GE&T Accreditation Agency [Temporarily closed - backlog]

by **Abidawe** » Mon Apr 06, 2015 2:10 pm

The Nation of Ceneria wrote:
Abidawe wrote:[Accreditation Form]

OFFICIAL NOTIFICATION FROM GE&TAA

Thank you for applying for accreditation, Sir Cameron! We are happy to inform you that you have been awarded a rating of four stars for your storefront, CitationAir! Below you will find a banner displaying your rating, which we invite you to place in your storefront.
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Once more, thank you for applying to the Global Economics and Trade Accreditation Agency!

Robert J. Burneside, Chief Executive Officer.
Daniel R. Sparkmann, Head of Accreditation.
Very nice airline storefront overall, with most of the things that I tend to look for in that type of environment. It was, however, lacking in a field or two.

1: I would highly recommend that you talk about your airline itself more, in addition to just the services that it offers. This would include the history of the airline, ecofriendliness, etc. You should be able to give your customers a feel for the airline.

2: I suggest that you downsize the logos of your corporate partners a bit, as they take up well more that their "fair share" of the page each. I also suggest you make them about the same size, and possibly comment on their contributions to CitationAir.

Overall, a very nice storefront. I look forwards to seeing it as you and your customers make it better in the future!

I'm definitely going to take these into account, thank you for the rating and I hope that I can eventually earn that coveted five star rating so I will definitely work to add what you have suggested, thank you!

by **SP Rebellion** » Mon Apr 06, 2015 3:11 pm

OOC: Hello again! Thank you for your suggestions on my Rockwell storefront, I Will be working on it soon!

. As for now, I Would like accreditation on my Budget airline I recently brought back from inactivity and renovated, NoFrills!

IC:

Storefront Accreditation Form
Nation Name: SP Rebellion
Storefront Name: No-Frills Airways
Link to Storefront Thread: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=320959
Would you like recommendations on improving your storefront?: Of course!
What type of storefront is this (i.e. Military, Automotive, etc.)?: Airline.
Special Requests: Just please note that this is constantly improving, just wanted to get it out on the market

Name and position of applying individual: Mr. Michael Tilsbury, CEO,
**GETAAFORM**
Thank you for submitting your storefront for accreditation! You will be contacted when your rating is complete!

by **The Nation of Ceneria** » Mon Apr 06, 2015 3:53 pm

SP Rebellion wrote:[Accreditation Form]

OFFICIAL NOTIFICATION FROM GE&TAA

Thank you for applying for accreditation, Mr. Tilsbury! We are happy to inform you that you have been awarded a rating of three stars for your storefront, No-Frills Airways! Below you will find a banner displaying your rating, which we invite you to place in your storefront.
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Once more, thank you for applying to the Global Economics and Trade Accreditation Agency!

Robert J. Burneside, Chief Executive Officer.
Daniel R. Sparkmann, Head of Accreditation.
You airline is a very interesting concept overall, not like many of the other storefronts that I typically see here.

1: Something that most people like to see in storefronts is a professional, IC format. In your first post, you declare your storefront "Nationstates' Cheapest Airline" several times. I see this as a bit too OOC for a storefront like this, so I would remove the meta references wherever possible.

2: Your advertisements I really like, but their speed is a bit distracting. It might pay to slow them down to about half the speed they are at currently.

3: Definitely add several aircraft to your fleet area. The one you have looks quite nice, but diversity in a fleet is always a good thing. If you need a couple of aircraft, I'd highly recommend Celestar Aerospace to make them for you.

