Berate wrote:Bassyruk wrote:You're probably going to have to edit your history a lot, considering this pretty much screws up every else's history..
I tried to keep it fairly localized and separate from the rest of the world by putting things hundreds or thousands of years in the past, but if you'll let me know what I need to fix to make it work, I'll do so.
Okay, for a start you're going to have to edit the part about being independent during the ancient era because as you know Rome conquered Sicily during the First Punic War and I'm Rome. Sicily could only be independent as early as 476 AD where the Western Empire (Temporarily) collapsed and lost hold of its territories.
Next, Bassyruk is the Vandal Kingdom. The very same Germanic people who sacked Rome and they are located in Africa, so you're going to have to ask him about the Africa part in your history. Also the part about the Kingdom of Tyre, it contradicts with the history of the The Supreme Nizāri Caliphate of Palestine since they currently control that area.
EDIT: Never mind the part about the Nizāri Caliphate of Palestine since your history doesn't contradict with theirs after checking. Still, most of the events in your history wouldn't be possible since Sicily was never independent under Rome.



I would reccomend a Russian or Central European state (preferably Russian) and I would advise you to do a bit of research into the history of your chosen territories so that you can accurately speak on them and their customs/attitudes etc.

