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Should we continued on or reboot?

Continued on
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Reboot.
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Postby Theyra » Thu Dec 01, 2016 11:41 am

Ormata wrote:
Theyra wrote:Also was the normal stomtroper accepted?


The normal stormtrooper? You mean the defector?
viewtopic.php?p=30531842#p30531842

No he hasn't. Also, there's a Trandoshian weaponsmith above (For some reason, has a flamethrower).


Just checking, will look at those.

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Postby Theyra » Thu Dec 01, 2016 11:59 am

Kentucky Fried Land wrote:Name: IJ-8209 “Upsurge”
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Appearance:Armor, Without Armor
When in public, he’ll wear a hood or robe over his armor. He is 5’11 in height, and weighs 156 pounds.
Homeworld: Taris
Force Sensitive: No
Occupation: Scout Trooper
Rank: Corporal (Stripped of Rank)
Affiliation: Independent
Background: Upsurge was born on the planet of Taris to a poor couple. He never knew his parents, as the Imperials took him away at a very early age. He was given the typical Scout trooper survivalism training. He worked with his partner, “Smokes” for the majority of his time in the force, not really getting to know the other Stormtroopers.

Upsurge had proven well at reconnaissance and assassinations, providing support for the sharpshooter Smokes. The two eventually chased a rebel target to Dantooine, where they found refuge with a group of civilians. Upsurge and Smokes found themselves more and more disillusioned from the Imperial Remnants while speaking to the civilians, as a new point of view found its way to them. Soon enough, they found their target again and made chase. The target shot and injured Smokes, infuriating Upsurge upon which he fired into an open crowd. The target was killed, and his body lay among three dead civilians. Collateral damage.

Upon his return to the Imperial Remnants, Upsurge was put into a few solo missions. Mostly, he searched for New Republic bases or tried to find Jedi, but his searches were mainly unsuccessful. Finding himself demotivated due to the loss of his best friend, he began to plan his escape. Eventually, he found his chance to escape on Coruscant, where he hopped a trade ship and flew away. He began to wear a thick robe to hide his appearance, and destroyed his radio and tracker. He was forced to ditch his rifle as well, after being found and thrown out by the crew. Stranded on Tatooine, Upsurge made his way towards Mos Eisley before the Imperial Remnants could figure out he was gone.
Ship: None
Equipment: Scout trooper armor, scout trooper blaster pistol, 1x thermal detonator, field kit
Skills: Upsurge is quick on his feet as well as quick in his mind. Intelligent in a clever sense, he doesn't know much about math or engineering, but in dangerous situations he has a knack for breaking out. He also excels at driving a speeder bike.
Weaknesses: The man is socially awkward. He has a deep remorse for killing civilians during an invasion, and as such will hesitate if presented with killing a creature. He fears flying, and is not as strong as some of his Stormtrooper “brethren.”
RP Sample: The ZONE, Halo: Trepidation, XCOM: United Front

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Will make a Smokes app soon enough. I like the idea of doing espionage for the Empire, so I wanted to go ahead and RP as him too.


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The Imperial Regions of Commerce wrote:Name: Dax Surak

Age: 34-ish

Gender: Male

Species: Trandoshan

Appearance (picture or written description):

Homeworld: Trandosha

Force Sensitive: No

Occupation: Bounty Hunter/Arms Dealer

Rank (If applicable) Founder/Salesmen

Affiliation: Redmoon Weapons Guild(I'd like this to be independent, but scince your last comment on independents, Dax will be employed by the Hutts, as Redmoon Weapons Gulid made up organization is mostly aligned with the Hutts.

