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Warlords: The Creators [OOC/OPEN/FT]

Postby Vaxon » Thu Oct 31, 2013 6:58 pm

Warlords: The Creators...

We thought we were done. We thought we won. We were dead wrong. The Sporons of Ancient Times, when we activated them... they also triggered a 'distress call' for their Creators. The Creators, as we call them, came. They came, and saw us all here. Ever hear the saying 'they came, they saw, they conquered'? We're in the 'they're conquering' phase. [Sigh]... If only we knew that the Creators were coming. Maybe we could've stopped this. Maybe... We could have stopped them. The Creators are merciless... they will stop at nothing. They truly are the most powerful Warlords.




AH, yes! Finally. The third and final installment of this RP.
I bet you were all wondering when this would be out. ANYWAYS, time to get down to business.
Same rules and the like as usual. Yadayadayada, time to go to work.




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APP;
Species Name:
Empire Name:
Advantages:
Weaknesses:
Reproduction Methods:
Type:
Appearance:
Bio:

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Super Intelligent; Obvious.
Huge Empire; Your empire takes up more than 20 solar systems.
Infinite Resources; You seem to never run out of ships or supplies.
Strong Shields; Not even an Ion Laser drill can break through it.
Experts; New tech? Foreign tech? We know how to use it at a glance!
Deadheads; Death? HAH, Nice joke!
Extra-Galactic Empire; We're also from another galaxy, and we're here to help.
Hackers: Your knowledge and blue prints are not safe from us!
Psionic: "These aren't the droids you're looking for..."


Weak Armor; Damn, our shields are gone. And our armor can't handle more than a bullet!
Extra-Galactic Empire; We're from another galaxy. We don't know what the hell anything here is, so we don't know much about planets.
Limited Resources; We need to go shopping. Ten times. A day.
Weak Shields; Oh crap, they have LASERS. Well, we're done for.
Dumb & Dumber; New tech? Foreign tech? What does this do?
Instant Death; Self-explanatory.
Ancient Fleet: many of your navy's ships are obsolete and outmoded, translating to vessels being weaker than other ships and unable to be repaired easily. Slow Ships: Your ships can't use FTL, let alone move faster than a Turtle.
Slow Army: Your military moves slowly, whether it be because of heavy weaponry or armor, no one knows.






My App

Species Name: The Precursors/Creators
Empire Name: ???
Advantages:
SUPER INTELLIGENT
HUGE EMPIRE
INFINITE RESOURCES
STRONG SHIELDS
EXPERTS
Weaknesses:
WEAK ARMOR
EXTRA-GALACTIC
Reproduction Methods: Liquefied Cloning; We create a "bubble" of water with our hands or other devices, and a new clone begins being built. It then pops the bubble and forms.
Type: Sentient, Super-Intelligent AIs
Appearance: The Creators
Bio: I'm OP.

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IC.
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Postby Vaxon » Thu Oct 31, 2013 6:59 pm

Accepted Empires;

- ???; The Creators; Vaxon
- Great Garmillan Empire; Multi-species; Creataris
- Iron Nation; Multi-species; Pretantia [LEFT]
- Middle Eldinian Empire; Eldar; Equalsun Empire
- Xikran Confederation; Xikran (Multi-species); Zepplien
- Korosian Robotic Empire; Korosian; Veroxia
- The Great New Nerodian Empire (4th Great Nerodian Empire); Multi-species; Nerod Empire
- The Independent Fleets of Raktio; Multi-species; Raktio
- The Federation of Fabled Kingdoms; Multi-species; Caltarania
- The A.B.E.L. Hegemony; Humanity Front; The Abel Imaginarium
- Sunshadow Syndicate; Humans; Raziz
- Vron Empire; Vron; Akan
- The Swarm; Zerg; Raziz
- Necrotyr; Necronomicon; Neros
- Galac Dominion; Galac; Lolder
- Sierra Conglomerate; Capsuleer/Human; Pragia
- Stratocratic Dominion of Furia; Furians; Tyben
- Overrunner Horde; Overrunners; North Calaveras
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Postby The Empire of Pretantia » Thu Oct 31, 2013 7:19 pm

I would like to point out the complete inflexibility of the app.
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The Empire of Pretantia wrote:I would like to point out the complete inflexibility of the app.

