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Grand Finale!

Poll ended at Tue Mar 16, 2021 7:53 am

Overview Category - Zitravgrad – Bureau of the Premier & Office of the Prime Minister | Custom Overview - Policy - NS Stats
2
7%
History Category - Synne Industries – Sun Never Sets [ACT 2]
3
10%
Geography Category - Khoronzon – The World
5
17%
Military Category - Synne Industries – Providence
1
3%
Leaders Category - Zitravgrad – Kremlin's Dispatch #01 (Part 1/2) - Premier Kazimir I. Miroslavsky
9
30%
Misc. Category - Surrealist Patagonia – Death of the Patron - The Breakaway States of Patagonia (1976)
10
33%
 
Total votes : 30

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New Carthagea
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Postby New Carthagea » Thu Nov 12, 2020 8:50 am

I am voting for Montevento on this one. I find the formatting, pictures and content much more well-organised.
The Phoenician Kingdom of New Carthagea
Brief Overview | ♛ Government | ♖ People
The Father Has Come:  The Pope has started his 5 day visit to New Carthagea today in Phoenicia. He will meet HM The King later this day, and will address the joint session of the Parliament.
America Leaves Egypt! In a surprising turn of events, US President Biden has announced that he will be ordering the retreat of all American troops from American-occupied Egypt, says will work towards restoration of democracy.

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Fallen Albali
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Psychotic Dictatorship

Postby Fallen Albali » Thu Nov 12, 2020 9:02 am

yeah while I love Synne's factbook for its creativeness, when I read factbooks, I want the information moreso than the designs. Montevento's makes it easier to get said information and there's more of it, so I'm voting for them
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Khoronzon
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Postby Khoronzon » Thu Nov 12, 2020 5:09 pm

As always, Synne's factbook aesthetics are absolutely on point, but that's far from the only reason why I'm voting for them this round. Sure, Montevento's is more informative as an actual military factbook, and sure there's a lot of numbers being thrown around at the beginning of the Providence factbook, but after all that, the writing sections are just a lot more interesting to me on a conceptual level. Montevento's factbook is too standard for my tastes, while the Providence's descriptions make it so much more than just a battlecruiser, even a really big one with nonstandard dimensions and weird temporal properties. It uses the ridiculous size and weird physics of it not only to show how powerful a piece of military equipment it is, but also to showcase alien ecosystems and regions sprouting up along its mass, cultural perceptions of it, and incredibly unique technologies it uses. I can get why some people would vote for Montevento in this matchup, but for me personally, the Providence is an easy choice.
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Khoronzon
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Postby Khoronzon » Thu Nov 12, 2020 7:00 pm

Nooooooooooooooo wrote:Is it too late to enter?

Yes. It's been just over a month since sign-ups ended.
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World
The world is no longer as it once was, moulded beyond recognition by the hands of its coming masters. Humanity is faced with a simple choice: evolve, or die.

△▽△
[all lore is under reconstruction]
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ooc: they/them/girl/boss - notorious wumao - blowfly creature
flag homies: the celestial shurayu republic and uij, checkem out they're v based
all rise for the national anthem

中国共产党万岁

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Kwantlen Kanata
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Postby Kwantlen Kanata » Thu Nov 12, 2020 7:08 pm

this thread exists?!

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Bloodshade
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Postby Bloodshade » Thu Nov 12, 2020 8:40 pm

While looking at both factbooks, I'm going to go with Synne's due to the concept, writing and formatting at display. There's something about the aesthetic that Synne's gunning for which grabs my absolute attention. The art being used to depict every single aspect of the Providence is beautiful, suitable and fits the idea that I have whenever I think about SABER. My reasons are similar to that of Khoronzon's. The Providence is more than just a ship. It's an idea. I do appreciate Montevento's solid factbook design and approach but I personally have been leaning on creativity over convenience throughout the competition. That's just my personal opinion at least.

Both factbooks are great in their own ways, of course, but I personally believe Synne gets the edge.

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Valentine Z
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Postby Valentine Z » Fri Nov 13, 2020 8:51 am

Oh man, that was a very, very close one! Congratulations to Synne for the hard-fought victory, and still a great effort from Montevento for their amazing-looking factbooks. Again, losing is not the end of it all, and I will try my best with running Honourable Mentions! ♥

Next up, we have:

Cosmic Unity ChurchMethods of Conversion and of maintaining control
Synne IndustriesOzymandias 2, Return of the Ghost Plane

Good luck once again!
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Synne Industries
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Postby Synne Industries » Fri Nov 13, 2020 9:19 am

Ey, just a quick heads-up.
Because NScode is a stubborn little fellow and does not do indenting very well I've used a sort of duct-tape method with floats and Unicode characters to make the upcoming factbook work.
90% zoom on firefox is what I made the thing to work with but it may differ with monitors so just try around until there's nothing randomly jutting out to the left or right edge of the screen.

Hi, it's been a while. If you're seeing this then it means what I'm working on is not quite done yet. You can still read my old stuff but it's probably not canon anymore. I'll try to get something up soon. It may or may not involve wizards.


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New Carthagea
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Postby New Carthagea » Fri Nov 13, 2020 9:27 am

Synne Industries wrote:Ey, just a quick heads-up.
Because NScode is a stubborn little fellow and does not do indenting very well I've used a sort of duct-tape method with floats and Unicode characters to make the upcoming factbook work.
90% zoom on firefox is what I made the thing to work with but it may differ with monitors so just try around until there's nothing randomly jutting out to the left or right edge of the screen.

