5 Destroyer Escorts
9 Submarine Hunters)
The RVSl attacked Common Territories Navy, hoping to stop the invasion.
by Tryarnia » Sun Sep 07, 2014 8:03 am
by Arvenia » Sun Sep 07, 2014 8:11 am
Tryarnia wrote:The People's Liberation Regime offers 45,000 men to the cause of the invaded nation, including T-90 tanks, SU-37's, 120mm Artillery pieces, and our forces under the command of the defender. Just sign here for the command of this army of the People's Liberation Regime.
by Arvenia » Sun Sep 07, 2014 8:15 am
Valdiu wrote:Arvenia wrote:
The Arvenian military sends 20,000 troops, 2000 tanks, 2000 fighter jets, 1000 helicopters, 1000 aircraft carriers, 800 armored cars, 800 armed vessels, 500 submarines, 500 armed boats, 500 stealth bombers, 200 missiles, 200 spy planes, 100 supply cars and 100 supply choppers to the conflict to support and protect the Roskian government.
Spy planes, stealth bombers, and aircraft carriers can run upwards of 100,000,000,000 dollars. How do you have 1,000?
I dont think the USN has 500 subs, much less 800 warships. Serious gm.
by Roski » Sun Sep 07, 2014 8:18 am
by Arvenia » Sun Sep 07, 2014 9:00 am
by Valdiu » Sun Sep 07, 2014 10:55 am
Arvenia wrote:Valdiu wrote:Spy planes, stealth bombers, and aircraft carriers can run upwards of 100,000,000,000 dollars. How do you have 1,000?
I dont think the USN has 500 subs, much less 800 warships. Serious gm.
My country has over 800,000,000,000 dollars! That means that I have only 700,000,000,000 dollars left!
The Arvenian military sends it's skilled officers and General Manny Garcia to talk with the Valdian military officers, Valdian generals and Valdian President about the Roskian conflict and the Valdian issue on the Arvenian military deployment.
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by Roski » Sun Sep 07, 2014 12:47 pm
by North Emerica » Sun Sep 07, 2014 1:03 pm
by Common Territories » Sun Sep 07, 2014 5:12 pm
Roski wrote:Russo
The Roskian Air Force attacked the Haybusan Fighters hard, but the RVSL Air Force came to save the day, dropping 13,000 troops into Russo.
The Air Forces battled feriously over Russo, the RVSL had noticed the attack and had come to assist.
Peninsula of Boty (That's the penninsula's name in Roski, Common Territories)
The RVSL Navy had begun to arrive, 6 fleets of it.
(One fleet is 2 carriers
15 Missile Cruisers
5 Nuclear Submarines
15 Destroyers
5 Destroyer Escorts
9 Submarine Hunters)
The RVSl attacked Common Territories Navy, hoping to stop the invasion.
OOC: Thanks for the name correction. Anyways:
A: I will not acknowledge the obvious god modded number wanking. One fleet of the numbers you sent is plenty to challenge me -- six of those is over the top.
B: You cannot teleport forces. If you had posted better, maybe describe their response to alerts or something I would have let it slide. For now though; you cannot teleport an armada made of fleets of ships to be in range of my own fleet. Try having it where they are responding and still out of range.
C: How does your nation even know of my fleet? Cruise missiles are an obvious answer but that doesn't answer where they came from, if they were really missiles, or how you even knew you were being bombed. All you replied was was that you attack me back, that's a no no.
D: You have to tell me what you're doing. You can't just say "I attack you" and expect anything back. That is so vague and unresponsive that it disallows anything quality to happen.
E: There was no response on how the strikes went. There were no attempts to respond to how the strikes went or what the situation was; you had plenty of time to respond the results and you failed to do so. You also did not say what if any military forces were even there.
F: Nice job taking over Russia in less then half a page of writing, without one post detailing the Government's response and skipping 90% of the action.
G: Speaking about that large scale civil war; how come it has not wrecked your nation and its military forces like it should have?
H (last and final): Since you did not want to craft anything of a response to me other then "I attack you" with a number wanked teleporting fleet with omnipresence -- I am forced to create a response based on the results you gave me and that are present. So if you have complaints about my post, you have only yourself to blame because you did not craft anything of a response for me to work with.