Background (Two paragraphs):
Dax Surak was a Trandoshan born on Trandosha around some time close to the Battle of Endor. Dax was the youngest of his pack, his Father, Uncle, and Brother helped train him from a young age in the ways of a Sword and Blaster. Young Dax loved to take place in "Hunts," achieving record numbers of kills, but he was still young. One Hunt, a Jedi Youngling was captured, and was brought to a Small Forrest moon. During the Hunt, his father advised Dax to not enter the Hunt, for he was to inexperienced to take in the Jedi Girl, even if, she was a Youngling, Jedi's are very skilled warriors. Dax waited in the dropship, longing to go outside and prove himself further, and he grabbed a rifle and jumped onto the surface of the world. He maneuvered through the trees, jumping from one to the other, after about thirty minutes of searching the Forrest, he saw the Youngling, taking a drink from a stream. Dax could sense a rival pack moving in, and he was not going to let them steal his kill. He lifted his rifle, but the Jedi rushed around, and crushed the tree branch where Dax was clinging too. He fell onto the ground, but landed in his feet. The Youngling was about to run, but she stayed. She lifted her hands, and circled the stream, and Dax followed suit. He was thinking she was going to use the force to try to push him to the ground, so he jumped to a tree branch. The Jedi swirled around and force-crushed the branch, and Dax jumped from the destroyed tree and into the ground, and slashed a Scythe Sword that his Father gave him, and it landed into the ground. The Youngling dodged, and started running back into the dense woods. Dax pulled a pistol out from his pocket and fired it twice, and the Youngling was hit in the back, than face-planted into the mud. The Young Trandoshan lifted his sword, and lowered his blaster pistol. He gazed over the body of the girl, with a streak of smoke still exiting her back. He was startled to see a rival pack rush out of the woods, with guns drawn. They saw the dead Youngling with Dax standing over her, and then his father, brother, and uncle came out of the Forrest, surprised to see Dax. The other pack returned into the woods, and Dax's Father came up to him. He looked down at the dead Jedi, and then to his son.

"I'm proud of you, son."

That was a turning point in Dax's life. He became suited to using multiple weapons, like in the duel with the Youngling. He became a champion in Hunts, using a wide variety of weapons, what ever gun you handed him, he would use it like he was a professional with it. He always kept a Sword with him, and a Red Hydra 75 Pistol, the same one he used in the duel with the girl. Dax became a well-known name, and was called the "Green Gunner." When the First Order began to expand out from the Unknown Regions, Dax wanted to make an even larger named for himself, a war hero.He and his brother joined the Resistance, which put aside their questionable back story and recruited him. He and his brother became Sharpshooters, and fought in a few battles. Dax felt like just another solider, and when the war was over, he and his brother quit. He returned to Hunting, but started collecting weapons. He bought a Starship, and he and his brother traveled the Galaxy, buying weapons. His collection was huge, and he used many different exotic arms on the Hunting Grounds. But his collecting grew out of hand, and he spent all of his money on Weapons. His father and uncle had died of diseases earlier, and he and his Brother were alone. They started selling their weapons to get food and clothing, but he was amazed to see how many people wanted his weapons. His huge stockpile started to go down, but his income went high. His brothers started a business, Redmoon Weapons Guild, a Weapons dealer. They got some employees, bought/stole more munitions, and started getting rich. They soon turned greedy, and thought to sell more, dangerous weapons, and also, illegally. They turned into a criminal organization, which raided old munitions factories and stole unissued arms. Redmoon was still relatively small, only having about 20 members, but Dax and his brother Zaver repaired an old Imperial Assault Hovertank that was used in a Skirmish between the New Republic and Imperial Remnant. Dax hated them both, and wanted to abolish the Jedi and Sith arts together. He, his brother, and his loyal Astromech Droid Conehead would travel in their hovertank and sold weapons to shady individuals. Whenever New Republic police would catch them, they would extend the Tank's added barrel, and fire at the Police, since where they usually traveled, New Republic police would not dare go to those places, so they did not usually have to use it . The Hutt Cartel gave Dax some credits and invested into Redmoon, and has bought many weapons from Dax. They are strong allies with the Hutts, and Redmoon is heavily funded by Brabous the Hutt.


Ship: Imperial Assault Hovertank (The tank was found after a skirmish between Imperial Forces and New Republic forces., shortly after the Defeat of the First Order and was repaired and is used by the Redmoon Weapons Guild to transport products and cargo. The tank was modified with a 15 cm barrel attached to the top.)

Equipment: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Blacksca ... 22_carbine

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/HH-15_pr ... e_launcher

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/BlasTech ... ng_blaster

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/BT_X-42_flamethrower

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Scythe_blade

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Vibrodagger

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Red_Hydra_Z-5

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/R4_astromechDax owns a R4 series Astromech Droid, named "Conehead," that accompanies him and his brother on their sales


Skills: Hunter Skills, good with almost any weapon, assassin training, Very sharp senses, advanced hand-eye coordination, determination, and witt

Weakness: Greed, overconfidence, lack of understanding the force

RP sample(Either a link or a written sample): viewtopic.php?f=5&t=389142

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Finished my App. Might be some grammar errors.


