by Estovlaka » Thu Aug 13, 2020 3:52 pm
by Australian rePublic » Fri Aug 14, 2020 11:17 am
by Estovlaka » Sun Aug 16, 2020 1:59 pm
Australian rePublic wrote:Small nitpick, but why assume that resources are in the east of nation? Especially considering that in real life, resourses tend to be located on Western sides of things
by Tinhampton » Sun Aug 16, 2020 2:03 pm
by The Supreme Vatican Caliphate » Sun Aug 16, 2020 2:04 pm
by Estovlaka » Tue Aug 18, 2020 12:08 pm
Tinhampton wrote:What are these "resources," why do you need such a long title, and WHERE are your effect lines?
by Estovlaka » Tue Aug 18, 2020 12:12 pm
The Supreme Vatican Caliphate wrote:It’s @@NAME@@, not @@nation@@
You need to work on grammar.
You’re missing effect lines.
Alright, it seems that all your macros are lowercase. They have to be in all caps, such as @@RANDOMNAME@@ or @@HE@@.
by Westinor » Tue Aug 18, 2020 12:38 pm
by USS Monitor » Tue Aug 18, 2020 12:52 pm
by Estovlaka » Wed Aug 19, 2020 9:07 am
Westinor wrote:Read the Got Issues FAQ and Guide for information on how to write an issue and what constitutes an issue (including effect lines).
by Estovlaka » Wed Aug 19, 2020 9:10 am
USS Monitor wrote:This needs more humor. The writing's not terrible, but it's too dry.
What makes this different from the existing issues about secessionists or ethnic minorities demanding this or that from the government?
by Westinor » Wed Aug 19, 2020 10:13 am
Estovlaka wrote:USS Monitor wrote:This needs more humor. The writing's not terrible, but it's too dry.
What makes this different from the existing issues about secessionists or ethnic minorities demanding this or that from the government?
1. Fair enough.
2. Not sure what makes it different. Is there a list specific to certain kinds of issues or do you just have to sift through them all?
by Australian rePublic » Wed Aug 19, 2020 11:25 am
Estovlaka wrote:Australian rePublic wrote:Small nitpick, but why assume that resources are in the east of nation? Especially considering that in real life, resourses tend to be located on Western sides of things
I feel like there was no real reason for me choosing any particular direction. Other than that I appreciate the input.
by Estovlaka » Fri Aug 21, 2020 12:52 pm
Australian rePublic wrote:Estovlaka wrote:
I feel like there was no real reason for me choosing any particular direction. Other than that I appreciate the input.
Just say a resource rich part of the country. Don't specify unless you need to. Better to leave it vague and ambigious, also, overlap with 664?
Sorry I stole your idea!
by Estovlaka » Fri Aug 21, 2020 12:58 pm
Westinor wrote:Estovlaka wrote:
1. Fair enough.
2. Not sure what makes it different. Is there a list specific to certain kinds of issues or do you just have to sift through them all?
There's a list, that unfortunately you have to sift through. Keyword searches help for specific topics, though. A list of policies and related issues also exists, though this may not capture all issues related to a policy, only those that implement or cancel such policy.
Your current draft feels like it has overlap with Issue #664, with the aspect of "local inhabitants live on piece of land with valuable resources", while the secessionist segment is similar to other secessionist issues demanding increased autonomy (Issue #67, Issue #111). The "ethnic group has been blamed for a string of fatal terrorist attacks" simply takes from the regular trope of "foreign/different culture perpetuates terrorist attack to advance a cause" that is evident in many issues.
It's sort of a blend, but I think the most damning overlap is with the first issue. Aside from that, creating a unique premise rather than a mix of several should be your next step.
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