Our Place Among the Stars (OOC/Signup/Open)

[Bunkeranlage]

APP:

Name: Felix Jakobsson "红毛 (hōng máo)"
Age: 28
Gender: M
Appearance: An average sized Swedish-Chinese man, 170 cm, brownish yellow neck length hair, some stubble
Personality: Quiet, shy, sarcastic, sometimes charitable
Bio: Born in Västergötland to a Swedish father and a Fujian Chinese mother (who died during delivery), Felix Jakobsson spent much of his childhood learning to play musical instruments and writing music, as he had perfect pitch. When he was 10, his father died of a heart attack in his sleep. The young Felix decided to make a living for himself rather than sponge off the work of other people. After attempting various odd jobs, he then decided to join the War Academy, where he graduated with flying colours. When he was 27, he was involved in an accident with machinery, resulting in the loss of both his legs below the knees. This did not bother him, for shortly after his recovery, he attempted conscription, wishing to contribute to humanity's war efforts.
-- (What core your character comes from, you can make it up)
Core Name and Number: Core 073 - Red October
Brief Core Description: Red October, Core 073, was founded by a Marxist, who believed that all people, as stated in communist doctrines, should be equal. This core sought to create equal opportunities for everyone, an idea which attracted the double amputee Felix.
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Power Armour (Not sure how this is done, correct me if I made any mistakes)
Name: The Silent Eagle
Appearance: A silvery, gunmetal colour with a slight tint of gold. The hands and helmet are slightly darker in colour. Since Felix is a double amputee, the legs of his suit have been modified to fit and enhance carbon-fibre blades.
Physical Modules: Speed, Agility, Accuracy
Offense Modules: Railgun, Heat Ray
Transport Modules: Hover Wings, Spring Jump
Unique Module: Tuning Fork: Allows the user to manipulate certain sounds, useful when it comes to covertly altering enemy orders and coding friendly ones. Uses huge amounts of energy, though.
Model Number: EI-3262
RP Sample:

viewtopic.php?f=31&t=321468&start=125#p22599955

In addition, if you'd like another writing sample, there's a link to a fanfic I wrote in my sig.

Also, I usually write in past tense. I understand that the majority of RPers tend to use the present tense when writing, so I'd like to ask if it's okay if I use past tense.

I... though that most people used the past tense... Either way I don't mind and I don't think anyone else will.

Anyway, hes a little too old, not to sound nitpicky, but I did say 18-23 for the age. If you could also add a bit more to the personality (Like... just a line more) You should be good to go.

The idea of a marxist core is going to be a rather fun one, seeing as the Aheani are a pseudo caste based society with a religion.

EDIT: Application edited.

[Republic of Hasgriu]

I would also like to point out that for the pinyin it should be ' hóng máo' and not 'hōng máo'.

[Bunkeranlage]

I would also like to point out that for the pinyin it should be ' hóng máo' and not 'hōng máo'.

Crap, what's wrong with my diacritics? XP

And to think I learned Mandarin using PinYin

[Charmera]

APP:

Name: Felix Jakobsson "红毛 (hóng máo)"
Age: 24
Gender: M
Appearance: An average sized Swedish-Chinese man, 170 cm, brownish yellow neck length hair, some stubble
Personality: Felix was always rather introverted, preferring to stay in the book room reading than to go out and play. After his father's death, he developed a sarcastic undertone in his speech, though he was still a charitable person within. After he lost his legs, he didn't worry too much, even making jokes about his prosthetics.

Most of the time, his sarcasm and pessimistic tone made him seem like an unfriendly person. However, if others were in need, he never hesitated to step in and help.

