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Postby Zaea » Fri Aug 26, 2016 2:19 pm

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Hello Nation States!

I am looking to do an RP about a major civil war in my nation; Zaea. This would be taking place in the early 2000s(2000-2005?). I want this to be a character driven, medium quality role play, so you don't need to write more then a page and half-two pages if you do not wish to, but I do not want this to be a generalist thing. It is going to be characters making choices, reacting, etc.

Who are the Zaer? The Zaer are a group of extremely pale, generally of medium build people, known for their blood red irises. They also a worship a single deity, the goddess Luna. The moon is of great importance to the Zaer, and the iconography of a crescent moon with a dragon is extremely common, appearing in anything from basic wood carvings, to being engraved into the weapons that Zaer carry into battle, and formerly their armor.

The Zaer have been less then insignificant throughout most of history, at times their mercenaries appearing at foot notes in history. The forested nation, while it had a strong martial tradition, was never strong enough to rise into any spot light. Their army was threatening enough that most people left them alone, but wars against the Vamor tribe had always preoccupied the military to a high extent, and still do.

The country of Zaea's downfall began in the 1970s. Its economy began to collapse, and the strenuous control the House of Demore had over the nation was weakened by it's inability to keep crime under control. Everyone knew by the 1990s the country was controlled by the warlord Adren Styke, and in the late 1990s things came to a head. The rising young political figure; Amelia Wulf, backed(with the belief they could control her) by Lord General Anton Carmein, and the house hold name of Commissar Vlare Kastis; , declared herself the true leader, and that the House of Demore had failed.

Thank you!

RP Start Date: May 3rd, 2002

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Orange is Loyalist Territory, Green is Rebel, Grey is area controlled by powerful neutral cities.


ORBATs:

177th Infantry Division; The Royal Griffins

11,233 Infantry

77 APCs

30 IFVs

27 Mobile Artillery Pieces(Along the lines of a Basilisk

20 Heavy Artillery Batteries

37 Artillery Batteries

52 Light Artillery Batteries

75 Anti-tank Guns

Commanding Officer: Colonel Kirik Mallor


909th Infantry Division; Black Wolves

10,452 Infantry

75 APCs

44 IFVs

60 Mobile Artillery Pieces

42 Heavy Artillery Batteries

52 Artillery Batteries

90 Anti-tank Guns

Commanding Officer: Colonel Vance Tyron

77th Armored Division

2,340 Heavy Infantry

70 APCs

52 IFVs

120 MBTs

40 Heavy Tanks

55 Anti-air Platforms

Commanding Officer: Lieutenant General Jakob Vemera

203rd Royal Lancers

7,430 Light Infantry

2,340 Infantry

90 APCs

66 Tank-hunters

50 IFVs

45 MBTs

30 Anti-air Platforms

Commanding Officer: Knight General Markus Amare

Criminal Syndicate

32,340 Insurgents

Commanding Boss: Andren Styke

3rd Air Wing

Numerous security and support personnel.

3,450 Light Infantry

180 UH-60s

125 EuroFighter Typhoons

100 AH-64s

90 JAS-39Cs

70 C-130s

55 TU-95s

40 AC-130s

5 E-3s

Commanding Officer: Major General Alexander Brakki

Aegis Fleet

Numerous support and security personnel.

2x Air Craft Carriers
----120 A6-ES
----100 F/A-18Fs
----50 F-14Ds

5 Nuclear Submarines

67 Destroyers

50 Cruisers

40 Missile-Cruisers

30 Frigates

Commanding Officer: Lord Admiral Castrik Vanstallen

Draag Fleet
Numerous support and security personnel.

1x Aircraft Carriers
----80 A-6Es
----40 F-14Ds

8 Nuclear Submarines

50 Destroyers

40 Cruisers

25 Missile-Cruisers

20 Frigates

Commanding Officer: Vice Admiral Kerrin Malcador

232nd Infantry Division

10,324 Infantry

62 APCs

55 Mobile Artillery Pieces

40 IFVs

35 Heavy Artillery Batteries

50 Artillery Batteries

75 Anti-tank Guns

Commanding Officer: Commissar Colonel Verrick Xanter

9th Armored Division

2,230 Heavy Infantry

80 APCs

55 Infantry Fighting Vehicles

100 Main Battle Tanks

65 Heavy Tanks

70 Anti-Air Platforms

Commanding Officer: Major General Dranin Jericho

12th Royal Lancers

5,233 Light Infantry

4,234 Infantry

80 APCs

68 Tank-Hunters

30 IFVs

20 MBTs

52 Anti-air Platforms

5 Heavy Tanks

Commanding Officer: Lieutenant General Volker Schwarz

Militia

15,620 Militiamen(Low Training, Light Infantry)

10,900 Insurgents

10,020 Footmen(Still not well equipped, but trained to a better quality then Militiamen)

Commanding Officers: Lord Commissar Vlare Kastis, Major Kristen Drogan

72nd Air Wing
Numerous security and support personnel.

4,249 Light Infantry

197 UH-60s

145 EuroFighter Typhoons

90 JAS-39Cs

75 AH-64s

57 C-130s

45 TU-95s

20 SU-47s

15 AC-130s

7 E-3s

Viro Fleet
Note, Viro Fleet was ambushed soon after pledging loyalty to Amelia Wulf and took severe losses, killing their original commanding Officer.