That's it for now! If you need anything else, feel free to send me a telegram! Good luck!

by **Vichtander** » Mon Apr 06, 2015 7:10 pm

Storefront Accreditation Form
Nation Name: Vichtander
Storefront Name: Sillebus Aircraft Manufacturing
Link to Storefront Thread: Sillebus Aircraft Manufacturing
Would you like recommendations on improving your storefront? Yes, we would.
What type of storefront is this (i.e. Military, Automotive, etc.)? Aeronautics Production and Design
Special Requests: N/A
Name and position of applying individual: CEO, John McCrimmon
**GETAAFORM**
Thank you for submitting your storefront for accreditation! You will be contacted when your rating is complete!

by **Zyno** » Mon Apr 06, 2015 8:10 pm

As our storefront develops, we here at Zyno Arms Manufacturing Industries would like a helping hand. We hope to receive constructive criticism that will help our business become more appealing to potential customers. Our application is attached below.

by **The Nation of Ceneria** » Tue Apr 07, 2015 5:15 pm

Vichtander wrote:[Accreditation Form]

OFFICIAL NOTIFICATION FROM GE&TAA

Thank you for applying for accreditation, Mr. McCrimmon! We are happy to inform you that you have been awarded a rating of three stars for your storefront, Sillebus Aircraft Manufacturing! Below you will find a banner displaying your rating, which we invite you to place in your storefront.
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Once more, thank you for applying to the Global Economics and Trade Accreditation Agency!

Robert J. Burneside, Chief Executive Officer.
Daniel R. Sparkmann, Head of Accreditation.
I really like the direction this storefront is going, but it just wasn't complete enough to merit a really good rating. As soon as you take into account the suggestions below, I encourage you to reapply, because I know that you storefront can get a much higher rating than three stars.

1: Aircraft description. I know that there is a reason you haven't yet filled any of these out yet, so I would encourage you to be as detailed as you can. Due to the unique designs of all lf your aircraft, I would recommend at least two paragraphs about each aircraft, regardless of size.

2: The navigation bar text is a bit massive, to I suggest that you scale it down a bit.

3: Your passenger capacities are all a bit ridiculously high. Some of them seem like you took the real figure (if there was one) and doubled it. You can tell, for instance, by looking at the picture of your Vichta Royal that it can't realistically carry more than thirty passengers or so, and yet you have it labeled as carrying fifty-two. I would be very careful about this, as people can get touchy over things like realism around here.

Overall, I really like the way that your storefront is turning out. As I said, please reapply when you have incorporated some of my suggestions, as I know you can get a much better rating if you do. Good luck!

Zyno wrote:[Accreditation Form]

OFFICIAL NOTIFICATION FROM GE&TAA

Thank you for applying for accreditation, Mr. Coleman! We are happy to inform you that you have been awarded a rating of four stars for your storefront, Zyno Arms! Below you will find a banner displaying your rating, which we invite you to place in your storefront.
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Once more, thank you for applying to the Global Economics and Trade Accreditation Agency!

Robert J. Burneside, Chief Executive Officer.
Daniel R. Sparkmann, Head of Accreditation.
I really do like the descriptions that you have for your completed products, especially when it comes to your armored vehicles. That said, I have a couple of suggestions for you.

1: As I said, I like your descriptions, and just want to urge you to keep on expanding them. For things like personal weapons, descriptions and specifications are a definite must-have.

2: I noticed that most (if not all) of your products are taken from real-world militaries. I strongly recommend that you design several of you own, completely unique products as well. Nearly anyone can convincingly sell real-world products, but only skilled designers and people who think about their products can sell things that they make up. I encourage you to be the latter.

3: Forms forms forms! Make sure that your purchasing forms, when you add them, are professional-looking. They tend to go a very long way in making your storefront better.

