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by Empire of Symphonia » Sun Sep 25, 2011 12:59 am
by Yohannes » Sun Sep 25, 2011 1:11 am
Empire of Symphonia wrote:Hi! This is Your Local Asian speaking!
Overall this product page is very nicely done and is descriptive. However, I must note that reading all the information was daunting and that most people wouldn't bother reading the specs because of it. Um....I suggest condensing some of the information into several bullet points that would keep each section clear and concise.
For example in the "electronics" section, I would get a chart or list of all the electronic equiptment and then type what each device does and what is it for.
This is only a suggestion, so feel free to ignore this. ( I felt sad when I wrote that. )
by Empire of Symphonia » Sun Sep 25, 2011 1:14 am
Yohannes wrote:Empire of Symphonia wrote:Hi! This is Your Local Asian speaking!
Overall this product page is very nicely done and is descriptive. However, I must note that reading all the information was daunting and that most people wouldn't bother reading the specs because of it. Um....I suggest condensing some of the information into several bullet points that would keep each section clear and concise.
For example in the "electronics" section, I would get a chart or list of all the electronic equiptment and then type what each device does and what is it for.
This is only a suggestion, so feel free to ignore this. ( I felt sad when I wrote that. )
Ooc: Thanks for the criticism and input!
I was writing all of it to closely give the impression of Yohannes' in-context connection with the design as much as possible, hence why there are quite a lot of NS background and history being put into the design's writing. Regarding the bullet points... i have tried doing it, in the form of paragraph-wise description and explanation of each features utilised by the AY2-1E. I guess i just got taken up by the fact that i enjoyed writing it for the sake of my enjoyment... rather than for its readability purpose.. which i will then have to admit to be 100% my fault in entirety
Regarding the chart idea.. thank you for giving me that suggestion..! I will get into that, in fact, as i think that that is a really good idea.
Cheers for the input Symphonia.
by Yohannes » Tue Sep 27, 2011 3:27 pm
Empire of Symphonia wrote:Yohannes wrote:
Ooc: Thanks for the criticism and input!
I was writing all of it to closely give the impression of Yohannes' in-context connection with the design as much as possible, hence why there are quite a lot of NS background and history being put into the design's writing. Regarding the bullet points... i have tried doing it, in the form of paragraph-wise description and explanation of each features utilised by the AY2-1E. I guess i just got taken up by the fact that i enjoyed writing it for the sake of my enjoyment... rather than for its readability purpose.. which i will then have to admit to be 100% my fault in entirety
Regarding the chart idea.. thank you for giving me that suggestion..! I will get into that, in fact, as i think that that is a really good idea.
Cheers for the input Symphonia.
Lol. I used the same words when typing up the OOc post on your main thread. But I guess its true for the rest of your products as well. I looked at them and I was like," ".
by Daemyrs » Mon Oct 10, 2011 7:04 pm
Jedi8246 wrote:It suddenly occurs to me. If the Necron are all made of metal, wouldnt a giant magnet fuck their entire army?
by Yohannes » Tue Oct 11, 2011 12:09 am
Daemyrs wrote:Hello, I'd like to order one double chesseburger, a large fry, and a medium milkshake. You got that?
by Yohannes » Sun Oct 16, 2011 11:39 pm
by YellowApple » Sun Oct 16, 2011 11:48 pm
Daemyrs wrote:Hello, I'd like to order one double chesseburger, a large fry, and a medium milkshake. You got that?
by Yohannes » Mon Oct 17, 2011 12:46 pm
by Yohannes » Mon Oct 17, 2011 1:42 pm
by Yohannes » Sun Oct 23, 2011 5:42 am
Designation | PzH 2E |
Name | Panzerhaubitze 2E |
Role (within the Wehrmacht) | Mobile artillery system |
In service | 2000-present |
No. of Crew | 3 (commander, driver and gunner) |
Manufacturer | VMK |
Place of origin | Yohannes |
Weight | 76.1 tonnes |
Length (with gun extended forward) | 11 m |
Height | 2.69 m |
Width | 3.95 m |
Track width | 701 mm |
Ground clearance | 500 mm |
Maximum (governed) speed | 85 km/h |
Cross country speed | 50 km/h |
Speed 10% Slope | 23 km/h |
Speed 60% slope | 15 km/h |
Acceleration (0 to 32 km/h) | 4.7 seconds |
Range | 626 km |
Operational cruising range | 538 km |
Trench crossing | 3.09 m |
Vertical obstacle | 1.14 m |
Fording without preparation | 1.24 m |
Fording with preparation | 2.01 m |
Suspension | VLT HPVS-MBT active hydropneumatic |
Main armament | AY3H 170/L50 smoothbore gun (30) |
Additional armament | 1 x 12.7mm AY14-HMG (2,400) 16 x Fragmentary Grenade Launchers |
Engine | 1750 kW (2347 HP) Forza FB-12TSD flat-boxer-12 cylinders turbocharger, supercharger, diesel cylinder boxer twincharged (supercharger + twin turbocharger) |
Transmission | Forza 8GDCT automated double clutch (8 forward, 4 reverse) |
Fuel consumption | 2.4 L/km |
Power/weight ratio | 22.9 kW/t (30.9 HP/t) |
Armour | Adversus E modified |
Fire & Control | AYTRACK-1B |
Protection | AY09 AFEDSS, AYHK10 ADS, and AY109 NBC/CBRN (NBCS) |
Price per unit | US$6,500,000.00 |
Price of DPR (domestic manufacturing license) | US$32,000,000,000.00 |
by Yohannes » Mon Oct 24, 2011 5:39 pm
Karomakia wrote:I would care to purchase 5 of these tanks, and the production rights, that comes to NS$105,092,500,000.
by Strebedia » Wed Oct 26, 2011 5:41 am
by Yohannes » Wed Oct 26, 2011 5:44 am
Strebedia wrote:My country would like to purchase 200 Panzerhaubitze 2E tanks.
by Strebedia » Wed Oct 26, 2011 5:45 am
by Yohannes » Fri Oct 28, 2011 12:37 am
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