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Postby Sarderia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 7:09 pm

Union Princes wrote:Any character from Dascus want to meet up with my knight?

I'd like to do so.
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Postby Sarderia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 7:09 pm

Can I sneak up to the Temple as vanguards or so?
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Postby Tomia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 7:15 pm

Sarderia wrote:Can I sneak up to the Temple as vanguards or so?

What do you mean by vanguards?

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Postby Union Princes » Tue Jul 02, 2019 7:17 pm

Tomia wrote:
Sarderia wrote:Can I sneak up to the Temple as vanguards or so?

What do you mean by vanguards?

I think he's referring to my post where I put down that Randolf was assigned to lead the vanguard of the Dascus army to assault the temple
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Postby Sarderia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 7:20 pm

Union Princes wrote:
Tomia wrote:What do you mean by vanguards?

I think he's referring to my post where I put down that Randolf was assigned to lead the vanguard of the Dascus army to assault the temple

Yeah, yeah, that could be. I'm scouting near the temple first and then returning to Randolph. A fairly short post.
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Postby Utceforp » Tue Jul 02, 2019 7:27 pm

Now, whether to have Yaleth in the temple of in the camp...
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Postby Galnius » Tue Jul 02, 2019 7:29 pm

Finland SSR wrote:
Tomia wrote:As a way to spur on conversation as we all start posting, any ship thoughts? :p

I've always thought Riki and Tenna would get along because neither one of them are the types to talk

but like

not talking is not good ship material

Yeah that's a great idea for a murder mystery plot.
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Postby Skyggeheim » Tue Jul 02, 2019 8:11 pm

Hey Tom, in order to clear a sort of sensitive topic - or one that could be - is it okay if Hercynia practices slavery?

I want to avoid any problematic writings, but I figured we're going to address some of the realities of what seems like a relatively brutal universe, so I thought I'd ask before I write it in.

To clarify, I won't write anything disgusting or abhorrent. It's more of a semantics question.
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Postby Tomia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 8:15 pm

Skyggeheim wrote:Hey Tom, in order to clear a sort of sensitive topic - or one that could be - is it okay if Hercynia practices slavery?

I want to avoid any problematic writings, but I figured we're going to address some of the realities of what seems like a relatively brutal universe, so I thought I'd ask before I write it in.

To clarify, I won't write anything disgusting or abhorrent. It's more of a semantics question.

Ya I get you, and I appreciate the sensitivity, however, Zark would be the one to ask if slavery would exist in Hercynia. I could certainly see it but I don't want to confirm it until he gives the okay.

So if you are trying to finish your post I would say include it but be prepared to take it out if that's what Zark decides.
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Postby Skyggeheim » Tue Jul 02, 2019 8:18 pm

Tomia wrote:
Skyggeheim wrote:Hey Tom, in order to clear a sort of sensitive topic - or one that could be - is it okay if Hercynia practices slavery?

I want to avoid any problematic writings, but I figured we're going to address some of the realities of what seems like a relatively brutal universe, so I thought I'd ask before I write it in.

To clarify, I won't write anything disgusting or abhorrent. It's more of a semantics question.

Ya I get you, and I appreciate the sensitivity, however, Zark would be the one to ask if slavery would exist in Hercynia. I could certainly see it but I don't want to confirm it until he gives the okay.

So if you are trying to finish your post I would say include it but be prepared to take it out if that's what Zark decides.

My logic is, they think they're superior to others(especially other beastfolk). Raiding runs or those captured trying to enter their borders would probably not have much of a bright life left ahead of them.

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Postby Tomia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 8:20 pm

Skyggeheim wrote:
Tomia wrote:Ya I get you, and I appreciate the sensitivity, however, Zark would be the one to ask if slavery would exist in Hercynia. I could certainly see it but I don't want to confirm it until he gives the okay.

So if you are trying to finish your post I would say include it but be prepared to take it out if that's what Zark decides.

My logic is, they think they're superior to others(especially other beastfolk). Raiding runs or those captured trying to enter their borders would probably not have much of a bright life left ahead of them.

Ya, I don't disagree with that at all. But because Zark made them just want to give him final say there.

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Postby Skyggeheim » Tue Jul 02, 2019 8:55 pm

Post up. Included some worldbuilding about the Ko'el end of Hercynia.

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Postby Tomia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 9:02 pm

Skyggeheim wrote:Post up. Included some worldbuilding about the Ko'el end of Hercynia.

Nice post, one thing I'm uncertain of, have the fangs joined a side, or are they camped off in a neutral area?

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Postby Skyggeheim » Tue Jul 02, 2019 9:04 pm

Tomia wrote:
Skyggeheim wrote:Post up. Included some worldbuilding about the Ko'el end of Hercynia.