Overall, very nice storefront. I look forwards to seeing you improve it!

by **Vichtander** » Tue Apr 07, 2015 6:24 pm

Storefront Accreditation Form
Nation Name: Vichtander
Storefront Name: Sillebus Aircraft Manufacturing
Link to Storefront Thread: sillebusaeronautics.com
Would you like recommendations on improving your storefront? Yes
What type of storefront is this (i.e. Military, Automotive, etc.)? Aeronautics Deign and Development
Special Requests: None at the moment
Name and position of applying individual: CEO, John McCrimmon
**GETAAFORM**
Thank you for submitting your storefront for accreditation! You will be contacted when your rating is complete!

by **The Nation of Ceneria** » Wed Apr 08, 2015 2:37 pm

Vichtander wrote:[Accreditation Form]

OFFICIAL NOTIFICATION FROM GE&TAA

Thank you for applying for accreditation, Mr. McCrimmon! We are happy to inform you that you have been awarded an improved rating of four stars for your storefront, Sillebus Aircraft Manufacturing! Below you will find a banner displaying your rating, which we invite you to place in your storefront.
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Once more, thank you for applying to the Global Economics and Trade Accreditation Agency!

Robert J. Burneside, Chief Executive Officer.
Daniel R. Sparkmann, Head of Accreditation.
Well, I didn't expect such a rapid turnaround, but I have to say the amount of improvement in such a short period of time was impressive. Much more realistic capacities, and very nice descriptions. Those alone made your rating hop up a star. Nice work! If you craft similar descriptions for your new military jets, they should be just as good. The only thing I can really suggest at this point is just to mess around with the coding system, and to experiment in ways to make the storefront's general design look better. But for now, very nice work!

by **Abidawe** » Wed Apr 08, 2015 4:18 pm

Storefront Accreditation Form
Nation Name: Abidawe
Storefront Name: CitationAir
Link to Storefront Thread: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=336178&p=24095926
Would you like recommendations on improving your storefront? Yes
What type of storefront is this (i.e. Military, Automotive, etc.)? Airline
Special Requests: Basically just checking to see if there is anything else you could point out that I should fix to bump up to five stars, thanks!
Name and position of applying individual: Sir David Cameron, CEO, CitationAir
**GETAAFORM**
Thank you for submitting your storefront for accreditation! You will be contacted when your rating is complete!

by **The Nation of Ceneria** » Thu Apr 09, 2015 1:24 pm

Abidawe wrote:[Accreditation Form]

OFFICIAL NOTIFICATION FROM GE&TAA

Thank you for applying for accreditation, Sir Cameron! We are happy to inform you that you have been awarded a rating of five stars for your storefront, CitationAir! Below you will find a banner displaying your rating, which we invite you to place in your storefront.
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Once more, thank you for applying to the Global Economics and Trade Accreditation Agency!

Robert J. Burneside, Chief Executive Officer.
Daniel R. Sparkmann, Head of Accreditation.
Lots of improvement since you first applied. I like your storefront even more now, so I rated you five stars. There are, of course, always ways to improve!

1: As I discussed with Vichtander when I was going over ratings for Sillebus Aircraft Manufacturing, I'd like to see some description of each of your aircraft. Something like what role it plays in your fleet, whether it flies your international routes or not, etc. Nothing really expansive, but a paragraph or so for each. Not too much detail, but enough to interest the casual reader.

Other than that, your storefront is rather top-notch. very well done, and good luck with it!

by **Vichtander** » Thu Apr 09, 2015 1:26 pm

Storefront Accreditation Form
Nation Name: Vichtander
Storefront Name: Sillebus Aircraft Manufacturing
Link to Storefront Thread: sillebusaeronautics.com
Would you like recommendations on improving your storefront? Yes
What type of storefront is this (i.e. Military, Automotive, etc.)? Aeronautics Deign and Development
Special Requests: Just a few more tips to get that last star.
Name and position of applying individual: CEO, John McCrimmon
**GETAAFORM**
Thank you for submitting your storefront for accreditation! You will be contacted when your rating is complete!

by **The Nation of Ceneria** » Thu Apr 09, 2015 1:36 pm

Vichtander wrote:[Accreditation Form]

OFFICIAL NOTIFICATION FROM GE&TAA

Thank you for applying for accreditation, Mr. McCrimmon! We are happy to inform you that you have been awarded an improved rating of five stars for your storefront, Sillebus Aircraft Manufacturing! Below you will find a banner displaying your rating, which we invite you to place in your storefront.
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Once more, thank you for applying to the Global Economics and Trade Accreditation Agency!

