Well, I just sent my telegram reply.
Also, can I have some feed back on my short passage?
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by Protestant England and Germany » Fri Sep 25, 2015 9:40 am
by Tracian Empire » Fri Sep 25, 2015 9:50 am
by Atlannia » Fri Sep 25, 2015 12:37 pm
by North Arkana » Fri Sep 25, 2015 1:14 pm
Atlannia wrote:Protestant England and Germany wrote:Well, I just sent my telegram reply.
Also, can I have some feed back on my short passage?
I'm gonna be honest, you get points for creativity but I would defintely prefer you don't spawn monsters randomly in my environments in the future.Imperial Northern States wrote:
In theory it's a wonderful idea.
It allows everyone a much more personalised experience.
The issue, is that it's slow, and maybe multiple people should be doing them.
But either way I really like it
This much I sort of suspected would happen so I'll thank you all for indulging my little experiment even if its been somewhat imperfect. I'm currently trying to rush CHarlia through this so they can take on a couple of people as well.
by Faal Lot Himdah » Fri Sep 25, 2015 4:07 pm
by Protestant England and Germany » Fri Sep 25, 2015 6:37 pm
Atlannia wrote:Protestant England and Germany wrote:Well, I just sent my telegram reply.
Also, can I have some feed back on my short passage?
I'm gonna be honest, you get points for creativity but I would defintely prefer you don't spawn monsters randomly in my environments in the future.Imperial Northern States wrote:
In theory it's a wonderful idea.
It allows everyone a much more personalised experience.
The issue, is that it's slow, and maybe multiple people should be doing them.
But either way I really like it
This much I sort of suspected would happen so I'll thank you all for indulging my little experiment even if its been somewhat imperfect. I'm currently trying to rush CHarlia through this so they can take on a couple of people as well.
by Atlannia » Sun Sep 27, 2015 8:26 am
by Faal Lot Himdah » Sun Sep 27, 2015 8:29 am
Faal Lot Himdah wrote:Not sure how to respond to that TG...
by Atlannia » Sun Sep 27, 2015 8:33 am
by Faal Lot Himdah » Sun Sep 27, 2015 8:34 am
Atlannia wrote:Well you have a few options, you could snoop around, have your character exchange opinions or just ponder internally their interviewer. You could even have them try to leave.
If you really can't think of anything then I can just move you ahead a bit to the action.
by Atlannia » Sun Sep 27, 2015 8:35 am
Faal Lot Himdah wrote:Atlannia wrote:Well you have a few options, you could snoop around, have your character exchange opinions or just ponder internally their interviewer. You could even have them try to leave.
If you really can't think of anything then I can just move you ahead a bit to the action.
Action please....
by Tracian Empire » Sun Sep 27, 2015 8:43 am
by The Templar High Council » Mon Sep 28, 2015 9:45 am
by Charlia » Mon Sep 28, 2015 9:48 am
The Templar High Council wrote:Legion of Hell Enlistment Form AVARICE(Image)
Name: Hayate Kurosawa.
Age: Oh, you know. Just a couple hundred years or so. Nothing special. 472, if you were wondering.
History: Straight outta Hell, Hayate was assigned to Sunset Gates under Ms. Deckhart to provide mostly "tactical support." Basically, he gets to sit on a computer and manage all the reapers in the area. Which was fine by him, that meant Hayate didn't have to do that much, but he did have to keep up appearances in the human realm. And every once in a while, he had to get out to take care of something that other reapers couldn't. But for the most part, Hayate spends his time playing computer games and buying random things from Amazon using Sinner's Rest's funds.
Personality: Hayate is a brilliant demon, a prodigy only born once in a lifetime. And some of that might have gone to his head. As if it mattered though, no one is his equal in intelligence. He is antisocial, kleptomaniacal, and condescending about his stature. To be honest, the only thing he has going for him is his mind, but that asset is too great to pass up.
Strengths: Supremely intelligent, analytical. So analytical. Also the reflexes to act on it.
Weaknesses: Fairly arrogant, greedy/hoarder, not that sociable. Also weaker than average demon his age.
Preferred Scythe Appearance: A sniper rifle, capable of firing electrically charged rounds, and collapsible into a staff with an electric prod on the end.
Rank: Reaper.
Theme song: Database.
by Atlannia » Mon Sep 28, 2015 9:50 am
The Templar High Council wrote:Legion of Hell Enlistment Form AVARICE(Image)
Name: Hayate Kurosawa.
Age: Oh, you know. Just a couple hundred years or so. Nothing special. 472, if you were wondering.
