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by New Edom » Fri Sep 13, 2013 4:52 pm
by Helltank » Fri Sep 13, 2013 9:33 pm
Rating Application Form
Nation Name:The Empire of Helltank
Storefront:The Iron Bank of Ferrum
Link to Storefront:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=258974
Suggestions: [x] Yes [] No
by Ceni » Sat Sep 14, 2013 10:44 am
New Edom wrote:Rating Application Form
Nation Name:The Allied States of New Edom
Storefront:Paladin Cinemas
Link to Storefront:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=234290&hilit=Paladin
Suggestions: [X] Yes [] No
Rating
Total Score: 189
Score Breakdown
Profit Good profit. 20 points Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Good customer service. Good customer satisfaction. 30 pts Layout Table of contents present. Good layout. Good history. Inconsistent use of photos in "Playing Now", "Coming Soon", and "Previously Played" sections. Those sections look somewhat messy. 45 pts Ecofriendliness Doesn't seem to be particularly eco-friendly. 7 pts Product Range Good range of products. 30 pts Palatability Palatable to the NS community. 5 pts Short Term Prospects Good short term prospects. 15 pts Long Term Prospects One of two providers, but revenue will dip in recessions. 13 pts Overall Quality Mostly good quality. 24 pts
Suggestions
- Work on adding more environmentally friendly features.
- Find pictures for all movies playing.
- Either center those pictures or don't- it looks bad having some centered, some not.
by Ceni » Sat Sep 14, 2013 10:50 am
Helltank wrote:Rating Application Form
Nation Name:The Empire of Helltank
Storefront:The Iron Bank of Ferrum
Link to Storefront:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=258974
Suggestions: [x] Yes [] No
Rating
Total Score: 184
Score Breakdown
Profit So-so profit. 12 points Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Good customer service. So-so customer satisfaction- get more customers. 25 pts Layout Table of contents present. Good layout. Use of anchor tags. History present. Good description of products. 50 pts Ecofriendliness Doesn't seem to be particularly eco-friendly. 7 pts Product Range Runs the gamut of banking accounts & locations. 30 pts Palatability Palatable to the NS community. 5 pts Short Term Prospects Good short term prospects. 15 pts Long Term Prospects Good long term prospects. 15 pts Overall Quality Good quality. 25 pts
Suggestions
- Work on adding more environmentally friendly features.
- Advertise your business to get more customers.
- Partner with other banks.
- Time in the industry will lead to perfection.
by Aeland » Sun Sep 15, 2013 2:09 am
Rating Application Form
Nation Name: Aeland
Storefront: Kreidberg International Aerospace-port
Link to Storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=260468
Suggestions: [X] Yes [] No
by Ceni » Sun Sep 15, 2013 11:38 am
Aeland wrote:Cenian Storefront Rating Services,
A few months ago (OOC: IC time), just after the re-opening of Kreidberg International Aerospace-port, we have submitted a request for rating and have been rated. You have supplied us with some valuable tips regarding both the content of the store-front and business model. Your tips and suggestions were sent to the Aerospace-port directorate, and were integrated in our website.
Among the changes we made since being evaluated:Thanks to your suggestions, our website is now more professional and our profits, both from passenger fees and from business rental fees and taxes, have grown.
- More detailed history.
- Business application form.
- Sponsorship application form.
- Advertisement in all national posts (signature).
- Applying for flights and business in other storefronts.
- Addition of images and illustrations to the airport page.
- List of airport services and facilities has been modified.
We now kindly request the re-evaluation of our storefront, so our rating will fit its renewed state.
Rating Application Form
Nation Name: Aeland
Storefront: Kreidberg International Aerospace-port
Link to Storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=260468
Suggestions: [X] Yes [] No
Thanks in advance,
Rut Swingle Sattermort, CEO of Kreidberg International Aerospace-port
Rating
Total Score: 183
Score Breakdown
Profit Increased profit. 15 points Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Good customer service. So-so customer satisfaction. 25 pts Layout The layout is good. A table of contents is present. Good history. Good features. 50pts Ecofriendliness Good ecofriendliness. 10 pts Product Range The storefront relies on two sources of revenue rather than just one for most airports. More routes. 26 pts Palatability Some of the PMT features may not be as palatable to most countries. 4 pts Short Term Prospects Good short term prospects. 15 pts Long Term Prospects Better prospects. Airports are susceptible to the effects of a recession. Overall, good long term prospects. 13 pts Overall Quality Very good quality. A lot of info. 25 pts
Suggestions
- More time in the industry will lead to success.
by Helltank » Mon Sep 16, 2013 5:00 am
by Ceni » Mon Sep 16, 2013 3:31 pm
Helltank wrote:Uh...