Numerous security and support personnel.

3 Nuclear Submarines

40 Destroyers

27 Cruisers

17 Missile Cruisers

22 Frigates

Commanding Officers: Lord Captain Niri Aldran, Captain Verten Nikrod

Dygon Fleet
Numerous security and support personnel.

2x Aircraft Carriers
-----235 F/A-18F
-----105 A-6E
-----90 F-14Ds

75 Destroyers

52 Cruisers

43 Missile Cruisers

50 Frigates

Commanding Officer: Admiral Harold Dradda


6 doctors
2 doctors in training
31 nurses
3 civilian engineers
12 civilian helpers
1 SDF-Army Doctor
2 SDF-Army Nurses
1 SDF-Navy Nurse

Security Forces:
50 SDF-Army Soldiers from various branches, lightly armed
    15 of which are engineers

Vehicles:
9x Truck, Light, Model 1955
6x Utility Car, Light, Model 1979
Various horses and horse-drawn carts
Freighter turned hospital ship Trócaire
Freighter Iosta

Assorted equipment like tents and medical supplies.


4th Carrier Group
- 1 Illustrious Class Carrier (HMNS Lorndaz)
- 1 Refitted King George V Class Battleship (HMNS Yorkshire)
- 2 Van Davinoff Class Light Cruisers (HMNS Van Davinoff, HMNS Kamely)
- 4 Hadrian Class Frigates (HMNS Julius, HMNS Londinium, HMNS Les Parisian, HMNS Acton)

12th Rifle Corps (32,000 Men)
- 36th Rifle Division

- 37th Rifle Division

- 38th Rifle Division

- 12th Infantry Support Brigade

4th Naval Infantry Brigade (4,250 Men)
- 4th Naval Infantry Regiment

- 4th Naval Artillery Battalion

- 4th Naval Engineer Battalion

- 4th Naval Armoured Company


4th Carrier Squadron, Auxiliary

-HMNTS Hajaar, Transport Ship carrying the 36th Rifle Division w/ General's Staff.
-HMNTS Alfred the Great, Transport Ship carrying the 37th Rifle Division.
-HMNTS Old Revered, Transport Ship carrying the 38th Rifle Division.
-HMNTS Lady Jane, Transport Ship carrying the 12th Infantry Support Brigade and the Corp's Artillery.
-HMNVTS Trout, Vehicle Transport Ship carrying the 36th Rifle Division's Vehicles and Heavy equipment
-HMNVTS Tuna, Vehicle Transport Ship carrying the 37th Rifle Division's Vehicles and Heavy equipment
-HMNVTS Salmon, Vehicle Transport Ship carrying the 38th Rifle Division's Vehicles and Heavy equipment

-HMNAS F-01, Light Fueler

Reserves
12th Armoured Brigade (6,200 Men)
-24th Tank Regiment

-25th Tank Regiment

-12th Armoured Support Battalion

12th Light Mechanised Brigade (7,000)
-12th Light Tank Battalion

- 24th Mechanised Infantry Regiment

- 25th Mechanised Infantry Regiment

- 130th Infantry Support Battalion

7th Carrier Squadron
HMNS Borodino (Illustrious Class Aircraft Carrier)
HMNS Luxembourge (Dreadnaught Class Heavy Romulus Battleship)
HMNS Alamo (Dauntless Class Battlecruiser)
HMNS Mcarthy (Van Davinoff Class Light Cruiser)
HMNS Oldenburg (Van Davinoff Class Light Cruiser)
HMNS D-06 (1998 Class Destroyer)
HMNS D-07 (1998 Class Destroyer)
HMNS D-08 (1998 Class Destroyer)[/spoiler][/quote]

2nd Relief Fleet
-1 Nuceiro Class Supercarrier(NUCN Mountian)
-4 Sword Class Cruisers(NUCN: Dragon, Sparrow, Serpent, Storm)
-2 Wasp Class Guided Missile Destroyers(NUCN: Jackel, Hawk)
-2 Island Class Amphibous Transport Dock(NUCN: Nest, Talon)
-2 Hoffman Class Hospital Ships(NUCN: Mercy, Hotel)
-Under: Admiral Graf

7th Infantry Division(10,000 men)
-1st Infantry Brigade
-2nd Infantry Brigade
-3rd Infantry Brigade
-Support Brigade(cooks, medical personal, radio men, field commanders, etc.)
-Under: Major General Weber

4th Combat Engineers Regiment(2,500 men)
-1st Engineer Battalion
-2nd Engineer Battalion
-3rd Engineer Battalion
-4th Engineer Battalion
-5th Engineer Battalion
-Under: Col. Fischer/Maj Gen Weber

8th Armored Company(250 Units/Vehicles)
-50 Ke-65 MBTs
-25 Ma-6 Mobile Artillery
-100 I-12H(6x6) Transport Vehicles
-75 I-34 INFVs
-Under: Cap Wolf/Maj Gen Weber

Additional Airborne Units
-12 Tu-14 Transport Aircraft
-10 He-8 Heavy Lift Helicopters
-10 He-7 Multi-Role Helicopters
-8 He-15 Scout Helicopters
-4 He-11 Attack/Transport Helicopters