How's it inflexible?
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Greater Mackonia wrote:"A car carrying a Communist a Capitalist and a Fascist breaks down, the Communist implores for the three to unite and push the car forward, though it may take significant time and misery. The Capitalist declares that the three should hire a taxi, though it will be costly and the taxi only has room for two. The Fascist gets in the car, sounds the horn and pretends the car is still moving."

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Postby Creataris » Fri Nov 01, 2013 4:39 am

APP;
Species Name: Garmillan, Jirel, Humans
Empire Name: The Great Garmillan Empire
Advantages: Huge Empire
Infinite Resources
Strong Shields
Strong Armour; The shields are down but lets see them try and melt through the hull
Psionic (Jirel only)
Weaknesses: Extra-Galactic Empire
Reproduction Methods: Sexual, Cloning (emergencies only)
Type: Biological beings
Appearance:
Image

Image

Image

Image

Bio: The Empire is very old and powerful with many great military commanders and a highly militaristic culture including a compulsory citizens militia. The Empires non-Garmillan races joined either willingly or attacked the empire and were conquered, the empire is ever expanding and although infighting sometimes occurs it is quickly put to rest by the imperial guard. The Garmillan people also enjoy long lifespans compared to the other species of the empire by living for 400 years whilst the people of Jirel (for example Miezela) who are also called jirel enjoy 200 year lifespans whilst the humans have shortest lifespans at only 100 years.

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Postby The Empire of Pretantia » Fri Nov 01, 2013 6:07 am

Vaxon wrote:
The Empire of Pretantia wrote:I would like to point out the complete inflexibility of the app.

How's it inflexible?

I can't really have a multiracial nation, for one. The advantage/disadvantage dichotomy is also killing the flexibility.
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Postby Vaxon » Fri Nov 01, 2013 2:06 pm

The Empire of Pretantia wrote:
Vaxon wrote:How's it inflexible?

I can't really have a multiracial nation, for one. The advantage/disadvantage dichotomy is also killing the flexibility.


Well, I can take suggestions to add advantages and disadvantages.
Also, You can simply add multiple species names to the species name category, as well as add multiple pictures.
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Greater Mackonia wrote:"A car carrying a Communist a Capitalist and a Fascist breaks down, the Communist implores for the three to unite and push the car forward, though it may take significant time and misery. The Capitalist declares that the three should hire a taxi, though it will be costly and the taxi only has room for two. The Fascist gets in the car, sounds the horn and pretends the car is still moving."

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Postby Vaxon » Fri Nov 01, 2013 2:07 pm

Creataris wrote:APP;
Species Name: Garmillan
Empire Name: The Great Garmillan Empire
Advantages: Huge Empire
Infinite Resources
Strong Shields
Weaknesses:Weak Armour;
Extra-Galactic Empire
Reproduction Methods: Sexual, Cloning (emergencies only)
Type: Biological beings
Appearance:



Bio: The Empire is very old and powerful with many great military commander and a highly militaristic culture including a compulsory citizens militia. The Empires non-Garmillan races joined either willingly or attacked the empire and were conquered, the empire is ever expanding and although infighting sometimes occurs it is quickly put to rest by the imperial guard. The Garmillan people also enjoy long lifespans compared to the other species of the empire by living for 400 years whilst the people of Jirel (for example Miezela) who are also called jirel enjoy 200 year lifespans whilst the humans have shortest lifespans at only 100 years.

