Illegal Planets wrote:The APP
Name: Cado Baas
Age: 54
Gender: Male
Allegiance paid to: Jedi Exiles
Rank: Knight
Appearance: Cado. Alternatively, Cado!
Personality: Sarcastic, headstrong, bold. Humorous, generous, sympathetic.
Force Sensitive: Yes
Skills/Powers: Form III - Form VII - Force Speed - Dopplegänger - Telekinesis - Art of the Small
Weaponry: Cado's weapon of choice is a minature saberstaff, suited for his stature, which can be seperated into shotos.
Ship: I4-Ionizer Starfighter
Biography: The Lannik known as Cado Baas spent his early life in the underlevels of Galactic City on Coruscant. Cado worked for a Verpine called Ulyx who operated as a fence. The pair also performed repairs and modifications on (usually ill-gotten) pieces of high-end technology, specifically starship parts. He was slow to learn the trade, but once he picked it up the young Lannik showed a knack for the mechanical.
Cado was 12 when he was discovered by Jedi Master Arten Ro'Druum, who sensed that the youth had more to offer than being a mere tinkerer. Ulyx declined to give him over to the Jedi, turning down every offer that Arten put forward. For the next two years, Arten would return and attempt to buy the boy from his caretaker. Ulyx eventually agreed in exchange for a pair of hyperdrives and a hefty sum of credits, allowing Cado to finally leave Coruscant to apprentice under the Jedi Master.
Cado would prove to be a capable though headstrong, sometimes aggressive Padawan. By the age of twenty, he had excelled in all his trials, save for one: the Trial of Spirit. He emerged from his trance frantic and disturbed, leaving the youth nearly traumatized by whatever visions he had seen. This troubled Arten greatly, and it would be a long seven years until Cado would be able to prove he was able to reconcile his fiery nature with the teachings of the Jedi.
Arten was killed at Eriadu when he and others were overwhelmed by Coalition forces. Cado swore retribution, intending to travel to Eriadu and take on the enemy himself, and would have had he not been directly commanded by the Grand Master, under threat of expulsion from the Order, against this course of action. As tensions between the rest of the galaxy and the Jedi rose, Cado is forced to go into hiding when the Order is disbanded.
Looks good, though could you just flesh out Cado's actions during the war? Was he a General? Spy? Where did he fight and with whom?
Also just about Lightsaber forms, Form III and Form VII are essentially opposites, I would have trouble reconciling a Jedi who uses both.
Also, after talking with Brusia we have come to the conclusion that there should be a temporary freeze on Coalition aligned characters. We only have one PC Alliance member as of this post, and we need more! Good guys can be fun too!