Robert J. Burneside, Chief Executive Officer.
Daniel R. Sparkmann, Head of Accreditation.
Nice work! I still suggest you keep messing around with coding in order to make it look prettier, but you should be set to be at the forefront of the aircraft manufacturing business. One note is that the spoiler that should be hiding Josef Kavnov's signature at present is just hiding an enlarged picture of him.

Other than that, nicely done! I look forwards to seeing you continue to improve and gain profit and recognition!

by **Abidawe** » Thu Apr 09, 2015 1:59 pm

Storefront Accreditation Form
Nation Name: Abidawe
Storefront Name: Roman Food Co.
Link to Storefront Thread: RFC.abd.com
Would you like recommendations on improving your storefront? Yes
What type of storefront is this (i.e. Military, Automotive, etc.)? Restaurant and Food Distribution
Special Requests: None Right Now
Name and position of applying individual: Vincenzo Maglio, CEO
**GETAAFORM**
Thank you for submitting your storefront for accreditation! You will be contacted when your rating is complete!

by **The Nation of Ceneria** » Thu Apr 09, 2015 2:04 pm

by **Abidawe** » Thu Apr 09, 2015 2:05 pm

The Nation of Ceneria wrote:
Abidawe wrote:[Accreditation Form]

Please apply when your storefront is open to the public, as having customers will improve the rating.

We just opened it up, hopefully we will have customers soon

by **Lolomz** » Thu Apr 09, 2015 2:09 pm

Storefront Accreditation Form
Nation Name: Lolomx
Storefront Name: Lolomozian Imperial Industries
Link to Storefront Thread: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=284174
Would you like recommendations on improving your storefront? yes
What type of storefront is this (i.e. Military, Automotive, etc.) Military
Special Requests: None
Name and position of applying individual: CEO Ross Kolenvic
**GETAAFORM**
Thank you for submitting your storefront for accreditation! You will be contacted when your rating is complete!

by **The Nation of Ceneria** » Thu Apr 09, 2015 2:26 pm

Lolomz wrote:[Accreditation Form]

OFFICIAL NOTIFICATION FROM GE&TAA

Thank you for applying for accreditation, Mr. Kolenvic! We are happy to inform you that you have been awarded a rating of two stars for your storefront, Lolomozian Imperial Industries! Below you will find a banner displaying your rating, which we invite you to place in your storefront.
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Once more, thank you for applying to the Global Economics and Trade Accreditation Agency!

Robert J. Burneside, Chief Executive Officer.
Daniel R. Sparkmann, Head of Accreditation.
I like the designs you use, but I think that your storefront as a whole as quite a ways to go.

1: Images are very important in selling products, so I would highly recommend that you create or find suitable images for your products. Also important in maintaining a successful storefront is having a comprehensive description for all of your products. Usually, this amounts to several paragraphs (or one, in the case of small arms) about the item in question. This can discuss the product's capabilities, it's development, or even how you use it in your military. Almost anything will do. These descriptions can be invaluable in selling a convincing product.

2: I'd recommend that you solidify your two different rule lists into one, as having two is just confusing to me.

3: Grammar is also very important in ensuring that your customer has a seamless experience. If he/she is stumbling through your work and trying to decipher it, it is had to pay attention to the items the storefront is selling. I would recommend that you look through everything and check your grammar, although your spelling looks quite good on everything. Also make sure that your capitalization is consistent.

One of the very nice things about your storefront are your replies to orders. They are beautifully formatted and very nice-looking. Nicely done.

Thank you for applying, and good luck improving your storefront! I hope to see it improve in the future!

by **Abidawe** » Thu Apr 09, 2015 2:53 pm

Abidawe wrote:
The Nation of Ceneria wrote:
Please apply when your storefront is open to the public, as having customers will improve the rating.