I am not pulling many punches in order to teach you lessons about writing warfare. If you have an advantage IC to someone, you take it. You have to use the tools available to your nation to fight others and you have to be very descriptive. You cannot just claim hundreds of ships attacking someone when your country is literally split in half fighting each other to the extent that cities are burning. Not to mention that you jumped the war's progress throughout 1 page of shotty writing. I don't want to come off as too rude (I prefer to be called Frank) but it looks like you took over Russia in a day. There's no timeline, no logical sense of battle writing, no real action other then you bombing your own people to hell, and shotty Call of Duty writing whenever. I can't remember one ground post, one Government post, or one where your forces are actually fighting. I hope my participation helps teach you and others that you need to think in depth about your nation and how it 'can' fight a war. You cannot fight a land war in Russia in one day and skip time as you please either, as im noticing while writing this post. And avoid any puppet wanking as I can see some puppets looming.
by Roski » Sun Sep 07, 2014 5:54 pm
by Pegraynaky » Mon Sep 08, 2014 12:29 am
Roski wrote:Pegraynaky wrote:Despite many missiles being shot down and some missing entirely, a few managed to make it through, and they hit the city, lighting it up in flashes of orange and red. In the confusion, various fighters swooped down from the sky to finish the job as the ships began to bombard the shore in preparation of an assault on the beach.
(All missiles not determined to be threats were shot down. Try again)
by Common Territories » Mon Sep 08, 2014 2:55 am
by Roski » Mon Sep 08, 2014 4:07 am
by Common Territories » Tue Sep 09, 2014 6:29 pm
OOC: Im going to be a little blunt again about this sorry.
A: Can you please not use foreign languages? I don't know what you think your writing but I get like 5 different languages from each phrase written in that speak. Only one was clear enough to read without guesses and that was apparently 98% Serbian. I suggest writing it in english so we all can understand and simply say they're speaking russian or something; it's what im doing with the Royal Guard, who only speak German. Using this to tell your movements, combined with it not being able to be read by others makes for bad understanding on our part.
B: How did you know my choppers were there? I could barely get this translated, but what I did get was that you knew they were there as if you knew the grass was on the ground. I would not have bothered with this since it is possible for a keen eye to see them barely at that distance -- and im sure by the point of their firing they can be seen and heard better -- but you leave no evidence on how you spotted them.
C: Why is Jutin not a smouldering fire pit? I can only assume you chose not to respond to my choppers firing to destroy the town, and the multiple MRLS ordinances that were pounding the town, and don't forget the later coming air strikes, and lastly the two bombs carried by each helicopter. There are 0 written responses and results to the town being bombed to hell other then you know helicopters are there. So, no results is the subject of this message.
D: What happened to my bombardment of that 'fleet' on the other side of the land? You claimed they were there, I assumed they were one of the fleets you wrote about earlier, and there was no response/results to my bombardment of them.
E: Super fast troops. Please do not teleport an army across Russia in half a day. You know that's not possible, I know that isn't, don't try to change things like in your super brief civil war.
F: Teleporting troops? Where did these random "fighters" come from? Fighter jets can't just pop into the sky without me knowing or you describing how they got there. "They began to set up outside the Peninsula. Missile Defences of the Roskian Orange Sphere Missile Initative began setting up around Jutin and the northern tip of the Peninsula. SAMs had also begun to set up." This, this is all troop teleporting. I wont acknowledge such forces until they are explained rationally and not just plopped there for the sake of countering me. Your last post said you had 13,000 troops in Jutin and that's it.
G: "Infared scans proved what the Roskian's thought, an enemy force had landed in Boty Peninsula." ... Where did these Infrared scans come from and how did you get them now?
H: All I can say about your northern fleet portion is to not teleport them with fast travel. It has been less then a day (not counting this post). I find it hard a fleet made it past ice sheets that cover the northern half of Russia in less then a day. So please don't make them arrive to the OA in like another day please. The other half I have no idea about because it tells me that the language is mongolian, then serbian, then russian, and there on and cannot be translated at all.
I must suggest you contact an RP Mentor for an unbiased opinion/help source to help your RP'ing. A list of II Mentors can be found here.
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