How do I make a bank more eco-friendly? The only product we produce is bank vaults and loans, and it's not as if eco-friendly improvements can be made on those...
by Racao » Fri Sep 20, 2013 6:50 am
Rating Application Form
Nation Name: Racao
Storefront: Dukedom Drinks
Link to Storefront: www.dukedomdrinks.com.rac
Suggestions: [x] Yes [] No
by Nu Sparta » Sun Sep 22, 2013 9:53 am
Rating Application Form
Nation Name: Nu Sparta
Storefront: Coeli Concínnant
Link to Storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=229051
Suggestions: [x] Yes [] No
by Ceni » Sun Sep 22, 2013 10:37 am
Racao wrote:Rating Application Form
Nation Name: Racao
Storefront: Dukedom Drinks
Link to Storefront: www.dukedomdrinks.com.rac
Suggestions: [x] Yes [] No
Rating
Total Score: 182
Score Breakdown
Profit Good profit. 20 points Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Good customer service. Good customer satisfaction. 30 pts Layout Table of contents present. Good layout. Good history. Good product explanation. News Feed/partner section needs work. No photos. 45 pts Ecofriendliness Doesn't seem to be particularly eco-friendly. 7 pts Product Range Good range of products. 30 pts Palatability Palatable to the NS community. 5 pts Short Term Prospects Uphill battle against established providers. 10 pts Long Term Prospects Vulnerable in recessions. Uphill battle against Jory Jory. 10 pts Overall Quality Very good quality. 25 pts
Suggestions
- Work on adding more environmentally friendly features.
- Add pictures.
- Advertise your storefront on businesses.
- Ask restaurants, airlines, businesses to patronize your storefront.
by Ceni » Sun Sep 22, 2013 10:43 am
Nu Sparta wrote:Rating Application Form
Nation Name: Nu Sparta
Storefront: Coeli Concínnant
Link to Storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=229051
Suggestions: [x] Yes [] No
Rating
Total Score: 181
Score Breakdown
Profit Good profit. 20 points Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Alright customer service. Good customer satisfaction. 25 pts Layout Table of contents present. Good description. Large font looks somewhat ungainly on first post. Some text unreadable. Products take up a lot of space. 40 pts Ecofriendliness Doesn't seem to be particularly eco-friendly. 7 pts Product Range Good range of products. 30 pts Palatability Palatable to the NS community. 5 pts Short Term Prospects Good short term prospects. 15 pts Long Term Prospects Somewhat good long term prospects. 14 pts Overall Quality Very good quality. 25 pts
Suggestions
- Work on adding more environmentally friendly features.
- Create a separate catalog page for your products.
- Scale down first post text.
- Make some text easier to read.
- Use anchor tags.
by Britonisea » Wed Sep 25, 2013 11:03 am
by Machina Haruspex » Wed Sep 25, 2013 12:33 pm
Rating Application Form
Nation Name: Machina Haruspex
Storefront: HIA
Link to Storefront: Haruspex International Armaments
Suggestions: [x] Yes [] No
by Ceni » Wed Sep 25, 2013 2:00 pm
Britonisea wrote:You cannot change a rating without letting me know!
by Ceni » Wed Sep 25, 2013 2:05 pm
Machina Haruspex wrote:Rating Application Form
Nation Name: Machina Haruspex
Storefront: HIA
Link to Storefront: Haruspex International Armaments
Suggestions: [x] Yes [] No
Rating
Total Score: 196
Score Breakdown
Profit Good profit. 20 points Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Good customer service. Good customer satisfaction. 25 pts Layout Table of contents present. Good description. We liked that you had a separate catalog page for each product. 50 pts Ecofriendliness Doesn't seem to be particularly eco-friendly. 7 pts Product Range Good range of products. 30 pts Palatability Palatable to the NS community. 5 pts Short Term Prospects Good short term prospects. 15 pts Long Term Prospects Somewhat good long term prospects. 14 pts Overall Quality Very good quality. 25 pts
Suggestions
- Work on adding more environmentally friendly features.
- Your storefront will get better over time.
by Nu Sparta » Mon Sep 30, 2013 6:14 pm
Rating Application Form
Nation Name: Nu Sparta
Storefront: Coeli Concínnant
Link to Storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=229051
Suggestions: [x] Yes [] No
by Ceni » Wed Oct 02, 2013 2:24 pm
Nu Sparta wrote:Rating Application Form
Nation Name: Nu Sparta
Storefront: Coeli Concínnant
Link to Storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=229051
Suggestions: [x] Yes [] No
I'd like to be re-rated. I fixed text as suggested. I'm working on a catalog and what not, but that is going to take awhile and I'd like to be re-rated now on the things I've already fixed.