So he has no ship? Just a tank?

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Postby Ormata » Thu Dec 01, 2016 12:02 pm

I'd like to also point out that that Trando has way, way too many weapons in my opinion. A two-handed sword, flamethrower, and missile launcher is overkill and not realistic in my opinion.

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Postby Whalestron » Thu Dec 01, 2016 12:07 pm

Ormata wrote:I'd like to also point out that that Trando has way, way too many weapons in my opinion. A two-handed sword, flamethrower, and missile launcher is overkill and not realistic in my opinion.

I'd say if he didn't carry all of them on his person it would be more reasonable. And depending on the size of the flamethrower it could be pretty discreet, like the ones bounty hunters generally have

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Postby Ormata » Thu Dec 01, 2016 12:08 pm

Whalestron wrote:
Ormata wrote:I'd like to also point out that that Trando has way, way too many weapons in my opinion. A two-handed sword, flamethrower, and missile launcher is overkill and not realistic in my opinion.

I'd say if he didn't carry all of them on his person it would be more reasonable. And depending on the size of the flamethrower it could be pretty discreet, like the ones bounty hunters generally have


It's not discrete. That class of flamethrower is two-handed and the size of a heavy repeating blaster.

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Postby Theyra » Thu Dec 01, 2016 12:12 pm

Ormata wrote:I'd like to also point out that that Trando has way, way too many weapons in my opinion. A two-handed sword, flamethrower, and missile launcher is overkill and not realistic in my opinion.


I see that it is a lot of guns to be carrying around. Bound to be heavy, How about you tone down the weapons a bit Whalestron.

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Postby Ormata » Thu Dec 01, 2016 12:15 pm

Theyra wrote:
Ormata wrote:I'd like to also point out that that Trando has way, way too many weapons in my opinion. A two-handed sword, flamethrower, and missile launcher is overkill and not realistic in my opinion.


I see that it is a lot of guns to be carrying around. Bound to be heavy, How about you tone down the weapons a bit Whalestron.


You mean Imperial Region of Commerce?

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Postby Theyra » Thu Dec 01, 2016 12:22 pm

Ormata wrote:
Theyra wrote:
I see that it is a lot of guns to be carrying around. Bound to be heavy, How about you tone down the weapons a bit Whalestron.


You mean Imperial Region of Commerce?


Yes, I got confused.

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Postby Whalestron » Thu Dec 01, 2016 12:42 pm

Lol, I was a bit confused myself for a minute there.

Theyra, how do you want our characters to interact?

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Postby Theyra » Thu Dec 01, 2016 1:18 pm

Whalestron wrote:Lol, I was a bit confused myself for a minute there.

Theyra, how do you want our characters to interact?


Posted finally, and now you have a way. How this works for you.

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Postby Kentucky Fried Land » Thu Dec 01, 2016 2:54 pm

Ormata wrote:Kentucky Fried Land, Upsurge can always run to the Pride of Vondarc. Men who know Comm Protocols are in short supply.

Ooh, sounds interesting. I'll make that Upsurge's goal for now.

EDIT: I guess I'll have him stowaway with one of the Jedi. Hopefully he can sneak onto one of their ships.
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Postby Shadowwell » Thu Dec 01, 2016 3:23 pm

I will be reposting my second app later, it is on the last several pages though, lol.

I can adapt the noghri to be a sith if you want though, if him being a jedi is a bit too farfetched.
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Shadowwell wrote:Application:
Name: Dib’hur
Age: 75 (Can edit to fit better0
Gender: Male
Species: Noghri
Appearance:
(Image)
He is tall, much taller than most of his kind standing at nearly 2 meters even in height, and he is just as heavily muscled as most of his kind.

Homeworld: Honoghr
Force Sensitive: Yes
Occupation: Jedi Knight
Rank (If applicable) :Knight
Affiliation: New Jedi Order
Background :

Unlike most of his other brethren who while heavily trained were meant to deal with different targets. He however was trained and raised to fight with those that wielded the Force and Lightsabers. Most of the other Force sensitive Noghri were killed, though it was made to look like an accident, as the Empire didn’t want to lose their personal Assassins. One enterprising Moff after the destruction of the first Death Star, proposed a risky venture, to Train one Noghri, a force sensitive one, to specifically combat the Jedi and those that used the force. The project was accepted, though heavily watched, eventually the project was taken over by Admiral Thrawn after the Death of the Emperor and Darth Vader. When most of his race eventually turned on the remnant of their Imperial overlords he didn’t join them, as he was always kept separate from the rest of his kind. During his time in the project created to train him he ws provided with VibroWeapons, which could reflect and block lightsabers and other things, though the training was kept basic until the time when they had him fully under their control, but that never happened.

