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by Peace Loving Warlords » Sun Jul 26, 2015 9:44 pm
by Beiarusia » Sun Jul 26, 2015 9:45 pm
by Military Democracy of Birtonia » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:18 pm
by New Grestin » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:25 pm
Military Democracy of Birtonia wrote:NameDesmond Schloss:
Nation Name:Military Democracy of Birtonia
Birthplace:San Fransisco, California
Ethnicity:Mixed, Caucasian, Filipino
Age:37
Pic/Description:(Image)
Occupation:Former Combat Medic
Immunity:Full
(OPTIONAL)
Personality: Pretty serious, but also laid back at the same time, intense use of sarcasm
Skills:High proficient with a wide variety of small arms, limited hand to hand combat skills, medical expertise
Likes:Guns, women, beer, America
Dislikes:Fascists, raiders, liars, vodka, showboaters
Fears:Dying alone
Bio: This man was thrust into this hellish univerise when he was only ten years old. His mother and father were both United States Military at the time, which led to his safekeeping whilst this apocalypse ravaged on. In time, as the U.S. government slowly dissolved into the Remnants, Desmond was finally old enough to exact some revenge on the evil out in the world. As he completed training, becoming one of the top soldiers of his cycle he began to realize the Remnants was not the true America he once knew and loved. However necessity mandated that he stay with them to keep himself alive. Now that they have dissolved into the annals of history, he is on his own, looking for somewhere to call home in this waste land.
RP Examples:PW: Banished Throne
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
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by Military Democracy of Birtonia » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:27 pm
New Grestin wrote:Military Democracy of Birtonia wrote:NameDesmond Schloss:
Nation Name:Military Democracy of Birtonia
Birthplace:San Fransisco, California
Ethnicity:Mixed, Caucasian, Filipino
Age:37
Pic/Description:(Image)
Occupation:Former Combat Medic
Immunity:Full
(OPTIONAL)
Personality: Pretty serious, but also laid back at the same time, intense use of sarcasm
Skills:High proficient with a wide variety of small arms, limited hand to hand combat skills, medical expertise
Likes:Guns, women, beer, America
Dislikes:Fascists, raiders, liars, vodka, showboaters
Fears:Dying alone
Bio: This man was thrust into this hellish univerise when he was only ten years old. His mother and father were both United States Military at the time, which led to his safekeeping whilst this apocalypse ravaged on. In time, as the U.S. government slowly dissolved into the Remnants, Desmond was finally old enough to exact some revenge on the evil out in the world. As he completed training, becoming one of the top soldiers of his cycle he began to realize the Remnants was not the true America he once knew and loved. However necessity mandated that he stay with them to keep himself alive. Now that they have dissolved into the annals of history, he is on his own, looking for somewhere to call home in this waste land.
RP Examples:PW: Banished Throne
Not sure on this one.
Bei, do you or another Co-Op mind taking a look at this? I'm kinda on the fence.
by Sarejo » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:28 pm
New Grestin wrote:Military Democracy of Birtonia wrote:NameDesmond Schloss:
Nation Name:Military Democracy of Birtonia
Birthplace:San Fransisco, California
Ethnicity:Mixed, Caucasian, Filipino
Age:37
Pic/Description:(Image)
Occupation:Former Combat Medic
Immunity:Full
(OPTIONAL)
Personality: Pretty serious, but also laid back at the same time, intense use of sarcasm
Skills:High proficient with a wide variety of small arms, limited hand to hand combat skills, medical expertise
Likes:Guns, women, beer, America
Dislikes:Fascists, raiders, liars, vodka, showboaters
Fears:Dying alone
Bio: This man was thrust into this hellish univerise when he was only ten years old. His mother and father were both United States Military at the time, which led to his safekeeping whilst this apocalypse ravaged on. In time, as the U.S. government slowly dissolved into the Remnants, Desmond was finally old enough to exact some revenge on the evil out in the world. As he completed training, becoming one of the top soldiers of his cycle he began to realize the Remnants was not the true America he once knew and loved. However necessity mandated that he stay with them to keep himself alive. Now that they have dissolved into the annals of history, he is on his own, looking for somewhere to call home in this waste land.
RP Examples:PW: Banished Throne
Not sure on this one.
