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Postby Swith Witherward » Thu Jun 26, 2014 6:47 pm

Fvaarniimar wrote:
The Drone Empire wrote:@Fvaar

DAMN that was a lot of text. I mean, do you want me to judge them?

:P They seem pretty damn interesting, and you put a crap-ton of work into those Bios it seems (Compared to my work. XD)

I can't approve it or anything, but they seem pretty decked out. :D

Thanks! :D As for judging- if you would like. I don't wish to inconvenience you if you have other matters to attend to, but I would appreciate it. And as for bio length... 35 centuries does not a short bio make. That's even considering the frequent "and for the next x centuries, things continued in more or less this manner" timeskip filler stuff.

Regarding approval- I plan to submit them post- Copycat. We'll see how that goes.

It might be helpful to put each character separately. Walls of text are good, but the GM has to read every last bit of info to make sure nothing untoward is being inserted... not saying that's what you did, though. Just consider that our GM writes English as a third language.

As for me... my dyslexia makes things difficult. Would it be possible to add a summary to that first bio? It's an excellent writeup but I'd have to trawl through it completely again if I ever wanted to bring in an element that touches upon the character's backstory, or if I wanted to make sure an element didn't clash with that backstory.


Also, guys, I'm not OOC OP anymore. Make sure you sent app links to Cer so he sees them.
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Postby The New Velociraptor Empire » Thu Jun 26, 2014 6:51 pm

I can't get either of the Carmen Sandiego themes out of my head, and I have not even played those edutainment games
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Postby Monfrox » Thu Jun 26, 2014 6:54 pm

Monfrox wrote:
Tiltjuice wrote:
I didn't count him as one, but I think the numbers are easy to edit if the Ambassador does count.

I see. Okay then.

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Postby Swith Witherward » Thu Jun 26, 2014 6:57 pm

The New Velociraptor Empire wrote:I can't get either of the Carmen Sandiego themes out of my head, and I have not even played those edutainment games

Where in the world is Carmen Sandiego? I believe the Raptors ate her!

Okay, if I owe a post to you, please put the link here. If Cer owes a post... other than Fritz's man, I don't know if any characters are active... put the link here and I'll try to reply to it. I'm still hip deep in some "help me" stuff that came in, plus a few other things that I need to wrap up before I leave this weekend.
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Postby Tiltjuice » Thu Jun 26, 2014 6:57 pm

Monfrox wrote:
Monfrox wrote:I see. Okay then.

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Postby Monfrox » Thu Jun 26, 2014 7:00 pm

So yeah, I backed into something for the first time in ever today.
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Postby Mincaldenteans » Thu Jun 26, 2014 7:01 pm

Swith Witherward wrote:
The New Velociraptor Empire wrote:I can't get either of the Carmen Sandiego themes out of my head, and I have not even played those edutainment games

Where in the world is Carmen Sandiego? I believe the Raptors ate her!

Okay, if I owe a post to you, please put the link here. If Cer owes a post... other than Fritz's man, I don't know if any characters are active... put the link here and I'll try to reply to it. I'm still hip deep in some "help me" stuff that came in, plus a few other things that I need to wrap up before I leave this weekend.


Mab: viewtopic.php?f=31&t=267202&p=20674125#p20674125

But b/c you're leaving this weekend, we can pause it after your reply or just pause it right where it is. I'm fluid whichever is easier for you.

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Postby Fvaarniimar » Thu Jun 26, 2014 7:03 pm

Swith Witherward wrote:
Fvaarniimar wrote:Thanks! :D As for judging- if you would like. I don't wish to inconvenience you if you have other matters to attend to, but I would appreciate it. And as for bio length... 35 centuries does not a short bio make. That's even considering the frequent "and for the next x centuries, things continued in more or less this manner" timeskip filler stuff.

Regarding approval- I plan to submit them post- Copycat. We'll see how that goes.

It might be helpful to put each character separately. Walls of text are good, but the GM has to read every last bit of info to make sure nothing untoward is being inserted... not saying that's what you did, though. Just consider that our GM writes English as a third language.

As for me... my dyslexia makes things difficult. Would it be possible to add a summary to that first bio? It's an excellent writeup but I'd have to trawl through it completely again if I ever wanted to bring in an element that touches upon the character's backstory, or if I wanted to make sure an element didn't clash with that backstory.


Also, guys, I'm not OOC OP anymore. Make sure you sent app links to Cer so he sees them.

*Snort*
Okay, cool. Cer typically, when not slightly goofing on grammar, does not seem to write English as a third language. More like a first. Similarly, I never would have guessed about the dyslexia in a million years, barring the paranormal, an actual meeting, or both of these.

Hence, hopefully you can understand my forgetting.

Anyway, I'm honored that, in spite of your dyslexia, you took the time to trawl through the long bio, and I'll get to work on those edits.

Also- did you get my most recent TG?
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Postby Giovenith » Thu Jun 26, 2014 8:03 pm

Arastold, in case you missed this: viewtopic.php?p=20686960#p20686960
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Postby New Aksarben » Thu Jun 26, 2014 8:17 pm

Okay, I should probably post here. Anything important that's changed or are things about the same?
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Postby Giovenith » Thu Jun 26, 2014 8:18 pm

New Aksarben wrote:Okay, I should probably post here. Anything important that's changed or are things about the same?