Also as for being "Green" I added in some more details on the factory complex to advocate a few of it's many Eco-friendly properties. The pictures for the buildings and schools weren't picked because i thought they would look "modern" or "futuristic". They were picked for their "greenness" as all modern Spartanian architecture is environmentally friendly due to highly paganistic roots in the culture. Though to go out of my way and designate every little feature would take away from posting and make it unnecessarily long I think. I don't know if that matters and will effect the rating you give to me for that section just figured I should let you know encase it does.
Rating
Total Score: 189
Score Breakdown
Profit Good profit. 20 points Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Alright customer service. Good customer satisfaction. 25 pts Layout Table of contents present. Good description. Catalog in progress. 45 pts Ecofriendliness Eco-friendly. 10 pts Product Range Good range of products. 30 pts Palatability Palatable to the NS community. 5 pts Short Term Prospects Good short term prospects. 15 pts Long Term Prospects Somewhat good long term prospects. 14 pts Overall Quality Very good quality. 25 pts
Suggestions
- Create a separate catalog page for your products.
- Use anchor tags.
by Miraco » Wed Oct 02, 2013 2:29 pm
Rating Application Form
Nation Name: Miraco
Storefront: Air Miraco
Link to Storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=257087
Suggestions: [x] Yes [] No
by Ceni » Wed Oct 02, 2013 3:01 pm
Miraco wrote:Rating Application Form
Nation Name: Miraco
Storefront: Air Miraco
Link to Storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=257087
Suggestions: [x] Yes [] No
Rating
Total Score: 135
Score Breakdown
Profit Alright profit. 10 points Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Not the best customer service. Alright customer satisfaction. 20 pts Layout No table of contents. No anchor tags. Not much information. So-so header. 30 pts Ecofriendliness Not-so eco-friendly. No efforts to reduce impact on environment. 5 pts Product Range Alright range of products. 20 pts Palatability Palatable to the NS community. 5 pts Short Term Prospects So-so short term prospects. 10 pts Long Term Prospects So-so long term prospects. 10 pts Overall Quality Very good quality. 25 pts
Suggestions
- Use anchor tags.
- Include table of contents.
- Increase the information- add history.
- Add more info on fleet.
- Have more eco-friendly features.
- Make the header more attractive.
- View other airline storefronts for tips.
- Add more features of your airline.
by Anemos Major » Fri Oct 04, 2013 5:22 pm
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by Mizialand » Sat Oct 05, 2013 2:21 am
Rating Application Form
Nation Name: Mizialand
Storefront: Air Liberte
Link to Storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=175803
Suggestions: [X] Yes [] No
by Ceni » Sat Oct 05, 2013 10:18 am
Rating
Total Score: 196
Score Breakdown
Profit Good profit. 20 points Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Good customer service. Good customer satisfaction. 30 pts Layout Table of contents present. Good layout. Good history. Quick Navigation area not centered. Product layout good. Separate Catalog Pages present. 49 pts Ecofriendliness Doesn't seem to be particularly eco-friendly. 7 pts Product Range Good range of products. Good product descriptions. 30 pts Palatability Palatable to the NS community. 5 pts Short Term Prospects Good short term prospects. 15 pts Long Term Prospects Good long term prospects. 15 pts Overall Quality Very good quality. 25 pts
Suggestions
- Work on adding more environmentally friendly features.
- Center Quick Navigation Boxes.
by Ceni » Sat Oct 05, 2013 10:21 am
Mizialand wrote:Rating Application Form
Nation Name: Mizialand
Storefront: Air Liberte
Link to Storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=175803
Suggestions: [X] Yes [] No
Rating
Total Score: 196
Score Breakdown
Profit It's an airline, so not much profit. But I'll give you full points anyway- you are one of the industry leaders. . 20 points Customer Service / Customer Satisfaction Good customer service. Good customer satisfaction. 30 pts Layout Table of contents present. Good layout. Good description of services and fleet. 50 pts Ecofriendliness Working on buying new airliners that are more eco-friendly. 8 pts Product Range Good service range. 30 pts Palatability Palatable to the NS community. 5 pts Short Term Prospects Good short term prospects. 15 pts Long Term Prospects Industry might be vulnerable in a recession. Otherwise, looks good. 13 pts Overall Quality Very good quality. 25 pts
Suggestions
- Integrate more environmentally-friendly aircraft.
- Diversify
by Sensorland » Sun Oct 06, 2013 1:32 pm
To whom it may concern, CleverBulb™ Inc. saw the C rating you gave us, and we were determined to raise that standard. Therefore, we created an entire new storefront. We thank you for rating us, and ask that you do so once again. Our application is enclosed. Rating Application Form Thank you, CleverBulb™ Inc, Dr. Drew LeBeau, CEO |
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