We just opened it up, hopefully we will have customers soon

We have started receiving customers

by **Banija** » Sat Apr 11, 2015 11:43 pm

Storefront Accreditation Form
Nation Name: The Kingdom of Banija
Storefront Name: The Regional Transit Corporation
Link to Storefront Thread: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=333578&hilit=banija
Would you like recommendations on improving your storefront? Yes
What type of storefront is this (i.e. Military, Automotive, etc.)? It is a public transit company. We'll operate bus system, subways, light rail, etc... We support privitization of public transit to private industry to ensure that public transit stops bleeding the taxpayers for their cash.
Special Requests: None
Name and position of applying individual: Allen Sharbini, President & CEO of the Regional Transit Corporation

by **The Nation of Ceneria** » Sun Apr 12, 2015 10:48 am

Abidawe wrote:[Accreditation Form]

OFFICIAL NOTIFICATION FROM GE&TAA

Thank you for applying for accreditation, Mr. Maglio! We are happy to inform you that you have been awarded a rating of three stars for your storefront, the Roman Meal Co.! Below you will find a banner displaying your rating, which we invite you to place in your storefront.
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Once more, thank you for applying to the Global Economics and Trade Accreditation Agency!

Robert J. Burneside, Chief Executive Officer.
Daniel R. Sparkmann, Head of Accreditation.
Now that your storefront is open, I am giving you a rating and suggestions for it.

1: I like the general feel of your storefront, but I think that it is a bit abstract from my point of view. I would recommend adding more pictures and descriptive writing, just to flesh out the comprehensive network of bones that already exists.

2: I'd would certainly recommend expanding your staff, as your CEO's profile is very nicely written.

3: Do put in some time to work on your delivery methods. I wouldn't suggest making up any new technology just for food distribution, but to just use tried-and-true methods and vehicles to keep that area realistic.

4: Last but not least, I might add a sentence or two very generally describing each of your foods. Something like, "This aromatic pasta is one of our specialties, and is made with all-natural ingredients from Abidawe's countryside." That would certainly be enough, but the list just feels empty.

Overall, nice job so far! Keep up the good work!

Banija wrote:[Accreditation Form]

OFFICIAL NOTIFICATION FROM GE&TAA

Thank you for applying for accreditation, Mr. Sharbini! We are happy to inform you that you have been awarded a rating of five stars for your storefront, the Regional Transit Corporation! Below you will find a banner displaying your rating, which we invite you to place in your storefront.
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Once more, thank you for applying to the Global Economics and Trade Accreditation Agency!

Robert J. Burneside, Chief Executive Officer.
Daniel R. Sparkmann, Head of Accreditation.
I wasn't expecting a very impressive storefront when I clicked on the provided link, but I was most certainly wrong. I love the content of your storefront, and the detail that went into making it so comprehensive. There is still room for improvement, but you certainly deserve five stars for it as-is.

1: I'd suggest adding pictures of transportations systems that you already have in place. The looks of the vehicles could be a good way to make your storefront more flashy.

2: I also recommend that you mess around with the coding for a bit and just to use to to make your storefront really nice-looking. The simplicity of it right now is very nice, but I think that adding more complicated coding can make it better still.

Again, very nice job. I really love your detail, and I look forwards to seeing your storefront improve further!

by **Rookanse** » Sun Apr 12, 2015 12:36 pm

Storefront Accreditation Form
Nation Name: The Republic of Rookanse
Storefront Name: Dyaas-Nildhelm Onderneming
Link to Storefront Thread: Click Here!
Would you like recommendations on improving your storefront?: Sure!
What type of storefront is this?: Military Aviation and Missile Technology
Special Requests: None
Name and position of applying individual: Jerome Dyaas, Co-CEO
**GETAAFORM**

by **The Nation of Ceneria** » Sun Apr 12, 2015 1:27 pm

Rookanse wrote:[Accreditation Form]

OFFICIAL NOTIFICATION FROM GE&TAA

Thank you for applying for accreditation, Mr. Dyaas! We are happy to inform you that you have been awarded a rating of five stars for your storefront, the Dyaas-Nildhelm Onderneming! Below you will find a banner displaying your rating, which we invite you to place in your storefront.
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Once more, thank you for applying to the Global Economics and Trade Accreditation Agency!

