Illegal SC proposals - post them here

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No sorry necessary. Relevant ruling (last paragraph), FYI.

[Lenlyvit]

Security Council Proposal
ID: the_grand_1521157486

Liberate Spam
A resolution to strike down Delegate-imposed barriers to free entry in a region.

Category: Liberation

Nominee (region): Spam

Proposed by: The Grand

Seeing that Spam has been raided by the Pacific and nation have been starting to leave.
Noting that the raiders started to suppress the native nations, leading to natives trying to annoy the raiders through typing actual spam.
Disappointed that a decent sized region has now been led to a population of 4 currently, where in recent months they were over 100 nations strong.
Concerned that this silly region will never come back and possibly spread more silliness.
Also Observing that this region had to create an entirely new region, Lardyland
Hope we can Liberate them these spammers

Pretty sure this violates R3. Or at least, I don't see an operative clause.

[Lenlyvit]

Security Council Proposal
ID: algerstonia_1521338367

Liberate The Black Hawks
A resolution to strike down Delegate-imposed barriers to free entry in a region.

Category: Liberation

Nominee (region): The Black Hawks

Proposed by: Algerstonia

Angry that The Black Hawks regularly terrorize regions for fun,
Horrified that on one infamous night, The Black Hawks invaded and destroyed a triple-digit amount of regions,
Outraged that The Black Hawks have puppet regions such as Violet Irises that also regularly kills regions,
Disgusted that The Black Hawks takes condemnations as rewards, and have received two,
Confident that a liberation is the key to stopping The Black Hawks reign of terror,
Knowing that The Black Hawks is interfering with the World Assembly's goal to bring region-wide peace,
This resolution
Hereby
Liberates The Black Hawks

Is "puppet regions" compliant with SC rules? I believe it is, but I just wanted to check.

[Ransium]

Security Council Proposal
ID: algerstonia_1521338367

Liberate The Black Hawks
A resolution to strike down Delegate-imposed barriers to free entry in a region.

Category: Liberation

Nominee (region): The Black Hawks

Proposed by: Algerstonia

Angry that The Black Hawks regularly terrorize regions for fun,
Horrified that on one infamous night, The Black Hawks invaded and destroyed a triple-digit amount of regions,
Outraged that The Black Hawks have puppet regions such as Violet Irises that also regularly kills regions,
Disgusted that The Black Hawks takes condemnations as rewards, and have received two,
Confident that a liberation is the key to stopping The Black Hawks reign of terror,
Knowing that The Black Hawks is interfering with the World Assembly's goal to bring region-wide peace,
This resolution
Hereby
Liberates The Black Hawks

Is "puppet regions" compliant with SC rules? I believe it is, but I just wanted to check.

It’s fine.

[Vancovaria]

Security Council Resolution #245 “Liberate KAISERREICH” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

Noting the intent of Security Council Resolution #245 ;

Aware that Security Council Resolution #245 was passed on emotional grounds by far left movements;

Stating that Kaiserreich is not a fascist region but instead a Monarchist based region;

Believing SC Resolution #245 is a clear and evident attempt to justify raids against Kaiserreich upon the founder’s cease to exist;

Reminding that hostile organizations that engage in raiding actions are a common enemy to the Security Council as seen in past resolutions, including recent legislation such as,

Security Council Resolution 188 condemned the nation of Vandoosa for participating in multiple raiding organizations and raider operations,

Security Council Resolution 217 condemned the region of The Black Hawks for an extensive raider operations internationally,

Security Council Resolution 225 condemned the nation of Reventus Koth for leading and participating in raider operations;

Acknowledging that the Security Council should take steps to fight discrimination and discriminatory beliefs but believes this is a step in the wrong direction;

Clarifying that the claims against Kaiserreich are poorly backed by off-site history, a history which has changed regardless;

Additionally Stating this is yet another far-left attempt to justify raider actions by branding a target;

Hereby repeals Liberate Kaiserreich.

I'm not entirely sure whether this is properly illegal or not, but it looks like it's ideologically overcharged...not to mention concern trolling. And also:

[Lenlyvit]

Security Council Resolution #245 “Liberate KAISERREICH” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

Noting the intent of Security Council Resolution #245 ;

Aware that Security Council Resolution #245 was passed on emotional grounds by far left movements;

Stating that Kaiserreich is not a fascist region but instead a Monarchist based region;

Believing SC Resolution #245 is a clear and evident attempt to justify raids against Kaiserreich upon the founder’s cease to exist;

Reminding that hostile organizations that engage in raiding actions are a common enemy to the Security Council as seen in past resolutions, including recent legislation such as,

Security Council Resolution 188 condemned the nation of Vandoosa for participating in multiple raiding organizations and raider operations,

Security Council Resolution 217 condemned the region of The Black Hawks for an extensive raider operations internationally,

Security Council Resolution 225 condemned the nation of Reventus Koth for leading and participating in raider operations;

Acknowledging that the Security Council should take steps to fight discrimination and discriminatory beliefs but believes this is a step in the wrong direction;

Clarifying that the claims against Kaiserreich are poorly backed by off-site history, a history which has changed regardless;

Additionally Stating this is yet another far-left attempt to justify raider actions by branding a target;

Hereby repeals Liberate Kaiserreich.

