I skimmed it..I agree. I don't even have good grammer and my dad and english teacher say so...>.> This App disturbes me greatly...I hope it's not an english teacher...
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by Stattr » Thu Oct 11, 2012 2:03 pm
Pasong Tirad wrote:Heresy. The earth is flat. It's evening everywhere. Stattr needs to be guillotined.
Hlad:And after that?
Ethel: She is moving in with you, you will equip a throne room for her, and bring her rose petals everyday. You shall dress in a french maid's outfit, and only speak english with a bad french accent.
by Jormengand » Thu Oct 11, 2012 2:08 pm
Jormengand wrote:It would be really meta if I sigged this.
by Stattr » Thu Oct 11, 2012 2:10 pm
Jormengand wrote:Stattr wrote:I skimmed it..I agree. I don't even have good grammear and my dad andeEnglish teacher say so...>.> ThisAapp disturbes me greatly...I hope it's not aneEnglish teacher...
You're not as bad as some of what I've seen on NS. It's mainly capitals, which don't really make any difference to how easy it is to read.
Pasong Tirad wrote:Heresy. The earth is flat. It's evening everywhere. Stattr needs to be guillotined.
Hlad:And after that?
Ethel: She is moving in with you, you will equip a throne room for her, and bring her rose petals everyday. You shall dress in a french maid's outfit, and only speak english with a bad french accent.
by Jormengand » Thu Oct 11, 2012 2:16 pm
Jormengand wrote:It would be really meta if I sigged this.
by Stattr » Thu Oct 11, 2012 2:23 pm
Pasong Tirad wrote:Heresy. The earth is flat. It's evening everywhere. Stattr needs to be guillotined.
Hlad:And after that?
Ethel: She is moving in with you, you will equip a throne room for her, and bring her rose petals everyday. You shall dress in a french maid's outfit, and only speak english with a bad french accent.
by Mondrova » Thu Oct 11, 2012 4:00 pm
by Mondrova » Thu Oct 11, 2012 4:36 pm
by Mondrova » Thu Oct 11, 2012 4:47 pm
Shadyrya wrote:Mondrova wrote:
Mka, does that mean they are targeted more? Also, what is the Prison exactly. From what I can gather it is a facility, inside of which is like a civilization of sorts. There are lands and buildings etc... Is this right?
Almost pinpoint. Cell-borns are either very high or very low in society.
by Mondrova » Thu Oct 11, 2012 7:32 pm
by Stattr » Fri Oct 12, 2012 4:46 pm
Ile Tobi wrote:Perhaps i was off my game when i wrote that ,do i get a retry.
Pasong Tirad wrote:Heresy. The earth is flat. It's evening everywhere. Stattr needs to be guillotined.
Hlad:And after that?
Ethel: She is moving in with you, you will equip a throne room for her, and bring her rose petals everyday. You shall dress in a french maid's outfit, and only speak english with a bad french accent.
by Ile Tobi » Tue Oct 16, 2012 1:42 pm
by Stattr » Tue Oct 16, 2012 3:37 pm
Ile Tobi wrote:NAME:Ivan Howard
GENDER:M
AGE:30
APPEARANCE(Picture preferred, not necessary):(Image)
ALIGNMENT(The Elder Army, Followers of the Impossible, Patripa):Followers of the Impossible
PROFESSION:Bounty Hunter/Assassin/Hacker
EXPERTISE(1-3):
Weapons:Ivan has a knowledge on all types of weapons from a plasma cannon to a razor,his knowledge of weapons come from his time in the US army.
Machinery:Ivan has a great knowledge of all types of machinery from his experience in war zones where he would occasionally disassemble machinery and reassemble then out of boredom.
IT/Hacking:Ivan ability in information technology came from his experience with machines,he later started to learn about computers more and coding.His knowledge of computer coding means he can hack any computer system including that of the prison.A skill such as hacking comes in very handy in the prison especially to avoid detection and enter in and out of unauthorized areas.
WEAKNESSES(One for every expertise):
Arrogance:Due to his vast knowledge of weapons,machinery and Hacking gives Ivan an arrogance which he is aware of and tries desperately to mask with little success.
Psychopathic:Due to his isolation and spending long times on machinery and computers he developed shallow emotions,reduced fear,stress tolerance, lacks empathy, has coldheartedness, lacks guilt, is egocentric,developed a superficial charm,became more irresponsible, went a lot more by his impulse and when he was around other humans he is manipulative. All this are syntoms of psychopathcy.