Bio: Born in Västergötland to a Swedish father and a Fujian Chinese mother (who died during delivery), Felix Jakobsson spent much of his childhood learning to play musical instruments and writing music, as he had perfect pitch. When he was 10, his father died of a heart attack in his sleep. The young Felix decided to make a living for himself rather than sponge off the work of other people. After attempting various odd jobs, he then decided to join the War Academy, where he graduated with flying colours. When he was 23, he was involved in an accident with machinery, resulting in the loss of both his legs below the knees. This did not bother him, for shortly after his recovery, he attempted conscription, wishing to contribute to humanity's war efforts.
-- (What core your character comes from, you can make it up)
Core Name and Number: Core 073 - Red October
Brief Core Description: Red October, Core 073, was founded by a Marxist, who believed that all people, as stated in communist doctrines, should be equal. This core sought to create equal opportunities for everyone, an idea which attracted the double amputee Felix.
--
Power Armour (Not sure how this is done, correct me if I made any mistakes)
Name: The Silent Eagle
Appearance: A silvery, gunmetal colour with a slight tint of gold. The hands and helmet are slightly darker in colour. Since Felix is a double amputee, the legs of his suit have been modified to fit and enhance carbon-fibre blades.
Physical Modules: Speed, Agility, Accuracy
Offense Modules: Railgun, Heat Ray
Transport Modules: Hover Wings, Spring Jump
Unique Module: Tuning Fork: Allows the user to manipulate certain sounds, useful when it comes to covertly altering enemy orders and coding friendly ones. Uses huge amounts of energy, though.
Model Number: EI-3262
RP Sample:

viewtopic.php?f=31&t=321468
In addition, if you'd like another writing sample, there's a link to a fanfic I wrote in my sig.

Just to make clear, I usually write in past tense. I understand that the majority of RPers tend to use the present tense when writing, so I'd like to ask if it's okay if I use past tense.

Ehhh... Il allow it on the condition that his birthday is the first IC day or close to it.
Accepted.

[Bunkeranlage]

APP:

Name: Felix Jakobsson "红毛 (hóng máo)"
Age: 24
Gender: M
Appearance: An average sized Swedish-Chinese man, 170 cm, brownish yellow neck length hair, some stubble
Personality: Felix was always rather introverted, preferring to stay in the book room reading than to go out and play. After his father's death, he developed a sarcastic undertone in his speech, though he was still a charitable person within. After he lost his legs, he didn't worry too much, even making jokes about his prosthetics.

Most of the time, his sarcasm and pessimistic tone made him seem like an unfriendly person. However, if others were in need, he never hesitated to step in and help.

Bio: Born in Västergötland to a Swedish father and a Fujian Chinese mother (who died during delivery), Felix Jakobsson spent much of his childhood learning to play musical instruments and writing music, as he had perfect pitch. When he was 10, his father died of a heart attack in his sleep. The young Felix decided to make a living for himself rather than sponge off the work of other people. After attempting various odd jobs, he then decided to join the War Academy, where he graduated with flying colours. When he was 23, he was involved in an accident with machinery, resulting in the loss of both his legs below the knees. This did not bother him, for shortly after his recovery, he attempted conscription, wishing to contribute to humanity's war efforts.
-- (What core your character comes from, you can make it up)
Core Name and Number: Core 073 - Red October
Brief Core Description: Red October, Core 073, was founded by a Marxist, who believed that all people, as stated in communist doctrines, should be equal. This core sought to create equal opportunities for everyone, an idea which attracted the double amputee Felix.
--
Power Armour (Not sure how this is done, correct me if I made any mistakes)
Name: The Silent Eagle
Appearance: A silvery, gunmetal colour with a slight tint of gold. The hands and helmet are slightly darker in colour. Since Felix is a double amputee, the legs of his suit have been modified to fit and enhance carbon-fibre blades.
Physical Modules: Speed, Agility, Accuracy
Offense Modules: Railgun, Heat Ray
Transport Modules: Hover Wings, Spring Jump
Unique Module: Tuning Fork: Allows the user to manipulate certain sounds, useful when it comes to covertly altering enemy orders and coding friendly ones. Uses huge amounts of energy, though.
Model Number: EI-3262
RP Sample:

viewtopic.php?f=31&t=321468
In addition, if you'd like another writing sample, there's a link to a fanfic I wrote in my sig.

Just to make clear, I usually write in past tense. I understand that the majority of RPers tend to use the present tense when writing, so I'd like to ask if it's okay if I use past tense.

Ehhh... Il allow it on the condition that his birthday is the first IC day or close to it.
Accepted.

Sounds okay to me. After all, lots of people don't celebrate birthdays (I don't).

EDIT: Age edited

[Charmera]

Ehhh... Il allow it on the condition that his birthday is the first IC day or close to it.
Accepted.

Sounds okay to me. After all, lots of people don't celebrate birthdays (I don't).

EDIT: Age edited

Ah, well, still accepted.

We're getting a decent amount of people now...

[Bunkeranlage]

Sounds okay to me. After all, lots of people don't celebrate birthdays (I don't).

