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New Roman Empire
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Posts: 10619
Founded: Nov 23, 2011
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Postby New Roman Empire » Sun Oct 14, 2012 6:38 pm

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Name of the nation: New Roman Empire

Name of the Storefront: Vordic Suns Private Security/Mercs

Link to the storefront: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=204113

Storefront Rating FormWould you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment (OOC: this may take time): Yes
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Heleventia
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Posts: 572
Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Re: Aerospace Innovation Inc.

Postby Heleventia » Wed Oct 17, 2012 4:34 am

Aerospace Innovation Inc wrote:-CQC-


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Aerospace Innovation Incorporated

Rating: Image

3 stars. Not bad. Slightly above average. Standard Services. Profits are good.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The website is informative and well written. The graphical pictures provided are good visuals and sufficient information has been provided about all the products. The customer satisfaction is high and the company has been endorsed by many governments.

However, we are not happy with the layout. A table of contents is lacking which makes navigation difficult. Customers must do their own calcualtions which all adds to inconveninence.


Suggestions

Layout can be improved a great deal. A table of content can be put. You need not use the [table] tag. You can just make a simple one like the one here: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=175803 . Also, you should do calculations for your customers, not ask them to do for you. I am sure you check the calculations otherwise
Last edited by Heleventia on Wed Oct 17, 2012 4:35 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Aerospace Innovation Inc
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Posts: 228
Founded: Jul 05, 2012
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Postby Aerospace Innovation Inc » Wed Oct 17, 2012 9:43 am

Heleventia wrote:
Aerospace Innovation Inc wrote:-CQC-


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Aerospace Innovation Incorporated

Rating: Image

3 stars. Not bad. Slightly above average. Standard Services. Profits are good.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The website is informative and well written. The graphical pictures provided are good visuals and sufficient information has been provided about all the products. The customer satisfaction is high and the company has been endorsed by many governments.

However, we are not happy with the layout. A table of contents is lacking which makes navigation difficult. Customers must do their own calcualtions which all adds to inconveninence.


Suggestions

Layout can be improved a great deal. A table of content can be put. You need not use the [table] tag. You can just make a simple one like the one here: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=175803 . Also, you should do calculations for your customers, not ask them to do for you. I am sure you check the calculations otherwise


To: Review Representative
From: CEO, Aerospace Innovation Incorporated
Subj: REVIEW


Greetings,
We wish to thank you for providing us with an in-depth review. We can assure you, we will improve on the points presented and would like to submit a follow up review once those points have been corrected. Thank you.


Regards,

A.J. Juma
Chief Executive Officer
Aerospace Innovation Incorporated.
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The Sovietyeto
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Posts: 1158
Founded: Feb 20, 2011
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Postby The Sovietyeto » Wed Oct 17, 2012 9:58 am

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Name of Nation: The Sovietyeto
Name of Storefront: State Storefront of the Sovietyeto
Storefront Link: Link
My storefront never had much activity. It serves my region only, after the 'Napadenie' war there isn't much money to go around. However I am planning an 'update' and hope to get my storefront in gear. Please, take this into consideration while rating me.

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Onekawa-Nukanor
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Posts: 3519
Founded: Sep 24, 2009
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Postby Onekawa-Nukanor » Wed Oct 17, 2012 8:17 pm

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Name of the nation: Mikoyan-Guryevich

Name of the Storefront: Gemballa Avionic Development

Link to the storefront: Gemballa Avionic Development

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment (OOC: this may take time): Yes

I'm not the storefront owner, but I am a manager, and thought it interesting to see what kind of rating GAD might receive.
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Heleventia
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Posts: 572
Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Re: New Roman Empire

Postby Heleventia » Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:30 am

New Roman Empire wrote:-CQC-


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Vordic Suns Private Security

Rating: Image

2- stars. Average. Nothing much to expect. Running in Loss. So..So Customer Service but tolerable.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The website lacks information and the layout needs to be improved a great deal. The company offers a simple one line description of its products. Overall, very little information has been given and its services are overcharged.

