Repeal Affordable Transgender Hormone Therapy

[The Candy Of Bottles]

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Sex chromosome anomalies

[Blueflarst]

The backlash of nations wishing to oppress trans people is exactly why we needed this resolution to pass.

I do not want t oppress anyone but recognizing as official genders something more than male and female and in the not human nations hermaphtodite is not acceptable. At the moemnt you can not change your body to be other gender with functional genitals i treat the self called transgender people in my nation with the same respect i treat the other citizens You heard well i am no totallitarian monster but i will say to you something maybe they can lose their minds feeling as a gender they are not but they will not be the gender they want never in their life unless the science really invents something to change the sex without mutilating the genitals which will not happen soon maybe in the future it will but not in this decade The transgender claims are not acceptable hormone therapies are experiments backed by big capitalist fat cats to eanr funding

[Blueflarst]

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Sex chromosome anomalies

Wait i did not knew such things exists
I will revise it with attention

[Blueflarst]

OOC: It has tons of spelling mistakes and seems poorly written.
IC: "This resolution is the stupidest thing I have seen, and I will not vote for it. The resolution your trying to repeal is helping people who need transgender hormone treatment get it."

OOC i know ther are errors it is draft
IC Bullshit they do not need hormones but cleaning their minds

[Imbalistan]

OOC: It has tons of spelling mistakes and seems poorly written.
IC: "This resolution is the stupidest thing I have seen, and I will not vote for it. The resolution your trying to repeal is helping people who need transgender hormone treatment get it."

OOC i know ther are errors it is draft
IC Bullshit they do not need hormones but cleaning their minds

"I can say the same with you sir, if anything, your mind needs to be cleaned."

[Cekoviu]

The backlash of nations wishing to oppress trans people is exactly why we needed this resolution to pass.

I do not want t oppress anyone but recognizing as official genders something more than male and female and in the not human nations hermaphtodite is not acceptable. At the moemnt you can not change your body to be other gender with functional genitals i treat the self called transgender people in my nation with the same respect i treat the other citizens You heard well i am no totallitarian monster but i will say to you something maybe they can lose their minds feeling as a gender they are not but they will not be the gender they want never in their life unless the science really invents something to change the sex without mutilating the genitals which will not happen soon maybe in the future it will but not in this decade The transgender claims are not acceptable hormone therapies are experiments backed by big capitalist fat cats to eanr funding

The Cekovian transcriber has requested that you speak more slowly and add clear punctuation breaks.

[Cekoviu]

OOC: It has tons of spelling mistakes and seems poorly written.
IC: "This resolution is the stupidest thing I have seen, and I will not vote for it. The resolution your trying to repeal is helping people who need transgender hormone treatment get it."

OOC i know ther are errors it is draft
IC Bullshit they do not need hormones but cleaning their minds

With all due respect, Ambassador, that has been tried before and it has failed badly. We submit to you the case of Leelah Alcorn, from the United States.

[Araraukar]

I do not want t oppress anyone but [oppressing people]

OOC: Do you honestly not read what you write?

Also, it's still illegal for the reasons I first posted.

[Kenmoria]

(OOC: As far as legality is concerned, you need to make sure that the only thing you are doing is repealing the resolution. I recommend removing everything that isn’t a preambulatory clause then sticking a ‘Hereby repeals’ with the name of the resolution at the end. Also, I encourage you to find a different topic. This one is very unlikely to succeed.)

[Separatist Peoples]

Read the Rules, linked in my sig. This is illegal and will be removed if it is submitted and not in compliance with every applicable rule.

[Blueflarst]

II drafT

While the self called transgender people are real they do not constitute any physical gender over their born gender.

It is irrelevant if someone considers their gender another than the born

Their personal experiences are not physical excepting the rare groups with uncommon cromossomes. Only the people with these rare cromossomes should be able to obtain medical treatment for it. In the cases without rare cromossomes there is no physical fact supporting their claims to have recognition as another gender and their affirmations sounds abusrd.

The gender dysphoria must not be treated with hormones which can produce unknown consequences on the body

The gender identity is not something real out of the gender ideology concepts and must not be taken as relevant

The hormony therapy should be only able to people with rare cromossomes and not be utilised as a distress for anyone like a common drug

Hereby repeals the World Assembly legistation towards the hormone therapy

[Cekoviu]

II drafT

While the self called transgender people are real they do not constitute any physical gender over their born gender.