EDIT: Age edited

Ah, well, still accepted.

We're getting a decent amount of people now...

What will happen if everybody creates a new Core? Are we going to have supporting characters? NPCs?

[Indo-pasif archipelago]

Am I accepted?

[Zarkenis Ultima]

I have a few questions, not very important but ones I'd like answered nonetheless. .

Firstly, would the core number have any sort of significance? Secondly, do you think there would be much use for a tank type in the squad?

EDIT: Don't mind me I'm just putting this here for my own convenience.

[Charmera]

Am I accepted?

Il take a look at your app later, I just woke up after all...

I have a few questions, not very important but ones I'd like answered nonetheless. .

Firstly, would the core number have any sort of significance? Secondly, do you think there would be much use for a tank type in the squad?

Not much, it would mostly indicate when your Core was founded.
As for the latter, it depends, if you mean a literal tank, not really.
If you mean a tank as in a person who absorbs damage, sure someone like that could be useful.

[New Jordslag]

In that case are you fine if I use the deconstruction process as an attack? Say something like 50 mol per second of contact? And when you say "Organic matter" I assume you mean that dead organic matter, like lipids and proteins. I was thinking the resolution wouldn't be high enough to make a living organism. I mean if I can that would be great, millions of butterflies with micro munitions.

NO ONE EVER SUSPECTS THE BUTTERFLY

I would chose the sergeant in the IC, we're all fresh graduates part of a new division so it's within the realm of possibility for one of us to be selected during the assignment process. It could be a point of character contention that one of us got chosen over the others.

Yeah, no making living organisms. As cool as that may be it's a little much for even Aheani tech...

As for using it as an attack, sure, why not.

In that case, I see no reason not to full accept you. And I'l likely take your advice on choosing the sergeant during the IC.

Just want to say, my guy would make a good candidate. He has top marks in all areas except Phys Ed, and is well respected by his superiors.

[New Jordslag]

Name: Paul Jenner
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Appearance: Around 6' 4'' tall and quite thin with blonde hair and blue eyes.

Personality: He is very intelligent and rational, usually friendly and polite, empathetic and compassionate. He loves to read and spends much of his free time with his books. Recently, he started reading many early American texts (such as the Declaration of Independence, the US Constitution, and Common Sense) and became enthralled by the ideas of freedom and independence found in those texts. Though outwardly he still supports the Aheani, inwardly he longs for the freedom he has been reading about.

Bio: Like most of the Hospitallers, Paul Jenner was very well educated. He did very well in most of his studies (thanks in large part to his love for reading) and particularly excelled in his Medical classes (which were largely why he made it into the War Academy's Gold Class). In addition to the Academy's regular studies, Paul also took additional medical classes (though by that point he scarcely needed them) to become certified as a combat medic, and spent a longer than average amount of time at the Academy as a result.
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Core Name and Number: Core 10: Hospitallers

Brief Core Description: The Hospitallers are a core of healers: nurses, medics, physicians, and surgeons can all be found in the ranks of the Hospitallers. Members of the Hospitallers are well educated, and trained from youth in the Sciences and in Medicine. Additionally, since the Hospitallers treat people from all cores, they do not have rivalries with the other cores.
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Power Armour:
Name: Sano (Latin for "I heal")

Appearance: Similar in appearance to this armor:

(Image)

but with a white Hospitaller cross on the front.

Physical Modules: Accuracy, increased suit durability, and suit nanite regeneration

Offense Modules: Gun drones and energy construct creation

Transport Modules: Blink teleportation, hover wings

Unique Module: Medical omnitool (a diagnostic tool which is also able to administer medigel, an Aheani substance which can help treat many battlefield injuries)

Model Number: EI-1701

RP Sample: Best of Both Worlds, Psychic Academy

*growls*

My sworn enemy. The guy who looks like my character.

Nah, just kidding. Just funny that our characters are both tall friendly, Intelligent, Bookworm guys.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Am I accepted?

Il take a look at your app later, I just woke up after all...

I have a few questions, not very important but ones I'd like answered nonetheless. .

Firstly, would the core number have any sort of significance? Secondly, do you think there would be much use for a tank type in the squad?

Not much, it would mostly indicate when your Core was founded.
As for the latter, it depends, if you mean a literal tank, not really.
If you mean a tank as in a person who absorbs damage, sure someone like that could be useful.

