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The Sherpa Empire wrote:It is common for NSG trolls to stir more shit in a month than what Vilita did over a period of 20 years.
by Pineappleistania » Fri Oct 27, 2023 1:54 am
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by Legalese » Fri Oct 27, 2023 8:47 am
Pineappleistania wrote:Users like Vilita have certainly had a greater positive impact on the community than the mistakes that they have made.
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Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:What can I say? I do know how to improve this out of all measure though. Firstly, print out your draft on some nice paper. Secondly, take your draft out for a healthy walk in the country. Next find a field of cows and feed the draft to them. Finally just wait - the improved end product will come out of their ends so to speak.
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by Namwenia » Wed Apr 03, 2024 11:01 am
Shocked by the revelation that the sporting organisations of Vilita and Turori committed a sustained campaign of deception in the sporting community, including entering undisclosed participants into at least a dozen tournaments in order to bypass permissible limits.
Appalled by the harassing behaviour of some of these undisclosed participants across multiple regions of within the sporting community.
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by Ko-oren » Sun Apr 07, 2024 1:17 am
The Ice States wrote:To be honest, I'm not convinced by this.
Namwenia wrote:OOC: Based on the evidence presented against Vilita and Turori, I am open to supporting a repeal.
However, a few suggestions to some of the central portion's language to keep it "in character," so to speak and to prevent usage of words like "puppets."Shocked by the revelation that the sporting organisations of Vilita and Turori committed a sustained campaign of deception in the sporting community, including entering undisclosed participants into at least a dozen tournaments in order to bypass permissible limits.
Appalled by the harassing behaviour of some of these undisclosed participants across multiple regions of within the sporting community.
I'd also suggest providing some additional information to the "Disturbed" line.
Thanks.
by Namwenia » Mon Apr 08, 2024 10:45 am
Ko-oren wrote:Thanks, I've made a version 0.3.The Ice States wrote:To be honest, I'm not convinced by this.
Are you not convinced by the content/topic, or the wording?Namwenia wrote:OOC: Based on the evidence presented against Vilita and Turori, I am open to supporting a repeal.
However, a few suggestions to some of the central portion's language to keep it "in character," so to speak and to prevent usage of words like "puppets."
I'd also suggest providing some additional information to the "Disturbed" line.
Thanks.
I like this as a way to translate OOC into IC, I'm trying to find a way to phrase that's a little harsher than 'undisclosed participants'. It goes beyond entering a single athlete into a competition they shouldn't have. I've decided against the use of 'within': these region(s) are open to all and are not limited to the sporting community.
by The Ice States » Mon Apr 08, 2024 1:04 pm
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