Pacifiterra (Land Forces) 10,000 infantry.
* 1st offensive legion
* 2nd offensive legion
* 1st defensive legion
* 2nd defensive legion
* 1st artillery legion
* 1st motorised legion
* 2nd motorised legion
Pacifiaqua (Navy) 9,000 infantry.
* 1st offensive fleet
* 2nd offensive fleet
* 3rd offensive fleet
* 1st defensive fleet
* 2nd defensive fleet
* 1st submarine fleet
* 2nd submarine fleet
* 1st Colagua (Pacificora's aircraft carrier) fleet
Pacifivento (Airforce) 13,000 infantry.
* 1st bombing squadron
* 2nd bombing squadron
* 1st fighter squadron
* 2nd fighter squadron
* 3rd fighter squadron
* 1st stealth squadron
* 2nd stealth squadron
* 1st drone squadron
* 2nd drone squadron
* 1st Colagua squadron (variety)
Pacifispeculandi (hacking force) 3,000
* 1st firewall swarm
* 1st fire swarm


5 cargo aircraft, sending military supplies disguised as humanitarian aid.


300 Ground troops and 100 medical staff.


URSS Lagos, Whetherford Class Carrier
-1st Naval Air Wing
--1st Squadron
--2nd Squadron
--3rd Squadron
--4th Squadron
URSS Triumph and URSS Tribulation, Oxford Class Cruiser
URSS Katimani Hills, Buford Class Support Ship
URSS Kingali, Darby, Olemar, Sampson Class Support Ship
Various small boats/deep water patrol boats

93rd Infantry Division (10,000 Soldiers)
-194th Infantry Brigade (5000)
-81st Combat Engineer Brigade (2500)
-16th Armored Brigade (500)

14th Medical Corps (2500)
1500 Doctors, Nurses, Trauma Surgeons
1000 Physicians, Physician Assistants, Pharmacists, Immunologists, Nutritionists, etc.)


~Royal Reyndzhery Special Operations Battalion
-300 infantry
-25 VTK-Byk Infantry Mobile Vehicle

Sides:


The House of Demore:
Criminal Syndicates
Norda Walstala

The House of Wulf:
Majority of the Zaer Commissariat
Pacificora
Vionna-Frankenlisch
Zheltarusia

Humanitarian Aid & Peace Keeping:
The Selkie
United Nations for Conquest(UNC)
Greater Ornesta(Qasheer)
New Anatolia[United Republic of West Africa](UWRA)

Characters
Vaander
Norda Walstala
Zheltarusia

[spoiler=Captain Alex Emery, Vaander]Name: Captain Alex Emery

Nationality: Vaanderian

Date of Birth: 1980

Description/Image: 178 cm, white skin, brown hair, brown eyes.

Location: Just off the north west coast of Draga Province

Occupation/Former Occupation: Vaanderian Commando

Bio:

Three years of training from the moment he left school, Captain Alex Emery was a promising commando initiate. The Vaanderian Intelligence agencies, seeking an operative to deploy to Zaea in an attempt to aid in preventing the situation from deteriorating further, happened across his files by chance, and immediately pushed him through another six months of Special Operative training. Finally, as he was ready to deploy, the civil war broke out. Before he knew it, he was out on a small Vaanderian craft disguised as a fishing vessel, and ready to make landfall on the Zaer coast via a small inflatable kayak, armed with basic radio equipment, a VAR-5 assault rifle, and 6 magazines. From that point onward he was on his own.


Name: Bjorn Stojnakonen

Nationality: Walstalan

Date of Birth:10/05/1984

Description/Image: 1.75 m tall, 55 kg; thin, pale, dark hair, green/hazel eyes; chain smoker, bad teeth.

Location: On a Plane, mainly linking Norda Walstala with the criminal syndicate (orange parts of the map, occasionally grey areas.

Occupation/Former Occupation: Air Force Pilot, part-time smuggler.

Bio: Born from cold, unemotional parents, Bjorn faced two opportunities when he was 13: either become a drug dealer in the worst part of Norda Walstala, or pursue a career in the army. He got the latter, but his smoking habit is a sign of how close he came to the former.


Name: Fyodor " Medved " Afanasyev

Nationality: Zheltarusian

Date of Birth: May 10th 1975

Description/Image:
Apperence out of Uniform

Location: Forests between Molora Province and Ekesen Province.

Bio: Fyodor Afanasyev (Фёдор Афанасьев) was born to a relatively well off family in the capital Zhelzograd in 1975. His parents were a fairly average couple, his father was a minor officer in the Navy while his mother was an employee of the Finance Ministry. He grew up in the waiting years of the Monarchies full control over the government and his father was a political prisoner from 1977 until 1983 after he and others defected from the military in opposition to the absolute monarchy. It was during this time that Fyodor lived over seas and in versions protective situations given his families predicament.

When his father was granted amnesty in 1983 Fyodor returned to his homeland and was placed in the Youth Military Acadamy. It was here that her was granted a nice civil education as well as very basic leadership training (op proprietor for a child his age) and would continuously show above average leadership ability as well as superb marksmanship skills latter on in secondary education at the Royal Officers Academy. Upon his graduation from the Royal Officers Acadamy at the age of 22 he was given the rank of Captian in the Zheltarusian Ground Army a high rank even for someone who had been in the officers system as long as him. He served two years in this role before being demoted at his request. His statement of reasoning stated "my skills are better suited for at a lower command", the higher ups after a review agreed and Fyodor was demoted to the rank of Senior Sergeant and was sent to the Othotnik Brigades and then transferred over to the Reyndzher Special Operations Brigade.