Robert J. Burneside, Chief Executive Officer.
Daniel R. Sparkmann, Head of Accreditation.
I have seen this storefront in the past, and thought it was very nice then. That assumption hasn't changed a bit. I'm happy to give you a five-star rating, although improvement never stops at a near-perfect score.

1: One thing that I really like is your use of little-known aircraft (such as the wing-in-ground effect aircraft that you created). What I think you should look to do, however, is create more aircraft that are better-known for their roles, such as more air-superiority fighters. I think that adding more aircraft to your storefront will significantly increase your number of visitors.

I was going to add more, but I truthfully can't find anything else to suggest. Nice job, and keep up the great work!

by **Federation of Trelatche** » Mon Apr 13, 2015 10:02 pm

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SUBJECT: APPLICATION

To whom it may concern,

Please find our application below. We look forward to hearing back from your respectable agency:

Storefront Accreditation Form
Nation Name: Federation of Trelatche
Storefront Name: ETV Corporation
Link to Storefront Thread: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=301260
Would you like recommendations on improving your storefront? Yes
What type of storefront is this (i.e. Military, Automotive, etc.)? Television
Special Requests: N/A
Name and position of applying individual: Arnold Schmidt, Vice President of ETV
**GETAAFORM**
If you have any questions or concerns you wish to bring up, I encourage you to either telegram Federation of Trelatche for pressing issues, or lodge a request here, if it is not an immediate problem. We will be more than happy to clear up any problems you may have. Thank you for your interest in ETV, and may our services be ever useful to you.

Harold Boss, President of ETV Corporation

by **The Nation of Ceneria** » Tue Apr 14, 2015 1:35 pm

Federation of Trelatche wrote:[Accreditation Form]

OFFICIAL NOTIFICATION FROM GE&TAA

Thank you for applying for accreditation, Mr. Schmidt! We are happy to inform you that you have been awarded a rating of five stars for your storefront, the ETV Corporation! Below you will find a banner displaying your rating, which we invite you to place in your storefront.
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Once more, thank you for applying to the Global Economics and Trade Accreditation Agency!

Robert J. Burneside, Chief Executive Officer.
Daniel R. Sparkmann, Head of Accreditation.
There is only one problem that I had with your storefront, being that I couldn't find anything wrong with it.

I seem to recall this exact situation occurring the last time that you applied. How strange. Anyway, very nicely done. Hopefully, this rating will further improve your already high standings as a storefront operator!

by **Maltropia** » Tue Apr 14, 2015 1:53 pm

Placeholder post for just a minute while I put together an app. Why I'm placeholding I have no idea. Don't judge me.

Right, here goes -

Storefront Accreditation Form
Nation Name: Maltropia, Most Catholic Empire of
Storefront Name: Maritime Imperial
Link to Storefront Thread: www.maritime-imperial.mtr
Would you like recommendations on improving your storefront? Eh, why not. It's being gradually revamped anyway so product headers are inconsistent with the OP though.
What type of storefront is this? Shipbuilding, primarily civilian but now also naval.
Special Requests: Bake a cake. Eat it. Appreciate it.
Name and position of applying individual: Keith Mulcahy, CEO (since no one else has names here)
**GETAAFORM**
Thank you for submitting your storefront for accreditation! You will be contacted when your rating is complete!

Skip the contacting bit if you want. I subscribe to every thread I post in anyway. Thanks.

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