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Heleventia
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Posts: 572
Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Re: Western Arab Empire

Postby Heleventia » Sat Nov 03, 2012 8:54 am

Western Arab Empire wrote:Storefront Rating Form

Name of the nation: Western Arab Empire

Name of the Storefront: Arab Airlines

Link to the storefront:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=204827

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment (OOC: this may take time)Yes


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Arab Airlines

Rating: Image + 0.5

2.5- stars. Average. Does good on some grounds but lack at certain places.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

Though the layout is somewhat nice, the content is marginal. One line information has been provided about services, policies etc. The fleet section looks more like a pic spam. The storefront is making profits and the customer satisaction is high.


Suggestions

Try to expand information about the airline. Provide some information about its history i.e. when, where, how it was established ; what was the turning point in its history. Also provide information about the company as to who owns the company, is it privately own or are there shareholders? Is it a public ltd. company? Keep this information brief, though not one liner. Expand your article on service, class etc. Include details that make Arab Airlines different from other airlines. In the fleet section, information about the different types of aircrafts can be included. Make a table of contents. You need not use the [table] tag but you can make a simple one using [box] tag. See this storefront as an example: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=175803
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The Valknut Corporation
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Posts: 15
Founded: May 26, 2012
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Postby The Valknut Corporation » Sat Nov 03, 2012 9:13 am

Storefront Rating Form

Name of the nation:

The Valknut Corporation

Name of the Storefront :

Våpon Inc.

Link to the storefront:

viewtopic.php?f=6&t=206450

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvement?

This would be nice

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Heleventia
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Posts: 572
Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Re: Ezryel

Postby Heleventia » Mon Nov 05, 2012 9:36 am

GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Global Jet

Rating: Image+0.5

4.5 stars. Excellent storefront. Almost perfect.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The website is very well made and well written. Ample information has been provided about the services. The layout is very good and the graphics added are a visual treat. A table of content is present which eases navigation. The colour scheme is appreciated. The storefront is making profits and customer satisfaction is high.

More time in the industry will lead to more experience and subsequent perfection.


Suggestions

The layout is excellent. More time in industry will lead to perfection.
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Madsen
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Posts: 51
Founded: Oct 30, 2012
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Postby Madsen » Mon Nov 05, 2012 9:38 am

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Name of the nation: The (Semi-ish) Dictatorship of Madsen

Name of the Storefront: Atrox Technologies

Link to the storefront: Atrox Technologies

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment (OOC: this may take time) Yes
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Bindu
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Posts: 449
Founded: Sep 11, 2012
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Postby Bindu » Mon Nov 05, 2012 5:59 pm

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Worthingchester Soups Box
30th Floor, Mount Elkdam Tower, The City of Sultanarabad, Bindu
http://www.Worthingchester-Soups.bin



To: Matilda Movenpick, GETrax
From: Usman Khaliffa, Worthingchester Soups Box
Subject: Storefront Rating Application

Hi,
We like our storefront to be rating by your agency. Official application form attached herewith.

Thank you in advance.

Regard
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Usman Khaliffa
Worthingchester Soups Box


Storefront Rating Form

Name of the nation: Bindu

Name of the Storefront:Worthingchester Soups Box

Link to the storefront: http://www.Worthingchester-Soups.bin

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment (OOC: this may take time) Yes please

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Heleventia
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Posts: 572
Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Re: Der Nordland

Postby Heleventia » Wed Nov 07, 2012 12:38 am

Der Nordland wrote:-CQC-


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Nordica Arms

Rating: Image

2- stars. Average. Nothing much to expect. Running in Loss. So..So Customer Service but tolerable.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

Though the storefront is making proftis, the layout is not great. The storefront ranks low on customer service and minimal information has been provided about the products.