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Postby Raktio » Fri Nov 01, 2013 2:26 pm

APP;
Species Name: Raktons, Ra'tzekoy, Gak'éris
Empire Name: The Independent Fleets of Raktio (only three fleets will be in this galaxy in the beginning, only one will be a real military fleet while the rest are civilian fleets)
Advantages:
Extra-Galactic empire
Infinite resources (we strip mine anything that isn't in a system that already has been claimed)
Psionic (Gak'éris are all, the other races have a few)
Weaknesses:
Extra-galactic empire
What army? (We have very few people trained to fight on a planetary surface, the best you will get is our boarding parties and counter boarding people)
Reproduction Methods: Raktons and Ra'tzekoy same as humans, Gak'éris don't even have a means of describing sex, when their population gets low they start producing cells which genuinely are modified genetically to fit the environment better (when I make a factbook page about these guys I'll explain more in-depth) and will grow into larvae which consumes anything inreach until it is full then sleep until it is hungry this cycle repeats until it is near the size of a full adult which than it forms a cocoon and when it breaks out it is a full adult (Gak'éris use their Psionic powers to hold larvae at bay and the cocoons give of a nasty chemical which will make the larvae turn right around if noticed). Right before they break oit they gain access tho their powers and thier ancestors knowledge.
Type: mammal, (Gak'éris) insectoid/reptilian (also they have triple helix genes)
Appearance:
Raktons- like humans but their eyes are purple and different enough that most diseases won't cross over.
Ra'tzekoy- ten&half-twelve feet tall humanoid tiger people, overly muscular and crouching taking a half foot from their appearance. They are a pretty vicious people and excel at fighting and surviving (comes from the fact that their home was a great jungle where everything tryed to eat you)
Bio: a long time ago their home system's star exploded, having barely escaped they decided to make a capital and to not settle on any planets ever again. After thousands of years they had expanded into a giant space fairing empire which made many contacts and spread several galaxies. They met may civilisations along the way including the Gak'éris which were in a civil war that was tearing their species apart, some decided to join the empire to escape the death trap pf their people's war. Now the council has sent three fleets to to this galaxy to begin making contacts and alliances with the people occupying it.
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Postby The Empire of Pretantia » Fri Nov 01, 2013 6:58 pm

APP;
Species Name: Oni, Oninin, Kura, Durga, Grenda, Urg
Empire Name: The Iron Nation
Advantages: Huge Empire, Infinite Resources, strong armor
Weaknesses:
Ancient Fleet: many of your navy's ships are obsolete and outmoded, translating to vessels being weaker than other ships and unable to be repaired easily.
Reproduction Methods: Respectively: Placental and cloning, placental and cloning, eggs and cloning, eggs, and marsupials and cloning, eggs and cloning
Type: Mammal, mammal, reptile, (Warm-blooded)reptile, mammal, reptile(Also warm-blooded)
Appearance:
So first we have the Oni. Big(2+ meters), strong(muscly masculinity, even the ladies), red, poor dental hygiene(More teeth than the Osmond family), neutral-colored hair, horns of various shapes and sizes(For the men), grows to 100 without contemporary medical technology easy. Little sexual dimorphism besides horns; females lack breasts and answer to "he", and so are mostly indistinguishable at first glance to an untrained eye. You know, besides the horns.

Then we have the Oninin. Like this, except they're not all women. Horns are a person-to-person thing, not gender-specific. Females have breasts.

The Kura ,mostly like a snake, except it has a torso and arms and whatnot. Also, a bigger brain. Colors are mostly black and green. About four feet long. From Planet Zakanfa.

The Durga. From Planet Skrull.

The Grenda, Humanoid, thick and stocky, jagged teeth, has a strange set of mandibles that run from the upper jaw down to the belly that serves as a food and baby pouch. Marsupial, short lifespan, perpetually radioactive unless raised off-planet. From Planet Morgoth.

Finally, there's the Urg. Turtle-y, five feet tall, about 300 pounds. they all live in ten-kilometer city-ships. Homeworld (Dor) burned by supernova.
Bio: So years and years ago, the Oni were late to the party in destroying the Sporons(Terrible plot, btw), but they were able to host the after-party because parties. Then they proceeded to get their shit together. The Oni went on a conquering binge, absorbing a large swath of space including all of the above races except for the Oninin, who they created because they themselves sucked at driving. Then, because the Oni couldn't have enough drivers, they uplifted the Kura to civilization. Then they subdued the Durga for light infantry. Then they saved the Grenda from forever war for an infinite pool of bodies. Then they invited the Urg to providing permanent supply of resources the urg would otherwise struggle for.

