[Abandoned] WA Assembly Organization on Economic Development

[Daan Island]

**Hello! Welcome to my FIRST World Assembly Proposal, I realized that 4/10 of the Proposals negatively affected Economical Development, seeing how badly this has CURRENTLY & SO ONLY will affect my nation, I decide to fight against it to protect everyone from terrible economy ratings! Notice: This is my FIRST proposal, I dont expect support or being able to post this in The World Assembly, It's more of a learning experience, but if possible I would like feedback to possibly get a positively affecting proposal passed. Thank you!**

DRAFT 2

The World Assembly—
Recognizing former resolutions #4, #5, #8, and #9, which all negatively affect Economic Freedom, Industries, and Commerce in some way,

Alarmed by the sheer amount of resolutions (4) that affect Economic Development & Economic Freedom, causing a negative impact on Global GDP and Global Yearly Revenue for businesses,

Noting the absence of regulations on provident purchases, such as The World Assembly Headquarters which directs purchases to comfort and entertainment, instead of valuable office equipment and analysis tools,

Validating the importance of global analyzing of economic freedom and economic stability, which serve as a multi-core part of a countries standing and existence, including providing for the people,

Hereby—

1. Establishes a World Assembly Organization on Economic Development & Freedom (WAOED) that is an independent, govern-less Organization that analysis's core economic instability & freedom related issues, including providing economic support & financial aid,

2. Mandates that the WAOED:

a. Keep track of Global Economic Development related Issues;
b. Keep track of Global Economic Freedom related issues;
c. Hold records of Economic Developement & Freedom related issues;
d. Prioritizes Economic related issues such as GDP decrease, Economy Collapse, and Business's Yearly Revenue;
e. Research Economical Development Strategies & Economic Science.

3. Secures the WAOED's financial aid properties such as:

a. Loan Offices;
b. Money Transfer Stations;
c. Economical Analysis Centers / Institutions.

Proposal Abandoned: I'm studying on Proposals for the next week to month then I'll try again thanks for my supporters and people who pointed out the bad parts!

The World Assembly—
Recognizing the former resolutions under The [Reformed] World Assembly that target Economic Development & Economic Input / Output,

Further recognizing The World Assembly's choice of Yearly Budget Spending being further pushed towards entertainment in the workplace,

Analysing the severe economical affects on small business' and global commerce, negatively affecting more then (approx.) Hundreds of Thousands of nations,

Hereby Establishes,

1. A Subcommittee on Economical Development.

I. Responsible for advisory of Economical Development & Research related issues.
II. Responsible for data collection under a universal global Economical census.

2. A maximum amount of [b]Five Hundred Million (local currency) to World Assembly sponsored global cooperation initiatives.

I. Establishes a standardized maximum amount of 500,000,000.00 on global & inter-regional Cooperation, such as global waste management or agriculture initiatives

3. A Global Economical Development Census.

I. A system responsible for detection of increases or decreases in economic output.

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[Islandwalk]

Hi there, this looks like it's illegal by rule 1. c., as all your proposal does is establish a committee. It's also generally considered bad practice to include specific numbers for many things including currency in WA legislation, instead you'll want to be descriptive about what this program does instead of explaining how much money it has to accomplish those aims.

In your preambulatory clauses you should be a lot clearer about what your intent is and what issue you want to target. Is the second line sarcasm? Your third line implies something is causing that but never identifies what.

[Lipizia]

1: Proposal never start with a link. Or at least is very unusual.
2:

2. A maximum amount of Five Hundred Million (local currency) to World Assembly sponsored global cooperation initiatives.
I. Establishes a standardized maximum amount of 500,000,000.00 on global & inter-regional Cooperation, such as global waste management or agriculture initiatives

Local currency? If my Lipoto values 1,5 USD I can spend the equivalent of 750M dollars in WA, but If then there is inflation and now it values 1,2 USD, now I can spend only the equivalent of 600M dollars?
3: How already Islandwalk said, I think it's unlegal for 1c.
4: And I think the proposal it's a bit unclear. Maybe this is a my problem, but I can't understand well what it aims for.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

1: Proposal never start with a link. Or at least is very unusual

Actually it’s illegal - R4(a). You can link to nations, regions and WA resolutions but nothing else.

[Lipizia]

1: Proposal never start with a link. Or at least is very unusual

Actually it’s illegal - R4(a). You can link to nations, regions and WA resolutions but nothing else.

Ah, thank you for claryifing.

[Daan Island]

1: Proposal never start with a link. Or at least is very unusual

Actually it’s illegal - R4(a). You can link to nations, regions and WA resolutions but nothing else.

Oh, thank you, I will worker to further advance the proposal

[Daan Island]

Hi there, this looks like it's illegal by rule 1. c., as all your proposal does is establish a committee. It's also generally considered bad practice to include specific numbers for many things including currency in WA legislation, instead you'll want to be descriptive about what this program does instead of explaining how much money it has to accomplish those aims.

In your preambulatory clauses you should be a lot clearer about what your intent is and what issue you want to target. Is the second line sarcasm? Your third line implies something is causing that but never identifies what.

Thank you, i will try my best to update it and rework it, and learn more!