Yup, thanks for the note. It works at 50% for me on Chrome.
The Phoenician Kingdom of New Carthagea
Brief Overview | ♛ Government | ♖ People
The Father Has Come:  The Pope has started his 5 day visit to New Carthagea today in Phoenicia. He will meet HM The King later this day, and will address the joint session of the Parliament.
America Leaves Egypt! In a surprising turn of events, US President Biden has announced that he will be ordering the retreat of all American troops from American-occupied Egypt, says will work towards restoration of democracy.

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Valentine Z
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Postby Valentine Z » Sat Nov 14, 2020 10:03 am

Yet another close one, and another victory to Synne Industries! Both factbooks are nice in their own way, I will definitely give it that! ^^

Next up, we have:

Kyoki ChudokuKyoki Chudoku no Kugun (WIP)
SanghyeokOn "Magical Girl" Special Forces in the United Socialist Federation Military

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Valentine Z
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Postby Valentine Z » Sun Nov 15, 2020 11:55 am

With a 9-3 win, Kyoki takes home the victory! Congratulations, and a great effort from both sides! :3

And now, the very first three-way bracket!

ElflandThe Richeweir
The Restored Danelaw / North German RealmThe Alexandretta War (North German Realm)
Kyoki ChudokuProject Shiryō

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If you are reading my sig, I want you to have the best day ever ! You are worth it, do not let anyone get you down !
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Valentine Z
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Postby Valentine Z » Mon Nov 16, 2020 12:08 pm

And that concludes the last Military Bracket for this round with a 0-8-1. Congratulations to Danelaw for a rather landslide victory!

Moving on, we have now entered the very first bracket of... Leaders! New category, first bracket. :3

Surrealist PatagoniaKonrad "Maestro" Svoboda, The Patron of Surrealist Patagonia
The Krirken SwarmSwarm Queen Khik'an the Unifer

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If you are reading my sig, I want you to have the best day ever ! You are worth it, do not let anyone get you down !
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Surrealist Patagonia
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Postby Surrealist Patagonia » Mon Nov 16, 2020 4:24 pm

Good luck, Swarm guy.
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Kiu Ghesik
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Postby Kiu Ghesik » Mon Nov 16, 2020 4:30 pm

Legally obligated to vote for Konrad, but here are my thoughts:

Svoboda's is longer and more creatively formatted. Some of the images don't work, and the way the [blocktext] and [sidebar] tags interact is a little jank, but overall it makes for a better, more eye-catching read. Khik'an's is good, but could stand to differentiate itself some more in terms of going beyond that simple Napoleonic Europa wiki-template. There's lots of little tricks you can add in to make it more unique.

Also certain aspects of Khik'an's factbook, such as the header in her sidebar, are unreadable in dark-mode, so there's that. Svoboda's is more functional across different themes.

I do think Svoboda's factbook could stand to have the font size shrunk just a little; as it is the page looks cramped and it's a little irritating, for me at least. But who knows? That could just be another part of the z o o m.
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Valentine Z
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Postby Valentine Z » Tue Nov 17, 2020 12:42 pm

And with a 10-3, Patagonia wins! Congratulations, and a good effort from both! ♥

Next up, we have:

Wuchuprofile.html
DiarcesiaMonarch Primer: Phlegomy (2015-2058)

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Valentine Z
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Postby Valentine Z » Wed Nov 18, 2020 2:27 pm

With an 8-2, Wuchu wins! Congratulations, and nevertheless, a good effort from both players! Every factbook is unique! ♥

And now we have:

Western FardelshufflesteinKing Alastair Laertes Amadeus Ludwig Kehrer IV
New CarthageaKing Christophe II

Good luck! ♥

A reminder to not edit your factbooks if you are within the 3 brackets (~3 days, sorry my schedule is inconsistent)! Not that I am pointing my finger at someone because it is okay so far, but it helps to remind now and then, eh? ^^
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If you are reading my sig, I want you to have the best day ever ! You are worth it, do not let anyone get you down !
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Piste-Land
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Postby Piste-Land » Wed Nov 18, 2020 5:42 pm

It seems this might be a landslide...
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Kiu Ghesik
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Ex-Nation

Postby Kiu Ghesik » Wed Nov 18, 2020 5:42 pm

Yeah, sorry NC, just bad luck to be paired with ZE ALASTAIR!?
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Valentine Z
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Postby Valentine Z » Thu Nov 19, 2020 2:55 pm

With a 11-5, West Fard wins! Congratulations! ^^

Next up, we have:

GodularKal'Shazzar, High Executor of the Godulan Control Framework
Western FardelshufflesteinThrough the Rains Part 1

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Untecna
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Psychotic Dictatorship

Postby Untecna » Thu Nov 19, 2020 3:05 pm

Category: History
Factbook Title: The All About It Untecnan History Palooza Extravaganza
Factbook URL: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=untecna/detail=factbook/id=1452740
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Kiu Ghesik
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Postby Kiu Ghesik » Thu Nov 19, 2020 3:06 pm

It's closed to new entries, my guy. The contest has already started.
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 ✵  THE GREAT KIU - EJADRIR DEGHEU GIYEF KHUDEYVH. ✵ 

Questions | Soon | Nomadwave
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✵ ooc: i dont exist
She's loyal, smol, ready to rol. Big big bowl, full of rol. Smol rol, big bowl. Cinny rol, big bowl, smol rol.


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Voxija
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Civil Rights Lovefest

Postby Voxija » Fri Nov 20, 2020 3:55 pm

Alas, I can't vote for the other guy to break the tie. I already voted. Val Z, what did you do to that poll?
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Valentine Z
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Postby Valentine Z » Fri Nov 20, 2020 5:14 pm

Oh yeah, so sorry I didn't move on to the next one. With a 6-6, we now have a tie!

Voxija wrote:Alas, I can't vote for the other guy to break the tie. I already voted. Val Z, what did you do to that poll?

Oh, the vote ended. I set it so that the vote runs for exactly one day.
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