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[TEMPORARILY SHELVED] Commend Tinhampton

Postby Clever Homo Sapiens » Mon Jun 20, 2022 2:32 pm

This is my first Security Council draft! As always, all feedback is welcome.

Also, this draft is temporarily shelved, due to the very mixed reaction it's garnered.

Current draft:
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Noting that Tinhampton’s World Assembly delegation has authored or co-authored 14 General Assembly resolutions thus far, including,

  • Supporting People with Disabilities, which introduced protections for disabled persons on an international level, ensuring that they are not discriminated against on the grounds of disability,
  • LEO Force Restrictions, which prevents law enforcement officers from using excessive force against the citizens they are supposed to protect, rather than abuse, and requires the agencies which employ them to institute reforms to ensure this is the case, and,
  • Addressing Domestic Abuse, which mandates the full criminalization of domestic abuse and in each member state and that educational institutions play a role in reducing the occurrence and harms of domestic abuse involving youth, among other beneficial reforms,

Noticing that Tinhampton’s World Assembly delegation has also authored or co-authored multiple repeals due to crucial imperfections in target resolutions, including,

  • International Criminal Protocol, which permitted member nations to engage in capital punishment,
  • Voting Equality For Freed Inmates, which contained a provision allowing member states to sneakily deny sufferage to imprisoned persons, and,
  • On Multilateral Trade Talks, which did not actually require that member states join free trade agreements and refused to take into account the role of protectionist measures in developing the economies of least developed member states, among other flaws,

Appreciative that such activity in the General Assembly has not precluded Tinhampton and its World Assembly delegation from authoring multiple Security Council resolutions, and leaving assistive feedback on many General Assembly and Security Council resolutions,

Impressed that Tinhampton, with assistance, has also brought a dilemma involving the legalization of needle exchanges to the attention of political leaders across the world, via One in the Arm for @@LEADER@@, and,

Thankful that, in spite of doing the above, Tinhampton's leaders continuously find time to socialize with leaders of other nations off the record in a cordial manner,

Hereby,
Commends Tinhampton
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Postby Clever Homo Sapiens » Mon Jun 20, 2022 2:33 pm

OOC: Should I expand on Tinhampton's SC contributions, or is the way they are mentioned here good?

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Postby Araznan » Mon Jun 20, 2022 2:34 pm

Nice Draft!, Very well Written :clap:

I Mean it would Make your draft More able to be Voted on if you add More Contributions, but Other then That i Think its Good!
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Postby Fachumonn » Mon Jun 20, 2022 2:51 pm

This is essentially just mine with different resolutions and less fluff. I support in principle but there needs to be a lot more added.

EDIT: Why did you mention LEO Force Restrictions, that got repealed?
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Mon Jun 20, 2022 2:53 pm

Oh gods, not another one.

Completely and implacably opposed. Tinhampton’s failures and abandoned attempts far outnumber their limited successes.
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Postby The Orwell Society » Mon Jun 20, 2022 2:54 pm

From what I've heard, this will be widely opposed due to supposed controversy in gameplay, but I have no idea what said controversy is.

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Postby Fachumonn » Mon Jun 20, 2022 2:56 pm

The Orwell Society wrote:From what I've heard, this will be widely opposed due to supposed controversy in gameplay, but I have no idea what said controversy is.

This is what I call doing research. It's pretty easy to figure out the gist of it. I would only support a really well-written resolution of this, and this is not it, no matter how many lists it adds to attract newbies to thinking it's good.
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Postby Honeydewistania » Mon Jun 20, 2022 4:59 pm

I think a condemnation would suit Tinhampton better, but in spite of Fachumonn’s remarks this is a well written start, even if a bit light on content and for some reason including a repealed resolution.
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Postby Lile Ulie Islands » Mon Jun 20, 2022 5:41 pm

Tinhampton, I must say, is a very helpful proposal editor in both WA and SC areas. She helps many people, and I support this bill. Good job :)

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Postby Valentine Z » Mon Jun 20, 2022 5:45 pm

Despite the "failures outweighing her success", in my own unbiased opinion, that makes her a determinator, in the sense that she is able to come through with these many resolutions being passed despite her fighting a relatively uphill battle.

