Somerania wrote:Powers : Electrokinesis Yuri can control electricity in various ways such as electrical aura, electric discharge, electrical beam emission, lightning bolt projection, supercharge, electricity defense, lightning ball form and electronic disruption, he has come up for two of his techniques but the rest are unnamed.
Make then named please. Also, fill out the details of the ones yet to be detailed below.
Somerania wrote:Electrical aura: Yuri can release and surround himself in/with electricity for defensive and/or offensive purposes, possibly becoming almost untouchable and granting them various abilities/attacks.
How long can he keep this up for? "Almost untouchable" what can make it past the shield?
Somerania wrote:[Electric discharge: Yuri can create a large amount of electricity and release it causing an explosion around him, he can use it to to create small explosions around him that are not big enough to kill him and do a big enough explosion big enough to destroy a building but it would also kill him in the process.
How small of an explosion is considered small here? How big of a building can be destroyed.
Somerania wrote:Electrobeam (Electrical beam emission): Yuri can gather a large amount of electricity in his hand, concentrate it and launch it as a beam.
What's the maximum distance of this 'beam'? What's it's destructive potential?
Somerania wrote:Thunderball: named after a James bond movie this technique is a variant of the electrical beam beam except it is concentrated into a ball and launched at the enemy, the ball explodes on impact, since Yuri hasn't trained or refined this technique it might explode in his face.
Again, range and destructive potential.
Somerania wrote:Lightning bolt: Yuri can create a lightning bolt and fire it from his hands, the differences between this and get electrical beam emission is that this is much faster to use as travels much faster, this may only shock or paralyze the enemy while the electrical beam emission has a higher chance of killing.
I take it this is just a fancy name for a hand casted tazer, otherwise casting lightning bolts would kill the current electricity manipulators a few dozen times over. So I request specifics regarding it's destructive capacity and range.
Somerania wrote:Equipment: he can get some cool stuff later
Speak now or forever hold your peace.
What are the user's natural limits? May is incredibly vague regarding weaknesses. It's a grey term for what is expected to be a black and white category. It will be a weakness or it won't.Somerania wrote:Weaknesses: Users of Electrical Immunity are not affected, distance, force, precision, etc. depend upon the knowledge, skill, and strength of the user and their power's natural limits, may become useless if confronted with electrical resistant material, such as rubber, silicate, may have problems using electronics, may hurt allies around him by losing control of his power
Somerania wrote:Backstory: Yuri was born in January 21st 1994 in a small hospital in Vladivostok, his mother died giving birth to him soon stricken with grief his father decided to leave Russia and settle in new York hoping to start a new life, Yuri was very close with his father since he was the only family Yuri had, Yuri's father taught him Russian and many other things about their homeland, Yuri's father was an NYPD officer, Yuri's father almost died during the night of the broken mask, soon after that Yuri discovered his own metahuman powers, his father did everything to hide it to protect his son during those troubling times.
At age 15 during his rebellious phase Yuri used to sneak out of school and pickpocket strangers then use his gains for him an his friend's entertainment another thing he liked to do was experiment with his powers, since Yuri's father was a busy man Yuri most of the time could do whatever he wanted to do, he also played games but his sole healthy hobby was that he liked to cook and his father encouraged it, Yuri often made dinner and lunch.
In March 2nd 2017 when Yuri was coming to his apartment which he had since he moved out in 2015 he was informed that his father was shot dead while confronting a thief in some alleyway, Yuri later tried to scrounge up all the information he could find out about said thief, one day Yuri tracked the thief down and killed the thief in the most painful way imaginable, for the next years he trained his powers and made various techniques inside a small abandoned garage in the city which was his hideout, he als did a lot of vigilante stuff in new York City, last month he came into contact with some TIAMA members and he agreed to join the organization going with the name "Perkunos".
This bio is three run on sentences. As well as typos and syntaxical errors. Please rectify this.