I'm not entirely sure whether this is properly illegal or not, but it looks like it's ideologically overcharged...not to mention concern trolling. And also:

Off-site breaks Rule 4(c) I believe. Its mentioning it as a game.

[Ransium]

Yes R4(c)

[Herby]

Security Council Proposal
ID: sperio_1521483601

Repeal: “Liberate KAISERREICH”

A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal
Resolution: SC#245
Proposed by: Sperio
Security Council Resolution #245 “Liberate KAISERREICH” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

The Security Council,

noting that the Region of Kaiserreich has no barriers

pointing out that

A. According to a citizen, the nations in question were only joking

B. A Liberation would only work in this case if the nations in question

* really ment it

* had taken over the region

C. This is a resolution based on hurt feelings and over reaction

Herby Repels #245

Ohhhh ho ho ho ho no I don’t. I know I may be repelling sometimes but nah.

[Wrapper]

Actually I marked it legal. We shouldn't penalize for bad spelling. Not even this bad.

[Malphe]

Actually I marked it legal. We shouldn't penalize for bad spelling. Not even this bad.

imo spelling becomes a legal issue when it begins seriously compromising the proposal's functionality, as opposed to being annoying. This one might as well have no repeal clause since it's spelt wrong.

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We've discussed it, and it's been marked illegal.

[Lenlyvit]

Security Council Proposal
ID: rapee_1521595521

Repeal: “Liberate KAISERREICH”
A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: SC#245

Proposed by: Rapee

Security Council Resolution #245 “Liberate KAISERREICH” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

To The Security Council,
I Propose A Repeal This resolution by Those Resons
1. Kaiserreich is Not Entirely Facist/Nazi as Lanlyvit Claim. In fact They are Pretty Monarchist (Their Region Name mean "Imperial Realm/Empire" In Their Native Language) Also Thieir Founder Hold The Title "Kaiser" (Which Mean "Emperor" In Their Native Language)

2.As I had Visted Their Region Before I Garuntee You. The Honourable Council.
That They are Such Nice Lovely People
Sometimes They May look So Rude
But It Just A Personal habit. Is Not The Entire
Region To blame for.

Best Regards
The United Kingdom Of Rapee

R3 violation, no operative clause

[Lenlyvit]

Security Council Proposal
ID: america_nll_1521744674

Repeal: “Liberate KAISERREICH”
A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: SC#245

Proposed by: America nll

Security Council Resolution #245 “Liberate KAISERREICH” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

To Fellow Northerners
Acknowledge: I am in no way condoning the utilization of Nazi or SS propaganda, to argue I must cite in the resolution line4 " Abhorred by the regions use of hate speech behind closed doors in its hallowed halls" no sir you dare not.

Using "hate speech" is not a crime and this is an obtuse statement blatantly disregarding the right of the people to free and just speech

To Conclude we must repeal and oppose such disregard for the rights of the common man, And bring forth new legislation that does not become a detractor in our work, this resolution is ignorant and a blatant disregard of rights

I Hereby oppose this bill as America nll

R2(d), R3, R4(b/d)

[Ransium]

Security Council Proposal
ID: america_nll_1521744674

Repeal: “Liberate KAISERREICH”
A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: SC#245

Proposed by: America nll

Security Council Resolution #245 “Liberate KAISERREICH” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

To Fellow Northerners
Acknowledge: I am in no way condoning the utilization of Nazi or SS propaganda, to argue I must cite in the resolution line4 " Abhorred by the regions use of hate speech behind closed doors in its hallowed halls" no sir you dare not.

Using "hate speech" is not a crime and this is an obtuse statement blatantly disregarding the right of the people to free and just speech

To Conclude we must repeal and oppose such disregard for the rights of the common man, And bring forth new legislation that does not become a detractor in our work, this resolution is ignorant and a blatant disregard of rights

I Hereby oppose this bill as America nll

R2(d), R3, R4(b/d)

Marked illegal.

[Lenlyvit]

Security Council Proposal
ID: banterool_1521822611

Repeal: “Liberate Nazi Europa”
A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: SC#246

Proposed by: Banterool

Security Council Resolution #246 “Liberate Nazi Europa” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

I propose that you you try not to liberate the region with the august body or else you want to make Nazi Europa vulnerable while about 15334 are against the idea practically im not taking side but rather letting you be aware of what your about to do on your behalf of these sides.

I'm not even going to try to name the rules broken, cause I don't know :/

[Ransium]

Security Council Proposal
ID: banterool_1521822611

Repeal: “Liberate Nazi Europa”
A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: SC#246

Proposed by: Banterool

Security Council Resolution #246 “Liberate Nazi Europa” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

I propose that you you try not to liberate the region with the august body or else you want to make Nazi Europa vulnerable while about 15334 are against the idea practically im not taking side but rather letting you be aware of what your about to do on your behalf of these sides.

