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Atreidya
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Postby Atreidya » Mon Jan 02, 2017 10:08 am

Tracian Empire wrote:
Atreidya wrote:


Here Tracian, what else do I need to fix on my application?

Try to write the strengths and weaknesses in sentences at least. The rest looks okay to me. There are still some capital letters around that have to be fixed.


Alright I will fix the sentences but I can't seem to find the capital letter problem can you point some out?

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Tracian Empire
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Postby Tracian Empire » Mon Jan 02, 2017 10:11 am

Atreidya wrote:
Tracian Empire wrote:Try to write the strengths and weaknesses in sentences at least. The rest looks okay to me. There are still some capital letters around that have to be fixed.


Alright I will fix the sentences but I can't seem to find the capital letter problem can you point some out?

Further, africa, Player, ocean, western(Europe)

It might sound like nitpicking, but it's just me :P
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Dires
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Postby Dires » Mon Jan 02, 2017 10:51 am

What's left?
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Social Libertarian/Authoritarian: -4.31
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Tracian Empire
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Postby Tracian Empire » Mon Jan 02, 2017 10:54 am

Dires wrote:What's left?

Spain without Catalonia and Aragon. Argentina. Some pieces of Africa. Some pieces of America.
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Tracian Empire
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Postby Tracian Empire » Mon Jan 02, 2017 10:54 am

Though, it depends. Tell us what you have in mind and we'll see what we can do.
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Sanabel
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Postby Sanabel » Mon Jan 02, 2017 10:56 am

Tracian Empire wrote:
Dires wrote:What's left?

Spain without Catalonia and Aragon. Argentina. Some pieces of Africa. Some pieces of America.

Persia?
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Tracian Empire
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Postby Tracian Empire » Mon Jan 02, 2017 10:58 am

Sanabel wrote:
Tracian Empire wrote:Spain without Catalonia and Aragon. Argentina. Some pieces of Africa. Some pieces of America.

Persia?

Not necessarily. Ik hasn't decided yet, and we might just allow her to take both Persia and Nepal, since Nepal is, well, Nepal.

At least, I would agree to such a thing. I haven't asked the board yet.
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Newne Carriebean7
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Postby Newne Carriebean7 » Mon Jan 02, 2017 11:00 am

Newne Carriebean7 wrote:Full Nation Name : Al Sahara Kirvani Dynastic Sultanate
Majority/Official Culture : Moroccan
Territorial Core : Morocco, Libya and Tunisia
Territorial Claim : the rest of Algeria
Capital City : Casablanca (called Casa Housini)
Population : 3.523 million

Government Type : Monarchy
Government Ideology/Policies : The Sultanate is torn between an old generation of neutrality that is rapidly fading and a new generation of modern radicals that want to bring the nation into the 19th century kicking and screaming. There are two main groups, the alrruuws albayda', or white heads, and the ruasa' al'ahmar or red heads. The White Heads represent the old order that wishes to maintain the traditions of the nation and not to modernize,relying on the teachings of Allah and negotiation, they are mainly led by the older heads of state and former town overseers. The Red Heads are much younger and often leave the nation to seek out other western style technologies and loans from foreign lands. They mainly wish to take the nation into the modern age and invite western capitalists to invest in the nation. As the second group is in charge of the Armed forces, they are trying their hardest to modernize the armed forces, with limited success as of yet.
Government Focus : The nation is currently testing the waters and has several different focuses they are working on, with a mainly western style education system getting a majority of rescources, and a small textile industry starting up with investors. The military is getting the butt's end of funding, and as such they flock to the ruasa' al'ahmar ranks and are
Head of State : Prince Jafar Agbar
Head of Government : King Hasha Agbar Sr.
Government Description : The Government of Al Sahara as it is called is based entirely on the power balance between the Son, who commands the army,navy and the armed forces, and the Father, who is in charge of running the nation, the house of Shalez, a local ministry of 120 elders that vote on issues, they are appointed equally with a 60/60 split between Hasha and Jafar. There are no elections, as the elders rule until death or five years before 90, in which they may appoint a successor via a smoked leaf. There is a strong sense of loyalty only to whomever either put them in power first or whom pays them the most, and corruption runs rampant throughout the government.