Delusional:Due to desperately trying to escape Ivan lives a delusional dream that he can escape and return to his family.His delusional dream has got him into a lot of trouble and has greatly affected his mental and physical health.
WEAPONRY(Keep it realistic to your group and profession):Plasma Pistols:Two pistols that shoot out beams of plasma.(Image)Plasma Sniper Rifle:A long range rifle that fires a long strip of plasma beam.(Image)Hand blades:A gauntlet worn on the hand that pulls out 2 rods with electricity flowing between that can kill or electrocute victims.(Image)
BIOGRAPHY(1-5 paragraph or longer):Ivan was life was not always in the prison,he had a life before the place.He was a normal man who fought for the Us army.
However all this changed when he suddenly found himself in the prison,he was badly injured and hurt.He later joined a group dedicated to escaping know as the followers of the impossible.He was always isolated from the group and set out on his quest to escape ignoring other members and fighting them for resources.Ivan later began a profession as a bounty hunter and assassin to earn resources to build what he calls the God.Due to his fragile and dangerous mental state he began adding replacing his body parts with artificial ones to improve efficientness, strength and progress in escaping.
RP SAMPLE(If none, write a paragraph or two):
Ivan was lay 1 feet away from his target blending in to the crowd of Elders,he had managed to trick them into believing he is one of them so as to kill his target.The name of the target or reason was not asked for Ivan cared why he they asked him,infact he asked no questions all he did was take the money and leave.He was close enough to the target to shoot at him however he didn't want to draw attention to himself.He walked towards the target(who was alone) and asked him a simple question:"Are you aware someone is trying to kill you"? The target was now in a frenzy he looked around him and said: "yes i am aware someone is trying to kill me and how do yo... Before the the target had a chance to finish he trusth his hand blades into his chest and ran off into the shadows.
Pasong Tirad wrote:Heresy. The earth is flat. It's evening everywhere. Stattr needs to be guillotined.
Hlad:And after that?
Ethel: She is moving in with you, you will equip a throne room for her, and bring her rose petals everyday. You shall dress in a french maid's outfit, and only speak english with a bad french accent.
by Ile Tobi » Wed Oct 17, 2012 8:12 am
Stattr wrote:Ile Tobi wrote:NAME:Ivan Howard
GENDER:M
AGE:30
APPEARANCE(Picture preferred, not necessary):(Image)
ALIGNMENT(The Elder Army, Followers of the Impossible, Patripa):Followers of the Impossible
PROFESSION:Bounty Hunter/Assassin/Hacker
EXPERTISE(1-3):
Weapons:Ivan has a knowledge on all types of weapons from a plasma cannon to a razor,his knowledge of weapons come from his time in the US army.
Machinery:Ivan has a great knowledge of all types of machinery from his experience in war zones where he would occasionally disassemble machinery and reassemble then out of boredom.
IT/Hacking:Ivan ability in information technology came from his experience with machines,he later started to learn about computers more and coding.His knowledge of computer coding means he can hack any computer system including that of the prison.A skill such as hacking comes in very handy in the prison especially to avoid detection and enter in and out of unauthorized areas.
WEAKNESSES(One for every expertise):
Arrogance:Due to his vast knowledge of weapons,machinery and Hacking gives Ivan an arrogance which he is aware of and tries desperately to mask with little success.
Psychopathic:Due to his isolation and spending long times on machinery and computers he developed shallow emotions,reduced fear,stress tolerance, lacks empathy, has coldheartedness, lacks guilt, is egocentric,developed a superficial charm,became more irresponsible, went a lot more by his impulse and when he was around other humans he is manipulative. All this are syntoms of psychopathcy.
Delusional:Due to desperately trying to escape Ivan lives a delusional dream that he can escape and return to his family.His delusional dream has got him into a lot of trouble and has greatly affected his mental and physical health.
WEAPONRY(Keep it realistic to your group and profession):Plasma Pistols:Two pistols that shoot out beams of plasma.(Image)Plasma Sniper Rifle:A long range rifle that fires a long strip of plasma beam.(Image)Hand blades:A gauntlet worn on the hand that pulls out 2 rods with electricity flowing between that can kill or electrocute victims.(Image)
BIOGRAPHY(1-5 paragraph or longer):Ivan was life was not always in the prison,he had a life before the place.He was a normal man who fought for the Us army.