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Postby Vaxon » Fri Nov 01, 2013 7:03 pm

The Empire of Pretantia wrote:APP;
Species Name: Oni, Oninin, Kura, Durga, Grenda
Empire Name: The Iron Nation
Advantages: Huge Empire, Infinite Resources
Weaknesses:
Ancient Fleet: many of your navy's ships are obsolete and outmoded, translating to vessels being weaker than other ships and unable to be repaired easily.
Reproduction Methods: Respectively: Placental and cloning, placental and cloning, eggs and cloning, eggs, and marsupials and cloning
Type: Mammal, mammal, reptile, (Warm-blooded)reptile, mammal
Appearance:
So first we have the Oni. Big(2+ meters), strong(muscly masculinity, even the ladies), red, poor dental hygiene(More teeth than the Osmond family), neutral-colored hair, horns of various shapes and sizes(For the men), grows to 100 without contemporary medical technology easy. Little sexual dimorphism besides horns; females lack breasts and answer to "he", and so are mostly indistinguishable at first glance to an untrained eye. You know, besides the horns.

Then we have the Oninin. Like this, except they're not all women. Horns are a person-to-person thing, not gender-specific. Females have breasts.

The Kura ,mostly like a snake, except it has a torso and arms and whatnot. Also, a bigger brain. Colors are mostly black and green. About four feet long.

The Durga.

The Grenda, Humanoid, thick and stocky, jagged teeth, has a strange set of mandibles that run from the upper jaw down to the belly that serves as a food and baby pouch. Marsupial, short lifespan, perpetually radioactive unless raised off-planet.
Bio: So years and years ago, the Oni were late to the party in destroying the Sporons(Terrible plot, btw), but they were able to host the after-party because parties. Then they proceeded to get their shit together. The Oni went on a conquering binge, absorbing a large swath of space including all of the above races except for the Oninin, who they created because they themselves sucked at driving. Then, because the Oni couldn't have enough drivers, they uplifted the Kura to civilization. Then they subdued the Durga. Then they saved the Grenda from forever war.

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-A Mack Saying.

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Postby Equalsun Empire » Fri Nov 01, 2013 7:45 pm

Should I call in High Eldenian reinforcements using the Extragalactic buff, or stick with a small Eldar colony?
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Postby Vaxon » Fri Nov 01, 2013 7:46 pm

Equalsun Empire wrote:Should I call in High Eldenian reinforcements using the Extragalactic buff, or stick with a small Eldar colony?


Your choice. Also, Extra-Galactic Empire can be both an advantage and a disadvantage, but you're not required to do so.
Greetings, If you're reading this, YOU ARE A STALKER!
Now, in all seriousness, I am an American Male.
Greater Mackonia wrote:"A car carrying a Communist a Capitalist and a Fascist breaks down, the Communist implores for the three to unite and push the car forward, though it may take significant time and misery. The Capitalist declares that the three should hire a taxi, though it will be costly and the taxi only has room for two. The Fascist gets in the car, sounds the horn and pretends the car is still moving."

-A Mack Saying.

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Postby Equalsun Empire » Fri Nov 01, 2013 7:59 pm

APP;
Species Name: Eldar
Empire Name: The Middle Eldenian Empire
Advantages: Huge Empire, Super Intelligent, Infinite Resources, Strong Shields, Extragalactic Empire
Weaknesses: Extra-Galactic Empire, Instant Death, Slow Start(we will arrive slowly).
Reproduction Methods: Brought in from the High Eldenian Homeworld
Type: ?
Appearance: Image
Bio: The Middle Eldenian Empire is the Eldenian empire branch made up of the sons of Sun, Moon, and Star. Recieving a distress call from the former Equalsun Empire, they have begun to answer the call; however, they no nothing of the Precursors, Sporons, or anything that is happening besides the Sporon attack on Compassia and Hope. They have no idea they are coming into a warzone, so all they currently have sent are a Patrol fleet of EIEN ships and aid to where the EOEN outpost should be. However, all they found was a debris field...