Eventually the New Jedi Order found him, in a secret Imperial Bunker, he had killed most of his handlers when they tried to put him down. He was near feral when they found him, The only reason he did not try to fight them was because he could sense that they were not his enemies nor his prey. Eventually he was taken to the Jedi Academy of the time and they chose to train him when they discovered his skill with the force, though at that time it was mostly instinctual. He became a Jedi for many reasons chief among them being that the Force gave him a sense of serenity, that was much needed after his treatment by the empire and how he had been. Among the other reasons were for him to repay a debt and to right the wrongs his people had done after being manipulated by the Sith adn the Empire for so long, another reason was he discovered that being a Jedi was his calling, atleast for now, much like his ancestors were some of the first of the Jed'Aii, he was a new jedi of this age. After many years he became a Knight and a skilled one at that. He would eventually fight against the First Order on multiple occasions, and was sent against their Lightsaber wielders, as though he lacked the raw power of the Force, he was practically made to fight those that wielded Lightsabers. After the destruction of the Yavin Academy he almost left the Order, as the death of so many had effected the force in a way that nearly tainted the serenity it gave him.

During the 30 years since the Destruction of the First Order many things have happened to him. He had regained his serenity with some assistance of other Jedi, he also has focused on things to take his mind off of that. He has mastered the basics of the 7 forms of Lightsaber Combat, but he has only shown great talent and proficiency with 3 of the 7 forms. His talent with those 3 forms has lead to many of the Padawans and residents of the Jedi Academy to come to him for advice, well not advice as he rarely speaks, a habit retained from his extended isolation, but he is nearly always practicing the forms and many watch him and some have gained insights from that or the rare duel with him. He is not an official teacher there, but many consider him to be one due to his relative skill and wisdom when it comes to combat and the Lightsaber. though the Force and his connection to it brings him serenity, at times he runs through the wilds of Ossus and hunts, he does not kill but he still exercises his finely honed senses so they do not dull, with his age.
Ship:TBD
Equipment: 1 Sabrestaff (green, one synthetic crystal, one natural crystal), 1 curved hilt Lightsaber (Yellow), 1 Cortosis weave Vibro DoubleSword, and one normal Vibroblade/Vibroshiv. He usually uses the Saberstaff alone, the Lightsaber alone or with the Vibroblade or the Vibro DoubleSword alone. Each of these is used with a certain Lightsaber Form.
Skills: He has great skill with any manner of weaponry and has proficiency with all 7 forms of lightsaber combat, being more skilled in forms II, IV, and VII, than the other 4 forms. He is relatively proficient in many base Force abilities but prefers to use ones that enhance his already impressive physical attributes. While profice
Weakness: His way as a Jedi like many Masters during the Clone Wars Era, is rather aggressive and he walks close to the Dark Side, but is still a Jedi and not a Sith or the like. He focuses nearly entirely on using his close combat superiority so he has less in the way of ranged abilities than most jedi do, but can defend against most normal ranged attacks easily enough. He is reliant on the force, more so than most, it gives him a much needed serenity, so if he is to somehow become disconnected to it the side effects could be dire. While he is skilled with Blasters and the like he does not use them, considering them dishonorable weapons.
RP sample(Either a link or a written sample): TBD
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I am putting this up for OP and Co-OP perusal since as of right now i got nothing else to do so i am putting this up.


You mean this one?

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Postby The Imperial Regions of Commerce » Thu Dec 01, 2016 3:44 pm

Okay, I thought scince he was a weapons dealer, he'd have a lot of weapons himself. Yeah, I'll edit that. And I forgot about the ship besides the tank, and I'll add it in.
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The Imperial Regions of Commerce wrote:Name: Dax Surak

Age: 34-ish

Gender: Male

Species: Trandoshan

Appearance (picture or written description):

Homeworld: Trandosha

Force Sensitive: No

Occupation: Bounty Hunter/Arms Dealer

Rank (If applicable) Founder/Salesmen

Affiliation: Redmoon Weapons Guild(I'd like this to be independent, but scince your last comment on independents, Dax will be employed by the Hutts, as Redmoon Weapons Gulid made up organization is mostly aligned with the Hutts.