Alright. I'll make an app sometime later. And yes, I meant a person who tanks damage.

I take it the model number is likewise not very important? Is there any maximum or something?

[Charmera]

Name: Amin Ruhian
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Appearance: Amin has a medium height around 150 centimetre, and a well built torso. His black hairs matching his dark brown eyes, inherited by his mother. Amin has a slightly tanned white skins snd often seen wearing red and white jacket.
Personality: Amin is a little arrogant and sometimes a bit cocky towards other cores, but he is friendly with his close friends and asian cores. He is also very calculating and patient at battle, and great tactician.
Bio: Amin was born to a rich family from the 153rd core, where he doctrined by their leader since he was child. His family gave him comfortable life, which shaped his personality, but also trained him to sharpen his mind. He read many books about great generals and leaders and learnt a lot from them. Amin has always been fascinated by the Aheani, and they become his idols. He studied hard at the academy, and motivated by his dream to fight with Aheani and battle other dangerous race in the known universe. Now he is ready to live his dream and join the Aheani forces.
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Core Name and Number: Core 153: Swarnadwipa
Brief Core Description: Swarnadwipa was formed by survivors from south east asia. When the Ahean helped humanity againts Asura, they felt that they owe Aheani a life and became one of their most fierceful soldiers.
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Power Armour:
Name: Unity
Appearance: Unity main color is white, with golden stripes on its side. On the backside, a pair of golden wings are put above Killer Drone Module. Amin's name is carved into its leg
Physical Modules: Suit Nanite Regeneration, Accuracy, Speed
Offense Modules: Killer Drones, Tesla Module
Transport Modules: Blink Teleportation, Hover Wings
Unique Module: Invisibility: Turn the module and its user invisible.
Model Number: EI-6R3637
RP Sample: Infamous: Son of Patriots

Okay.
More detail on the unique module, what are it's limitations, does it mean invisible to merely sight or other tracking systems too?
The model number only needs four numbers/letters
More detail on the core, in fact more detail on most everything...
If you could just go through and proofread it, make sure the grammar and spelling of the APP are improved, since I've noticed quite a few errors. It doesn't have to be perfect, just go through it with as fine a comb as possible...

-snip-

Just want to say, my guy would make a good candidate. He has top marks in all areas except Phys Ed, and is well respected by his superiors.

Hmm... maybe...
Anyone else want to volunteer for the position?

-snip-

*growls*

My sworn enemy. The guy who looks like my character.

Nah, just kidding. Just funny that our characters are both tall friendly, Intelligent, Bookworm guys.

I think you're character is actually taller by about 3 inches...

-snip-

Alright. I'll make an app sometime later. And yes, I meant a person who tanks damage.

I take it the model number is likewise not very important? Is there any maximum or something?

Not really. Though it does help me search for specific apps and new ones...

Alright. So thats 5 or six people joined, 2 people pending. I'd like to go for one more before we start on an IC. Otherwise this seems to be progressing nicely.

Either way, by my estimations, the IC should be up in about 2-3 days at most.

[New Jordslag]

Name: Amin Ruhian
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Appearance: Amin has a medium height around 150 centimetre, and a well built torso. His black hairs matching his dark brown eyes, inherited by his mother. Amin has a slightly tanned white skins snd often seen wearing red and white jacket.
Personality: Amin is a little arrogant and sometimes a bit cocky towards other cores, but he is friendly with his close friends and asian cores. He is also very calculating and patient at battle, and great tactician.
Bio: Amin was born to a rich family from the 153rd core, where he doctrined by their leader since he was child. His family gave him comfortable life, which shaped his personality, but also trained him to sharpen his mind. He read many books about great generals and leaders and learnt a lot from them. Amin has always been fascinated by the Aheani, and they become his idols. He studied hard at the academy, and motivated by his dream to fight with Aheani and battle other dangerous race in the known universe. Now he is ready to live his dream and join the Aheani forces.
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Core Name and Number: Core 153: Swarnadwipa
Brief Core Description: Swarnadwipa was formed by survivors from south east asia. When the Ahean helped humanity againts Asura, they felt that they owe Aheani a life and became one of their most fierceful soldiers.
--
Power Armour:
Name: Unity
Appearance: Unity main color is white, with golden stripes on its side. On the backside, a pair of golden wings are put above Killer Drone Module. Amin's name is carved into its leg
Physical Modules: Suit Nanite Regeneration, Accuracy, Speed
Offense Modules: Killer Drones, Tesla Module
Transport Modules: Blink Teleportation, Hover Wings
Unique Module: Invisibility: Turn the module and its user invisible.
Model Number: EI-6R3637
RP Sample: Infamous: Son of Patriots