It is irrelevant if someone considers their gender another than the born

Their personal experiences are not physical excepting the rare groups with uncommon cromossomes. Only the people with these rare cromossomes should be able to obtain medical treatment for it. In the cases without rare cromossomes there is no physical fact supporting their claims to have recognition as another gender and their affirmations sounds abusrd.

The gender dysphoria must not be treated with hormones which can produce unknown consequences on the body

The gender identity is not something real out of the gender ideology concepts and must not be taken as relevant

The hormony therapy should be only able to people with rare cromossomes and not be utilised as a distress for anyone like a common drug

Hereby repeals the World Assembly legistation towards the hormone therapy

OOC: This is somehow worse in terms of scientific content and grammar.

[The New Nordic Union]

II drafT

While the self called transgender people are real they do not constitute any physical gender over their born gender.

It is irrelevant if someone considers their gender another than the born

Their personal experiences are not physical excepting the rare groups with uncommon cromossomes. Only the people with these rare cromossomes should be able to obtain medical treatment for it. In the cases without rare cromossomes there is no physical fact supporting their claims to have recognition as another gender and their affirmations sounds abusrd.

The gender dysphoria must not be treated with hormones which can produce unknown consequences on the body

The gender identity is not something real out of the gender ideology concepts and must not be taken as relevant

The hormony therapy should be only able to people with rare cromossomes and not be utilised as a distress for anyone like a common drug

Hereby repeals the World Assembly legistation towards the hormone therapy

OOC:

1. Please put newer drafts in the original post.

2. Ignoring everything else, illegal because in violation of the understandable English rule.

[Kenmoria]

(OOC: As Nordic Union said, put your current draft in the opening post, so that it is easier to find for players. Generally, you should put your draft through a spell checker and grammar checker, since currently it is quite hard to follow. I don’t think it does fall afoul of the understandable English rule, but there are lots of things your can easily fix. For example, ‘cromossomes’ should be ‘chromosomes’, though those clauses don’t make much sense anyway.)

[The New California Republic]

Qualifies as debatable is the gender indentities are product of mental disorders of lots of self reasoning and introspection with caratrofic results.

Huh?

[Cekoviu]

Qualifies as debatable is the gender indentities are product of mental disorders of lots of self reasoning and introspection with caratrofic results.

Huh?

OOC: The spelling in the proposal really is caratroficly bad.

[Vrama]

Namaste,

We support a repeal of the obviously illegal Hormone Resolution.

That said, the Repeal needs to be rewritten to make it legal. Repeals simply repeal. They can't do anything else. Also, such repeal is unlikely to pass.

[Kenmoria]

Namaste,

We support a repeal of the obviously illegal Hormone Resolution.

That said, the Repeal needs to be rewritten to make it legal. Repeals simply repeal. They can't do anything else. Also, such repeal is unlikely to pass.

(OOC: What was illegal about Affordable Transgender Hormone Therapy? It doesn’t matter much, since illegality can’t be used in a repeal, but there are ways to work some of the rules into a valid format with careful wording.)

[The New California Republic]

We support a repeal of the obviously illegal Hormone Resolution.

GenSec ruled it legal, unless you have picked up on this "obvious" something that GenSec missed...?

[Araraukar]

II drafT

OOC: Still illegal for the same reasons as before. With Understandable English arguably picked up as a new illegality.

[Imperium Anglorum]

We support a repeal of the obviously illegal Hormone Resolution.

GenSec ruled it legal, unless you have picked up on this "obvious" something that GenSec missed...?

[The Unfounded]

"Oh goody! I was hoping for more kindling with which to start a campfire!"

Alexis immediately hides the resolution away in a small pack.

"More s'mores, woohoo! Oh, and categorically opposed. The rationale is stupid, the claims made are stupid, the proposition is stupid. You should feel bad for entering the chamber with this drivel, your proofreaders should either be fired, fined, or both, and you should take some time to bequeath upon yourself even a rudimentary understanding of the difference between the concepts of sex and gender, as you seem to have the two fundamentally confused."

[Sierra Lyricalia]

"You people are so lacking in imagination it hurts."

[Gudmund]

Has there ever been any successful LGBT repeals in the past? Or legitimately bad LGBT resolutions that just weren't accepted? Anything positive in this territory passes one-sidedly.

[United Massachusetts]

Has there ever been any successful LGBT repeals in the past? Or legitimately bad LGBT resolutions that just weren't accepted? Anything positive in this territory passes one-sidedly.

See: "Marriage Equality"