New Sriker wrote:Vulkata II wrote:As co-op I do believe I have the right to criticize your app but neither reject nor accept it in fear of fucking up.
Now, I know that not everyone is fluent in English and truth be told your app is understandable but a few punctuation marks and uppercase letters are out of placed.
Secondly his personality is too vague, a person can't have just one personality through their life plus Kind and Friendly could mean anything, what if an SS officer has a chance to grab his gun would he kill him or not seeing as he is friendly.
Plus you said that his father skedaddled but later on, his uncle who is a KKK collaborator, joins him in the fight with the ALA even though I doubt someone wouldn't go looking for his son-in-law, have friendly chit chat and two years later would to AWOL.
And him being an ALA collaborater but not knowing anyone in the ALA, how did he get in in the first place? If he has ten tons of posters in his home then surely he got it from somewhere or else he'd have to steal them. And if he does have ten tons of posters, it would mean he would be acquinted and trusted already.
I'll let the others decide but if you want my suggestion, think your character through and repost once done.
Sorry Sort of rushed to get it done I will make a New app thanks for the feedback.
Let us know when you update your app