Suggestions

The layout can be improved. First of all center align the logo. Think of a slogan for the company. Include more information about the history, ownership, important events of the company (keep this brief). Remove the spoilers and post seperatley for your product. Try to include information that makes your product different from others. See this arms storefront as an example: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=1112 Redesign along these lines.
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Skallen
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Posts: 313
Founded: Apr 21, 2011
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Postby Skallen » Wed Nov 07, 2012 1:30 am

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Name of the nation: The Anarko-Kommune of Skallen

Name of the Storefront: IVEU-Militærkøretøjer

Link to the storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=206993

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment (OOC: this may take time) If you would like to, please feel free to tell me any pertinent observations or comments you have on it.
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Coopanonva
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Posts: 290
Founded: Feb 04, 2011
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Postby Coopanonva » Thu Nov 08, 2012 2:09 pm

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Name of the nation:The Eurasian Empire Of Coopanonva

Name of the Storefront:Eurasian Airways

Link to the storefront:www.eurasian-airways.eec

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment: Yes
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Social Libertarian/Authoritarian: -1.49
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Heleventia
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Posts: 572
Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Re: Ashebourton

Postby Heleventia » Fri Nov 09, 2012 8:29 am

Aerospace Innovation Inc wrote:-CQC-


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Aerospace Innovation Inc.

Rating: Image

4 stars. Above Average. Near Perfection. Good Profits.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

GETrax is happy to see that many changes as suggested by us have been incorporated in the storefront. The table of content added eases navigation. The website is well written with ample information about product and services. The Company Values presented as mixture of graphics and text is very appreciated. The storefront is more organised and better presented than its previous ratings.


Suggestions

The size of the logo could be decreased a bit (this fact did not contribute to the rating). Overall, its very good and the redesign has been overwhelming.
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Heleventia
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Posts: 572
Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Re: The Valknut Corporation

Postby Heleventia » Mon Nov 12, 2012 6:45 am

The Valknut Corporation wrote:Storefront Rating Form

Name of the nation:

The Valknut Corporation

Name of the Storefront :

Våpon Inc.

Link to the storefront:

viewtopic.php?f=6&t=206450

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvement?

This would be nice


The Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency, GETrax express its inability to rate your storefront. We cannot rate anything which is illegal in Heleventia and unfortunately, smuggling is among them. We condemn this storefront and wish that it ceases its illegal activities. Thank you for your interest in GETrax.
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Heleventia
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Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Re: Madsen

Postby Heleventia » Wed Nov 14, 2012 9:47 am

Madsen wrote:-CQC-


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Atrox Technologies

Rating: Image

2- stars. Average. Nothing much to expect. Running in Loss. So..So Customer Service but tolerable.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The storefront seems more like a joke. It aims at making the customer unsatisfied and therefore scores in the negative on customer satisfaction. The layout is not great neither is it too bad. The storefront is running in loss and is on verge of bankruptcy.


Suggestions

Try to redesign your storefront treating it more seriously.
Last edited by Heleventia on Fri Nov 16, 2012 9:42 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Heleventia
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Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Re: Bindu

Postby Heleventia » Fri Nov 16, 2012 9:38 am

GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Worthingchester Soups Box

Rating: Image

3 stars. Not bad. Slightly above average. Standard Services. Profits are good.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The layout and the colour scheme is appreciable. The storefront scores high on customer satisfaction and is making profits.

However, we believe that enough information has not been provided about the products. It would be better if the customers knew about different varieties of soups, their ingredients and specialities, it would have been better. Table of content is missing.


Suggestions

Include some information on the History of storefront i.e. when and where it was founded, important events etc. Also include information about the ownership. Is it a private enterprise or a listed company? Who are the owners? Try to include information about what makes your storefront different from others- how are the soups different. What are the values that the company is proud of? Other than that, the layout and everything is nice. Though this storefront is more of a joke: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=179128 it has information about the products etc. Try to redesign along these lines.
Last edited by Heleventia on Fri Nov 16, 2012 9:41 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Heleventia
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Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Postby Heleventia » Sat Nov 17, 2012 7:18 am

Skallen wrote:-snip-


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: IVEU-Militærkøretøjer

Rating: Image

3 stars. Not bad. Slightly above average. Standard Services. Profits are good.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The layout and the colour scheme is appreciable. The storefront scores high on customer satisfaction and is making profits.

