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Random Country 453632
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Postby Random Country 453632 » Sun Sep 19, 2021 10:24 pm

There are other references to video games in issues, like in one issue I got about recording inside the judicial court, option 4 was a reference to phoenix wright
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Postby Alcala-Cordel » Sun Sep 19, 2021 10:37 pm

YES!!!

I think I have a few ideas that might make your sentences sound smoother if you want to use them.


Part of option 1 could be changed to "decorated with so many medals that the compass on your desk points to @@HIM@@." (wording change)

Result: @@NAME@@ has declared war on East Lebtuck after the Chief Advisor of government was discovered to be an impostor from East Lebatuck


Option 3. (Removed comma) "I'm sure a polite letter of complaint would work?" argues ardent pacifist @@RANDOMNAME@@. "Just fire @@RANDOMNAME_1@@ from the government and send a non-threatening letter of complaint to the government of East Lebatuck to withdraw any other impostors they have here. That would work well, wouldn't it?"



(Option 4 result tense change) the nation imposed sanctions on East Lebatuck after the Chief Advisor was discovered to be an impostor from East Lebatuck.

Option 5 (reorder) "TRAITOR!!!" roars right-wing nationalist politician @@RANDOMNAME@@ Don't listen to those liberal scumbags! "We should have zero mercy towards @@RANDOMNAME_1@@ and any impostors infitrating the glory of the @@PRETITLE@@! @@HE_1@@ should be thrown into a rocket and ejected into space.



I love it and I don't mean to be a grammar nazi or anything, but I think the slight alterations make it a little smoother.
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The Python
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Postby The Python » Mon Sep 20, 2021 5:04 pm

Alcala-Cordel wrote:YES!!!

I think I have a few ideas that might make your sentences sound smoother if you want to use them.

Sus.
Alcala-Cordel wrote:-sus-

Done, thanks for the feedback!
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Nicholas and Great Britain
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Postby Nicholas and Great Britain » Tue Sep 21, 2021 12:13 am

Kinda sus ngl

This is actually quite a good issue though.

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The Python
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Postby The Python » Tue Sep 21, 2021 7:45 pm

Nicholas and Great Britain wrote:Kinda sus ngl

Very.

However, my question still hasn't been answered:
The Python wrote:What would y'all think about Zarulia's suggestion to make it a followup of 679.1?
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Postby Kors » Wed Sep 22, 2021 8:15 pm

The Python wrote:
Nicholas and Great Britain wrote:Kinda sus ngl

Very.

However, my question still hasn't been answered:
The Python wrote:What would y'all think about Zarulia's suggestion to make it a followup of 679.1?

Nah.
Best to keep it to itself.
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The Python
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Postby The Python » Wed Sep 22, 2021 10:33 pm

Kors wrote:
The Python wrote:Very.

However, my question still hasn't been answered:

Nah.
Best to keep it to itself.


Alright, though if someone else suggests that it's better to make it a followup I'll seriously consider it :P

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Postby The Python » Sun Sep 26, 2021 2:41 pm

I finally intend to susmit this issus in a date among us around 5 Octobsus.
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Postby Archinstinct » Sun Sep 26, 2021 4:58 pm

In among us it's a meme to accuse somebody of being the impostor if they chose the color red. Have you considered an option where everyone who wears red clothing is labeled as suspicious?
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The Python
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Postby The Python » Sun Sep 26, 2021 5:21 pm

Archinstinct wrote:In among us it's a meme to accuse somebody of being the impostor if they chose the color red. Have you considered an option where everyone who wears red clothing is labeled as suspicious?

Okay, I decided to change the impostor's name to "Amos Red" instead of it being randomized then :P
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Postby Archinstinct » Sun Sep 26, 2021 5:39 pm

You could reference the game being years old and only becoming well known recently. Is there an option which talks about intelligence? Maybe add a reference in which a character is talking about outdated intelligence, years old just being rediscovered?
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Postby The Python » Sun Sep 26, 2021 7:35 pm

Archinstinct wrote:You could reference the game being years old and only becoming well known recently. Is there an option which talks about intelligence? Maybe add a reference in which a character is talking about outdated intelligence, years old just being rediscovered?