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Rules:

-Quality over quantity in posts.
-No WMDs.
-Keep Deployments Small
-This is Going to be Character Focused.
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Postby The Selkie » Fri Aug 26, 2016 2:45 pm

Good evening,
I would like to participate, if permitted:

Nation Name: The Free Lands of the Selkie.
Demonym: Selkie.
Side: Humanitarian Aid.
RP Sample: Mediation for Intermediates. (Another one can be provided if wished.)
Deployments:
Selkie Humanitarian Assistance Force
Head: Doctor Leonard Cneasaí of the Tribe of Wicklow.
Head of Security Force: Colonel Finn Nióchan of the Tribe of Cork.

Humanitarian Assistance Force:
6 doctors
    People of note:
    Doctor Leonard Cneasaí of the Tribe of Wicklow
2 doctors in training
    People of note:
    Sullivan 'Sully' Cneasaí of the Tribe of Wicklow
31 nurses
    People of note:
    Ava Cneasaí of the Tribe of Wicklow (Doctor Cneasaí's wife and right hand)
3 civilian engineers
12 civilian helpers
    People of note:
    Fynn (radioman)
    Gwen Cneasaí of the Tribe of Wicklow (cook)
    Cecilia Umhal of the Tribe of Sligo (cook, actually an actress)
1 SDF-Army Doctor
2 SDF-Army Nurses
    People of note:
    Ava Iasachta of the Tribe of Conn (Head Nurse)
    Sergeant Filicia Maor of the Tribe of Wicklow, nickname 'Filly'
1 SDF-Navy Nurse

Security Forces:
50 SDF-Army Soldiers from various branches, lightly armed
    15 of which are engineers
    People of note:
    Colonel Finn Nióchan of the Tribe of Cork
    Captain Liam Óga of the Tribe of Laois
    Lieutenant Ava Fuil of the Tribe of Monaghan
    Lieutenant Ilia Alhajin of the Tribe of Galway

Vehicles:
9x Truck, Light, Model 1955
6x Utility Car, Light, Model 1979
Various horses and horse-drawn carts
Freighter turned hospital ship Trócaire
Freighter Iosta

Assorted equipment like tents and medical supplies.


EDIT: Update 1st of September 2016, added names.
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I play PT, MT and a bit FT. I am into character-RPs.
My people are called the Selkie, the nation is usually called the Free Lands in MT-settings. Thanks.

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Postby Zaea » Fri Aug 26, 2016 2:51 pm

The Selkie wrote:Good evening,
I would like to participate, if permitted:

Nation Name: The Free Lands of the Selkie.
Demonym: Selkie.
Side: Humanitarian Aid.
RP Sample: Mediation for Intermediates. (Another one can be provided if wished.)
Deployments:
Selkie Humanitarian Assistance Force
Head: Doctor Leonard Cneasaí of the Tribe of Wicklow.
Head of Security Force: Colonel Finn Nióchan of the Tribe of Cork.

Humanitarian Assistance Force:
6 doctors
2 doctors in training
31 nurses
3 civilian engineers
12 civilian helpers
1 SDF-Army Doctor
2 SDF-Army Nurses
1 SDF-Navy Nurse

Security Forces:
50 SDF-Army Soldiers from various branches, lightly armed
    15 of which are engineers

Vehicles:
9x Truck, Light, Model 1955
6x Utility Car, Light, Model 1979
Various horses and horse-drawn carts
Freighter turned hospital ship Trócaire
Freighter Iosta

Assorted equipment like tents and medical supplies.


Accepted!
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Postby The Selkie » Fri Aug 26, 2016 2:58 pm

Zaea wrote:
The Selkie wrote:Good evening,
I would like to participate, if permitted:

Nation Name: The Free Lands of the Selkie.
Demonym: Selkie.
Side: Humanitarian Aid.
RP Sample: Mediation for Intermediates. (Another one can be provided if wished.)
Deployments:
Selkie Humanitarian Assistance Force
Head: Doctor Leonard Cneasaí of the Tribe of Wicklow.
Head of Security Force: Colonel Finn Nióchan of the Tribe of Cork.

Humanitarian Assistance Force:
6 doctors
2 doctors in training
31 nurses
3 civilian engineers
12 civilian helpers
1 SDF-Army Doctor
2 SDF-Army Nurses
1 SDF-Navy Nurse

Security Forces:
50 SDF-Army Soldiers from various branches, lightly armed
    15 of which are engineers

Vehicles:
9x Truck, Light, Model 1955
6x Utility Car, Light, Model 1979
Various horses and horse-drawn carts
Freighter turned hospital ship Trócaire
Freighter Iosta

Assorted equipment like tents and medical supplies.


Accepted!


Thank you very much. In time, I might add names to the different people, just for me to track, who is who and where. ;)
I play PT, MT and a bit FT. I am into character-RPs.
My people are called the Selkie, the nation is usually called the Free Lands in MT-settings. Thanks.

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Postby Zaea » Fri Aug 26, 2016 2:59 pm

The Selkie wrote:
Zaea wrote:
Accepted!