However all this changed when he suddenly found himself in the prison,he was badly injured and hurt.He later joined a group dedicated to escaping know as the followers of the impossible.He was always isolated from the group and set out on his quest to escape ignoring other members and fighting them for resources.Ivan later began a profession as a bounty hunter and assassin to earn resources to build what he calls the God.Due to his fragile and dangerous mental state he began adding replacing his body parts with artificial ones to improve efficientness, strength and progress in escaping.
RP SAMPLE(If none, write a paragraph or two):
Ivan was lay 1 feet away from his target blending in to the crowd of Elders,he had managed to trick them into believing he is one of them so as to kill his target.The name of the target or reason was not asked for Ivan cared why he they asked him,infact he asked no questions all he did was take the money and leave.He was close enough to the target to shoot at him however he didn't want to draw attention to himself.He walked towards the target(who was alone) and asked him a simple question:"Are you aware someone is trying to kill you"? The target was now in a frenzy he looked around him and said: "yes i am aware someone is trying to kill me and how do yo... Before the the target had a chance to finish he trusth his hand blades into his chest and ran off into the shadows.NAME:Ivan Howard
GENDER:M
AGE:30
APPEARANCE(Picture preferred, not necessary):
ALIGNMENT(The Elder Army, Followers of the Impossible, Patripa):Followers of the Impossible
PROFESSION:Bounty Hunter/Assassin/Hacker
EXPERTISE(1-3):
Weapons:Ivan has knowledge on all types of weapons from a plasma cannon to a razor, his knowledge of weapons come from his time in the US army.
Machinery:Ivan has a great knowledge of all types of machinery from his experience in war zones where he would occasionally disassemble machinery and reassemble then out of boredom.
IT/Hacking:Ivan ability in information technology came from his experience with machines, he later started to learn about computers more and coding. His knowledge of computer coding means he can hack any computer system including that of the prison. A skill such as hacking comes in very handy in the prison especially to avoid detection and enter in and out of unauthorized areas.
WEAKNESSES(One for every expertise):
Arrogance:Due to his vast knowledge of weapons, machinery and Hacking gives Ivan an arrogance which he is aware of and tries desperately to mask with little success.
Psychopathic:Due to his isolation and spending long times on machinery and computers he developed shallow emotions, reduced fear, stress tolerance, lacks empathy, has cold-heartedness, lacks guilt, is egocentric, developed a superficial charm, became more irresponsible, went a lot more by his impulse and when he was around other humans he is manipulative. All this are symptoms of psychopaths.
Delusional:Due to desperately trying to escape Ivan lives a delusional dream that he can escape and return to his family. His delusional dream has got him into a lot of trouble and has greatly affected his mental and physical health.
WEAPONRY(Keep it realistic to your group and profession):Plasma Pistols:Two pistols that shoot out beams of plasma.Plasma Sniper Rifle:A long range rifle that fires a long strip of plasma beam.Hand blades:A gauntlet worn on the hand that pulls out 2 rods with electricity flowing between that can kill or electrocute victims.
BIOGRAPHY(1-5 paragraphs or longer):Ivan was life was not always in the prison, he had a life before the place. He was a normal man who fought for the Us army.
However all this changed when he suddenly found himself in the prison, he was badly injured and hurt. He later joined a group dedicated to escaping know as the followers of the impossible. He was always isolated from the group and set out on his quest to escape ignoring other members and fighting them for resources. Ivan later began a profession as a bounty hunter and assassin to earn resources to build what he calls the God. Due to his fragile and dangerous mental state he began adding/replacing his body parts with artificial ones to improve efficentness, strength and progress in escaping.
RP SAMPLE(If none, write a paragraph or two):
Ivan was lay 1 foot away from his target blending in to the crowd of Elders, he had managed to trick them into believing he is one of them so as to kill his target. The name of the target or reason was not asked for Ivan cared why he they asked him; infact, he asked no questions all he did was take the money and leave. He was close enough to the target to shoot at him however he didn't want to draw attention to himself. He walked towards the target(who was alone) and asked him a simple question: “Are you aware someone is trying to kill you"? The target was now in a frenzy he looked around him and said: "yes I am aware someone is trying to kill me and how do yo... Before the target had a chance to finish he thrust his hand blades into his chest and ran off into the shadows.
Their is a difference, your spelling is fine, but the keyboard has a "space bar" for a reason....
by CoolLand » Wed Oct 17, 2012 8:19 am
by TechTown » Wed Oct 17, 2012 8:54 am
by Jormengand » Wed Oct 17, 2012 8:59 am
TechTown wrote:oh; crossbows aren't irrelevant are they?
Jormengand wrote:It would be really meta if I sigged this.
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