The company is running in loss and only a miracle can turn the situation


Suggestions

A lot more information could be provided about the products. Since you are a company specializing in security services, you can sell some security items like CCTV cameras besides protection and other services being currently offered. Layout needs to be worked on. The storefront needs expansion.
Last edited by Heleventia on Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:31 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Ezryel
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Posts: 50
Founded: Oct 20, 2012
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Postby Ezryel » Sun Oct 21, 2012 7:18 am

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Name of the nation: Ezryel

Name of the Storefront: Ezryeli Airways (formally Global Jet)

Link to the storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=205989

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvement: Yes
Last edited by Ezryel on Tue Jul 30, 2013 1:35 pm, edited 3 times in total.

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Heleventia
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Posts: 572
Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Re: Onekawa-Nukanor

Postby Heleventia » Sun Oct 21, 2012 8:10 am

Onekawa-Nukanor wrote:-CQC-


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Gemballa Avionic Development

Rating: Image

5 stars. The "bestest best". Excellent Services. Perfection in every sphere


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The website is user friendly and provides complete information. The layout is excellent and eye appeashing. Matter has been presented in the most tempting manner. Ample information has been provided about each product and the customer knows for sure about what he or she is buying. The storefront scores high on customer satisfaction and does well on matter presentation and services provided. Many customers have given positive feedbacks about the company. The storefront is a leader in aviation technology and has attained very degree of perfection. We hope that it is able to keep up the good work.


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Overall the storefront is very well maintained and is perfect. Advertisments can be launched to attract more customers.
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Moorburgh
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Posts: 1175
Founded: Sep 24, 2012
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Postby Moorburgh » Sun Oct 21, 2012 8:17 am

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Name of the nation: Moorburgh

Name of the Storefront: Radiomatics Moorburgh Aircraft

Link to the storefront: www.rma-aircrafts.moo

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment (OOC: this may take time) Yes

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Bindu
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Posts: 449
Founded: Sep 11, 2012
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Postby Bindu » Sun Oct 21, 2012 8:28 am

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Name of the nation: Bindu

Name of the Storefront: Cuci Cleaning Service

Link to the storefront:www.cuci-expert.bin

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment- Yes

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Albeland
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Posts: 197
Founded: Aug 18, 2012
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Postby Albeland » Sun Oct 21, 2012 1:19 pm

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Name of the nation: The Federal Republic of Albeland

Name of the Storefront: Albeland Wines and Wine Investment

Link to the storefront: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=201475&p=11065285#p11065285

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment (OOC: this may take time) Yes please!
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Heleventia
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Posts: 572
Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Re: The Sovietyeto

Postby Heleventia » Mon Oct 22, 2012 12:32 am

The Sovietyeto wrote:-CQC-


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: State Storrfront of the Sovietyeto

Rating: Image + 0.5

2.5- stars. Average. Does good on some grounds but lack at certain places.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The storefront provides ample information about its products which range from basic neccesity such as food items to military products. Its more like 'all under one roof'. GETrax appreciates this concept. We do not like the idea of restricting its services to nations of a certain region. Had the services been expanded to the international community as well, the storefront could have been more profitable. Customer service has been unaccounted for due to lack of customers.

The layout needs improvement. However, we believe that with an expected 'update' the storefront will improve on this criteria.


Suggestions

A logo can be made to improve the overall appearence. You may use an intelligent combination of [color][size][b][i][u] tags to create a logo on the forum itself. The name of the storefront could be changed. A table of contents could be added to improve layout. It can be simple like in this storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=175803 . Play with [hr] tag to seprate different portion of your text or post diffrently for each category of product. Use blocktext or align tag for your text. Pictures can be put in floatleft or floatright tag along with a box. Open your storefront to all NS players, not just members of a particular region.
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Wallops Island
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Posts: 169
Founded: Aug 10, 2012
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Postby Wallops Island » Mon Oct 22, 2012 3:34 am