Thank you very much. In time, I might add names to the different people, just for me to track, who is who and where. ;)

Makes sense, I will prolly have a factbook at some point of my characters, akin to yours.
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Postby Rannoria » Fri Aug 26, 2016 3:02 pm

tag.
looks nice
This is Rannoria, don't forget to eat your own two feet!

please join the Federation of Allies

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Postby Nations United for Conquest » Fri Aug 26, 2016 3:16 pm

Tag, Will post app soon
National Information
Leader - Prime Minister Alaro Kuhn
Capital - Gesno
Population - 325,581,223
Currency - Krot ($)
Roleplay Information
OP Gatelord - [OOC]
The Coming Storm - PLANNED
TBA FE RP - PLANNED

THE DEMOCRATIC SOCIALIST REPUBLIC OF OSKANO
COBALT NETWORK MEMBER
Est. 1663

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Postby Vionna-Frankenlisch » Fri Aug 26, 2016 3:47 pm

Nation Name: The United Kingdom of Vionna-Frankenlisch
Demonym: Vionna-Frankenlischian
Side(House Demore|House Wulf|Neutral/Humanitarian): House Wulf
RP Sample: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=320882, http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=311047, http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=318041
Deployments:
Vionna-Frankenlischian Order of Battle

4th Carrier Group
- 1 Illustrious Class Carrier (HMNS Lorndaz)
- 1 Refitted King George V Class Battleship (HMNS Yorkshire)
- 2 Van Davinoff Class Light Cruisers (HMNS Van Davinoff, HMNS Kamely)
- 4 Hadrian Class Frigates (HMNS Julius, HMNS Londinium, HMNS Les Parisian, HMNS Acton)

12th Rifle Corps (32,000 Men)
- 36th Rifle Division

- 37th Rifle Division

- 38th Rifle Division

- 12th Infantry Support Brigade

4th Naval Infantry Brigade (4,250 Men)
- 4th Naval Infantry Regiment

- 4th Naval Artillery Battalion

- 4th Naval Engineer Battalion

- 4th Naval Armoured Company


I absolutely love rps like this.
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Postby Zaea » Fri Aug 26, 2016 3:57 pm

Vionna-Frankenlisch wrote:-snip-


Posts are little short for my liking, would be willing to do a minimum of three-four paragraphs per post?

IE: Try to go more into detail with what is going on; facial expressions, thoughts/feelings, what does the area look like. Pretend you are writing more of a story, then a script.
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Postby Nations United for Conquest » Fri Aug 26, 2016 3:59 pm

Anyhting agianst doing a Humanitarian Aid/Peace Keeping Force(defends the people, establish refugee camps, rebuild, security, etc.) and a Survivor/group of survivors?
National Information
Leader - Prime Minister Alaro Kuhn
Capital - Gesno
Population - 325,581,223
Currency - Krot ($)
Roleplay Information
OP Gatelord - [OOC]
The Coming Storm - PLANNED
TBA FE RP - PLANNED

THE DEMOCRATIC SOCIALIST REPUBLIC OF OSKANO
COBALT NETWORK MEMBER
Est. 1663

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Postby Zaea » Fri Aug 26, 2016 4:02 pm

Nations United for Conquest wrote:Anyhting agianst doing a Humanitarian Aid/Peace Keeping Force(defends the people, establish refugee camps, rebuild, security, etc.) and a Survivor/group of survivors?

Not at all!
Give any man the power of a god, and you better hope he's got the wisdom and morals of a god to match.
When you decide to die, remember to give your enemy the same honour.

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Postby Nations United for Conquest » Fri Aug 26, 2016 4:02 pm

Zaea wrote:
Nations United for Conquest wrote:Anyhting agianst doing a Humanitarian Aid/Peace Keeping Force(defends the people, establish refugee camps, rebuild, security, etc.) and a Survivor/group of survivors?

Not at all!


Cool, I'm just finishing up my apps
National Information
Leader - Prime Minister Alaro Kuhn
Capital - Gesno
Population - 325,581,223
Currency - Krot ($)
Roleplay Information
OP Gatelord - [OOC]
The Coming Storm - PLANNED
TBA FE RP - PLANNED

THE DEMOCRATIC SOCIALIST REPUBLIC OF OSKANO
COBALT NETWORK MEMBER
Est. 1663

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Postby Republic of New Jersey » Fri Aug 26, 2016 4:03 pm

Nation Name: New Jersey
Demonym: New Jerseyian
Side(House Demore|House Wulf|Neutral/Humanitarian): House Wulf
RP Sample: John uncocked the handgun, readying to shoot the soldier in the back. He had second thoughts, nervous thoughts. He loaded the clip, and pulled the trigger. A shot rang out, hitting the soldier in the head, hitting his brain and passing through his eyeball. Blood and grey matter splattered on the pavement. His target was dead, and that meant he would have to run. Shots rang out from all over the place, hitting the hallway but missing him. He reached the car and pulled open the door and plugged the key into the ignition. He pressed the pedal and jetted off.
Deployments: 4th Marine Group (10,000 Infantry, 30 Helicopters) 1st Air Cavalry (50 Helicopters 3,000 combined Ground and Airmen) 10th Air Core (20 Fighter Jet-propelled Planes, 10 Cargo Planes, 5,000 combined Ground and Airmen.)

