by Andromeda Islands » Sun Dec 23, 2018 6:45 pm
by The Sheika » Sun Dec 23, 2018 7:31 pm
Andromeda Islands wrote:
Whereas
Nuclear Weapons are an existential threat to the lives of all people.
I can't really say if this really helps or hurts your proposal. I would consider perhaps revising it, if not removing it all together.Whereas
Peace loving nations have a desire for a long and lasting peace.
This section is debatable. Perhaps your nation is in an era in your part of the multiverse where nuclear weapons are no longer necessary, but what of nations who find themselves surrounded by non-member states who are considerably armed? Peace can indeed be achieved without the abolition of nuclear arms, removing them does not guarantee peace it only means that those who are in the WA would not have them if this were to somehow pass, AFTER NAPA was somehow repealed.Whereas
We live in an era where nuclear weapons are no longer necessary
and it is impossible to achieve a long and lasting peace without
first eliminating all nuclear weapons.
I strongly advise some revision to this section. What exactly are you trying to say? I have an idea, but some clarity would be quite welcome.Whereas
Those nations which insist on having nuclear weapons are putting
their people in a greater danger than any danger nations
which have no such weapons are in.
Whereas
If nations with large stockpiles gradually reduce these stockpiles
we as peace loving nations can finally achieve peace in our
time.
Therefore be it resolved
That the World Assembly take all the steps necessary to negatiote
a lasting peace and to that end do everything within its power
to begin a dialogue on the abolition of nuclear weapons.
by Andromeda Islands » Sun Dec 23, 2018 8:01 pm
by Andromeda Islands » Sun Dec 23, 2018 8:06 pm
by Gig em Aggies » Sun Dec 23, 2018 8:09 pm
by Wrapper » Sun Dec 23, 2018 8:12 pm
Andromeda Islands wrote:Rather than trying to repeal the Nuclear Weapons Act,
The Sheika wrote:Since the Nuclear Arms Protection Act, henceforth referred to as NAPA, exists your proposal is in contradiction to NAPA and therefore illegal.
by Andromeda Islands » Sun Dec 23, 2018 8:16 pm
Wrapper wrote:Andromeda Islands wrote:Rather than trying to repeal the Nuclear Weapons Act,The Sheika wrote:Since the Nuclear Arms Protection Act, henceforth referred to as NAPA, exists your proposal is in contradiction to NAPA and therefore illegal.
Regardless of the merit of your arguments, if your proposal contradicts NAPA, it will be marked illegal and will not go to vote. To avoid this, you must either resolve the contradiction, or repeal NAPA.
by Andromeda Islands » Sun Dec 23, 2018 8:19 pm
by Andromeda Islands » Sun Dec 23, 2018 8:22 pm
by Wallenburg » Sun Dec 23, 2018 9:29 pm
by Sierra Lyricalia » Mon Dec 24, 2018 10:55 am
Wallenburg wrote:Resolutions must actually have some effect on member states. This does not.
by Andromeda Islands » Wed Dec 26, 2018 11:59 am
by Kenmoria » Wed Dec 26, 2018 12:49 pm
Andromeda Islands wrote:We must say (some of) you seem to underestimate our nation and of what she is capable.
That is not a surprise; it has happened to us for the last 1630 years that we have been active in the Global Community.
by Andromeda Islands » Wed Dec 26, 2018 1:24 pm
Kenmoria wrote:Andromeda Islands wrote:We must say (some of) you seem to underestimate our nation and of what she is capable.
That is not a surprise; it has happened to us for the last 1630 years that we have been active in the Global Community.
(OOC: It does not matter how long one has been active IC in the WA, that does not equate to actual experience with writing resolutions. Furthermore, even years experience does not equate to being allowed to break the rules of the GA. Unless your proposal has an effective mandate, or a suggestion, it will be removed from the voting floor and won’t have a chance to be voted upon by other players.
Also, put [DRAFT] in the title so other players know that this is a draft and can thus comment on it.)
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