Majority/State Religion : Hebjazism ( 70%) Sunni Islam ( 18%) Jesuit( 2%) Shia ( 9%) Other (1%)
Religious Description : Hebjazism is a religious break off of Sunni Islam in which Allah is ultimate, but there are also lesser prophets that tell of the stories and bards of Allah in an attempt to teach the masses, the three pillars of Hebjazism are : 1. Material Wealth is of little importance, but not a sin ( to allow landlords to stay in power) 2. The Power to conduct good deeds trumps those that are considered bad. 3. The Blessings of Allah can only be acquired through semi daily prayer,mosque attendance and religious bargaining with other faiths to accept their ideas.

Economic Ideologies : Mercantalism
Major Production : Wool,Spices,local medicines and precious metals.
Economic Description : the economy of Al Sahara is mainly dependent on Imports from local tribes that have not fully allied with, but are ambivalent towards the feuding nobility on either side. It sells local materials that western nations need and want for a small profit, although they are often ripped off in price and forced into unequal economic treaties that fuel the flames of revolution more.

Army Strength : Slightly modernized, with a large number of peasant infantry armed with local guns made from gunsmiths that take dedicated time in getting paid for their hard work. the field cannons of the army are brand new,but only in a few dozen total.
Army Weakness : The number of heavy guns are minute and the average peasant has not a lot of experience in using the new European style weapons given to them. The men also have to take orders from the Prince and not the King, which brings up loyalty issues again.
Naval Strength : The Saharan Fleet is rather of modest size,with several ships having armored plates and several of them being the first vessels in the navy since it's conception. a total of 1 Ironclad 6 steam ships and 11 small gunboats are modern ships in the nation. The Navy also has dozens of traditional wooden galleys, and talks are underway for a new class of steam galleys that will free up manpower needed for more weapons.
Naval Weakness : Outdated and has old admirals that are stuck in the past, many of the sailors turn to piracy,which may get foreign powers involved and is seen as one of the more wreck less branches to the Saharan nation, with little oversight.
Further Military Description :

National Goals : Modernize the nation via getting foreign investors in the nation to build up railroads, factories and shipyards for the armed forces and the economy of the nation.
National Issues :The nation needs to figure out how to modernize within a short period of time, but there are several major obstacles.
1. Scores of local tribes are leading several resistance movements,many of whom did not want to be part of the union in the first place, and instead of modernizing the army, more focus in put on defeating the rebels using traditional methods, as a major fear is the rebels acquiring the western guns and turning them agaisnt the nation's army in a bloody revolution.
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National Ambition/Aspirations :

History :
1756- Prince Calfar begins the Morrocan Empire under the Al Calfarbagdagi Dynasty (1756-1790) by uniting the first 18 of 20 local tribes that were scattered after a collapse in the 17th century.
1760 Prince Calfar, with the nation behind him, attempts to invade east into Algeria, and fails, himself dying on the trip.
1772- Prince Calfar II, his successor, invades east into Algeria Again and makes headway this time, conquering the sandy nation.
1790, Al Sarwai Kohrani overthrows Prince Calfar III and declares the a Sultanate instead. the Khonari Dynastic sultanate (1790-1810) is formed.
1791-1800 Kohrani begins several modernization efforts, including the first shipyard in 1796 with help from France.
1800- Rebel nobles, upset at paying high taxes and feeling Kohrani is pushing the nation too much revolt and attempts to overthrow him, but this leads to a devastating civil war that results in the rebels being defeated.
1810- Taking Advantage of the political instability, Kirvani Agbar and his forces overthrow Kohrani and start a new dynasty,The Al Sahara Agbar Dynasty, and this dynasty has ruled the nation to the present day.
1833- Plauge of Kafir kills 60,000 people, army called in to kill survivors. The Genocide of Harsla boosts popularity of rival Dynasty called the Shareb Kifa Dynasty, led by Rasouli Groseli Kifa.
1835- Kifa begins a second civil war when he attempts to overthrow the Agbar Dynasty
1846- Battle of Sachelb Els Kisi, Decisive Agbarian loyalist victory, ends the Kifa rebellion or second North African civil war
1850- First meeting of the Council of Elders, tax system formed with small exceptions to loyal nobility and soldiers.
1855- Scandal of Jeszar, a council of elders member that took 300,000 Jarebs (currency) and loaned them to rival warlords, he is purged and Council of Elders is investigated by Prince Jafar, agaisnt his father's wishes. The investigation turns up 23 other members who are executed or exiled from the nation.This begins cracks in the Al Sahara Agbar Dynasty, cracks that will soon give way...