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Postby Zaea » Fri Aug 26, 2016 4:07 pm

Republic of New Jersey wrote:Nation Name: New Jersey
Demonym: New Jerseyian
Side(House Demore|House Wulf|Neutral/Humanitarian): House Wulf
RP Sample: John uncocked the handgun, readying to shoot the soldier in the back. He had second thoughts, nervous thoughts. He loaded the clip, and pulled the trigger. A shot rang out, hitting the soldier in the head, hitting his brain and passing through his eyeball. Blood and grey matter splattered on the pavement. His target was dead, and that meant he would have to run. Shots rang out from all over the place, hitting the hallway but missing him. He reached the car and pulled open the door and plugged the key into the ignition. He pressed the pedal and jetted off.
Deployments: 4th Marine Group (10,000 Infantry, 30 Helicopters) 1st Air Cavalry (50 Helicopters 3,000 combined Ground and Airmen) 10th Air Core (20 Fighter Jet-propelled Planes, 10 Cargo Planes, 5,000 combined Ground and Airmen.)


Going to say the same thing I said to Vionna;

Posts are little short for my liking, would be willing to do a minimum of three-four paragraphs per post?

IE: Try to go more into detail with what is going on; facial expressions, thoughts/feelings, what does the area look like. Pretend you are writing more of a story, then a script.
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Postby Republic of New Jersey » Fri Aug 26, 2016 4:12 pm

Zaea wrote:
Republic of New Jersey wrote:Nation Name: New Jersey
Demonym: New Jerseyian
Side(House Demore|House Wulf|Neutral/Humanitarian): House Wulf
RP Sample: John uncocked the handgun, readying to shoot the soldier in the back. He had second thoughts, nervous thoughts. He loaded the clip, and pulled the trigger. A shot rang out, hitting the soldier in the head, hitting his brain and passing through his eyeball. Blood and grey matter splattered on the pavement. His target was dead, and that meant he would have to run. Shots rang out from all over the place, hitting the hallway but missing him. He reached the car and pulled open the door and plugged the key into the ignition. He pressed the pedal and jetted off.
Deployments: 4th Marine Group (10,000 Infantry, 30 Helicopters) 1st Air Cavalry (50 Helicopters 3,000 combined Ground and Airmen) 10th Air Core (20 Fighter Jet-propelled Planes, 10 Cargo Planes, 5,000 combined Ground and Airmen.)


Going to say the same thing I said to Vionna;

Posts are little short for my liking, would be willing to do a minimum of three-four paragraphs per post?

IE: Try to go more into detail with what is going on; facial expressions, thoughts/feelings, what does the area look like. Pretend you are writing more of a story, then a script.
I'll try, this is just how I write though.

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Postby Zaea » Fri Aug 26, 2016 4:33 pm

Republic of New Jersey wrote:
Zaea wrote:
Going to say the same thing I said to Vionna;

I'll try, this is just how I write though.


I know, trust me when I tell that it is a different way of writing then the shorter posts.

Here, for your sample, I can give some basic things that would make it longer;

Why is he tasked with removing this soldier?

What are his seconds thoughts; why is her nervous.

How did the body fall, and what was preventing him from reacting to/hearing the gun being loaded?

What time of day is it?

What does the area look like? Is it an isolated outpost, a fort, a city, a suburb, perhaps even a dock?

What is in the wall way? Is it a bleak and desolate, or is it filled with paintings, or somewhere in between? What kind of car is it; just a basic description(A Jeep, a Van, a truck, a sports car, an SUV, etc).

Perhaps he hears voices calling after him, or even what are his thoughts/actions that he is taking to prevent himself from being hit?
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Postby Nations United for Conquest » Fri Aug 26, 2016 4:43 pm

Nation Name: Nations United for Conquest
Demonym: We are usually refered to as NUC in most RPs
Side(House Demore|House Wulf|Neutral/Humanitarian): Humanitarian Aid/Peace Keeping
RP Sample:
https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=383115
https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopi ... 5&t=386978
https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopi ... 1&t=386108
https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopi ... 7536(I own it, despite not posting yet. It more so shows what I usually do)

Deployments:
2nd Relief Fleet
-1 Nuceiro Class Supercarrier(NUCN Mountian)
-4 Sword Class Cruisers(NUCN: Dragon, Sparrow, Serpent, Storm)
-2 Wasp Class Guided Missile Destroyers(NUCN: Jackel, Hawk)
-2 Island Class Amphibous Transport Dock(NUCN: Nest, Talon)
-2 Hoffman Class Hospital Ships(NUCN: Mercy, Hotel)
-Under: Admiral Graf

7th Infantry Division(10,000 men)
-1st Infantry Brigade
-2nd Infantry Brigade
-3rd Infantry Brigade
-Support Brigade(cooks, medical personal, radio men, field commanders, etc.)
-Under: Major General Weber

4th Combat Engineers Regiment(2,500 men)
-1st Engineer Battalion
-2nd Engineer Battalion
-3rd Engineer Battalion
-4th Engineer Battalion
-5th Engineer Battalion
-Under: Col. Fischer/Maj Gen Weber

8th Armored Company(250 Units/Vehicles)
-50 Ke-65 MBTs
-25 Ma-6 Mobile Artillery
-100 I-12H(6x6) Transport Vehicles
-75 I-34 INFVs
-Under: Cap Wolf/Maj Gen Weber