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So I got into am currently in a name-calling contest in a flag rating thread...

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Postby Vaxon » Fri Nov 01, 2013 8:14 pm

Equalsun Empire wrote:APP;
Species Name: Eldar
Empire Name: The Middle Eldenian Empire
Advantages: Huge Empire, Super Intelligent, Infinite Resources, Strong Shields, Extragalactic Empire
Weaknesses: Extra-Galactic Empire, Instant Death, Slow Start(we will arrive slowly).
Reproduction Methods: Brought in from the High Eldenian Homeworld
Type: ?
Appearance:
Bio: The Middle Eldenian Empire is the Eldenian empire branch made up of the sons of Sun, Moon, and Star. Recieving a distress call from the former Equalsun Empire, they have begun to answer the call; however, they no nothing of the Precursors, Sporons, or anything that is happening besides the Sporon attack on Compassia and Hope. They have no idea they are coming into a warzone, so all they currently have sent are a Patrol fleet of EIEN ships and aid to where the EOEN outpost should be. However, all they found was a debris field...

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Greetings, If you're reading this, YOU ARE A STALKER!
Now, in all seriousness, I am an American Male.
Greater Mackonia wrote:"A car carrying a Communist a Capitalist and a Fascist breaks down, the Communist implores for the three to unite and push the car forward, though it may take significant time and misery. The Capitalist declares that the three should hire a taxi, though it will be costly and the taxi only has room for two. The Fascist gets in the car, sounds the horn and pretends the car is still moving."

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Postby Firstaria » Sat Nov 02, 2013 5:33 am

I'm sorry to ask, but there aren't more different adv/disadv in the app? Those are really limiting the choices of what we can pull out.
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Postby Vaxon » Sat Nov 02, 2013 7:05 am

Firstaria wrote:I'm sorry to ask, but there aren't more different adv/disadv in the app? Those are really limiting the choices of what we can pull out.


You're allowed to make suggestions, and if your app is accepted, your suggestions will be added to the list.
Greetings, If you're reading this, YOU ARE A STALKER!
Now, in all seriousness, I am an American Male.
Greater Mackonia wrote:"A car carrying a Communist a Capitalist and a Fascist breaks down, the Communist implores for the three to unite and push the car forward, though it may take significant time and misery. The Capitalist declares that the three should hire a taxi, though it will be costly and the taxi only has room for two. The Fascist gets in the car, sounds the horn and pretends the car is still moving."

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Postby Vaxon » Sat Nov 02, 2013 7:30 am

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Greetings, If you're reading this, YOU ARE A STALKER!
Now, in all seriousness, I am an American Male.
Greater Mackonia wrote:"A car carrying a Communist a Capitalist and a Fascist breaks down, the Communist implores for the three to unite and push the car forward, though it may take significant time and misery. The Capitalist declares that the three should hire a taxi, though it will be costly and the taxi only has room for two. The Fascist gets in the car, sounds the horn and pretends the car is still moving."

-A Mack Saying.

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Postby Zepplien » Sat Nov 02, 2013 11:30 am

APP;
Species Name: The Xikran (Broken up around 5 subspecies)
Empire Name: The Xikran Confederation (Made up of 5 Semi autonomous states)
Advantages: Experts (The most extreme version of this, all their technology is reverse engineered), Strong shields, unlimited resources
Weaknesses: Weak Armour, Racist (See non Xikran peoples as inferior), Non innovative (The Xikran reverse engineer, they have never come up with major technological advances by themselves.)
Reproduction Methods: Various
Type: Various
Appearance:
-Xikran-Terrans (Almost exclusively called Terrans by common citizens):
Made for an ice world, the Terrans are like north Europe humans, very light blond hair and light blue eyes. Their skin is universally pale white to blend in with ice and snow, and suffer extreme heat exhaustion if their body temperature hits 5 degrees centigrade. To fix this they wear big bulky crysuits everywhere. They have amazingly sensitive olfactory senses, hearing, and better than human vission, as such their suits are built to dumb down these senses, allowing them to function on crowded and nosy ships. I should also point out they mature much faster than humans, but mostly physiologically, like a 16 year old would look the same as a human, but would be considered an adult for several years.

