Rate the AN's Chosen Factbook!

[Norse Inuit Union]

This is a really good example of how to make a good on how legislation works. It's very fleshed out and I bet you did a lot of research into how legislation works. My only feedback of improvement is that you could add in the capabilities section, if there is another branch of government, what checks it has on said branches but from what I read on that section you may have done some of that. 9/10.

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BN: Rate my Overview

[BlakeIsHere]

It's decent but can be somewhat confusing and a little less complex, but it's good. 6.5/10.

For BN, rate this: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=bla ... id=1876765.

[Ekag]

It's decent but can be somewhat confusing and a little less complex, but it's good. 6.5/10.

For BN, rate this: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=bla ... id=1876765.

4/10. It's a good start, and I certainly do find it interesting, but it just isn't long enough. A few more paragraphs and it'd be perfect.

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On the other end of the spectrum, this might be a little too long...

[Diarcesia]

It's decent but can be somewhat confusing and a little less complex, but it's good. 6.5/10.

For BN, rate this: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=bla ... id=1876765.

4/10. It's a good start, and I certainly do find it interesting, but it just isn't long enough. A few more paragraphs and it'd be perfect.

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On the other end of the spectrum, this might be a little too long...

It's indeed extensive that it needs to be in FF.net. I'm a bit constrained for time, so I skimmed some parts of it. Obviously, no custom formatting because of the external website used, but I liked your writing, detail, and thoroughness of your world. So that's an 8.5/10

Rate: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=dia ... id=1196271

[Valentine Z]

Ahh, I see that the banner has been put into and it definitely does fit your nation and your people. On the topic of content, great stuff as always, and I especially do love the part about food. After all, the one thing that I love about someone's nation is their cuisine. 8/10.

https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1867507

[Ekag]

Ahh, I see that the banner has been put into and it definitely does fit your nation and your people. On the topic of content, great stuff as always, and I especially do love the part about food. After all, the one thing that I love about someone's nation is their cuisine. 8/10.

https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1867507

I absolutely LOVE these! I’d put a little more work into describing each ending but otherwise I really like the image, the template (which you seem to have made yourself), and the fact that you’ve added a source for most of your endings! 9/10.

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https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1877909, which I will add is a redirect to a fanfiction.net version. I’m considering returning to the old Google Doc to allow everyone to comment on it and help me out. Tell me what you think by sending a TG.

[Chaolan]

Ahh, I see that the banner has been put into and it definitely does fit your nation and your people. On the topic of content, great stuff as always, and I especially do love the part about food. After all, the one thing that I love about someone's nation is their cuisine. 8/10.

https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1867507

I absolutely LOVE these! I’d put a little more work into describing each ending but otherwise I really like the image, the template (which you seem to have made yourself), and the fact that you’ve added a source for most of your endings! 9/10.

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https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1877909, which I will add is a redirect to a fanfiction.net version. I’m considering returning to the old Google Doc to allow everyone to comment on it and help me out. Tell me what you think by sending a TG.

10/10 - The fact that it was too big speaks volumes to how good your world building is and how dedicated you are to your nationstate.

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=cha ... id=1875341

[Equai]

Firstly I gave it a brief scroll through just so see how long it is and its pretty long which is not a bad thing, especially for a factbook that's dealing with so the length is admirable and amazing. Of course I could be spending over an hour breaking everything down but that won't give the amount of effort you put into crafting this factbook justice. Formatting is awesome and the amount I read shows a good writing skills. One thing that really did irks me is the infoobox that's pasted page-wide.. That has significant downing of the page design so because of that i have to give it 8/10

BN this one

[Union Hispanica de Naciones]

Althought I don't agree with communism, it's a really good format of factbook! and has lot's of details which I like!
BN: put in translate if you don't understand

[Indecent Anime Empire]

9/10 due to wow that's a lot of text, I like it on the conceptual basis of IC depth but the image to text ratio in the main body pushes me away from reading through it all.

BN https://www.nationstates.net/nation=ind ... id=1868065 this one

[Union Hispanica de Naciones]

9/10 due to wow that's a lot of text, I like it on the conceptual basis of IC depth but the image to text ratio in the main body pushes me to read through it all.