Additional Airborne Units
-12 Tu-14 Transport Aircraft
-10 He-8 Heavy Lift Helicopters
-10 He-7 Multi-Role Helicopters
-8 He-15 Scout Helicopters
-4 He-11 Attack/Transport Helicopters

Notes: Hoffman Class will not appear in my factbooks but is basically like this, nor will I be deploying all my forces at once





Nation Name: Nations United for Conquest
Demonym: We usually are refered to as NUC
Side(House Demore|House Wulf|Neutral/Humanitarian):Survivor
RP Sample: See above
Deployments: Will make if a character app presents itself, if not I will post one
Last edited by Nations United for Conquest on Fri Aug 26, 2016 4:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.
National Information
Leader - Prime Minister Alaro Kuhn
Capital - Gesno
Population - 325,581,223
Currency - Krot ($)
Roleplay Information
OP Gatelord - [OOC]
The Coming Storm - PLANNED
TBA FE RP - PLANNED

THE DEMOCRATIC SOCIALIST REPUBLIC OF OSKANO
COBALT NETWORK MEMBER
Est. 1663

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Postby Zaea » Fri Aug 26, 2016 4:47 pm

Nations United for Conquest wrote:Nation Name: Nations United for Conquest
Demonym: We are usually refered to as NUC in most RPs
Side(House Demore|House Wulf|Neutral/Humanitarian): Humanitarian Aid/Peace Keeping
RP Sample:
https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=383115
viewtopic.php?f=5&t=386978
viewtopic.php?f=31&t=386108
viewtopic.php?f=5&t=387536(I own it, despite not posting yet. It more so shows what I usually do)

Deployments:
2nd Relief Fleet
-1 Nuceiro Class Supercarrier(NUCN Mountian)
-4 Sword Class Cruisers(NUCN: Dragon, Sparrow, Serpent, Storm)
-2 Wasp Class Guided Missile Destroyers(NUCN: Jackel, Hawk)
-2 Island Class Amphibous Transport Dock(NUCN: Nest, Talon)
-2 Hoffman Class Hospital Ships(NUCN: Mercy, Hotel)
-Under: Admiral Graf

7th Infantry Division(10,000 men)
-1st Infantry Brigade
-2nd Infantry Brigade
-3rd Infantry Brigade
-Support Brigade(cooks, medical personal, radio men, field commanders, etc.)
-Under: Major General Weber

4th Combat Engineers Regiment(2,500 men)
-1st Engineer Battalion
-2nd Engineer Battalion
-3rd Engineer Battalion
-4th Engineer Battalion
-5th Engineer Battalion
-Under: Col. Fischer/Maj Gen Weber

8th Armored Company(250 Units/Vehicles)
-50 Ke-65 MBTs
-25 Ma-6 Mobile Artillery
-100 I-12H(6x6) Transport Vehicles
-75 I-34 INFVs
-Under: Cap Wolf/Maj Gen Weber

Additional Airborne Units
-12 Tu-14 Transport Aircraft
-10 He-8 Heavy Lift Helicopters
-10 He-7 Multi-Role Helicopters
-8 He-15 Scout Helicopters
-4 He-11 Attack/Transport Helicopters

Notes: Hoffman Class will not appear in my factbooks but is basically like this, nor will I be deploying all my forces at once





Nation Name: Nations United for Conquest
Demonym: We usually are refered to as NUC
Side(House Demore|House Wulf|Neutral/Humanitarian):Survivor
RP Sample: See above
Deployments: Will make if a character app presents itself, if not I will post one


Accepted, will get a character app up as soon as possible!
Give any man the power of a god, and you better hope he's got the wisdom and morals of a god to match.
When you decide to die, remember to give your enemy the same honour.

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Postby Zaea » Fri Aug 26, 2016 4:53 pm

Character APP Up!
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Postby Zaea » Fri Aug 26, 2016 5:41 pm

May Third, 2002
Taigon, Molora Province

War had raged for two bloody years. When Amelia Wulf announced that the House of Demore had failed that it hadn’t been a statement against the King himself, but a statement against the true ruler of the nation; Andren Styke. Styke was a wealthy and prominent boss of the nation's Crime Syndicate who had grown fat off of the failing nation’s inability to manage the crime levels. Gangs had roamed the streets for decades unopposed. The strong prospered and survived, the weak became the victims of every kind of horror known to man, and some beyond. The rules of the country became simply to survive.

Law enforcement collapsed and only the soldiers recruited from their city to defend it could do anything to stop it, and even then there was little they could do themselves unless they wanted a shallow grave in the reddening earth. The only hope for a savior came from Amelia Wulf. Her family had been killed when she was young and she had survived on the streets alone since she had been seven years old. Barely twenty years old, she earned the backing of Lord General Carmein and the famous, notorious, Lord Commissar Kastis.

Two days later, the war had begun. Hundereds lay dead about the streets of Taigon. It had begun with a calculated bombardment by loyalist forces. Miltiamen who had taken up defensive positions under the command of a Commissar and his two trainees were driven deep into the city by the heavy fire. Neither side thought of the civilians caught in the city. The docks were crowded with people attempting to flee, but only a precious few were able. Three days later, the docks still packed with people, the trade district went aflame. Thousands were trampled to death, others turned to ashes by the raging fires.