In support of this, at least for now unless I can get a better look, or if there are more findings. I think you could include more noteworthy proposals she has written.

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Postby Roylaii » Mon Jun 20, 2022 5:49 pm

An excellent start, I am interested to see how far this gets as i believe Tinhampton is a deserving nominee.
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Postby Black Hawks Matter » Tue Jun 21, 2022 3:45 am

You forgot to mention that Tinhampton is a woman. :eyebrow:

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Postby Fachumonn » Tue Jun 21, 2022 4:12 am

Black Hawks Matter wrote:You forgot to mention that Tinhampton is a woman. :eyebrow:

You... can't mention that in the SC...
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Postby WayNeacTia » Tue Jun 21, 2022 4:18 am

I have said it before and I will say it again. Both Auralia and Christian Democrats have contributed for more to the actual community than Tinhampton ever has and they will never be commended for it. All Tin contributes is meaningless minutiae that is repealed a very short time later. She also has a penchant for sticking her nose in business that is of no concern to her. All I see here is a list of authorships. There is more to the game than passing resoultions......

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OOC: After crunching the numbers, only 3 co-authored/authored WA resolution of Tinhampton, therefore Tinhampton has mostly succeeded at co-authoring/authoring. I’m not sure how many abandoned proposals are associated with Tinhampton, but unless the numbers are given to me or if Tinhampton does not approve this proposal, I support this. However, I feel that the author could look into some more non-WA contributions of Tinhampton to improve this proposal.
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Postby CBMC TUP Representative » Tue Jun 21, 2022 4:49 am

Fachumonn wrote:
Black Hawks Matter wrote:You forgot to mention that Tinhampton is a woman. :eyebrow:

You... can't mention that in the SC...
Black Hawks Matter wrote:You forgot to mention that Tinhampton is a woman. :eyebrow:


Yeah... IRL things are prohibited in SC resolutions...

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Postby WayNeacTia » Tue Jun 21, 2022 6:20 am

Anne of Cleves in TNP wrote:OOC: After crunching the numbers, only 3 co-authored/authored WA resolution of Tinhampton, therefore Tinhampton has mostly succeeded at co-authoring/authoring. I’m not sure how many abandoned proposals are associated with Tinhampton, but unless the numbers are given to me or if Tinhampton does not approve this proposal, I support this. However, I feel that the author could look into some more non-WA contributions of Tinhampton to improve this proposal.

Who gives a shit about resoultions? Writing resolutions isn't commendable. You already get a fucking badge for it.
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Postby Refuge Isle » Tue Jun 21, 2022 9:53 am

Black Hawks Matter wrote:You forgot to mention that Tinhampton is a woman. :eyebrow:

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Postby Floofybit » Tue Jun 21, 2022 9:57 am

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Anne of Cleves in TNP wrote:OOC: After crunching the numbers, only 3 co-authored/authored WA resolution of Tinhampton, therefore Tinhampton has mostly succeeded at co-authoring/authoring. I’m not sure how many abandoned proposals are associated with Tinhampton, but unless the numbers are given to me or if Tinhampton does not approve this proposal, I support this. However, I feel that the author could look into some more non-WA contributions of Tinhampton to improve this proposal.

Who gives a shit about resoultions? Writing resolutions isn't commendable. You already get a fucking badge for it.

They worked hard to develop Nationstates by writing resolutions. Just because someone doesn't create a successful region doesn't mean they can't be commended. You get a badge for Easter Eggs so badges aren't very meaningful. Writing resolutions and affecting the community IS meaningful.
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Postby Outer Sparta » Tue Jun 21, 2022 12:21 pm

Floofybit wrote:
Wayneactia wrote:Who gives a shit about resoultions? Writing resolutions isn't commendable. You already get a fucking badge for it.

They worked hard to develop Nationstates by writing resolutions. Just because someone doesn't create a successful region doesn't mean they can't be commended. You get a badge for Easter Eggs so badges aren't very meaningful. Writing resolutions and affecting the community IS meaningful.
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Ehh, depends on their contributions rather than just passing resolutions.
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