-Xikran-Mau (Almost exclusively called Mau by common citizens):
Think Anime cat girl/boy, with fur on the face and in stripes across their skin.

-Xikran-Haikala (Almost exclusively called Haikala by common citizens):
These are pretty much humanoid sharks, they have two sets of eyelids, black eyes, and razor sharp teeth in rows. They have fins along the back of their calf musculus, and forearms, along with a long powerful tail for swimming. Their female populations outnumbers the males 9-1, and basically have reversed gender roles to what we expect, ie males are expected to be homemakers and females are expected to fight and protect.

-Xikran-Vika (Almost exclusively called Vika by common citizens):
These are a mix of ant and humans in appearance, with four humanoid arms, two antennas, hard exoskeletons, and compound eyes being the main diffrences. Their soldier caste also has vennom filled spikes and a red exoskeleton to contrast the black of normal workers or the yellow-goldish of the royal Vika. Females are 99.99999% of the population, and males are traded by hives and seen as nothing more than property/breeding stock by their hives. They are most confortable when the air is at least 80% oxygen, but their soldiers and workers can survive in down to 15%.

-Xikran-Robotics (Almost exclusively called Robotics by common citizens):
Cylons
New series humanoids for ambassadors and leaders
New series Centurions for soldiers
Old series Centurions for common citizens
Bio:The Vika, Mau, Terrans, Haikala, and Robotics were all a result of an experiment gone horribly wrong, all five species made by an ancient species whose name has been lost to time. This species was likely humanoid at the least, all five species are humanoid in appearance even when that is detrimental to evolution. These scientists seeded the species around 4,000 years ago on the four planets and one moon. The scientists then seemed to vanish, their equipment left for the various species to find and use. From there the civilizations formed around the technology, each one using it differently. The Terrans were forced to trade it, and use it for ice cracking on their ice ball of a homeworld, while the Mau built a technological society upon it, and the Haikala built weapons of mass destruction. The first to achieve spaceflight was the Mau, sending probes out to discover the other species, who had known each other sense telescopes and cities were invented. The first two species to effect each others development was the Haikala and Vika, when an errant ICBM caused an EMP burst over their global satellite network. The Terrans however were the first to send their Crononauts up to their moon and made first contact with the Mau, who had generally ignored the prospect of doing anything but conducting scientific research on the other four societies. The first meeting was peaceful, unlike the later first contact with Haikala, and the two began to agree on most things together, forming a council to make choices for them.

With technology and traders they knew they needed soldiers next, and with the Haikala embroiled in World War XIV the Terrans sent delegations, selling powerful and advanced cryo weapons to one of the losing factions, letting them eventually win the war with the backing of the new Union. Though her reform and war tactics ended up killing 340 million of her own people, she was heralded as the first of the age of enlightenment. With the military of the Haikala and the first space cruising ships, the other two species fell into line with ease. With their powerful but fragile union they began to produce ships of exploration, ranging from the Haikala ISS Yamato warship, to the Terran OSS False Profits trading ship, to the TSS Himmler the first long range science ship. These ships were fitted with prototype FTL drives, allowing them to reach nearby systems and begin expansion, their fleets building up as their territory expanded. Over 800 years later the Union is a great deal more stable and fears no one.