It took three days of constant storms to put the fires out. After the storms passed the loyalist forces moved into the city. Battle instantly broke out as militiamen had time to redeploy, and loyalist forces entering the city had not brought their armor to bear. More dead littered the streets.

Now? The city was a place of death. You could not escape the stench of blood, smoke, burning flesh, and decaying corpses. The people of city struggled to find food. Snipers from both sides were instructed to fire on anything that moved. Skirmishes destroyed more of the ruined city, and artillery brought more building crumbling down to the cratered and battered earth.



A sliver of sunshine entered through the broken and shattered roof, giving faint light to the dusty, dilapidated room that served as a home. The floor was filled with rubble and wooden planks, a destroyed mattress serving as a bed. On the bed there was a women who was pale--even for a Zaer. Her eyes were opening and closing slowly, their color matching that of the bandages that covered her torso. She was terribly thin, her skin stretching over her bones as if it would tear if it went any further. Next to her was a man who had gone the last three days without food trying to help his dying wife. In his hands a pendent of Luna was clenched tightly in both hands. He was kneeling next to her, tears falling from his face. “Luna, wanderer of the night, please deliver us from this apocalypse. Save us from this war and bring us to peace.” He muttered it over and over again like a mantra, and he had the entirety of the night before.

She had been wounded by a sniper who had shot her when she was trying to find food for them. Their child had died in the opening days of the conflict; the baby’s body buried in rubble and likely ground to dust. This war would destroy them all. The man was sure of it.

“Vyren…” The man looked up, his eyes wet with tears. His wife was staring at him, her hand stretched out to him. Vyren released the pendant, allowing to dangle about his neck once again. The crescent and dragon symbol was imprinted in his hand from how tight he had held it. He took her hand and raised himself to his feet.

“Marra...please...keep fighting.” Tears kept falling from his eyes. Her eyes told him all he needed to know.

“I can’t any longer…” There voices were cracked and barely more than whispers.

“Please! Please...please…” He was sobbing. Vyren had lost so much, and the war showed no signs of ending anytime in the near future. Outside gunshots echoed, followed by screams. They had heard it every day for the past two years. “Please...Marra…” He felt her hand go limp in his hands and he knew she was dead. “This can’t be happening...No…”
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Postby Republic of New Jersey » Fri Aug 26, 2016 6:32 pm

Wrote entire new thing

John loaded his rifle, cocking it until ready. There was a sense of distress on everyone's face. A whizzing sound caught everyone's attention. "What-" A Private near the front of the helicopter said, before he was caught off by a explosion blowing him to bits. John grasped his seat as he saw the front of the the chinook hanging on by a steel beam. "Brace!" Someone said. John really couldn't tell who but still braced for impact. "What the h-" A Rifle hit John in the head, knocking him out, leaving blood all over the place.

"Ghnmm..." He moaned, looking around. He reaches for his forehead. He felt the dried blood. He reached for a bandage, but instead saw a blood soaked body of his comrade. It's face was stuck in a eternal scream. He threw up, backing away from the body. He reached for his sidearm, taking a clip from a dead body.

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Postby Zaea » Fri Aug 26, 2016 6:39 pm

Republic of New Jersey wrote:Wrote entire new thing

John loaded his rifle, cocking it until ready. There was a sense of distress on everyone's face. A whizzing sound caught everyone's attention. "What-" A Private near the front of the helicopter said, before he was caught off by a explosion blowing him to bits. John grasped his seat as he saw the front of the the chinook hanging on by a steel beam. "Brace!" Someone said. John really couldn't tell who but still braced for impact. "What the h-" A Rifle hit John in the head, knocking him out, leaving blood all over the place.

"Ghnmm..." He moaned, looking around. He reaches for his forehead. He felt the dried blood. He reached for a bandage, but instead saw a blood soaked body of his comrade. It's face was stuck in a eternal scream. He threw up, backing away from the body. He reached for his sidearm, taking a clip from a dead body.


Better :)

Just remeber, pretend you are writing a story, what is the area like, in this case what is their mission. You are telling a story; this RP isn't about dedicated realism, but telling a story.
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Give any man the power of a god, and you better hope he's got the wisdom and morals of a god to match.
When you decide to die, remember to give your enemy the same honour.

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Postby Republic of New Jersey » Fri Aug 26, 2016 6:47 pm

Wait, there's char apps now? Damn it...

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Postby Nations United for Conquest » Fri Aug 26, 2016 7:01 pm

I can provide an on-the-spot writing, for an example to show NJ what you mean
National Information
Leader - Prime Minister Alaro Kuhn
Capital - Gesno
Population - 325,581,223
Currency - Krot ($)
Roleplay Information
OP Gatelord - [OOC]
The Coming Storm - PLANNED
TBA FE RP - PLANNED

THE DEMOCRATIC SOCIALIST REPUBLIC OF OSKANO
COBALT NETWORK MEMBER
Est. 1663

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Postby Zaea » Fri Aug 26, 2016 7:03 pm

Nations United for Conquest wrote:I can provide an on-the-spot writing, for an example to show NJ what you mean


*Puts out arm* If you will, sir. *briskly marches out towards the left*
Give any man the power of a god, and you better hope he's got the wisdom and morals of a god to match.
When you decide to die, remember to give your enemy the same honour.

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