Diarcesia wrote:7 Trees wrote:Thoughts? viewtopic.php?f=6&t=543799
I think it's good, but I'd like feedback. Thanks!
Edit: I'm working on the frequent flyer section.
Minor nitpick: I don't think business class passengers would like their IFE screen on their side instead of their front.
Thanks for the feedback! When generating the image my thought was that the screen would pivot and turn to face you.
Neu Engollon wrote:7 Trees wrote:Thoughts? viewtopic.php?f=6&t=543799
I think it's good, but I'd like feedback. Thanks!
Edit: I'm working on the frequent flyer section.
The large logo on the OP is cool, but it evokes land travel with the cars, instead of air travel in the sky. Just first impression for me.
Economy Class :"Why settle for cheap, uncomfortable seats when you can fly with FlyWay, our economy seats are made of leather and we use only the best material so your flight is not just cheap but also comfortable."
- Just a minor point, instead of calling your seats 'cheap', I would say 'economical'. In RL, airlines don't usually refer to them as the 'cheap seats' even though in reality, they are. They use words that make customers feel better that they're saving money. I would still keep the first 'cheap' in the sentence, because you're referring to other airlines and you do want to make them look worse, but change the second 'cheap' in the sentence to 'economical'. You already called them economy seats, after all. Again, no one here on NS will really care, but if you're going for keeping the reader to feeling like they're on a real airline website, details like that matter.
Otherwise, it looks great and you have a lot of the major details down. You could maybe throw in meal service in there, and how passengers can order their meals and other accommodations ahead of their flights, such as assistants for solo flying children and disabled folks, but...you've got plenty in there already.
Thanks! Instead of economical what about affordable, I think it fits the bill better since we are talking about price. I was going to include a food sections, but I don't know what to have in it. For the log I was thinking it more as leaving the traffic behind, but you are right, it does somewhat point towards car travel.