Okay.
More detail on the unique module, what are it's limitations, does it mean invisible to merely sight or other tracking systems too?
The model number only needs four numbers/letters
More detail on the core, in fact more detail on most everything...
If you could just go through and proofread it, make sure the grammar and spelling of the APP are improved, since I've noticed quite a few errors. It doesn't have to be perfect, just go through it with as fine a comb as possible...

-snip-

Just want to say, my guy would make a good candidate. He has top marks in all areas except Phys Ed, and is well respected by his superiors.

Hmm... maybe...
Anyone else want to volunteer for the position?

-snip-

*growls*

My sworn enemy. The guy who looks like my character.

Nah, just kidding. Just funny that our characters are both tall friendly, Intelligent, Bookworm guys.[/quote]
I think you're character is actually taller by about 3 inches...

-snip-

Alright. I'll make an app sometime later. And yes, I meant a person who tanks damage.

I take it the model number is likewise not very important? Is there any maximum or something?

Not really. Though it does help me search for specific apps and new ones...

Alright. So thats 5 or six people joined, 2 people pending. I'd like to go for one more before we start on an IC. Otherwise this seems to be progressing nicely.

Either way, by my estimations, the IC should be up in about 2-3 days at most.[/quote]
He is. But even if my guy is taller, his guy is still TALL. And even without the issue of height, our characters are so damn similar.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Oh that's what it's for. Alright then.

For the record, I'm not volunteering. The character I have in mind is definitely not a leadership type.

[Charmera]

He is. But even if my guy is taller, his guy is still TALL. And even without the issue of height, our characters are so damn similar.

It'd be funny if they developed some sort of nice guy rivalry...

[New Jordslag]

He is. But even if my guy is taller, his guy is still TALL. And even without the issue of height, our characters are so damn similar.

It'd be funny if they developed some sort of nice guy rivalry...

Yeah. They would have a contest of who stopped being polite first.

[Brusia]

*growls*

My sworn enemy. The guy who looks like my character.

Nah, just kidding. Just funny that our characters are both tall friendly, Intelligent, Bookworm guys.

I guess that's why I should read the other apps before I post my own I can change some aspects of my character's personality if you don't want the two characters to be so similar.

[New Jordslag]

*growls*

My sworn enemy. The guy who looks like my character.

Nah, just kidding. Just funny that our characters are both tall friendly, Intelligent, Bookworm guys.

I guess that's why I should read the other apps before I post my own I can change some aspects of my character's personality if you don't want the two characters to be so similar.

No, no, It's fine. There are similar people in the military, so the same should go for here. Maybe they should form a Nice-Guy alliance and try to make everybody happy.

[Dustain]

I guess that's why I should read the other apps before I post my own I can change some aspects of my character's personality if you don't want the two characters to be so similar.

No, no, It's fine. There are similar people in the military, so the same should go for here. Maybe they should form a Nice-Guy alliance and try to make everybody happy.

I think its cute, you guys should definately have a rivalry and be in complete denial about the whole thing. None of this alliance crap, or if you do have it as a thing to one up each other. Passive agressive.

[New Jordslag]

No, no, It's fine. There are similar people in the military, so the same should go for here. Maybe they should form a Nice-Guy alliance and try to make everybody happy.

I think its cute, you guys should definately have a rivalry and be in complete denial about the whole thing. None of this alliance crap, or if you do have it as a thing to one up each other. Passive agressive.

Yeah. Ever increasing acts of Politeness. I like it.

[Brusia]

I think its cute, you guys should definately have a rivalry and be in complete denial about the whole thing. None of this alliance crap, or if you do have it as a thing to one up each other. Passive agressive.

Yeah. Ever increasing acts of Politeness. I like it.

Haha, sounds interesting. It'll be the nicest rivalry in history

[Bunkeranlage]

Interesting, because I work for the modern day Hospitallers.

[Brusia]

Interesting, because I work for the modern day Hospitallers.

Cool! I'm hoping to do medical mission work after Medical school (if I manage to get into and through Medical school), and they're one of the organizations I was looking into. How do you like working for them?