Nation name: Federal Republic of Wallops Island
Storefront name: Tactical Solutions Inc.
Link: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=197146

Detailed review and improvements: Yes, please

Thanks in advance
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Heleventia
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Posts: 572
Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Postby Heleventia » Tue Oct 23, 2012 12:18 am

Ezryel wrote:Storefront Rating Form

Name of the nation: Ezryel

Name of the Storefront: Ezryel Bio Technologies (Biological and Chemical Weapons)

Link to the storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=205039

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvement: Yes



GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




The Global Economics and Trade Rating Agecy, GETrax express its inability to rate your storefront. We cannot rate anything which is illegal in Heleventia and unfortunately, Biological Weapons is among them. We condemn this storefront and wish that it ceases its illegal activities. Thank you for your interst in GETrax.
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Heleventia
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Posts: 572
Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Re: Moorburgh

Postby Heleventia » Fri Oct 26, 2012 12:44 am

Moorburgh wrote:-CQC-


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Radiomatics Moorburgh Aircraft

Rating: Image

4 stars. Above Average. Near Perfection. Good Profits.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The website is informative and ample information has been provided about the products. A table of contents is present to ease navigation. Products are of suprerior quality and the storefront scores high on customer satisfaction. Provision of visiuals alongside text makes it very interesting.

However, we are not happy with arrangement of data. Data could be arranged more logically.


Suggestions

Data can be arranged in a better manner. Rather than scattering the products all over the thread, create a seperate post titled 'Products' where you can put all your products. Seperate different portions of text by using [hr] tag. Apart from this, the storefront is very nice.
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Doppio Giudici
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Posts: 4644
Founded: Nov 26, 2011
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Postby Doppio Giudici » Fri Oct 26, 2012 2:44 pm

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Name of the nation: The Neo-Terran Republic of Doppio Giudici

Name of the Storefront: G.S.I. Arms

Link to the storefront: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?ns=1&f=6&t=153398&p=7777225#p7777225

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvement?: Yes, that would be nice.
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Western Arab Empire
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Posts: 871
Founded: Jul 18, 2012
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Postby Western Arab Empire » Fri Oct 26, 2012 4:40 pm

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Name of the nation: Western Arab Empire

Name of the Storefront: Arab Airlines

Link to the storefront:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=204827

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment (OOC: this may take time)Yes
Last edited by Western Arab Empire on Tue Oct 30, 2012 8:17 am, edited 2 times in total.

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Heleventia
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Posts: 572
Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Re: Albeland

Postby Heleventia » Sat Oct 27, 2012 7:00 am

Albeland wrote:-CQC-


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Ableland Wines and Wine Investment

Rating: Image + 0.5

2.5- stars. Average. Does good on some grounds but lack at certain places.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The website somewhat well written. The small abstract provided below the logo giving a gist of the storefront is appreciable. The concept of wine investement looks original and innovative.

Information about the wines is limited to one line description and price. The storefront is running in loss.


Suggestions

More information on the product can be provided. Try to tell the customer about the taste of wine, how it is processed. A small graphic can be put alongside the information by using the [floatleft][box][img] tag. Try to create a logo. You can make one on the forum itself by an intelligent combination of a small (200px X 200 px) graphic (may be a smaller version of your flag) [b] or [i] tag along with [size] and [color] tag. Make a table of contents. Include information about the place where you cultivate grapes and make wine. Dont make this part too lenghty. Then try to expand the information you provided about the products followed by a greater explanation of Investing in Wine. Seperate different portions of text by using the [hr] text.
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Bindu
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Posts: 449
Founded: Sep 11, 2012
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Postby Bindu » Sat Oct 27, 2012 8:22 am

Bindu wrote:Storefront Rating Form

Name of the nation: Bindu

Name of the Storefront: Cuci Cleaning Service

Link to the storefront:www.cuci-expert.bin

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment- Yes


OOC- url link fixed
Last edited by Bindu on Sat Oct 27, 2012 8:23 am, edited 1 time in total.