Right, I changed the issue description:
The Python wrote:@@NAME@@'s Supreme United Security (SUS) council, when looking through old intelligence information, found that your Chief Advisor Amos Red was an impostor from East Lebatuck sent to infiltrate the @@PRETITLE@@! As a result, an emergency meeting has been called to discuss the incident.

Anyway, Option 4 has almost completely been changed now, what do y'all think?
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Postby Kors » Mon Sep 27, 2021 8:02 pm

Better wait until an issues editor has their opinion on this.
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Postby Random Country 453632 » Tue Sep 28, 2021 12:11 am

This issue became amazing!
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Postby Porde » Tue Sep 28, 2021 12:24 am

I want an issus about FNF!
To be frank, this is cool!
Please, don't fucking remind me of my 2021-2022 posts. I was a stupid teenager when I made those.

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Postby Jutsa » Tue Sep 28, 2021 9:23 am

Sust a heads usp: don't be susprisused if you get your issus writing privileges suspended after susmitting thisus.

Sust as I will losus mine for writing thsus comment.

Incidentally, I can't tell whether I love this or hate this. I feel like it should be both with a lot more hate and a touch of salt.

Porde wrote:I want an issus about FNF!
To be frank, this is cool!

It definitely would liven things up to have this be a pop culture one-stop horse shop instead of a one-trick pony. Speaking of, no blue-eye skeletons or god knows what else? :p
(Then again we wouldn't want to detract too much from the not-yet-vintage volatile flavor this presently wreaks.)
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Postby Outer Sparta » Tue Sep 28, 2021 3:20 pm

Kors wrote:Better wait until an issues editor has their opinion on this.

I agree. All the feedback is essentially just memes and nothing really constructive.
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Postby Random Country 453632 » Tue Sep 28, 2021 8:12 pm

A bunch of the issues i get have weird and/or funny sentences. They also have weird, unusual adjectives.

I have something here not from any issue and made up. Not really good at vocabulary matters, but should be good enough, I guess?

(the example is whether teachers should be allowed to be females or not, also this is made up) "These female teaching, underweight beans are taking up too much of the industry! Gender equality is better than these baby bottle-shaped long-haired girls dominating the schools of Testlandia! Or better yet, no female teachers at all! We're more serious than them, right?"


..or something like that. Never drafted an issue once. Just look at existing issues
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Postby Octahedralia » Wed Sep 29, 2021 8:10 pm

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Postby Random Country 453632 » Sun Oct 03, 2021 5:29 pm

Oh boy, this sussue is going to be submitted, wishus yousus luckus!
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Postby Apatosaurus » Wed Oct 06, 2021 5:09 pm

(Took me a while to respond to this)

Ok, as per what Kors and Outer Sparta said I'll be holding off on submitting this for now.

Random Country 453632 wrote:A bunch of the issues i get have weird and/or funny sentences. They also have weird, unusual adjectives.

I have something here not from any issue and made up. Not really good at vocabulary matters, but should be good enough, I guess?

(the example is whether teachers should be allowed to be females or not, also this is made up) "These female teaching, underweight beans are taking up too much of the industry! Gender equality is better than these baby bottle-shaped long-haired girls dominating the schools of Testlandia! Or better yet, no female teachers at all! We're more serious than them, right?"


..or something like that. Never drafted an issue once. Just look at existing issues

Hmm okay, any specific suggestions though?
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Postby Apatosaurus » Sun Oct 10, 2021 8:15 pm

if u dont give feedback u are a sussy baka and probably the impostor (bump)
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Postby Outer Sparta » Sun Oct 10, 2021 9:26 pm

Apatosaurus wrote:if u dont give feedback u are a sussy baka and probably the impostor (bump)

I still recommend you get editor feedback.
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Postby Random Country 453632 » Sun Oct 10, 2021 10:21 pm

East Lebtuck

Change of mispel
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Postby The Kingdom of the Three Isles » Sun Oct 10, 2021 10:23 pm

AMOGUS! :shock: :rofl:
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