The General Assembly,
Committed to improving the world, one resolution at a time,
Cognizant of the fact that some nations may recognizehave determinedtheir citizens as property of that nation and therefore denyhave deniedthem the right to leave said nation,
Determining this to be a gross abuse of sapient rights and seeking to resolve this issue,situation
Hereby,
Mandates that no government may prevent the emigrationor temporary travelof individuals from their nation,
Declares that individuals may specifically be exempted from the aforementioned mandate if:
(a) They are subject to a medically legitimate and necessary quarantine,
(b) They are awaiting trial, undergoing legal proceedings, or if they are carrying out a sentence as a result of such legal proceedings,
(c) They have a warrant existing for their arrest,
(d) Thehostrecipient nation or the nation of origin having probable cause to believe that the individual is traveling for the purpose of committing a crime,
(e) The individuals concerned are non-emancipated minors traveling without the consent of a legal guardian,
(f) They are legitimately determined to be mentally unable to make the decision to travel of their own accord,
Further determining that to contravene the above would be deemed an illegal detention of a person within a nation and resultant gross breach of Sapient Rights by that nation, I'm still unsure as to what this clause is meant to do - again, either clarify it or scrap it, please.
Clarifying that nothing in this resolution prevents member nations from setting requirements for entry and residency within their borders.
I was going to highlight some grammar issues that you missed, but I decided I'd try to make the resolution flow a little bit better. Take what you like.
Have to make the grammatical fixes suggested above and then I'm happy with this as a finished product.
Don't be in such a rush, the proposal queue is backed up for a while. Use that as an opportunity to let this ferment in a fine brew of, errr, ambassadors. Don't be so eager to finish it - writing it is the fun part anyway.