Comparison Points – Political : 1
Comparison Points – Cultural/Religious : 4
Comparison Points – Economy : 2
Comparison Points – Military : 3
Total Comparison Points used (10 Points MAX) : 10/10

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Tracian Empire
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Postby Tracian Empire » Mon Jan 02, 2017 11:01 am

Far from complete.
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Postby Cabana » Mon Jan 02, 2017 12:14 pm

So for whomever is playing Deseret, this site may be of interest to you: http://2deseret.com/
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The V O I D
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Postby The V O I D » Mon Jan 02, 2017 1:48 pm

I can't wait to get this thing started.

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Auchterland
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Postby Auchterland » Mon Jan 02, 2017 2:04 pm

Woo, finally back! Got an app nearly by the half. I'll re-edit my claims, since it's been over 48h since I made mine and the Intermountain States have recently made theirs, including Kentucky and West Virginia.

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Conchabira
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Postby Conchabira » Mon Jan 02, 2017 2:09 pm

Sorry I've been gone for awhile, will post my app with the history in an hour or two.

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Tracian Empire
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Postby Tracian Empire » Mon Jan 02, 2017 2:34 pm

The V O I D wrote:I can't wait to get this thing started.

Me neither.

I'll begin with the coronation, though I'm unsure if I should start by receiving the foreign delegations in Constantinople, like I did the last time when I held an event there, or by simply starting with the coronation.
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The V O I D
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Postby The V O I D » Mon Jan 02, 2017 2:37 pm

Tracian Empire wrote:
The V O I D wrote:I can't wait to get this thing started.

Me neither.

I'll begin with the coronation, though I'm unsure if I should start by receiving the foreign delegations in Constantinople, like I did the last time when I held an event there, or by simply starting with the coronation.


Either-or works, I think. I'll likely end up having my first post be the Emperor and Imperial Princess be there, and post about Italia itself afterward.

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Tracian Empire
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Postby Tracian Empire » Mon Jan 02, 2017 2:45 pm

The V O I D wrote:
Tracian Empire wrote:Me neither.

I'll begin with the coronation, though I'm unsure if I should start by receiving the foreign delegations in Constantinople, like I did the last time when I held an event there, or by simply starting with the coronation.


Either-or works, I think. I'll likely end up having my first post be the Emperor and Imperial Princess be there, and post about Italia itself afterward.

The last time I did something similar though it took an eternity to receive everyone, one by one. It would be for the best to start by describing the coronation and saying that the foreign dignitaries are there, and then maybe have the newly crowned Emperor interact with people.

But ugh, De Ceremoniis is so confusing.
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South Mauristan
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Postby South Mauristan » Mon Jan 02, 2017 3:18 pm

The V O I D wrote:I can't wait to get this thing started.

Yes so let's do it! :lol2:
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Postby Danceria » Mon Jan 02, 2017 3:24 pm

South Mauristan wrote:
The V O I D wrote:I can't wait to get this thing started.

Yes so let's do it! :lol2:

I would like to, but I'm not sure I'm accepted, or how to overseas.
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Postby Novacom » Mon Jan 02, 2017 4:33 pm

Danceria wrote:
South Mauristan wrote:Yes so let's do it! :lol2:

I would like to, but I'm not sure I'm accepted, or how to overseas.


Where's your app again?

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Postby The Ik Ka Ek Akai » Mon Jan 02, 2017 6:56 pm

La dee da

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Auchterland
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Postby Auchterland » Mon Jan 02, 2017 8:32 pm

Reservation

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South Mauristan
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Postby South Mauristan » Tue Jan 03, 2017 6:39 am

Please don't die!
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Tracian Empire
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Postby Tracian Empire » Tue Jan 03, 2017 6:53 am

South Mauristan wrote:Please don't die!

It most certainly won't die.
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South Mauristan
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Postby South Mauristan » Tue Jan 03, 2017 6:57 am

Tracian Empire wrote:
South Mauristan wrote:Please don't die!

It most certainly won't die.

Well then when will the IC get started? You yourself said it's been very quiet recently!
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Postby Novacom » Tue Jan 03, 2017 7:01 am

South Mauristan wrote:
Tracian Empire wrote:It most certainly won't die.

Well then when will the IC get started? You yourself said it's been very quiet recently!

It's more the fact that there's a decrease in arguing and a lot of people are getting back to thinks now, so we're going to have a looksee through the apps sort things out and likely have an IC up by the end of the week.

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