They control 17 Star systems, and own a Dyson's sphere as built by their founders, and are known for their reclusive nature. The only thing that ever seems to enter or leave their systems are the heavily armed trade convoys that even the boldest of pirates wouldn't raid. Their government is known for its intense Xenophobia, shooting down any ship that enters their space without a Xikran military escort. The only time they broke their xenophobia was with a sudden annexation of five star systems of a nearby empire without cause. A weak later Terran freighters dropped off the citizens, and all attempts to liberate the colonies failed, not even distress calls heard from the ships before their destruction. Their saboteurs destroy any FTL telescopes that can see into their space, as to continue their constant military and economic buildup.

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Postby Vaxon » Sat Nov 02, 2013 1:15 pm

Zepplien wrote:APP;
Species Name: The Xikran (Broken up around 5 subspecies)
Empire Name: The Xikran Confederation (Made up of 5 Semi autonomous states)
Advantages: Experts (The most extreme version of this, all their technology is reverse engineered), Strong shields, unlimited resources
Weaknesses: Weak Armour, Racist (See non Xikran peoples as inferior), Non innovative (The Xikran reverse engineer, they have never come up with major technological advances by themselves.)
Reproduction Methods: Various
Type: Various
Appearance:
-Xikran-Terrans (Almost exclusively called Terrans by common citizens):
Made for an ice world, the Terrans are like north Europe humans, very light blond hair and light blue eyes. Their skin is universally pale white to blend in with ice and snow, and suffer extreme heat exhaustion if their body temperature hits 5 degrees centigrade. To fix this they wear big bulky crysuits everywhere. They have amazingly sensitive olfactory senses, hearing, and better than human vission, as such their suits are built to dumb down these senses, allowing them to function on crowded and nosy ships. I should also point out they mature much faster than humans, but mostly physiologically, like a 16 year old would look the same as a human, but would be considered an adult for several years.

-Xikran-Mau (Almost exclusively called Mau by common citizens):
Think Anime cat girl/boy, with fur on the face and in stripes across their skin.

-Xikran-Haikala (Almost exclusively called Haikala by common citizens):
These are pretty much humanoid sharks, they have two sets of eyelids, black eyes, and razor sharp teeth in rows. They have fins along the back of their calf musculus, and forearms, along with a long powerful tail for swimming. Their female populations outnumbers the males 9-1, and basically have reversed gender roles to what we expect, ie males are expected to be homemakers and females are expected to fight and protect.

-Xikran-Vika (Almost exclusively called Vika by common citizens):
These are a mix of ant and humans in appearance, with four humanoid arms, two antennas, hard exoskeletons, and compound eyes being the main diffrences. Their soldier caste also has vennom filled spikes and a red exoskeleton to contrast the black of normal workers or the yellow-goldish of the royal Vika. Females are 99.99999% of the population, and males are traded by hives and seen as nothing more than property/breeding stock by their hives. They are most confortable when the air is at least 80% oxygen, but their soldiers and workers can survive in down to 15%.

-Xikran-Robotics (Almost exclusively called Robotics by common citizens):
Cylons
New series humanoids for ambassadors and leaders
New series Centurions for soldiers
Old series Centurions for common citizens
Bio:The Vika, Mau, Terrans, Haikala, and Robotics were all a result of an experiment gone horribly wrong, all five species made by an ancient species whose name has been lost to time. This species was likely humanoid at the least, all five species are humanoid in appearance even when that is detrimental to evolution. These scientists seeded the species around 4,000 years ago on the four planets and one moon. The scientists then seemed to vanish, their equipment left for the various species to find and use. From there the civilizations formed around the technology, each one using it differently. The Terrans were forced to trade it, and use it for ice cracking on their ice ball of a homeworld, while the Mau built a technological society upon it, and the Haikala built weapons of mass destruction. The first to achieve spaceflight was the Mau, sending probes out to discover the other species, who had known each other sense telescopes and cities were invented. The first two species to effect each others development was the Haikala and Vika, when an errant ICBM caused an EMP burst over their global satellite network. The Terrans however were the first to send their Crononauts up to their moon and made first contact with the Mau, who had generally ignored the prospect of doing anything but conducting scientific research on the other four societies. The first meeting was peaceful, unlike the later first contact with Haikala, and the two began to agree on most things together, forming a council to make choices for them.