Background (Two paragraphs):
Dax Surak was a Trandoshan born on Trandosha around some time close to the Battle of Endor. Dax was the youngest of his pack, his Father, Uncle, and Brother helped train him from a young age in the ways of a Sword and Blaster. Young Dax loved to take place in "Hunts," achieving record numbers of kills, but he was still young. One Hunt, a Jedi Youngling was captured, and was brought to a Small Forrest moon. During the Hunt, his father advised Dax to not enter the Hunt, for he was to inexperienced to take in the Jedi Girl, even if, she was a Youngling, Jedi's are very skilled warriors. Dax waited in the dropship, longing to go outside and prove himself further, and he grabbed a rifle and jumped onto the surface of the world. He maneuvered through the trees, jumping from one to the other, after about thirty minutes of searching the Forrest, he saw the Youngling, taking a drink from a stream. Dax could sense a rival pack moving in, and he was not going to let them steal his kill. He lifted his rifle, but the Jedi rushed around, and crushed the tree branch where Dax was clinging too. He fell onto the ground, but landed in his feet. The Youngling was about to run, but she stayed. She lifted her hands, and circled the stream, and Dax followed suit. He was thinking she was going to use the force to try to push him to the ground, so he jumped to a tree branch. The Jedi swirled around and force-crushed the branch, and Dax jumped from the destroyed tree and into the ground, and slashed a Scythe Sword that his Father gave him, and it landed into the ground. The Youngling dodged, and started running back into the dense woods. Dax pulled a pistol out from his pocket and fired it twice, and the Youngling was hit in the back, than face-planted into the mud. The Young Trandoshan lifted his sword, and lowered his blaster pistol. He gazed over the body of the girl, with a streak of smoke still exiting her back. He was startled to see a rival pack rush out of the woods, with guns drawn. They saw the dead Youngling with Dax standing over her, and then his father, brother, and uncle came out of the Forrest, surprised to see Dax. The other pack returned into the woods, and Dax's Father came up to him. He looked down at the dead Jedi, and then to his son.

"I'm proud of you, son."

That was a turning point in Dax's life. He became suited to using multiple weapons, like in the duel with the Youngling. He became a champion in Hunts, using a wide variety of weapons, what ever gun you handed him, he would use it like he was a professional with it. He always kept a Sword with him, and a Red Hydra 75 Pistol, the same one he used in the duel with the girl. Dax became a well-known name, and was called the "Green Gunner." When the First Order began to expand out from the Unknown Regions, Dax wanted to make an even larger named for himself, a war hero.He and his brother joined the Resistance, which put aside their questionable back story and recruited him. He and his brother became Sharpshooters, and fought in a few battles. Dax felt like just another solider, and when the war was over, he and his brother quit. He returned to Hunting, but started collecting weapons. He bought a Starship, and he and his brother traveled the Galaxy, buying weapons. His collection was huge, and he used many different exotic arms on the Hunting Grounds. But his collecting grew out of hand, and he spent all of his money on Weapons. His father and uncle had died of diseases earlier, and he and his Brother were alone. They started selling their weapons to get food and clothing, but he was amazed to see how many people wanted his weapons. His huge stockpile started to go down, but his income went high. His brothers started a business, Redmoon Weapons Guild, a Weapons dealer. They got some employees, bought/stole more munitions, and started getting rich. They soon turned greedy, and thought to sell more, dangerous weapons, and also, illegally. They turned into a criminal organization, which raided old munitions factories and stole unissued arms. Redmoon was still relatively small, only having about 20 members, but Dax and his brother Zaver repaired an old Imperial Assault Hovertank that was used in a Skirmish between the New Republic and Imperial Remnant. Dax hated them both, and wanted to abolish the Jedi and Sith arts together. He, his brother, and his loyal Astromech Droid Conehead would travel in their hovertank and sold weapons to shady individuals. Whenever New Republic police would catch them, they would extend the Tank's added barrel, and fire at the Police, since where they usually traveled, New Republic police would not dare go to those places, so they did not usually have to use it . The Hutt Cartel gave Dax some credits and invested into Redmoon, and has bought many weapons from Dax. They are strong allies with the Hutts, and Redmoon is heavily funded by Brabous the Hutt.