Nice post, one thing I'm uncertain of, have the fangs joined a side, or are they camped off in a neutral area?

They're neutral. Their mission is to observe and report, mostly. If fighting breaks out, I doubt they would step in on any side unless they're directly engaged.

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Postby Tomia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 9:07 pm

Skyggeheim wrote:
Tomia wrote:Nice post, one thing I'm uncertain of, have the fangs joined a side, or are they camped off in a neutral area?

They're neutral. Their mission is to observe and report, mostly. If fighting breaks out, I doubt they would step in on any side unless they're directly engaged.

Makes sense

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Postby Union Princes » Tue Jul 02, 2019 9:14 pm

I guess that's fine, Sarderia
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Postby The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune » Tue Jul 02, 2019 9:15 pm

If anyone wants to interact with Natasia, feel free.

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Postby Sarderia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 9:20 pm

Done. That was a particularly dark one, I think. Don't have the time to [img] all the doctor strange magic thingies so I suppose you all can figure it out

Any suggestions would be appreciated
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Postby Union Princes » Tue Jul 02, 2019 9:45 pm

As soon as we get a map of the temple and the it's surrounding terrain, I can move on with the planning
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Postby Tomia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 9:55 pm

Sarderia wrote:Done. That was a particularly dark one, I think. Don't have the time to [img] all the doctor strange magic thingies so I suppose you all can figure it out

Few things to address about the post Sarderia. Frist, no mind reading, that wasn't mentioned at all in the app and I don't think its a power magic could reasonably granted. Second, I don' think the General publicly ordered the attack. It would kind of defeat the purpose of the peace expedition in the temple. Thirdly, honestly this post kind of confirmed the fears I was having about the character in the review process. This char seems like an angry unstable villain who openly confessed to murder. I just don't see how that character fits into the hammer of Eboris.

Its not that the quality of the post was off, it really wasn't, in fact it was well written. But I feel like this was exactly the direction of the character I was trying to steer you away from in the review process.

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Postby Sarderia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 10:00 pm

Tomia wrote:
Sarderia wrote:Done. That was a particularly dark one, I think. Don't have the time to [img] all the doctor strange magic thingies so I suppose you all can figure it out

Few things to address about the post Sarderia. Frist, no mind reading, that wasn't mentioned at all in the app and I don't think its a power magic could reasonably granted. Second, I don' think the General publicly ordered the attack. It would kind of defeat the purpose of the peace expedition in the temple. Thirdly, honestly this post kind of confirmed the fears I was having about the character in the review process. This char seems like an angry unstable villain who openly confessed to murder. I just don't see how that character fits into the hammer of Eboris.

Its not that the quality of the post was off, it really wasn't, in fact it was well written. But I feel like this was exactly the direction of the character I was trying to steer you away from in the review process.

Hmm, very reasonable. I very much want to write a dark character so that I forgot our discussions lmfao, I'm taking the post down and probably will post the edit later
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Postby Tomia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 10:01 pm

Sarderia wrote:
Tomia wrote:Few things to address about the post Sarderia. Frist, no mind reading, that wasn't mentioned at all in the app and I don't think its a power magic could reasonably granted. Second, I don' think the General publicly ordered the attack. It would kind of defeat the purpose of the peace expedition in the temple. Thirdly, honestly this post kind of confirmed the fears I was having about the character in the review process. This char seems like an angry unstable villain who openly confessed to murder. I just don't see how that character fits into the hammer of Eboris.

Its not that the quality of the post was off, it really wasn't, in fact it was well written. But I feel like this was exactly the direction of the character I was trying to steer you away from in the review process.

Hmm, very reasonable. I very much want to write a dark character so that I forgot our discussions lmfao, I'm taking the post down and probably will post the edit later

Alright I appreciate that, thank you.

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Postby Sarderia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 10:04 pm

Tomia wrote:
Sarderia wrote:Hmm, very reasonable. I very much want to write a dark character so that I forgot our discussions lmfao, I'm taking the post down and probably will post the edit later

Alright I appreciate that, thank you.

One thing: can I keep the magic blast thing? It was very very nerfed, and I don't think it'll be powerful enough for open combat. For the combats I'll use what I wrote on my app.
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Postby Galnius » Tue Jul 02, 2019 10:05 pm

Post up. You have 1 observer a la carte, marinated for 3 days in leaves and mulch, with a side of cynicism for taste.
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Postby Tomia » Tue Jul 02, 2019 10:06 pm

Sarderia wrote:
Tomia wrote:Alright I appreciate that, thank you.

One thing: can I keep the magic blast thing? It was very very nerfed, and I don't think it'll be powerful enough for open combat. For the combats I'll use what I wrote on my app.

I honestly don't remember it specifically from the post. But if you can assure it won't be used for combat I'll keep that in mind when you post the revised post.

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