With technology and traders they knew they needed soldiers next, and with the Haikala embroiled in World War XIV the Terrans sent delegations, selling powerful and advanced cryo weapons to one of the losing factions, letting them eventually win the war with the backing of the new Union. Though her reform and war tactics ended up killing 340 million of her own people, she was heralded as the first of the age of enlightenment. With the military of the Haikala and the first space cruising ships, the other two species fell into line with ease. With their powerful but fragile union they began to produce ships of exploration, ranging from the Haikala ISS Yamato warship, to the Terran OSS False Profits trading ship, to the TSS Himmler the first long range science ship. These ships were fitted with prototype FTL drives, allowing them to reach nearby systems and begin expansion, their fleets building up as their territory expanded. Over 800 years later the Union is a great deal more stable and fears no one.

They control 17 Star systems, and own a Dyson's sphere as built by their founders, and are known for their reclusive nature. The only thing that ever seems to enter or leave their systems are the heavily armed trade convoys that even the boldest of pirates wouldn't raid. Their government is known for its intense Xenophobia, shooting down any ship that enters their space without a Xikran military escort. The only time they broke their xenophobia was with a sudden annexation of five star systems of a nearby empire without cause. A weak later Terran freighters dropped off the citizens, and all attempts to liberate the colonies failed, not even distress calls heard from the ships before their destruction. Their saboteurs destroy any FTL telescopes that can see into their space, as to continue their constant military and economic buildup.

8352 (Don't change this number. Keep it in your post.)


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Postby Creataris » Sat Nov 02, 2013 1:32 pm

I've edited my app because I forgot the two other species of the empire.
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Postby Vaxon » Sat Nov 02, 2013 1:35 pm

Creataris wrote:I've edited my app because I forgot the two other species of the empire.


Will edit you to say "multi-species".
Greetings, If you're reading this, YOU ARE A STALKER!
Now, in all seriousness, I am an American Male.
Greater Mackonia wrote:"A car carrying a Communist a Capitalist and a Fascist breaks down, the Communist implores for the three to unite and push the car forward, though it may take significant time and misery. The Capitalist declares that the three should hire a taxi, though it will be costly and the taxi only has room for two. The Fascist gets in the car, sounds the horn and pretends the car is still moving."

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Postby Veroxia » Sat Nov 02, 2013 2:25 pm

Interesting Vax..

I'm in. :lol:
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FT NATION:The Korosian Robotic Empire
HEAD OF STATE/GOVERNMENT:Emperor X-5
IDEOLOGY:FASCISM
/PRO-HUMAN/PRO-SYNTH/
/ANTI-ORGANIC/ANTI-TECHNOPHOBIA/

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Postby Vaxon » Sat Nov 02, 2013 2:26 pm

Veroxia wrote:Interesting Vax..

I'm in. :lol:


Alright. Feel free to make suggestion advantages/disadvantages in your app.
They may be added to the list, if I like them.
Greetings, If you're reading this, YOU ARE A STALKER!
Now, in all seriousness, I am an American Male.
Greater Mackonia wrote:"A car carrying a Communist a Capitalist and a Fascist breaks down, the Communist implores for the three to unite and push the car forward, though it may take significant time and misery. The Capitalist declares that the three should hire a taxi, though it will be costly and the taxi only has room for two. The Fascist gets in the car, sounds the horn and pretends the car is still moving."

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Postby Veroxia » Sat Nov 02, 2013 2:32 pm

Hmm..slow ships, slow army, ability to hack,psionics or whatever that is..and that is it for now as my suggestions.

And I bet you know what nation will be in my app.
FT NATION:The Korosian Robotic Empire
HEAD OF STATE/GOVERNMENT:Emperor X-5
IDEOLOGY:FASCISM
/PRO-HUMAN/PRO-SYNTH/
/ANTI-ORGANIC/ANTI-TECHNOPHOBIA/

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