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Heleventia
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Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Re: Bindu

Postby Heleventia » Sun Oct 28, 2012 7:50 am

Bindu wrote:-CQC-


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Cuci Cleaning Services

Rating: Image

4 stars. Above Average. Near Perfection. Good Profits.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The website is informative and ample information has been provided about the services provided. The storefront scores high on customer satisfaction which is close to 100%. Although relatively new on the interational stage, the storfront has attracted many customers who are keen to avail of its services.

Though the layout is good, a table of content would have made it better


Suggestions

Add a table of centent to ease navigation. You may not use the [table] tag. You can make a simple one by using a [box] and [anchor] tag. Other than that, the layout is good.
Last edited by Heleventia on Sun Oct 28, 2012 7:52 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Ezryel
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Posts: 50
Founded: Oct 20, 2012
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Postby Ezryel » Mon Oct 29, 2012 9:00 am

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Name of the nation: Ezryel

Name of the Storefront: Ezryeli Airways (formally Global Jet)

Link to the storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=205989

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvement: Yes
Last edited by Ezryel on Tue Jul 30, 2013 1:35 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Der Nordland
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Posts: 111
Founded: Oct 02, 2010
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Postby Der Nordland » Mon Oct 29, 2012 6:37 pm

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Name of the nation: Federation of Der Nordland

Name of the Storefront: Nordica Arms

Link to the storefront: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=204722

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvment (OOC: this may take time) Please :)
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Heleventia
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Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Re: Wallops Island

Postby Heleventia » Tue Oct 30, 2012 8:16 am

Wallops Island wrote:-CQC-


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: Tactical Solutions Inc.

Rating: Image + 0.5

2.5- stars. Average. Does good on some grounds but lack at certain places.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The website somewhat well written. Information is brief and to the point.

The layout needs to be improved. Also, the information given can be expanded. The storefront is running in loss.


Suggestions

Layot can be improved a great deal. Add a table of content. You need not use the [table] tag but you can make a table using [box]and [anchor] tag. See the table of content here: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=75354 . Provide more information about the services provided. Try to enslist the special skills and training that has been given to your forces. What is it that seperates them from other parliamentary forces? Expand content on these lines. Also, you can add some other products like some arms and ammutations (not to many though, remember that your storefront is primarily supplying forces) to attract customers. Include discounts and promotions.
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Aerospace Innovation Inc
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Posts: 228
Founded: Jul 05, 2012
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Postby Aerospace Innovation Inc » Wed Oct 31, 2012 4:44 pm

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Name of the nation: Ashebourton (Aerospace Innovation Inc)

Name of the Storefront: Aerospace Innovation Incorporated

Link to the storefront: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=188917

Would you like to have a detailed account for ratings and suggestions for improvement (OOC: this may take time): Yes; we received an earlier review yet we believe we have corrected out deficiencies, we request a be re- reviewed. Thank you
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Heleventia
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Posts: 572
Founded: Dec 27, 2011
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Re: The Neo-Terran Republic of Doppio Giudici

Postby Heleventia » Thu Nov 01, 2012 8:23 am

Doppio Giudici wrote:-CQC-


GETrax

Global Economics and Trade Rating Agency




Detailed Rating Report


Part I: Overall Rating

Name of Storefront: G.S.I. Arms

Rating: Image

3 stars. Not bad. Slightly above average. Standard Services. Profits are good.


Part II: Scope of Rating and Explanation

The website is well written and ample information has been provided about the product. The concept of provision of a feedback poll is appreciable. The storefront is making profits.

However, the layout can be improved and the website made user friendly.


Suggestions

Layout can be improved a great deal. A table of content can be put. You need not use the [table] tag. You can just make a simple one like the one here: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=175803 . Do not put information in spoiler. If possible, try to tabulate the characterstic of each product or list them in bullets using the [list] tag. Decrease the size of the visual. You can use Photobucket for that. Put images in a [floatright][box] tag.
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