About the same, though those who are on Nick's story have gathered in the lobby. I also sent Willow to check on the astrolabe.
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Postby New Aksarben » Thu Jun 26, 2014 8:27 pm

Giovenith wrote:
New Aksarben wrote:Okay, I should probably post here. Anything important that's changed or are things about the same?


About the same, though those who are on Nick's story have gathered in the lobby. I also sent Willow to check on the astrolabe.

Oh cool, I'll type something for Sterling then.

Are there still people in the dining room at breakfast, or has that passed?
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Postby Giovenith » Thu Jun 26, 2014 8:28 pm

New Aksarben wrote:
Giovenith wrote:
About the same, though those who are on Nick's story have gathered in the lobby. I also sent Willow to check on the astrolabe.

Oh cool, I'll type something for Sterling then.

Are there still people in the dining room at breakfast, or has that passed?


Still quite a few people there, I believe, though many are already in conversation.
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Postby Swith Witherward » Thu Jun 26, 2014 8:53 pm

Mincaldenteans wrote:
Swith Witherward wrote:Where in the world is Carmen Sandiego? I believe the Raptors ate her!

Okay, if I owe a post to you, please put the link here. If Cer owes a post... other than Fritz's man, I don't know if any characters are active... put the link here and I'll try to reply to it. I'm still hip deep in some "help me" stuff that came in, plus a few other things that I need to wrap up before I leave this weekend.


Mab: viewtopic.php?f=31&t=267202&p=20674125#p20674125

But b/c you're leaving this weekend, we can pause it after your reply or just pause it right where it is. I'm fluid whichever is easier for you.

I think I'll leave it to Cer since he's wanting to use Fritz men and I honestly don't know poop about them. It was his suggestion... and I play them about as well as I play Fram. Which is to say, I can't pull it off. *laughs*
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Postby Tiltjuice » Thu Jun 26, 2014 9:10 pm

Yay! Fennec flashmob!
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Postby Swith Witherward » Thu Jun 26, 2014 9:10 pm

Okay, bedtime for the fennec. I'm worn out.

Goodnight peeps!!!
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Postby Swith Witherward » Thu Jun 26, 2014 9:11 pm

Tiltjuice wrote:Yay! Fennec flashmob!

Yep. When ya want something done right... go campy! :p
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Postby The BranRiech » Thu Jun 26, 2014 9:11 pm

Hey, Swith, would you be so kind as to consider sending someone along on Bran's final arc when it comes time for that?

:)

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Postby Tiltjuice » Thu Jun 26, 2014 9:11 pm

Swith Witherward wrote:Okay, bedtime for the fennec. I'm worn out.

Goodnight peeps!!!


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Postby Giovenith » Thu Jun 26, 2014 9:12 pm

The BranRiech wrote:Hey, Swith, would you be so kind as to consider sending someone along on Bran's final arc when it comes time for that?

:)


Why do I see that in epic fonts with a deep voice when I read that?

BRAN'S FINAL ARC

Night Swith!
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Postby Tiltjuice » Thu Jun 26, 2014 9:14 pm

Swith Witherward wrote:
Tiltjuice wrote:Yay! Fennec flashmob!

Yep. When ya want something done right... go campy! :p


Absolutely! :D
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Postby The Carlisle » Thu Jun 26, 2014 9:23 pm

I'm wondering what Fvaar's got up his sleeve. :p
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Postby The BranRiech » Thu Jun 26, 2014 9:28 pm

Giovenith wrote:
The BranRiech wrote:Hey, Swith, would you be so kind as to consider sending someone along on Bran's final arc when it comes time for that?

:)


Why do I see that in epic fonts with a deep voice when I read that?

BRAN'S FINAL ARC

Night Swith!

It's gon' be awesome!

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Postby New Aksarben » Thu Jun 26, 2014 9:43 pm

Hmm. I had the idea to draw my characters in my own style, including the human ones like Sigtrygg. Might be fun.

I'm also always open for requests from people here if they want me to draw character pictures for them. I'm pretty good working from text descriptions only think. :D
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Postby Tiltjuice » Thu Jun 26, 2014 9:48 pm

New Aksarben wrote:Hmm. I had the idea to draw my characters in my own style, including the human ones like Sigtrygg. Might be fun.

I'm also always open for requests from people here if they want me to draw character pictures for them. I'm pretty good working from text descriptions only think. :D


*notes down*

Goodnight PL, done IC.

*lurk, lurk*
Beauty is not in the face; beauty is a light in the heart. -Khalil Gibran
Cut red tape with the Red Book / Bureaucracy is a system - #ApplyTNI / Think globally, act locally
At fifteen, I set my heart on learning. At thirty, I was firmly established. At forty, I had no more doubts. At fifty, I knew the will of heaven. At sixty, I was ready to listen to it. At seventy, I could follow my heart's desire without transgressing what was right. ~Analects, 2:4
I wear teal, blue, pink, and red for Swith.
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