Nucoclan wrote:Separatist Peoples wrote:"Please don't. Your writing needs improvement in all areas, and your grasp on the subject matter is tenuous at best. I'm sorry, ambassador, but you should seek enrichment and improvement of your skills, and the place for that is not here in the GA. Otherwise, continuous submissions of ill-prepared and illegal bills will end with you ejected."
If I don't get help then I won't improve or anything of the sort.
"I don't think you need ambassadors and diplomats to help you, I think you need professors and tutors to help you. It reads at a C.D.S.P. 7th grade level. I don't think international laws should be de jure complex, but I do balk at legislation that reads as if my niece was the sole drafter and writer. Wizard Landfree is right, you need to participate in the debates more. The next time you want to draft something, calculate the time between then and now, then triple it. That's how long you should participate in debates before drafting anything. Probably more. It took me about a year before I even tried drafting anything, and it never even made it to submission!"