Araraukar wrote:OOC: Call it something else but convention? That's almost as annoying as titles starting with "on". It's an act on data protection, so just go with Data Protection Act? Or just simply "Data Protection". It's supposed to be a title, not a description.
OOC: I dislike adding "act" in a title, and Data Protection is an incomplete phrase. I personally like the current title and the UN regularly uses it.
Kenmoria wrote:Marxist Germany wrote:OOC: Submitting this next hour because I see no reason not to. Any complaints should be made now not at vote.
(OOC: I’m just about in the time limit; there should either: not be a comma after ‘user’ in clause 3d, or one after ‘non-user’ as well. Personally, I prefer the former option.)
Done.