Bei, do you or another Co-Op mind taking a look at this? I'm kinda on the fence.
by New Grestin » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:29 pm
Military Democracy of Birtonia wrote:Well, do you need more RP experience? I can provide
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
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by Sarejo » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:36 pm
by Beiarusia » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:38 pm
Military Democracy of Birtonia wrote:>SNIP<
Sarejo wrote:>SNIP<
by Military Democracy of Birtonia » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:40 pm
Beiarusia wrote:Military Democracy of Birtonia wrote:>SNIP<
Alright, I ask two things. 1) The Remnants fell apart a long time ago so what has he been doing in the mean time? Is he simply wandering around or is something driving him towards Colorado? 2)I'm disinclined for soldiers but I'll accept if he's not a "top soldier". He can have military training but I prefer him to not be a military badass for the sake of not killing any monster that gets in the way with little trouble.
by New Grestin » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:41 pm
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
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by Sarejo » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:43 pm
Beiarusia wrote:Military Democracy of Birtonia wrote:>SNIP<
Alright, I ask two things. 1) The Remnants fell apart a long time ago so what has he been doing in the mean time? Is he simply wandering around or is something driving him towards Colorado? Generally beef up the bio. 2)I'm disinclined for soldiers but I'll accept if he's not a "top soldier". He can have military training but I prefer him to not be a military badass for the sake of not killing any monster that gets in the way with little trouble.Sarejo wrote:>SNIP<
While I'm inclined to work it in as cannon it has not been made public knowledge. He's not even from a faction from California. He's from the Remnants.
by Sarejo » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:44 pm
Military Democracy of Birtonia wrote:Beiarusia wrote:Alright, I ask two things. 1) The Remnants fell apart a long time ago so what has he been doing in the mean time? Is he simply wandering around or is something driving him towards Colorado? 2)I'm disinclined for soldiers but I'll accept if he's not a "top soldier". He can have military training but I prefer him to not be a military badass for the sake of not killing any monster that gets in the way with little trouble.
Yeah I was thinking him just kinda wandering around? And as far as a military badass. He was a medic, not infantry or special forces nonsense. And finally, I didn't read everything so forgive me but what happened with the west coast?
by Beiarusia » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:44 pm
New Grestin wrote:Much appreciated, Bei.
Also, my last post detailing the Vultures and Emperor Bill and what not, was that too over the top?
For whatever reason, I feel like it was a bit too over the top.
by Beiarusia » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:46 pm
Sarejo wrote:Military Democracy of Birtonia wrote:Yeah I was thinking him just kinda wandering around? And as far as a military badass. He was a medic, not infantry or special forces nonsense. And finally, I didn't read everything so forgive me but what happened with the west coast?
Well, being the first guy from there, I uhh, took some liberties with its lore. Which Bei has approved...
by New Grestin » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:46 pm
Beiarusia wrote:New Grestin wrote:Much appreciated, Bei.
Also, my last post detailing the Vultures and Emperor Bill and what not, was that too over the top?
For whatever reason, I feel like it was a bit too over the top.
I kind of like him being over the top. It makes him seem a bit psychotic to an extreme degree, as such being unpredictable and dangerous. Plus we always need some comedic relief.
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
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by Beiarusia » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:47 pm
New Grestin wrote:Beiarusia wrote:I kind of like him being over the top. It makes him seem a bit psychotic to an extreme degree, as such being unpredictable and dangerous. Plus we always need some comedic relief.
Well, at least there's that. When I finish up with LoF, I may take out the part about him having statues and shit, but at the same time, that feels like the first thing people would steal after the apocalypse.
by The United Federation of Terrans » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:48 pm
by Sarejo » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:49 pm
by Military Democracy of Birtonia » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:50 pm
Sarejo wrote:Beiarusia wrote:He was born there years before the Outbreak even started. It's fine. If we ever head west then things will be added.
I'm talking about if he stayed in San Fran after the Outbreak and tried to have it under Remnant control. Either that, or I can make the Californian Empire be formed at a later date, say, after the Remnants fall. As long as he doesn't touch Portland, Washington, or Vancouver, I have no problems with modifying my Doc.
by Beiarusia » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:51 pm
Sarejo wrote:>SNIP<
by New Grestin » Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:52 pm
Beiarusia wrote:New Grestin wrote:Well, at least there's that. When I finish up with LoF, I may take out the part about him having statues and shit, but at the same time, that feels like the first thing people would steal after the apocalypse.
I feel that the statues would have been untouched after civilization fell since there's no reason to grab them as they're pretty much useless. So it's likely that he could have found them in the museum and taken them himself since he's the type of person to do that.
Let’s not dwell on our corpse strewn past. Let’s celebrate our corpse strewn future!
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