However, we believe more information about the company such as its ownership, history etc. could be provided. Also, the storefront can be better orgainsed. A table of content is missinf,


Suggestions

Include some information on the History of storefront i.e. when and where it was founded, important events etc. Also include information about the ownership. Is it a private enterprise or a listed company? Who are the owners? Create a table. You need not use the [table] tag. You can create one by using the [box] and [anchor] tag. Use [hr] to separate different portions of your storefront.
Last edited by Heleventia on Sat Nov 17, 2012 7:20 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Heleventia
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Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Postby Heleventia » Mon Nov 19, 2012 8:12 am

Coopanonva wrote:Storefront Rating Form

Name of the nation:The Eurasian Empire Of Coopanonva

Name of the Storefront:Eurasian Airways

Link to the storefront:www.eurasian-airways.eec

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment: Yes


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Eurasian Airways

Rating: Image+0.5

2- stars. Average. Nothing much to expect. So..So Customer Service but tolerable.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The storefront lacks information and content. The layout can be improved a great deal.

However majority customers are satisfied with the services and the storefront is making some profit.


Suggestions

Remove the spoilers. Decrease the size of your logo, preferably to 200px X 200px. Make a table of content. You can make a simple one. View this storefront and improve along these lines: search.php?search_id=egosearch
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Astholm
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Posts: 4775
Founded: Jan 06, 2009
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Postby Astholm » Mon Nov 19, 2012 8:28 am

Storefront Rating Form

Name of the nation: Astholm

Name of the Storefront: CETRAS (Ceklanda Transport Services)

Link to the storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=208127

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment (OOC: this may take time) Yes, since this is my first proper storefront I have put actual effort into maintaining.
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I have multiple puppets here; only a select few are used to represent the continent of Astholm; others used represent Westholme, and do not artificially boost my nation's statistics.Previously i used puppets with nation names that did not identify as Astholm (e.g. Australis Australia; now all new puppets use ASTHLM, NORTHLM, SOUTHLM, WESTHLM (HLM denoting The Holmes.
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The City State Rhydin
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Posts: 846
Founded: Nov 07, 2007
Inoffensive Centrist Democracy

Postby The City State Rhydin » Mon Nov 19, 2012 11:52 am

Storefront Rating Form
Name of the nation: The City State Rhydin
Name of the Storefront: Air Luxury Helicopters
Link to the storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=57153
Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment (OOC: this may take time)Yes

Storefront Rating Form
Name of the nation: The City State Rhydin
Name of the Storefront: Harl L' Qu'mados Technologies
Link to the storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=111042
Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment (OOC: this may take time)Yes

Storefront Rating Form
Name of the nation: The City State Rhydin
Name of the Storefront: Rhydia Vehicle Corporation
Link to the storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=54358
Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment (OOC: this may take time)Yes
Last edited by The City State Rhydin on Fri Nov 23, 2012 5:51 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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New Ecopia
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Founded: Aug 28, 2012
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Postby New Ecopia » Fri Nov 23, 2012 9:39 pm

Storefront Rating Form

Name of the nation: The Democratic Republic of New Ecopia

Name of the Storefront: Eco Aerocraft Corporation

Link to the storefront: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=209737

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment (OOC: this may take time): Yes
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Delanshar wrote:Revised for SAMs

First roll: Argentine strike on Falklands
0-10: Strikes do major damage, but significant amount of planes intercepted/shot down
10-15: Strikes do major damage, and few planes intercepted/shot down
15-40: Strikes do moderate damage, and significant amount of planes intercepted/shot down
40-55: Strikes do moderate, but few planes intercepted/shot down
55-70: Strikes do mild damage, and few planes intercepted/shot down
70-100: Strikes do mild damage, but significant amount of planes intercepted/shot down

Better?


