Union Princes wrote:Any character from Dascus want to meet up with my knight?
I'd like to do so.
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by Union Princes » Tue Jul 02, 2019 7:17 pm
by Galnius » Tue Jul 02, 2019 7:29 pm
by Skyggeheim » Tue Jul 02, 2019 8:11 pm
by Tomia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 8:15 pm
Skyggeheim wrote:Hey Tom, in order to clear a sort of sensitive topic - or one that could be - is it okay if Hercynia practices slavery?
I want to avoid any problematic writings, but I figured we're going to address some of the realities of what seems like a relatively brutal universe, so I thought I'd ask before I write it in.
To clarify, I won't write anything disgusting or abhorrent. It's more of a semantics question.
by Skyggeheim » Tue Jul 02, 2019 8:18 pm
Tomia wrote:Skyggeheim wrote:Hey Tom, in order to clear a sort of sensitive topic - or one that could be - is it okay if Hercynia practices slavery?
I want to avoid any problematic writings, but I figured we're going to address some of the realities of what seems like a relatively brutal universe, so I thought I'd ask before I write it in.
To clarify, I won't write anything disgusting or abhorrent. It's more of a semantics question.
Ya I get you, and I appreciate the sensitivity, however, Zark would be the one to ask if slavery would exist in Hercynia. I could certainly see it but I don't want to confirm it until he gives the okay.
So if you are trying to finish your post I would say include it but be prepared to take it out if that's what Zark decides.
by Tomia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 8:20 pm
Skyggeheim wrote:Tomia wrote:Ya I get you, and I appreciate the sensitivity, however, Zark would be the one to ask if slavery would exist in Hercynia. I could certainly see it but I don't want to confirm it until he gives the okay.
So if you are trying to finish your post I would say include it but be prepared to take it out if that's what Zark decides.
My logic is, they think they're superior to others(especially other beastfolk). Raiding runs or those captured trying to enter their borders would probably not have much of a bright life left ahead of them.
by Skyggeheim » Tue Jul 02, 2019 8:55 pm
by Tomia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 9:02 pm
Skyggeheim wrote:Post up. Included some worldbuilding about the Ko'el end of Hercynia.
by Skyggeheim » Tue Jul 02, 2019 9:04 pm
by Union Princes » Tue Jul 02, 2019 9:14 pm
by The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune » Tue Jul 02, 2019 9:15 pm
by Sarderia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 9:20 pm
by Union Princes » Tue Jul 02, 2019 9:45 pm
by Tomia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 9:55 pm
Sarderia wrote:Done. That was a particularly dark one, I think. Don't have the time to [img] all the doctor strange magic thingies so I suppose you all can figure it out
by Sarderia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 10:00 pm
Tomia wrote:Sarderia wrote:Done. That was a particularly dark one, I think. Don't have the time to [img] all the doctor strange magic thingies so I suppose you all can figure it out
Few things to address about the post Sarderia. Frist, no mind reading, that wasn't mentioned at all in the app and I don't think its a power magic could reasonably granted. Second, I don' think the General publicly ordered the attack. It would kind of defeat the purpose of the peace expedition in the temple. Thirdly, honestly this post kind of confirmed the fears I was having about the character in the review process. This char seems like an angry unstable villain who openly confessed to murder. I just don't see how that character fits into the hammer of Eboris.
Its not that the quality of the post was off, it really wasn't, in fact it was well written. But I feel like this was exactly the direction of the character I was trying to steer you away from in the review process.
by Tomia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 10:01 pm
Sarderia wrote:Tomia wrote:Few things to address about the post Sarderia. Frist, no mind reading, that wasn't mentioned at all in the app and I don't think its a power magic could reasonably granted. Second, I don' think the General publicly ordered the attack. It would kind of defeat the purpose of the peace expedition in the temple. Thirdly, honestly this post kind of confirmed the fears I was having about the character in the review process. This char seems like an angry unstable villain who openly confessed to murder. I just don't see how that character fits into the hammer of Eboris.
Its not that the quality of the post was off, it really wasn't, in fact it was well written. But I feel like this was exactly the direction of the character I was trying to steer you away from in the review process.
Hmm, very reasonable. I very much want to write a dark character so that I forgot our discussions lmfao, I'm taking the post down and probably will post the edit later
by Sarderia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 10:04 pm
by Galnius » Tue Jul 02, 2019 10:05 pm
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