BN https://www.nationstates.net/nation=ind ... id=1868065 this one

yeah, for some reason NS is weird with commands when I write something.
/skipme

[Chaolan]

Firstly I gave it a brief scroll through just so see how long it is and its pretty long which is not a bad thing, especially for a factbook that's dealing with so the length is admirable and amazing. Of course I could be spending over an hour breaking everything down but that won't give the amount of effort you put into crafting this factbook justice. Formatting is awesome and the amount I read shows a good writing skills. One thing that really did irks me is the infoobox that's pasted page-wide.. That has significant downing of the page design so because of that i have to give it 8/10

BN this one

I understand about the info box, unfortunately I haven’t found a way to format that into the proper Wikipedia style. If you could provide some direction in that regard, that would be fantastic

/skip me

[Equai]

Firstly I gave it a brief scroll through just so see how long it is and its pretty long which is not a bad thing, especially for a factbook that's dealing with so the length is admirable and amazing. Of course I could be spending over an hour breaking everything down but that won't give the amount of effort you put into crafting this factbook justice. Formatting is awesome and the amount I read shows a good writing skills. One thing that really did irks me is the infoobox that's pasted page-wide.. That has significant downing of the page design so because of that i have to give it 8/10

BN this one

I understand about the info box, unfortunately I haven’t found a way to format that into the proper Wikipedia style. If you could provide some direction in that regard, that would be fantastic

/skip me

Switch [box] tags with [sidebar] tags^^
/skip me

[Sheizou]

8/10! very nice, easy to understand. I like that you did something for the flag symbolism! (that was a lot of skipme scrolling lol)

Sorry I can't post a link, but do my leader factbook, Kira of the dead

[Equai]

I remember that factbook, I read it for another F7 game about leader opinion. It was very well written with interesting wiki-style formatting which I liked, a lot. I would however give "-" ones used to transfer the text under table of content black color so its unnoticeable and it would really make factbook look cleaner. Also here you can make signature for Kira. All in all 9/10 because some parts are still missing to make factbook fully complete

[Chaolan]

I remember that factbook, I read it for another F7 game about leader opinion. It was very well written with interesting wiki-style formatting which I liked, a lot. I would however give "-" ones used to transfer the text under table of content black color so its unnoticeable and it would really make factbook look cleaner. Also here you can make signature for Kira. All in all 9/10 because some parts are still missing to make factbook fully complete

You did not choose a fact book, but I do want to thank you for helping to move my box to the side making my wiki even greater. So 10/10 for that.

Also https://www.nationstates.net/nation=equ ... id=1870742 10/10 for Bella Santorini because she is leng loi

[Gaybeans]

You did not choose a fact book, but I do want to thank you for helping to move my box to the side making my wiki even greater. So 10/10 for that.

Also https://www.nationstates.net/nation=equ ... id=1870742 10/10 for Bella Santorini because she is leng loi

oops, you also didn't choose one! I will edit this in a minute to describe my response cause it's long and I refuse to be ninja'd

wow! it's so in depth and goes deep into aspects I've not seen in other factbooks like energy sources and stuff. I am honestly blown away with the amount of effort in this. 10/10

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=gay ... id=1879460 since i actually finished one lmao

[Equai]

I like the formatting, its the same as from Kira's factbook and how I said there - I love it. Table of Content is amazingly formatted as well so it gives more cleaner look and information presented is rich and well put out. Granted it lacks some visual aid in the body but plus points for including signature. All in all, I will give it 9.5/10

Go on with this BN

[Equai]

/bump

[Of Memers]

6/10
https://www.nationstates.net/nation=of_ ... id=1881950

[Rhanukhan]

*treats Of Memers with the contempt that post deserves*

I like the formatting, its the same as from Kira's factbook and how I said there - I love it. Table of Content is amazingly formatted as well so it gives more cleaner look and information presented is rich and well put out. Granted it lacks some visual aid in the body but plus points for including signature. All in all, I will give it 9.5/10

Go on with this BN

Excellent quality work, Equai, the page is suitably informative and neatly laid out. This corporation has an involved and exciting history. Since there's a main logo, will there be individual logos for each channel? Could look nice. 8/10

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Enjoy a tale from Rhanukhani history, BN - https://www.nationstates.net/nation=rha ... id=1836734

[Neonian Technocracy]

9/10
awesom! I like the story!

here one: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=neo ... id=1873125

[Of Memers]

9/10

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=of_ ... id=1882922

[Trump Almighty]

I’m not a huge military factbook nerd, but your mecha-war robot descriptions was very… intriguing. You seem like the kind of person who either watches Transformers or plays Super Robot Wars

8/10

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=tru ... id=1813886

[East Plate]

6/10 - Well, that factbook certainly talks about a truly cursed timeline haha. I like the description, it is short and straight to the point, and uses a bit of humour in some parts, which is always welcomed. As for the map, well... I suppose that if we ignore how cursed it is, it is actually quite decent (although I have the slight suspicion it just comes from a Hearts of Iron or some other Paradox-like game). I'd suggest you add the map directly to the factbook by putting the URL of the image between [img][/ img]tags. I'm not sure if that image host is allowed in NationStates, but you can always reupload it to another host and problem solved... or at least make it an actual clickable link so we don't have to copy and paste it in the search bar (you can do this by using the [url=your link here]your text here[/url] tags).

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BN: Please rate this factbook about Eastplatine entertainment. I know the factbook is a bit too long, so if you don't feel like reading it all (I don't judge you for not wanting to read it), feel free to simply choose the section that catches your attention the most and rate that alone.