My Political Test Result: http://www.politicaltest.net/test/result/192080/

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Heleventia
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Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Re: Astholm

Postby Heleventia » Sun Nov 25, 2012 5:37 am

Astholm wrote:-CQC-


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: CETRAS (Ceklanda Transport Services)

Rating: Image

3 stars. Not bad. Slightly above average. Standard Services. Profits are good.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The storefront provides ample information about the product as well as the company itself. The FAQ section is unique and appreciable. The customer satisfaction is high and the storefront is making profits.

However, the layout can be improved a great deal making the storefront more user friendly.


Suggestions

A table of content can be created. Make use of [box][anchor] tags to do the same. Play with [floatleft]and [floatright] tags in the Products section. Bullet the information using [list] tag, tell what makes your streetlights/traffic signs special. Try to create more products, like solar power street light. Make of form so that people can order what they need comfortably.
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New Ecopia
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Founded: Aug 28, 2012
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Postby New Ecopia » Sun Nov 25, 2012 11:45 pm

Name of the nation: New Ecopia

Name of the Storefront: Ecopia Dynasty Resort & Spa

Link to Store Front: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=210098

I would like a detailed report
Last edited by New Ecopia on Mon Dec 03, 2012 7:45 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Delanshar wrote:Revised for SAMs

First roll: Argentine strike on Falklands
0-10: Strikes do major damage, but significant amount of planes intercepted/shot down
10-15: Strikes do major damage, and few planes intercepted/shot down
15-40: Strikes do moderate damage, and significant amount of planes intercepted/shot down
40-55: Strikes do moderate, but few planes intercepted/shot down
55-70: Strikes do mild damage, and few planes intercepted/shot down
70-100: Strikes do mild damage, but significant amount of planes intercepted/shot down

Better?


My Political Test Result: http://www.politicaltest.net/test/result/192080/

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Heleventia
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Posts: 572
Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Postby Heleventia » Tue Nov 27, 2012 4:03 am

The City State Rhydin wrote:-CQC-


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Air Luxury Helicopters

Rating: Image

3 stars. Not bad. Slightly above average. Standard Services. Profits are good.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The storefront provides ample information about the product as well as the company itself. The concept of hotelicopter is innovative and appreciable. The storefront is making profits and scores high on customer service and satisfaction.

However, the layout can be improved a great deal making the storefront more user friendly.


Suggestions

A particular flaw in the description of hotelicopter The minute you step onto The Hotelicopter, our friendly crew will greet you with a smile in our plush welcome lounge... That looks more like the description of services offered by an airline company. Remember that you are just selling the product. The job of marketing it to the customers is that of the purchaser. The layout can be improved. Make a table of content using box and [anchor] tag. See this one of example: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=75354 Unspoiler the information on product. If that makes the post size large, put it on a different post altogether. Make a form so that you have all the details you require from the customer. Also, it would help the customers to remember all details that they need to provide while making an order.


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Harl L' Qu'mados Technologies

Rating: Image

3 stars. Not bad. Slightly above average. Standard Services. Profits are good.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The storefront provides ample information about the products and is well organised. The storefront is making profits and scores high on customer service and satisfaction.

However, more information can be provided about the company itself. Also, the layout can be improved.


Suggestions

The layout can be improved. Make a table. Use the same guidelines as given in the suggestions above. Separate different portions of your text using the


Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Rhydia Vehicle Corporation

Rating: Image

3 stars. Not bad. Slightly above average. Standard Services. Profits are good.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The storefront provides ample information about the products and the company. It is making profits and the customer satisfaction is high.

However, the layout can be improved


Suggestions

The layout can be improved. Make a table. Use the same guidelines as given in the suggestions above. Separate different portions of your text using the [hr] tag. Unspoiler the information.
Last edited by Heleventia on Tue Nov 27, 2012 4:03 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Heleventia
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Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Postby Heleventia » Sat Dec 01, 2012 1:11 am

New Ecopia wrote:-CQC-


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Eco Aerocraft Corporation

Rating: Image

4 stars. Above Average. Near Perfection. Good Profits.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The stroefront has an excellent layout along with sufficient information for customers. The customer has a good idea of what he or she is buying. The colour scheme is much appreciated.The presentation of information is bullet form eases comprehension. The storefront is making profits and scores high on customer satisfaction.

