Draos wrote:Faction Name: Zal Cartel
Leader: Fein Zal
Number of Members: 1500
Number of ships: 25
Types of Ships: 1 Marauder class corvette 1 YT-1300 freighter 15 RZ-52 Dekard Transports 8 TZ-15 Transports
Description: Smuggling Organization
Backstory(How your faction Came about, 2 Paragraphs Minimum): Thuy Novert founded what would become the Zal cartel in 22 BBY as the clone wars began. The Devaronian female sold supplies and information to both the Republic and Separatists. Using her wits and cunning she built a small but sizable enterprise that continued to run contraband after the Decleration of a New Order She would run Contraband past Imperial forces often by seducing or bribing local officials.
In about 1 ABY she met a young Duros by the name of Fein Zal drinking in an Orbital city on the planet of Duro. Seeing potential in the Depressed young being she enlisted him to her Organization. Fein Quickly rose through the ranks becoming her second in Command. after almost 30 years Novert retired leaving Zal to lead what she had built into a new age. And lead he did Quickly seizing numerous ships from the shattered remnants of the Zann Consortium mostly old troop transports that were converted into smuggling vessels and establishing a base on the outer rim planet of Taris under the alias of the Taris Commercial Shipping Company or TCS for short.
Seems fine to me.