I'm not even going to try to name the rules broken, cause I don't know :/

R3 R4(d)

[Fratt]

A truly outstanding one.

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1521842872

Repeal: “Commend Kandarin”

A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal
Resolution: SC#2
Proposed by: RSFCR

Security Council Resolution #2 “Commend Kandarin” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

I have done this already and I’ll do it again, if Kandarin is in control of multiple Regions, he had been promoted there by endorsements, meaning he has a Multiple WA accounts, which however well meaning, is illegal due to the imbalance of power, created specifically so a person CANT rule several regions at once. Meaning he should not be commended.

Using a proposal to address issues that should be dealt with elsewhere (Rule 2c).
Lack of an operative clause (Rule 3).
Referring to nations as players (various uses of "he", Rule 4b).
Not written from the perspective of the WA ("I have done this...", Rule 4d).

[Lenlyvit]

Ninja'd by Fratt.

Security Council Proposal
ID: thirtyfour_1521841649

Repeal: “Liberate Nazi Europa”
A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: SC#246

Proposed by: ThirtyFour

Security Council Resolution #246 “Liberate Nazi Europa” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

Repeal "Liberate Nazi Europea". This nation is no threat to the Nation States Community. It is unethical to simply so this to a region because you disagree with their gameplay fantasy. It is up to them how they play the game. They don't pose a threat to the livelihood of anybody. I can think of regions such as The Black Hawks, which constantly raid and destroy regions. How could this nation be any worse then that? This legislation was unjust.

R3, R4(b/c/d) and probably others

[Fauxia]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1521939732

R2, I think

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1521940165

R4(d), I think "Dear Security Council Members" Appears to be from the submitting nation.

[Fratt]

ID: johnavion_1521911526
Condemn The Eastern Fail-igarchy
A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation
Nominee: The Eastern Fail-igarchy
Proposed by: Johnavion

Believing that [The Eastern Fail-igarchy] has plotted to liberate [The East Pacific] to gain attraction due to its low population and low knowingness level.

Concerned by the destruction of [The East Pacific] will upset the record of the Pacific regions North, South, West and East holding the Most Nations.

Disgusted by the rude remarks of [The Eastern Failed-igarchy] towards other nations in the forums in during the voting session to Liberate [The East Pacific].

Annoyed that the nation has petty reasons for liberation such as the hatred for the color pink as stated in the motto.

Disturbed by the nations unwillingness to allow regions to practice the type/form of government they do so choose.

The Security Council, with the understandings of the reasons stated above, hereby condemn [The Eastern Failed-igarchy.

Rule 3. The operative clause identifies a different nation ("The Eastern Failed-igarchy") from the one that will actually be condemned ("The Eastern Fail-igarchy"). Too pedantic?

[Lenlyvit]

Security Council Proposal
ID: alsaad_1521979225

Condemn Nazi Dictatorships
A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Nazi dictatorships

Proposed by: Alsaad

To the knowledge of all the states and regions the WA should fight the Nazi thoughts through the following plan:

First we should show them that the WA members aren't really satisfied of there actions. Secondly, they are asked to change there situation and start focusing on developing the world with us rather than sabotage it. Thirdly, if these nations didn't accept the plan and start working with the WA, the nations and regions should act to liberate the people of these countries of there unconscious leaders

R3, R4(d)

[Wrapper]

Rule 3. The operative clause identifies a different nation ("The Eastern Failed-igarchy") from the one that will actually be condemned ("The Eastern Fail-igarchy"). Too pedantic?

Not at all. I marked it illegal for that reason.

[Lenlyvit]

Security Council Proposal
ID: the_newfound_soviet_union_1522031306

Commend Femdom Empire
A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.

Category: Commendation

Nominee: Femdom Empire

Proposed by: The Newfound Soviet Union

The Security Counsel,

Disappointed by Femdom Empire's lack of genuine progressive policies whilst promoting itself to be a feminist region.

Frightened by the fascist influence in the region. The region promotes superiority based on sex and gender, and spreads hateful messages against those who do not fall in line with their extreme thought process.

Observing the oppressive border control used by the region to weed out those who do not agree with their oppressive ideology.

stressing that Femdom Empire has the potential to become a more progressive and less oppressive region, based on the merit of real Feminism, but the current regime will not let this happen.

The Security Counsel, by using the listed evidence and reason, we call upon you to condemn Femdom Empire.

Submitted under the wrong proposal type. Its meant as a Condemnation, not a Commendation.

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Nice catch. I also marked it 4(d), for the "we call upon you" bit at the end, which means it's addressing the SC and not written from the SC's perspective.

[Lenlyvit]

Security Council Proposal
ID: eastern_irvington_1522107588

Repeal: “Liberate Nazi Europa”
A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: SC#246

Proposed by: Eastern Irvington

Security Council Resolution #246 “Liberate Nazi Europa” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

Nazi Europa is a terrible place, but the WA does not have the right to infringe upon their government. They should be able to run their region as they wish.

R3, R4(d)