The table of contents is missing. More time in the market will lead to subsequent experience and perfection.


Suggestions

A table of content can be added. You can link different parts of your OP in the table using the anchor tag. Heres how you may do it:
Code: Select all
 Put the url of the subheadings (which are images) in this format: [url=insert image url][img]insert image url[/img][/url]. Then put [anchor][/anchor] around your new subheading code. Then use the [box] tag to create a table.
See this as an example:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=175803
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Serbian_Soviet_Union
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Posts: 1764
Founded: Feb 11, 2009
Left-Leaning College State

Postby Serbian_Soviet_Union » Sat Dec 01, 2012 1:28 am

Storefront Rating Form

Name of the nation: Federation of Serbian Soviet Union

Name of the Storefront: Zastava Energy Inc & Zastava Oil Corporation

Link to the storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=7806

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment: Yes please
Zastava Arms Inc Cheap Military Hardware: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=6443
Zastava Energy Inc & Zastava Oil Corporation: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=7806
Full member of: AMNAT, CIN, SCUTUM, CA, VA, PSUS
Observer Member of: GIA, EA, CI

Defcon: (1) (2) (3) (4) (5) State of War/State of Emergency || Preparation for a possible war
Military size 5% Active || 2.5% Reserves
Government Type: Capitalist, Conservative, Right Wing, Democratic
FSSU Nations Factbook: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=9558
Serbian Broadcasting News: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=9733
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Sankji
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Posts: 656
Founded: Sep 06, 2012
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Postby Sankji » Mon Dec 03, 2012 7:41 am

Storefront Rating Form

Name of the nation: The United States of Sankji

Name of the Storefront: (SNDI) Sankji National Defense Industries

Link to the storefront: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=198971

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment (OOC: this may take time): yes
Last edited by Sankji on Mon Dec 03, 2012 7:41 am, edited 1 time in total.

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Heleventia
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Posts: 572
Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Re: Serbian Soviet Union

Postby Heleventia » Wed Dec 05, 2012 8:14 am

Serbian_Soviet_Union wrote:-CQC-


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Zastava Energy Inc & Zastava Oil Corporation

Rating: Image

3 stars. Not bad. Slightly above average. Standard Services. Profits are good.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The storefront provides ample information about the product as well as the company itself. The company is making profits. The customer satisfaction is high.

However, the layout can be improved a great deal. Table of content is missing. The website can be made more customer friendly.


Suggestions

A table of content can be created. Make use of [box][anchor] tags to do the same. Put the portions of your text under formatted sub headings (for ex. Put the description of your company under a sub heading titled Background Information, Products under products etc) Separate different portions of your tag using the [hr] tag. Try to add some pictures (you can add pictures of an oil pipeline, for ex.). Play with [floatleft] and [floatright] tag while dealing with pictures. Add a form so that lazy customers can quickly order. Elaborate on the services your company can provide say, does it lays pipelines in different countries? See this storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=136249 and improve along these lines.
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New Ecopia
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Posts: 675
Founded: Aug 28, 2012
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Postby New Ecopia » Wed Dec 05, 2012 5:01 pm

Storefront Rating Form

Name of the nation: The Democratic Republic of New Ecopia

Name of the Storefront: Air New Ecopia

Link to the storefront: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=209424

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvement (OOC: this may take time/you will be informed upon completion) Yes
- New Zealand in "2013" RP (Allies: Australia, United States & NATO)
Delanshar wrote:Revised for SAMs

First roll: Argentine strike on Falklands
0-10: Strikes do major damage, but significant amount of planes intercepted/shot down
10-15: Strikes do major damage, and few planes intercepted/shot down
15-40: Strikes do moderate damage, and significant amount of planes intercepted/shot down
40-55: Strikes do moderate, but few planes intercepted/shot down
55-70: Strikes do mild damage, and few planes intercepted/shot down
70-100: Strikes do mild damage, but significant amount of planes intercepted/shot down

Better?


My Political Test Result: http://www.politicaltest.net/test/result/192080/

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