Fvaarniimar wrote:The Drone Empire wrote:@Fvaar
DAMN that was a lot of text. I mean, do you want me to judge them?
They seem pretty damn interesting, and you put a crap-ton of work into those Bios it seems (Compared to my work. XD)
I can't approve it or anything, but they seem pretty decked out.
Thanks! As for judging- if you would like. I don't wish to inconvenience you if you have other matters to attend to, but I would appreciate it. And as for bio length... 35 centuries does not a short bio make. That's even considering the frequent "and for the next x centuries, things continued in more or less this manner" timeskip filler stuff.
Regarding approval- I plan to submit them post- Copycat. We'll see how that goes.
It might be helpful to put each character separately. Walls of text are good, but the GM has to read every last bit of info to make sure nothing untoward is being inserted... not saying that's what you did, though. Just consider that our GM writes English as a third language.
As for me... my dyslexia makes things difficult. Would it be possible to add a summary to that first bio? It's an excellent writeup but I'd have to trawl through it completely again if I ever wanted to bring in an element that touches upon the character's backstory, or if I wanted to make sure an element didn't clash with that backstory.
Also, guys, I'm not OOC OP anymore. Make sure you sent app links to Cer so he sees them.