History: Straight outta Hell, Hayate was assigned to Sunset Gates under Ms. Deckhart to provide mostly "tactical support." Basically, he gets to sit on a computer and manage all the reapers in the area. Which was fine by him, that meant Hayate didn't have to do that much, but he did have to keep up appearances in the human realm. And every once in a while, he had to get out to take care of something that other reapers couldn't. But for the most part, Hayate spends his time playing computer games and buying random things from Amazon using Sinner's Rest's funds.
Personality: Hayate is a brilliant demon, a prodigy only born once in a lifetime. And some of that might have gone to his head. As if it mattered though, no one is his equal in intelligence. He is antisocial, kleptomaniacal, and condescending about his stature. To be honest, the only thing he has going for him is his mind, but that asset is too great to pass up.
Strengths: Supremely intelligent, analytical. So analytical. Also the reflexes to act on it.
Weaknesses: Fairly arrogant, greedy/hoarder, not that sociable. Also weaker than average demon his age.
Preferred Scythe Appearance: A sniper rifle, capable of firing electrically charged rounds, and collapsible into a staff with an electric prod on the end.
Rank: Reaper.
Theme song: Database.
by The Templar High Council » Mon Sep 28, 2015 9:51 am
Charlia wrote:The Templar High Council wrote:Legion of Hell Enlistment Form AVARICE(Image)
Name: Hayate Kurosawa.
Age: Oh, you know. Just a couple hundred years or so. Nothing special. 472, if you were wondering.
History: Straight outta Hell, Hayate was assigned to Sunset Gates under Ms. Deckhart to provide mostly "tactical support." Basically, he gets to sit on a computer and manage all the reapers in the area. Which was fine by him, that meant Hayate didn't have to do that much, but he did have to keep up appearances in the human realm. And every once in a while, he had to get out to take care of something that other reapers couldn't. But for the most part, Hayate spends his time playing computer games and buying random things from Amazon using Sinner's Rest's funds.
Personality: Hayate is a brilliant demon, a prodigy only born once in a lifetime. And some of that might have gone to his head. As if it mattered though, no one is his equal in intelligence. He is antisocial, kleptomaniacal, and condescending about his stature. To be honest, the only thing he has going for him is his mind, but that asset is too great to pass up.
Strengths: Supremely intelligent, analytical. So analytical. Also the reflexes to act on it.
Weaknesses: Fairly arrogant, greedy/hoarder, not that sociable. Also weaker than average demon his age.
Preferred Scythe Appearance: A sniper rifle, capable of firing electrically charged rounds, and collapsible into a staff with an electric prod on the end.
Rank: Reaper.
Theme song: Database.
The first thing I thought when I saw the personality, strengths, and weaknesses was 'Oh, it's a Sherlock demon!' and then read the rest and just... wilted.
Atlannia wrote:The Templar High Council wrote:Legion of Hell Enlistment Form AVARICE(Image)
Name: Hayate Kurosawa.
Age: Oh, you know. Just a couple hundred years or so. Nothing special. 472, if you were wondering.
History: Straight outta Hell, Hayate was assigned to Sunset Gates under Ms. Deckhart to provide mostly "tactical support." Basically, he gets to sit on a computer and manage all the reapers in the area. Which was fine by him, that meant Hayate didn't have to do that much, but he did have to keep up appearances in the human realm. And every once in a while, he had to get out to take care of something that other reapers couldn't. But for the most part, Hayate spends his time playing computer games and buying random things from Amazon using Sinner's Rest's funds.
Personality: Hayate is a brilliant demon, a prodigy only born once in a lifetime. And some of that might have gone to his head. As if it mattered though, no one is his equal in intelligence. He is antisocial, kleptomaniacal, and condescending about his stature. To be honest, the only thing he has going for him is his mind, but that asset is too great to pass up.
Strengths: Supremely intelligent, analytical. So analytical. Also the reflexes to act on it.
Weaknesses: Fairly arrogant, greedy/hoarder, not that sociable. Also weaker than average demon his age.
Preferred Scythe Appearance: A sniper rifle, capable of firing electrically charged rounds, and collapsible into a staff with an electric prod on the end.
Rank: Reaper.
Theme song: Database.
looks good man, +10 for the theme song.
by Charlia » Mon Sep 28, 2015 9:55 am
The Templar High Council wrote:Charlia wrote:The first thing I thought when I saw the personality, strengths, and weaknesses was 'Oh, it's a Sherlock demon!' and then read the rest and just... wilted.
I read 2 Doyle novels and haven't seen the TV show. So my Sherlock is probably different from yours.
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