Ship: Imperial Assault Hovertank (The tank was found after a skirmish between Imperial Forces and New Republic forces., shortly after the Defeat of the First Order and was repaired and is used by the Redmoon Weapons Guild to transport products and cargo. The tank was modified with a 15 cm barrel attached to the top.)

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Vehicle_Armored_Carrier

Equipment: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Blacksca ... 22_carbine

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/HH-15


http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Scythe_blade


http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Red_Hydra_Z-5

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/R4_astromechDax owns a R4 series Astromech Droid, named "Conehead," that accompanies him and his brother on their sales


Skills: Hunter Skills, good with almost any weapon, assassin training, Very sharp senses, advanced hand-eye coordination, determination, and witt

Weakness: Greed, overconfidence, lack of understanding the force

RP sample(Either a link or a written sample): https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopi ... 5&t=389142

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Postby The United Federation of Terrans » Thu Dec 01, 2016 4:14 pm

Wall o' text is up. Hope no one minds me expanding slightly on the backstory.
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Postby Separatist Remnants » Thu Dec 01, 2016 4:31 pm

Unless you wanted to RP your hackers, Ormata, my next post will assume that Voras' funds were stolen and that his cartel has turned to infighting over what's left.

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Postby Shadowwell » Thu Dec 01, 2016 4:38 pm

Yes that one Theyra.
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Postby Ormata » Thu Dec 01, 2016 4:52 pm

The United Federation of Terrans wrote:Wall o' text is up. Hope no one minds me expanding slightly on the backstory.


I don't mind at all. Good, useful information.

Separatist Remnants wrote:Unless you wanted to RP your hackers, Ormata, my next post will assume that Voras' funds were stolen and that his cartel has turned to infighting over what's left.


Alrighty, cool, cool. That'll make for...interesting events.

The Imperial Regions of Commerce wrote:Okay, I thought scince he was a weapons dealer, he'd have a lot of weapons himself. Yeah, I'll edit that. And I forgot about the ship besides the tank, and I'll add it in.


The vessel, the YT-1760 small transport, is the following...

"Though it succeeded in improving on the slower sublight and hyperdrive speeds of older models, it did so at the cost of cargo capacity and defense capability."

It is not large enough to transport the tank.

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The Imperial Regions of Commerce wrote:
The Imperial Regions of Commerce wrote:Name: Dax Surak

Age: 34-ish

Gender: Male

Species: Trandoshan

Appearance (picture or written description):

Homeworld: Trandosha

Force Sensitive: No

Occupation: Bounty Hunter/Arms Dealer

Rank (If applicable) Founder/Salesmen

Affiliation: Redmoon Weapons Guild(I'd like this to be independent, but scince your last comment on independents, Dax will be employed by the Hutts, as Redmoon Weapons Gulid made up organization is mostly aligned with the Hutts.

Background (Two paragraphs):
Dax Surak was a Trandoshan born on Trandosha around some time close to the Battle of Endor. Dax was the youngest of his pack, his Father, Uncle, and Brother helped train him from a young age in the ways of a Sword and Blaster. Young Dax loved to take place in "Hunts," achieving record numbers of kills, but he was still young. One Hunt, a Jedi Youngling was captured, and was brought to a Small Forrest moon. During the Hunt, his father advised Dax to not enter the Hunt, for he was to inexperienced to take in the Jedi Girl, even if, she was a Youngling, Jedi's are very skilled warriors. Dax waited in the dropship, longing to go outside and prove himself further, and he grabbed a rifle and jumped onto the surface of the world. He maneuvered through the trees, jumping from one to the other, after about thirty minutes of searching the Forrest, he saw the Youngling, taking a drink from a stream. Dax could sense a rival pack moving in, and he was not going to let them steal his kill. He lifted his rifle, but the Jedi rushed around, and crushed the tree branch where Dax was clinging too. He fell onto the ground, but landed in his feet. The Youngling was about to run, but she stayed. She lifted her hands, and circled the stream, and Dax followed suit. He was thinking she was going to use the force to try to push him to the ground, so he jumped to a tree branch. The Jedi swirled around and force-crushed the branch, and Dax jumped from the destroyed tree and into the ground, and slashed a Scythe Sword that his Father gave him, and it landed into the ground. The Youngling dodged, and started running back into the dense woods. Dax pulled a pistol out from his pocket and fired it twice, and the Youngling was hit in the back, than face-planted into the mud. The Young Trandoshan lifted his sword, and lowered his blaster pistol. He gazed over the body of the girl, with a streak of smoke still exiting her back. He was startled to see a rival pack rush out of the woods, with guns drawn. They saw the dead Youngling with Dax standing over her, and then his father, brother, and uncle came out of the Forrest, surprised to see Dax. The other pack returned into the woods, and Dax's Father came up to him. He looked down at the dead Jedi, and then to his son.

