Regrettably, this is my very first time on submitting a draft for the WA proposal. Even worse, my first language is not English. I sincerely appreciate any kind of help on this proposal with my good intentions with them.
Major arguments of this proposal are these: The terminology 'landmine' was defined very sketchy; thus prone to abuse, Landmines are mainly employed as cost-efficient defensive armament unlike Nuclear weaponry; thus the weaker nations are more vulnerable to its disarmament, WADA that the resolution have proposed to supervise the dismining process is has so little authority that the expected effectiveness is not guranteed.
Here is my weird first draft of the proposal.
RECOGNIZING that the landmines are dangerous weaponry to be deployed as civilian casualities are caused by employing such armament.
APPLAUSING the intention of the original resolution for contributing on world peace. And opening the room on promoting restless study on demining technique to minimize the civilian causalties.
HOWEVER ADMITTING that the landmines are efficient weapon against armored forced by the less economically-privileged nations. And NOTICING they are defensive-weaponry which are hard to be uaed in offensive operation, thus the agression, thus the invasion or any form of hostality against another Nation.
WORRIED on disarmament resolution of World Assembly have counter-acted the security of the member nations by discouraging the mean of defense.
YET CONCERNED that the resolution failed to address the current technological advancement of landmines by defining the landmine as "[E]xplosive devices ... designed to cause injury or death to persons [Sic] ..." Excluding IED (Not 'designed'), Anti-tank mines (Not 'to persons'), Biological mines, EMP mines, Flamethrowing mines and even Nuclear mines (Not 'explosive') due to ABUSABLE definition that failed to embrace the whole possible concept and the potential technological advancement in future.
QUESTIONING the good of WADA or World Assembly Demining Agency which was proposed to be organized on the resolution for LACKING the authority to be protected during the demining operation to ensure the flawless intervention, not to mention the absent of anti-corruption system for sustaining neutrality on imposing disarmament on a certain nation.
SUGGESTING The future resolution may not prohibit the usage of the landmines, but focus solely on limiting the design.
HEREBY repeals the resolution ~~~~