"I'm proud of you, son."

That was a turning point in Dax's life. He became suited to using multiple weapons, like in the duel with the Youngling. He became a champion in Hunts, using a wide variety of weapons, what ever gun you handed him, he would use it like he was a professional with it. He always kept a Sword with him, and a Red Hydra 75 Pistol, the same one he used in the duel with the girl. Dax became a well-known name, and was called the "Green Gunner." When the First Order began to expand out from the Unknown Regions, Dax wanted to make an even larger named for himself, a war hero.He and his brother joined the Resistance, which put aside their questionable back story and recruited him. He and his brother became Sharpshooters, and fought in a few battles. Dax felt like just another solider, and when the war was over, he and his brother quit. He returned to Hunting, but started collecting weapons. He bought a Starship, and he and his brother traveled the Galaxy, buying weapons. His collection was huge, and he used many different exotic arms on the Hunting Grounds. But his collecting grew out of hand, and he spent all of his money on Weapons. His father and uncle had died of diseases earlier, and he and his Brother were alone. They started selling their weapons to get food and clothing, but he was amazed to see how many people wanted his weapons. His huge stockpile started to go down, but his income went high. His brothers started a business, Redmoon Weapons Guild, a Weapons dealer. They got some employees, bought/stole more munitions, and started getting rich. They soon turned greedy, and thought to sell more, dangerous weapons, and also, illegally. They turned into a criminal organization, which raided old munitions factories and stole unissued arms. Redmoon was still relatively small, only having about 20 members, but Dax and his brother Zaver repaired an old Imperial Assault Hovertank that was used in a Skirmish between the New Republic and Imperial Remnant. Dax hated them both, and wanted to abolish the Jedi and Sith arts together. He, his brother, and his loyal Astromech Droid Conehead would travel in their hovertank and sold weapons to shady individuals. Whenever New Republic police would catch them, they would extend the Tank's added barrel, and fire at the Police, since where they usually traveled, New Republic police would not dare go to those places, so they did not usually have to use it . The Hutt Cartel gave Dax some credits and invested into Redmoon, and has bought many weapons from Dax. They are strong allies with the Hutts, and Redmoon is heavily funded by Brabous the Hutt.


Ship: Imperial Assault Hovertank (The tank was found after a skirmish between Imperial Forces and New Republic forces., shortly after the Defeat of the First Order and was repaired and is used by the Redmoon Weapons Guild to transport products and cargo. The tank was modified with a 15 cm barrel attached to the top.)

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Vehicle_Armored_Carrier

Equipment: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Blacksca ... 22_carbine

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/HH-15


http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Scythe_blade


http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Red_Hydra_Z-5

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/R4_astromechDax owns a R4 series Astromech Droid, named "Conehead," that accompanies him and his brother on their sales


Skills: Hunter Skills, good with almost any weapon, assassin training, Very sharp senses, advanced hand-eye coordination, determination, and witt

Weakness: Greed, overconfidence, lack of understanding the force

RP sample(Either a link or a written sample): https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopi ... 5&t=389142

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The Imperial Regions of Commerce
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Postby The Imperial Regions of Commerce » Thu Dec 01, 2016 5:20 pm

I updated the vehicle

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Postby Ormata » Thu Dec 01, 2016 5:24 pm

The Imperial Regions of Commerce wrote:I updated the vehicle


I'd say accepted.

The United Federation of Terrans wrote:Wall o' text is up. Hope no one minds me expanding slightly on the backstory.


IC post up. Annik isn't giving-up.

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Postby The Imperial Regions of Commerce » Thu Dec 01, 2016 5:27 pm

Yaws

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Postby The Imperial Regions of Commerce » Thu Dec 01, 2016 5:30 pm

Could I post with Dax?

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Postby Theyra » Thu Dec 01, 2016 5:33 pm

The Imperial Regions of Commerce wrote:
The Imperial Regions of Commerce wrote:


Accepted

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